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Jane left the store quite early and went to see Jaiye,he looked better now.Cynthia babysat him,with worries etched on her beautiful feature.Cynthia informed her that her husband would be discharged the following morning.
She kept them company for some hours before leaving for home,she went to her room to shower and freshen up,before going to the kitchen,dinner was in preparation.
"Where are my children?" She asked as Nnamdi washed the sliced yam into boiling water.
"Eve is playing games in her room,while Adam is sleeping." He answered. "Sleeping?" She turned to face him."Its so unlike him."
"He cut his hand with a knife this afternoon."
Jane raised her hand to slap Nnamdi but quickly cautioned herself,"How did that happen? And you were home,how could you have been so careless with my son?" She threw at the cook.
"I'm sorry ma,I didn't know he had the knife,I have cleaned the hand and wrapped it in a bandage."
Jane was furious knowing fully well,that her husband would be much more,and just as predicted he was mad.
"Where were you when he cut his hand?" He asked immediately after dinner.
"I was at the hospital to see Jaiye." She said.
"You're always at one place or the other but never home."
Jane lifted her head up in surprise.
"Do you even have time for our children Jane?"
"But Nnamdi.. ... .."
"Oh please." Jacob cut her short,"Nnamdi is not my wife,you are." He said pointedly.
Janet shrugged,"It's alright,I'll be careful next time."
"That's it." He got up,"I don't want a repeat of what happened today again,is that clear?"
"Yes."
Jacob walked out on her without another word.It was some minutes past eight before she joined him in bed,he pulled down the covers and sat up,"I've decided that you should stop going to the store,I am not asking you to stop working,but you can work from home,this way you'll have time to cook my meals and give the children proper attention." He said trying to read her expression.
Jane knew she must have heard him wrong,"You're asking me to stop going to my store?"
"Yes,you have a manager who can feed you with every information you require,let him report to you here." He said.
Jane sighed,"Since when have you been thinking about this?"
Jacob was quiet,then he spoke,"I am not even asking for your opinion,this is an order.".
Jane looked at him as if he was a stranger,"You asked me to start cooking your meals,you asked me to stop going to the store,what are you going to ask me to stop doing next?

Jacob is training a deadly beast in jane's heart...d beast will do wonders one day,dnt say i didnt tell ya.

hmm Jacob, be careful o

madam flakky welcome back

pls let dis story end alredi....three years and still counting. madam flakky, ain't u even tired of d story? Juz wrap it up for us, bikonu

thankz for d update dou

AS A WRITER YOU SHOULD BE SPECIFIC ABOUT YOUR UPDATE

WITH THE WAY THIS IS GOING IT LOOKS LIKE YOU DID NOT THINK WELL ABOUT THIS STORY
DONT WRITE STORIES JUST BECAUSE YOU WANT ATTENTION

So many complains about this story than appreciation and flakky you careless about them, no change in style not even addressing the issues bn raised is obvious you don't care about your readers as long as they are here to read what ever you give. Issokay



Well on a lighter note: they can eat yam in this story Shaaa.

evaZee:
So many complains about this story than appreciation and flakky you careless about them, no change in style not even addressing the issues bn raised is obvious you don't care about your readers as long as they are here to read what ever you give. Issokay



Well on a lighter note: they can eat yam in this story Shaaa.

I do care about my readers,just that i can't make a promise only to break it afterwards.........Thnks.

amyvals:
pls let dis story end alredi....three years and still counting. madam flakky, ain't u even tired of d story? Juz wrap it up for us, bikonu

Thnks pls make use of the un-follow button.

helen1967:
AS A WRITER YOU SHOULD BE SPECIFIC ABOUT YOUR UPDATE

WITH THE WAY THIS IS GOING IT LOOKS LIKE YOU DID NOT THINK WELL ABOUT THIS STORY
DONT WRITE STORIES JUST BECAUSE YOU WANT ATTENTION

Thank you.

