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Lawlahdey:
I know... But death is too much nah

Nah....death is part of the circle of life....

Lawlahdey:
Aunty enitan.. Don't kill boda tunde oh

Lawlahdey. ...why not he is awful

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iykekelvins:
[color=#099999]Loving this... Ride on please.[/color]

Thank you for stopping by iykekelvins.

Thanks for the feedback

Please check out the club as well

Nice update bibijay123

Funmi should remember she is a Christian. She should show the other cheek and move on

All this revenge......

Funmi pregnant with twins is coming. ..maybe cecelia can adopt one

skarlett:
Good evening everyone, sorry to disappoint but there'll be no update today, light situation has taken a turn for the worse. I crave your understanding for this.

Update tomorrow, God willing.

Thanks

Skarlett sorry to hear that.
As someone said would willingly buy you a power pack

swann:
Two mentions and I'm just getting to read this now... NL what is wrong with you?!?!....This is one of the most awesome story i've read on NL......keep up the good work...definitely following...

Hi swann
My cheeks are burning.
Thank you for the endorsement.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story

Adesina12:
Lleigh you are awesome brilliant honestly,
Your choice of words and description are just good,

But why the suspense in room 3?

Hi Adeshina12,


Remi has an image to protect, he is an alpha male, dominant, assertive in his real life. No one can see him and call him soft.

However, he has a kinky side that he is not ready to show to the world, for the fear of ridicule.

Which is why he feels able to open up a tiny bit to someone in a bravo.delta.sierra.munch club, who understands kinks and is not there to judge.
MM has kinks herself.....so they are in a KINK space

jagugu88li:
Chai, see my life. I only get an invite when the story hits page 3. Issorite

Let me read....

jagugu88li....my sincere apologies.

I have bibijay123 to thank for making my acquaintance with you.

Please join me at the club....any special drink for you

Creeza:
Lol I like your projection, but to be honest : a twist will shock you! Battle of wits is about to happen. I dont write Happily ever afters. (lolz)

Thanks for stopping by tho!

Creeza...you are on the right track....not writing happily ever afters.

Keep at it.

Creeza....

Hooked......please make sure you finish this piece.

Adesina12, LordAdam, Creeza, nastynic, swann, nightfury, veekid, whizzdom, jagugu88li, soleski01, skarlett

please come and see wahala ....

Chapter 5

She watched him come into the kitchen.

‘Hiya’ she smiled as she watched him walk into the kitchen.

Enitan picked up her laptop and walked over to the work surface, next to the built in fridge.

Her knife block beckoned her, they had just been sharpened to perfection yesterday, she picked up one of them and studied the beautiful sleek sharp edges.

Shining like diamonds, the sharper the edge the deeper the cut, when one needed nicely sliced meat or vegetables.

I wonder who actually invented the knife. How did we make the move away from stone to the blade?

Knives had always been important to her, due to her passion for cooking. The family always laughed at her when they went away on holidays and she packed her knives.

Her stock in trade answer to them had been, you wanna eat, I need my knives.

The banality of her thoughts, were not lost on her. Anything but, what was in front of her.

‘How was your day?’ Are you all set for your trip tomorrow?’ she asked

She watched him move towards the fridge, and take out a bottle of beer.

‘Yep, where’s my dinner’ as he looked around the kitchen. Noticing the dining table hadn’t been set.

‘Tunde, you told me specifically that you would be home late and you would be eating at, as she made the inverted quotes sign with her fingers ‘your club’

‘I don’t remember saying that’ he said.

‘Maybe all the fu..cking you did today addled your brain’ Enitan said.

‘What are you talking about; you are always going on about something’ annoyance and menace on his face.

‘Are you going to prepare my dinner or not’ the irritation obvious in his voice.

‘No, go and ask Linda or whatever her name is to make it for you. Considering you have just dropped a big wad of cash on her this afternoon’ as she pressed play on her laptop.

‘Can you explain this?’ she asked as the sounds of him with his strumpet filled the kitchen.

‘What’s this’ he said

‘Look I don’t have the time to listen to some random video with you’ he said, as he walked back to the fridge.

‘I have an important meeting tomorrow and I need to get up early’ as he rummaged through the fridge for food.

‘Tunde that is you, with the girl you have been seeing for the past two years.’ Enitan screamed

‘Look Enitan, I don’t know what you are talking about’.

‘Why are you screaming?’ he said

‘That is not me’ he replied, his tone dismissing her.

‘Do you need to see a doctor, it seems that you are suffering from stress.’ he continued.

The rage she had kept under control bubbled to the top. She turned the laptop out towards him for him to see.

‘Tunde that is you there, that is you with that woman’ she screamed.

‘How can you say it’s not you?’ she said

‘So even it is me, what are you going to do’ he replied

‘You can’t cook and you can’t fu..ck’ disdain written all over his face.

‘She keeps me young, unlike you. Being with you makes me feel old.’ He laughed in her face.

‘Plus if that is a video you have put together, the only one who will be disgraced is you’ he continued laughing, as he walked out of the kitchen with his bottle of beer.

‘Most people will see me as a stud’ looking back at her and giving her a wink.

Enitan lost it and picked up the knife.

Creeza:
mathematically speaking *clears throat* Remi has to multiply the strokes on his Joystick, but the time interval will greatly affect his infinital endurance. Therefore it is wise to subtract his subconscious mind from the act, divide it by the fact that he wants the main deal which is equivalent to MM.

In summary, the equation is based purely on Calculus.

