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Nice story Boyo. There s something i noticed. U knw, u used urself as the subject of the story and since u were kidnapped, there's no way u 'd have known wat transpired between funke and dayo, unless someone told u. So i suggest u act as the narrator of the story as in use a fictions character. Instead of "I", use "He". Am not a student of literature, but that's my opinion though. All in all nice story. Following.......... |
EUROBOMBER:and the worst part is that these protesters (ipob or whatever) constitute mainly of okada-riders, agberos' and some bunches of unemployed frustrated ignorant youths. Someone who has something reasonable doing will not leave behind wat puts food on his table to join some miscrants in their misguided course. I over-heard a man the other day at a hospital reception telling a friend that he actually came to treat himself of general body pains and bruises he sustained during rally. I was forced to ask the man if he was given money for the hospital care and all that, and he said no. That he hopes that when their dreams are actualize and biafran becomes reality, that his suffering will be no more. This same man cannot boast of an O' level cert. Now tell me, how will he survive?. The bible say that my people perish for lack of knowledge and that is exactly the problem with these Ipob whatever. Sorry for quoting u to make my point. |
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misspicy:lolzz. No, dnt stop, its wat makes u you. I like dat abt u too. |
Misspicy. Cos of her brilliant comments and defensive tactics. Though sometimes she can be annoying. But i like her. |
Mtchew!!!, God don suffer. |
Its not funny. The other day a guy stabbed his friend to death due to an argument over football club, a wife angrily broke their Tv set just so the husband would stop disturbing the peace of the household cos of football. And the story goes on. I wonder why Africans especially Nigerians want to start a war over pple who are making their millions and dosnt even give a dam abt their existence. Smh. |
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"u have a bright future, but the enemies did this or that and for that u have to pay for deliverance to be conducted for ......blah blah blah" gosh! Even a ten year old can't fall for this lame scam plot. Those teenagers need to get a brain. Smh |
freshness2020:lolzz. Funny u |
I received an sms on the day of the deadline asking me to follow a particular link to confirm my BVN registration...... I didn't even wait to finish the sms before pressing the delete button. Thanks to dear Nairaland, i was made aware of the scam strategy before the message came in, otherwise am certain i would have fallen victim. |
Wow!!, finally here. Pls keep the thrills coming, am enjoying every piece of 'em. More power to ur typing fingers. |
E be like say nah modeling dey trend now for Nija. If to say i fine, i for just go collect one title. But as i no come fine, make i wait till they begin dey contest for " the most wor-wor girl in Nigeria." for that, am sure will happen. Mtchew |
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Nice piece u got here. But i think our government has a bigger role to play. Imo, some private schools should be closed. The ones still standing should be well monitored. Government schools should be well equipped and teachers should be paid well cos its not easy to impact knowledge. Government Negligence is one among the numerous reasons our educational sector is a failure. |
Rotf, lmao. Shayo master! |
Warn her to stop, cos even if u trust ur wife, wat abt the guy in question? His agenda is not yet known, And u knw women are easily confused. Especially if the guy knws how to use sweet words than you. |
akpobi:thanks. |
Pls go on dear |
Tycoflu:can't stop laughing |
Op...its not Akineze..., its Akaeze |
Me too, i was enjoying the story like kilode until i got to page 26, i even ransacked the whole pages up to page 107 but didn't see any of it. Pls u guys should help before i commit suicide. I no fit sleep if i no finish am o. Abeg Audreytimms ur help is needed. |
Tnx for the update. Though av been a silent reader, i 've decided to comment and commend ur good work. I also have some suggestions to make and it concerns ur use of present tense and past tense. E.g. The place u wrote woke instead of wake and vise-versa, there are other places i noticed the mistakes which i can't go into. All in all u re doing a very nice job. Tnks |
@ flakky, u have deviateed from the name o. Jane's stepfather's name is Kenneth but u ve been writing Kennedy in this last post. I might be wrong tho. Tnx for the update |
I've been a silent reader of this story, but for once i decided to comment, and i must say its one of the best stories in this forum as it relates to real life event. Keep up the good work Dioxidane and more ink to ur pen. Pls we need more update. |
herald9:it is the vtadar that is wrecking the havoc in ur system not the cipro tab |
The guy looks like koredo bello. |
Team oneNigeria |
agarawu23:nah for ur own i stand jare. |
AnambraDota:ghen- ghen. Lolzz |
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