Thanks for the update dear

Flakkydagirl.. nice story
But take note of these: At a point there was a secret between Jaiye and Jane or perhaps something between them that made most of us believe Jaiye was the father of the twins but then again you are making us believe another thing that Jacob is the father. I dont really know but there was something between Jaiye and Jane before she gave birth and still we don't know what it is so please try to slot that in

2.I thought Adekunle's mother was dead (Biyisi) but you brought her back again in the story

3. It looks like you are giving your readers peanuts just to quench their persistence on you updating. You didn't start the story this way. The vibes is way reducing

Goodluck!

BadBullet:

shot up did u pay her to update for you

fool, did I call ur name, advocate

jeenah:
Flakkydagirl.. nice story
But take note of these: At a point there was a secret between Jaiye and Jane or perhaps something between them that made most of us believe Jaiye was the father of the twins but then again you are making us believe another thing that Jacob is the father. I dont really know but there was something between Jaiye and Jane before she gave birth and still we don't know what it is so please try to slot that in

2.I thought Adekunle's mother was dead (Biyisi) but you brought her back again in the story

3. It looks like you are giving your readers peanuts just to quench their persistence on you updating. You didn't start the story this way. The vibes is way reducing

Goodluck!

Thanks for reading...
1 At the end of the story you'll understand the whole Jacob,Jane,Jaiye and Cynthia issue.
2Biyisi was sick and taken to the hospital when she was re-united with her daughter,if u remember she was discharged from the hospital because her sickness only needs medications to keep her alife not to make her well.Biyisi is not dead,if she was I would have talked abt her burial.
3i'm sorry about my epileptic updates,its not that I am doing this on purpose,but I can't begin to explain what I'm going through to you.I understand how frustrating it is to keep dishing out peanuts update.
I can't promise something that I will not be able to fulfill.
What I am certain of is,I intend to finish this story,soon at that.
People keep forgeting the Nairaland tsunami where the story was wiped off,I had to do it again.I have finished two stories already.
How many times do I have to apologise?
Do you know how it feels when someone mails me and tell me they love the story,and they are reading from sites that I don't even know of.Its called plagiarism(They want to feed their readers too.)
All in all,thanks for your truest concern Jeenah.

Flakky love, i would tell you what Soyinka once told me right at the Beacon Theatre in New York some while ago ( about 7 years back)
He narrated the trying times he had to write notes on tissue papers while in Solitary confinement ( prison years and the man died )
That's the efficacy of a grandiloquent writer.
When a writer begins a story, he is transposed from his natural realm and adopts the stead of a spectator as if he were right before the entire happenings.
Like i said earlier, the use of deux ex machina would save this prose a great deal soonest.

Love you

Flakkydagirl:

Thanks for reading...
1 At the end of the story you'll understand the whole Jacob,Jane,Jaiye and Cynthia issue.
2Biyisi was sick and taken to the hospital when she was re-united with her daughter,if u remember she was discharged from the hospital because her sickness only needs medications to keep her alife not to make her well.Biyisi is not dead,if she was I would have talked abt her burial.
3i'm sorry about my epileptic updates,its not that I am doing this on purpose,but I can't begin to explain what I'm going through to you.I understand how frustrating it is to keep dishing out peanuts update.
I can't promise something that I will not be able to fulfill.
What I am certain of is,I intend to finish this story,soon at that.
People keep forgeting the Nairaland tsunami where the story was wiped off,I had to do it again.I have finished two stories already.
How many times do I have to apologise?
Do you know how it feels when someone mails me and tell me they love the story,and they are reading from sites that I don't even know of.Its called plagiarism(They want to feed their readers too.)
All in all,thanks for your truest concern Jeenah.

thanks dear, Honestly I understand how demanding writing a story can be and how Tasking it is with your other activities especially if you are a student. You can read my story too-memories of cupid(on going) about love, betrayal and mythology. one love..

Flakkydagirl:
Thnks pls make use of the un-follow button.

Hun un. Dats too harsh. Kilode.lori story Na. I don't think the girl said too much. She only said wat she felt about ur story. Well, nice story

Hey Flakkydagirl, please is this book completed or you are still in the process of writing?
if it's completed please you can let us have it via mail or okadabooks, call it one million I go source the money. That's how much the story is interesting. Ma kindly consider

Gorgeousolasco:


Hun un. Dats too harsh. Kilode.lori story Na. I don't think the girl said too much. She only said wat she felt about ur story. Well, nice story

thankz dear, guess u understood me, lemme juz kip kwayet den before she will tell me to deactivate from Nairaland entirely

My humble opinion- I will suggest u pause d story for the meantime, cos I believe those wey dey put fire for ur bumbum make u do fast update without any respect as if they r paying u to do this are d people doing d plagiarism on their sites. so just take ur time and let them finish up d story for their fans for their yeye pages.

