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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 1:37pm On Apr 29, 2015
What's Kim doing,how on earth can she feel safe with a stranger.. I won't blame her since she isn't from Nigeria
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 1:41pm On Apr 29, 2015
omotalkie:
Its jealousy. He's in love wit Tina & he wouldnt lyk any oda person to come around her. Ride on bro
wah kind of love is dah?he should remember dat he is married and his xpctn his child soon.. oga dee yhu never answer my question ooo?did mark send tony to the airport? if no den how did he know kim was coming??
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 1:48pm On Apr 29, 2015
Shebarh:
wah kind of love is dah?he should remember dat he is married and his xpctn his child soon.. oga dee yhu never answer my question ooo?did mark send tony to the airport? if no den how did he know kim was coming??
It wasn't stated that Mark sent Tony to pick Kim. Remember, Mark works with N.A.T.U and Tony works for FBI. Neither was it stated if the two knew each other.
You can re-read the update where Tony met Kim. He spoke to Kim first because he head her exclaim about the scorching sun. "welcome to Nigeria." was what he said. And since he was waiting for his driver to pick him up and Kim having nowhere to go, he decided to keep her company(trust men)
If Tony's driver was waiting at the time he came out of the airport, he would have gone his way. But they are in the same predicament, hence, their reason for going to the eatery together.
And moreso, Kim was coming out of the airport just as Tony was coming out too... Meaning, they are both returnees

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Slimzjoe(m): 1:48pm On Apr 29, 2015
Still Following.......
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 3:27pm On Apr 29, 2015
D9ty7:

It wasn't stated that Mark sent Tony to pick Kim. Remember, Mark works with N.A.T.U and Tony works for FBI. Neither was it stated if the two knew each other.
You can re-read the update where Tony met Kim. He spoke to Kim first because he head her exclaim about the scorching sun. "welcome to Nigeria." was what he said. And since he was waiting for his driver to pick him up and Kim having nowhere to go, he decided to keep her company(trust men)
If Tony's driver was waiting at the time he came out of the airport, he would have gone his way. But they are in the same predicament, hence, their reason for going to the eatery together.
And moreso, Kim was coming out of the airport just as Tony was coming out too... Meaning, they are both returnees
thank yhu so very much for that wonderful explanation... was getting confused...
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by bigwig97(m): 3:43pm On Apr 29, 2015
labaski:
first to read and comment.. I hope none of dem ll lose deir lives in ds mansion sha.. but dis mark too dey hate pple jare, he's hating Melvin again..
i tire 4 him oh! ride on dee
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Psalmwise(m): 3:59pm On Apr 29, 2015
D9ty7:
--continuation--
"Hello, baby am I Ikeja. At the airport." Kim cried excitedly.
"Huh? Am busy presently, and moreso, I didn't invite you
." Mark said without thinking and hung up at once.
"Lets move it."

--tbc--
I love that statement...,thats wat a bae gets when they disobey, a plea n to do sumtin.....


coolyou are in the airport he shud start jumping around and leae what is doing cos he's ethiopian babe is around..stcheeew angry


Goes back to reading mood
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by nikky42(f): 7:48pm On Apr 29, 2015
OGA d9ty hope Tina and mark are not in trouble? more ink to your pen
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by nikky42(f): 7:53pm On Apr 29, 2015
Psalmwise:
I love that statement...,thats wat a bae gets when they disobey, a plea n to do sumtin.....
coolyou are in the airport he shud start jumping around and leae what is doing cos he's ethiopian babe is around..stcheeew angry
Goes back to reading mood
OGA d9ty hope Tina and mark are not in trouble? more ink to your pen





don't u no it's not easy to b pregnant 4 a man and he suddenly disappear with a word. e no easy ooioo
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 8:04pm On Apr 29, 2015
nikky42:
OGA d9ty hope Tina and mark are not in trouble? more ink to your pen





don't u no it's not easy to b pregnant 4 a man and he suddenly disappear with a word. e no easy ooioo
u mean it shocked

with d type of job mark is doin i dnt knw why kim cant tink of dat b4 embarking on dat journey *btw shey mark's mum is wit her in the U.S What wil mark do 4 her agn*

ok i guess she came 2 9ja to cook 4 him grin grin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Psalmwise(m): 10:35pm On Apr 29, 2015
nikky42:






don't u no it's not easy to b pregnant 4 a man and he suddenly disappear with a word. e no easy ooioo
buh she knows d nature of his job ow serous and dangerous it is...at least she knows he's alife..
and she knows she herself is pregnant a very delicate condition
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 8:34am On Apr 30, 2015
palmwine, adeh, stuff, n onemansquade Una nor fit tell say dee don continue wit d story Bad people
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 8:44am On Apr 30, 2015
--continuation--
Danny Lovato led General John-Paul into the underground dormitory of LOVATO ARMIES.
"Here we are Paul." Danny said as he opened one last door which led to the front of several hostels numbering up to thirty and about twenty were occupied with boys between the ages of thirteen and eighteen. And at least two boys occupied the rooms each.
"Cell 18." Danny called and slowly, a uniformed man walked up with the cell marked '18' and unlocked the door.
Chidi slowly dragged himself out of the cell and his face lit up at the sight of his father.
"Oh my...... Dad!" He threw himself on his father's heavy frame.
"How are you boy?" General John-Paul asked his son, checking him all over to see if he sustained any injury.
"You should be here boy." Danny Lovato said calmly as he dragged Chidi away from his father.
"Danny, let me talk to my son." John Paul said, almost pleading.
"Your son a few days ago. Lovato's soldier as we speak." Danny Lovato replied.
Relucatantly, John allowed his son to go and meet his new custodian. Lovato smiled triumphantly at his ability to control one of the finest and strongest soldiers in the country.
"Go to daddy. You have two minutes." With this Lovato signalled to one of the uniformed men who led father and son to an empty cell.
"What have you been given since you came here?" He asked his son.
"Nothing dad except...." Chidi was saying but stopped when he saw the look on his father's face.
Soldiers are not meant to be jittery, scared, frightened or weak, but seeing his father in such a state was enough concern.
"What were you given?"
"Dad, is there any problem?" Chidi asked.
"Tell me whatever you were given." His father glared.
"Fine. I was injected on my left shoulder." Chidi replied.
"Oh God! Why would you allow such?"
"But dad, there is nothing bad in it. To be in the army, you'll be injected. You yourself told me, so what's the fuse about?" Chidi replied.
"Its like you don't get it. This is not the type of army you want to be a part of."
"Dad! I don't care. I told you to register me at NMS or NDA, but you refused saying you want me to become a doctor, and someone here is giving me the opportunity to showcase my skills as a soldier." Chidi replied ignorant of the fact that he was kidnapped or probably would be used to serve a purpose.
"You were kidnapped...." John Paul was saying when Lovato entered the cell. With a hand on the mighty General's shoulder.
"Your time is up." He laughed. "Get the boy back to his cell. You have a 5pm drill." He ordered the soldier who stood outside the cell and a minute later, Lovato was alone with John-Paul.
"Why are you doing this?" General John-Paul asked, throwing away every millitary training he at a point went through. The always be strong in the face of death was not applicable to him that moment, because no parent who welcomed their first child after seventeen years of marriage would want such child to die or exposed to any form of danger.
"Come with me." Lovato said as he exited the cell.
When you are confident about what you do, you'll control the world, wine and dine with the kings. Such was the case here, because Lovato was in his territory, he had John Paul's balls in his hand and he could boss him around anywhere.
"Where are we going?" Paul who on a normal day is twenty five times superior to Danny Lovato.
His mind flashed back to after the cold war when Lovato formed his rebellious army against the Russian government, John Paul, a Colonel then was at the front as he led the West African millitary troop to Egypt where they first reported Danny Lovato's presence. After a futile attempt at getting Lovato in Egypt, reports said he was hiding in Libya, others said he was in Morrocco, the Isreali MOUSSAD reportedly sent a picture of Lovato driving out of the Airport in Algeria. The attempt to get him in North Africa was futile, and disappointedly, the troops returned home, and to John-Paul's suprise, Lovato was waiting for him at his(John) vacation home in VGC. John Paul was caught off guard and after calls from the Egyptian president, Paul agreed to house Lovato for fourteen months until a mansion was constructed for him.
"Major General John Paul." A voice called as soon as they entered a room. "The coup plotter. The errand boy, hungry for promotion. 1987." And just then, the curtain slid open to reveal Mark Anthony smiling at one of his boys back in the days.
John gasped.

--tbc--

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 8:59am On Apr 30, 2015
nawa o
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Missmossy(f): 11:21am On Apr 30, 2015
Chidi is already liking his training grin kudos D9ty7
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 11:36am On Apr 30, 2015
kwencypresh:
palmwine, adeh, stuff, n onemansquade Una nor fit tell say dee don continue wit d story Bad people
Presh na Kantagoa u travel go? So u dnt knw wats happening abi? Dee stopped THE THOMAS, nt dis one.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 11:40am On Apr 30, 2015
Missmossy:
Chidi is already liking his training grin kudos D9ty7

Lols.....U are right.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 12:31pm On Apr 30, 2015
i b go Ghana bfor
adeh39:


Presh na Kantagoa u travel go?
So u dnt knw wats happening abi?
Dee stopped THE THOMAS, nt dis one.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 12:39pm On Apr 30, 2015
chidi is ignorant of wat awaits him
evil dat men do

more mb to ur fone dee
weldone
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by sammyomotola: 1:02pm On Apr 30, 2015
Fool chidi john
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ligopedro: 2:09pm On Apr 30, 2015
@Dee i still Neva get ya mail on the Thomas story .. No do me like dis nao ..
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by omotalkie(f): 2:18pm On Apr 30, 2015
So na now d mods see dis story to bring it now to fp.#NaGodWin#
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by blackmarya(f): 2:20pm On Apr 30, 2015
i dey pity this chidi of a boy oh...front page things
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Neephemie(f): 2:30pm On Apr 30, 2015
Hmmmmmmm.......ffg closely. Well done Oga mi
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 2:32pm On Apr 30, 2015
oga oo
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Neephemie(f): 2:34pm On Apr 30, 2015
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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pinkiedearie(f): 2:35pm On Apr 30, 2015
Hoope...I'm not late sha
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pakingzzz(m): 3:30pm On Apr 30, 2015
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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lbotusme: 4:02pm On Apr 30, 2015
Yipee, front page!!
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 4:54pm On Apr 30, 2015
Lol
Lilyomi:

We went on a break. But break is over grin

Never heard of something like break in marriage? Onemansquad is that true? I know you to be a skirt chaser?
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 5:12pm On Apr 30, 2015
You ask me wetin happen to me why i nor comment ni?
kwencypresh:
palmwine, adeh, stuff, n onemansquade Una nor fit tell say dee don continue wit d story Bad people

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