He will cum at the midpoint of his fantansy except he divides the starting point and climax by 2.

X1 + x2 /2

tu comprendez? *winks

Absolutely brilliant.... you are a star....

Remi over to you to follow Creeza advice.....

unless there are other guys in the house to give Remi advice

Creeza:
Lleigh, Remi wont be able to rub oil on his erect anatomy for two minutes, without cuming. I bet the sight of MM alone will trigger those hormones. #wtf!

I think Seduction is taking over here, like 50 shades of grey.

Creeza....

haha....you must be able to give us a mathematical formula, to determine the point of no return for him

He will have to do mind over mtter

skarlett thanks for the dedication.

I hope Nepa behaves for you.

More ink and ideas to your creativity.

Looking forward to the next update.

LordAdam:
Thanks for the invite.

You're doing great so far.

I really look forward to the day when our writers would have their stories and books adapted to blockbuster Nollywood movies. I don't think it's a stretch anymore. The talent is there, the producers are there, the audience are yearning for more, so it's not a matter of if, but when.

I'm enamored by Nigerian storytellers, so I'm rooting for you guys.

Happy Sunday!

-Lord

Thank you for the words of encouragement.

soleski01:
Good!

Keep it up!

I will try.....I think Remi needs to keep it 'up' more

calling 3rdleggxxx, LordAdam, sumborri, sirblero, junnyjake, Freshboi, Nightfury

To the club......drinks available and more....

swann:
That update was mind blowing...why the suspence though ...thanks for the mention

cc bibijay123, Adesina12, soleski01, bummybummy, ADECULATE, jagugu88li

Hi swann,

If you mean the suspense between MM and Remi aka Matt...


Remi has an image to protect i.e alpha male, dominant, assertive etc. His kinks are not something he can really readily advertise in our society.
Without being exposed to ridicule......which is why he feels able to open up a tiny bit to someone in a bravo.delta.sierra.munch club


Thank you for asking the question....keep them cuming

Whizzdom

I am here and following

More creativity to your fingers and your updates. ..

Readers will always want updates

castrol180:
Good day members, I am very new in this section as a writer. Though I posted a fiction work tittled 'sleli the gigolo but no one ever commented, critcised, nor pour accolade regarding the works, I dont know why but presently I think I should do the needful by paying homage to the house. And lastly I want you people to shed more light on how to post ones' works such as copyright method, spacing and the host of others. Kindly give me the way to post my works so to improves and hones my way of writing...Thanks in anticipation I am castrol180 with pen name Ben Jay Jay

Castrol I have the same problem too.
People don't seem to comment on nl. Especially if one is new.

People don't know you. And sometimes some people take criticism the wrong way .

But keep writing and keep raising your profile.
I will do my best to comment on your work if I see it

Creeza mis spelt your name

bummybummy:
nyc update

Thank you for stopping by bummybummy

Whizzdom:
Awesome, keep it coming OP.

You can also check this new thriller story titled: "The Sinister Defence"

The link is: https://www.nairaland.com/3461761/sinister-defence-thriller-story

Thank you for dropping by Whizzdom.... will check it out

ADECULATE:
Nice update, pls kip it cuming

Thank you for dropping by and reading Adeculate

soleski01:
Good!

Keep it up!

Thank you.....your support has been invaluable

cc.. Bibijay, skarlett, swann, crezza, soleski01, nastynic, Adesina12

Going for a cold shower.....................

Chapter 13

Remi watched as she walked back to the wall of torture, she stopped by the table and opened a drawer.

She placed a bottle of oil on the table.

‘I told you to have your shirt off before I came in the room’ she said as she glared at him.

‘For that infraction, I want everything off’ she turned to him, hands on her hips.

She threw the bottle of oil at him.

‘I want you to rub that all over your body’, she said as she walked back to her wall.

It was the same oil she had used the night they had met. Vanilla, lavender and the other scent he still couldn’t place.

Now he understood what women meant, about being objectified.

Taking your clothes off in the throes of passion was one thing, being told when to take them off and being watched was something else.

She was now sitting on a black leather sofa, on the other side of the room. Her mask glittered in the semi gloom of the room as she stared at him.

A mysterious queen surveying prime male form for her pleasure.

However, undressing and being scrutinized by her was like a lesson in sensuality. It made him feel hard, incredibly so.

He would put on a show for her, a strip tease for her eyes only.

He started with his t-shirt, trying to think of the moves Kevin Hart made in Think Like a Man 2. That foray into stripping had ended in disaster though, he chuckled silently.

He rubbed the oil on his chest and arms, the crotch of his trousers were soo tight it was uncomfortable.

His arousal was obvious to both of them.

He bent down to slip off his loafers, standing up again.

As he rubbed more oil, on his stomach and moved his hand towards the buckle of his belt, he imagined her nails, raking a path down his pelvic bone.

He took off his trousers in one fluid movement.

Woody, his nick name for his third leg stood proud and erect.

‘You will do that last’ she told him from her seat on the sofa.

Her legs were stretched and wide apart in front her, his eyes were drawn to the valley between her legs.

He rubbed the oil on his thighs and legs, each sensual stroke heightening his arousal, to the extent that a drop of precum dripped on to the floor.

‘Oh dear Matt’ her voice carried over from where she was.

She had seen it, his cheeks burned.

‘You can now rub the oil on your dick, you will rub it in for..mmm….’as she stared at him intently.

‘Two minutes, you’re not allowed to come’

TBC