BadBullet:

you are insane,,,if you think its that easy why nt write your own story let others read it too...how many times will she apologise for the delayed updates

idiot better be careful

fool fool fool waiting for more foolish response from u, busy body

vivor:
fool fool fool waiting for more foolish response from u, busy body

plagiarist alert!
U want her to finish the story for u sharp sharp and u will take the glory for what u did not sow. If she like, let her post just a line,it's her story not urs.
If u re a plagiarist, quote me.

Dnt mind them Flakky. At least, she still updates, av read other write-up that are nt even as interesting as this that their authors will be doing like Shina Rambo and will fail to even update not to talk of finishing. She has other things doing now... Anyways sha, keep up the good work and I hope one day, a publisher will see the hidden talent in you and reward you for all what uv gone through while writing this book.

Flakky I suggest you delete some of the chapters, that way it would be difficult for plagiarism to take effect. You can't post incomplete story and expect people to read it. Few writers here did it. You can start from maybe chapter two. By the time the thief posts the first chapter and the readers starts asking for the rest (which he/she can't provide) the readers will come for his/head.. My two cents.

lyk seriously ,it nothing to b api about for d delay in d update ,I guess lots of pple including myself have been following d story for more Dan 2yrs plus and it not yet finish ,some has forgotten how it went from d beginning, Ma I think u should keep d fire of d story burning not lowering it wit Litu or no update please we beg u ,we know it not easy to sit and start writing but please do something about it,Thanks

amyvals:
thankz dear, guess u understood me, lemme juz kip kwayet den before she will tell me to deactivate from Nairaland entirely

Lol...

Luckymay:
Flakky I suggest you delete some of the chapters, that way it would be difficult for plagiarism to take effect. You can't post incomplete story and expect people to read it. Few writers here did it. You can start from maybe chapter two. By the time the thief posts the first chapter and the readers starts asking for the rest (which he/she can't provide) the readers will come for his/head.. My two cents.

Sharp....Dats how it rolls dear

Opracus:
lyk seriously ,it nothing to b api about for d delay in d update ,I guess lots of pple including myself have been following d story for more Dan 2yrs plus and it not yet finish ,some has forgotten how it went from d beginning, Ma I think u should keep d fire of d story burning not lowering it wit Litu or no update please we beg u ,we know it not easy to sit and start writing but please do something about it,Thanks

I will....
I'm sorry for the delay.
Update resumes on Friday.
Thanks.....

CYFER:
Lol...

wat is funny

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Jacob was quiet,then he spoke,"I am not even asking for your opinion,this is an order.".
Jane looked at him as if he was a stranger,"You asked me to start cooking your meals,you asked me to stop going to the store,what are you going to ask me to stop doing next?
"It is not in your place to ask me such question." He said.
Jane got down from the bed,"What exactly is your problem,I want to know,when did you become like this?There is nothing I am capable of doing right in this house,you complain virtually of everything."She thundered,she was furious.
"You have just added nagging to the list,please let me get some sleep,I have better things to do in the morning." Jacob hissed and pulled the covers,but Jane pulled it off him frantically."There is no sleep tonight,you and I are on a vigil,because tonight I must get to the root of this madness." She raised her voice above the roof.
"You are merely looking for trouble but I refuse to yield to this temptaion."
Jane laughed,"Look at you,what do you know about temptation,I will show you the real temptation now." She moved towards him and began to pull at his pyjamas.
"Leave me alone woman." He screamed pushing her away.Jane fell against the chair by the dressing table,hitting a foot in the process,it was bleeding but she cared less.she was shocked,she held the floor and got up."Now I can see it,but since you know you're tired of this relationship,why don't you give me a divorce?" She said picked a pillow and stormed out of the bedroom.
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