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Wow am happy for frank,but love is a crime

Wow! Nice ending

crystalmoon:
And it ended in a happily after situation of

Yeah.. Situation of?
🤔😃

YoungTobi:
Wow!!! What a happy ending

Yeah.
Thank you for engaging.

YoungBruzzy:
Wow! What a happy ending
I like the way Cynthia served as distraction for Frank in the beginning of the story, and what I can say is Que Sera Sera.
I actually learn a thing or two from this story, especially that part where Chris told Frank to chase purpose and leave women. It’s a natural phenomenon, women are always attracted to a well to do man (no matter how bad his look may be).

Thanks for this beautiful story

Please do well to invite for your next story

That's it, man.
Purpose over women.😂

Thank you for engaging.

Throughout a man's life in school,he got no chance to beep any woman;though he got one chance but it was unlucky for him.
What a motivation way of life in school

Mhizzard:
Throughout a man's life in school,he got no chance to beep any woman;though he got one chance but it was unlucky for him.
What a motivation way of life in school

Lol. That's your observations 😂😂
He turned a new leaf after everything that happened to him, especially the cell ish.

And man of God told him he would be great, so beeping come commot for the picture
😂

[quote author=frankwriter post=125934241]Lol. That's your observations

[quote author=frankwriter post=125934241]Lol. That's your observations

Happy ending 🤗 Well done Frank. I am so proud of you 💃💃

Thanks frank, you delivered as always. I love the end and how realistic the story is

Pinkdimples:
Happy ending 🤗 Well done Frank. I am so proud of you 💃💃

Thank youuu

Candid2022:
Thanks frank, you delivered as always.
I love the end and how realistic the story is

Thank you for engaging

frankwriter, nice read, but it could have been better. It could have been better in the sense that the story was rushed. There were lots of events and adventures that weren't detailed or explored, but should have.

* The relationship between Frank and Benita should have been explored in details.
* The relationship and adventures of Frank with Chris and Cynthia should been well detailed.
* The relationship between Frank and Benita after graduation should have been explored, especially Frank's relationship with Benita's father, likewise the reason she changed her phone and lost his number.

These events are elements with rich story potentials but unfortunately those potentials weren't seen thanks to compressing and summarizing everything into a chapter. Seriously, justice wasn't done to the story. The story deserves more than this.

But all in all, nice work 🙃.




#Xavier

Xavier5:
frankwriter, nice read, but it could have been better. It could have been better in the sense that the story was rushed. There were lots of events and adventures that weren't detailed or explored, but should have.

* The relationship between Frank and Benita should have been explored in details.
* The relationship and adventures of Frank with Chris and Cynthia should been well detailed.
* The relationship between Frank and Benita after graduation should have been explored, especially Frank's relationship with Benita's father, likewise the reason she changed her phone and lost his number.

These events are elements with rich story potentials but unfortunately those potentials weren't seen thanks to compressing and summarizing everything into a chapter. Seriously, justice wasn't done to the story. The story deserves more than this.

But all in all, nice work 🙃.




#Xavier

Yeah, the story was rushed by me. I intentionally did so because, at that time, I was multitasking myself and my fans on Facebook were calling and asking for the next episode.
So, I decided to conclude the story before most of them lost interest. And to also focus on what I was doing, too.


All protocols duly observed.
Thank you, Xavier.

New Story on the way...

frankwriter:
New Story on the way...

Lfgggg