chibwike:
Sleekyshuga you haven't said a word here....seems u re kinda busy.

D1ck:
Night bae, make sure you dream 'bout me!!!

AgapeCharis:
Adepiero!
Where on the internet have you been?

naijaboiy:
ipledge shey we the hosts no deserve credit too

TheDarkRebel:
~ Lala247

Lemme post this first..


Gone through all of the verses...

• Twaci : Like I told you before, I liked your straightforwardness and simplicity. You remind me of the South-African writer- Athol Fugard. But what was lacking in your beautiful piece were Literary devices.. You put everything in the cooking pot but forgot to add Salt. Metaphors and similes are The backbone of any literary work... Kudos for your efforts anyway.. And I really like your d.p baby..call me



• Mirexx : OMG!! Like Farano my darling wife, have you been reading the Library of Alexandria? I'm really impressed.... ~ This was your opener...--
I am trying to place my thoughts and words on a
mortal vase, but none will be deep enough ...Bravo! This is really poetic and this is what's making Kendrick Lamar millions of dollars...
You even did ABAB rhyme scheme... You had decent metaphors.. - I love you baby.. Call me!


• Mzchinny - Hmmmmm... You took the Story-telling approach in expressing your feelings.. Exactly the way Nas does it. The only fault I found was your lack of literary devices..You relied solely on painting a picture with your words but you could have done it figuratively.. No one would mind if you called him your Suya meat or your #20 Akara or Aso-ebi , as long as its a metaphor . .
I did see a Paradox though and I thought it was splendid.. --
~don't care whether you're a player
I need no wise words from a soothsayer.
I love you with all your [b[ perfect imperfections [/b]
I want you to be my ride or die lover... Wonderful!! ... Call me baby


• Dimples192 : ...My Indian biatch made me proud.. She capitalised on her man's weakness.. Every man's weakness is a woman.(I mean if a woman start speaking seductively..I don't know about you.. But I'd get aroused and grab her one time..) That's what she did..she went in raw the way guys would like it...I don't know if the poem of lust is yours but it was unfuckwitable... and remember to put a Bindi on your forehead


Rozzay : My beautiful Rozzay. The sleek mermaid with golden hair and the type of ass that gives Rokiatu a run for her money . you did totally great. BANG !!!!!!!!
Like Mzchinny, you took the storytelling approach..little literary devices here and there.. But your descriptive prowess did it for you. Reading Your lines were a Don de Marco moment.


• More reviews coming before the 3 winners are announced

brito:








Wow! I can't believe my eyes, so u can be this nice?

kinglahkay:
nice one thedarkrebel


missclasssy nah your joli joli news I dey use style wait for

stephenqueen:

Naso, God pass dem.... Network dey punish me for here o

KingTom:
You never hear, Bkackett give hin demons leave this night na, by tomorrow the beast we all know and love will be back

jacksparrow1207:

D1ck:
You'll receive yours in bulk when the competition is over... Ipledge abi nor be so

Deejavuu:


It's too late...

KingTom:
Chai guy Abeg help,me hide am

Sleekyshuga:

Lol.. Not really.. I'm just taking in
everything; from page 1 to the
very last...

Whoever said Nigerian ladies ain't
romantic?

Nice job, ladies ..

D1ck:
Mine was V.ickybee and Mz.Nelly's....


I'm still expecting a shocker from Mizmy.coli tho.

April07:



I actually did add quatrains o.. Then it looked too long so I now come and remove it..

Thenk yhu

TheDarkRebel:


~ Everyone got their preference..
Different strokes for different folks...

I prefer Nneka123 and vickybee's verse.. but following criteria, they lose out.

Blackett:
Nope.

Cc naijaboi
y

Ipledge:
if you check my conversations with Ronald4lif,you will get it.

Blackett:
This is a compendium of my thoughts. . . Get the fvck out of my head mahn.

Blackett:
You've always seen the side of me I want you to see. . . There's more to a person than the eyes can see.

TheDarkRebel:
• Ishilove : what did ffuck did you do honey? I know you got 10 likes but trust me people only gave you that to encourage you.. I know you banned my previous account but I'm talking straight. You are a very ddope writer. I wonder why you let these girls ride you this night.. Anyway.. Lift my ban and call me baby

Blackett:
With enough ammo. . .

yugkapmeet:
What is going on here?

naijaboiy:

Are you serious?

kinglekan:


Lolzzz, no wori. He is in love mode atm