silverlinen:
Just came about this masterpiece and it was so fascinating and interesting....But there must be justice for Edwin... thanks for these Mrs writer. Expecting the sequel though

Thanks, you reminded me of this story.

Wow. This is the most beautiful story I've read on NL. It is the first story I've followed to its completion. Wow.
I have never read something so perfect and I find myself obsessively intrigued by the runnings of your mind. I imagine your soul as clockwork with such elaborate machineries that could each pass for an entire port.
This is a story I don't think I'll ever forget. I'm sorry for getting emotional, really. But you've outdone the writers I admire and, as such, are revered in my mind.

In fact, before this new system of updating, Wednesdays and Saturdays were for this story. Before I'd do anything with my phone, I made sure I read your updates. And when you switched to all week, I realized I was so much happier than I'd been in a very long while. Now, this has ended and I can't begin to understand what I'll be turning to. Can you believe there were nights I didn't sleep just so I could read your updates as soon as you dropped them? Wow!

I am once again terribly sorry for the publisher for letting you down. I'm 100% sure his or her reasons are baseless although I don't know any. Your story has done a lot to and for me and I wish I knew how to return the favor. Please, whatever help you may need, I'll gladly offer if capable.

Thank you very much for sharing this mind-blowing elixir with me. You, Obehi Dibua, have reached a legendary status in my head.

Now, may I implore you to complete the next book in the series as soon as possible? I honestly can't wait to read through everything.

PS: Please know I'm not merely being effusive with words. I used to be a writer and therefore find it difficult to be impressed with stories. I have never praised a story this much but The Marked deserves more.

And yes! It's time to move it off NL. I totally support the movement.

This is to show that the ways of men are different from the ways of gods. This is sad though and I understand how difficult it must have been for the writer herself.

I wish Musa was under Arexon. That gatekeeper head go don fly.

Obehi, this is going very well and I honestly think it's worth even more than the time already given. I mean, sacrifices must be made in times such as this. I'm not sure this is about emotions ns, this is merely logic.

Juke is the closest to Nebud.
Katan knows.
Katan hurts Juke to get Nebud.
Juke wants revenge.
Juke sees Katan later.
Juke attacks Katan.
Katan is stronger.
Katan wins.

If Juke wasn't the closest to Nebud, he wouldn't have had to die. I still haven't seen any part of this story that isn't necessary. What I'm hoping for now is that Musa is taught his lessons, I find myself resenting the simp.

And, Fahjaromo, oh: I await his death. It would be such a pleasure. I would savour the moments of his suffering.

Obehi, bless up. The way you describe the fighting always awes me. You show how the fights go, mentioning the body parts as if they are the normal parts we have. It is truly amazing. Sometimes, I wonder if your pen has an unnatural muse. And this is even more conflicting and striking when your discipline is considered.

Oh, where is Arexon when you need him?!

Wow. Arexon should have known there isn't a thing like 'low-risk mission'. WTF?! This is exhilarating!

I hope I'm not perceiving betrayal.

Marcinus.