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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 12:00am On Sep 22, 2016 |
sotozo: Eshe sir. Emi naa gbedi fun yin oo, Auntie Maggie thank you for the advert God bless you. 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Eniqurl(f): 12:07am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Bibijay123 is viewing.. Do u want to feed us more? |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by MrKIDO(m): 12:32am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Have been a silent reader. I really need to recommend your work, You are pretty amazing. Keep it up. "Allen avenue" and "Day In A Life Of A Lazy Girl" are wonderful. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 7:27am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Bibi .. I love you, no homo 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 8:29am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Eniqurl: lol sorry babe 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 8:30am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Lawlahdey:I love you too 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Omobolajisword(f): 8:47am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Bibi we want more abey serve us ooo 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by cbaba: 8:58am On Sep 22, 2016 |
finally caught up with u guys....I read pages when am on breaks and I just couldn't put it down. great work....very great work.... critik time tho: try to describe the sola/thugs and brother fight in real terms...it didn't sound or feel like someone was being hit...or haven't u been hit before... try and expand the conversation where Chinenye took over the gambling from aliyu...urs was too fast....just edit, u know, she was studying the style,she knew dalla baba weakpoint, she also stole some money and brought it along in anticipation...u know what I mean! welldone 3 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 9:10am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Okay, Bibi nice one 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 9:34am On Sep 22, 2016 |
cbaba: lol i haven't been hit before but i appreciate dis. Thank u, will make d adjustment wen i convert it into an e_book. 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by biddieluvzyaho(f): 10:47am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Awwwww,see d way I rushed in when I saw bibijay ...tot it was an update fa[color=#770077][/color] |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by rachealfst(f): 11:15am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Thanks Bibi, God bless you for us. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 11:30am On Sep 22, 2016 |
Lawlahdey: If not that your moniker caries the 'f' sign ........ uhmmmm; coz.... I'm the jealous type o and I no dey carry my wife joke 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Queenoma(f): 11:30am On Sep 22, 2016 |
More ink to ur pen bibi 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Queenoma(f): 11:31am On Sep 22, 2016 |
More ink to ur pen bibi. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by PeachyP(f): 2:02pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
That Linda is cunning sha. Nice job Bibi |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by mulberry: 2:10pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Keep it coming bibi. I love it thru and thru so no cynicism. Thanks |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Twinkle004(f): 2:13pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Linda are u sure is ur father u saw or some1 else.there is more 2 linda's family but Bibi keep twisting & keeping us in suspense as normal. Bibi thnks 4 d dedication,u jst geared me 2 love u more... God bless |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by vandops10(m): 2:37pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
bibi and veekid are u truly married? As a true nairalander-pics or I don't believe it 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jay1988: 2:42pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Ladybianca:e be like say bibi sabi something oooo 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by jacy67(f): 4:03pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Hmm!! I am short of words. if you were writing for nollywood, no one will bother to watch telemundo. More blessings 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by purity22(f): 4:19pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Bibi love, am starving real bad. Kindly give me my meal for the day |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 4:29pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
veekid: 1 Like
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 5:30pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
vandops10: Mr doubting Thomas; it doesn't matter wat you think about us, it's what we are that matters to US. You can Continue doubting 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 6:16pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
vandops10: Why didn't you come when we gave you IV? now you are asking for pinshure wen u didn't buy aso ebi. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 6:17pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Chapter fourteen Tosin I gave a little smile as i watched Mr. Joseph and chief Adediwura pacing up and down outside. Maggie and Kelvin' s mother was wringing their hands in worry. Vicky was also glancing towards the church entrance every second and the pastor has long since fixed himself on the seat behind the pulpit in resignation. They were all agitated because the car conveying Kelvin to the church ought to have arrived several minutes ago. I watched with satisfaction as the people seated in the church whispered amongst each other. Even Kelly, my daughter who was the little flower girl had given up and she had come to sit anxiously beside my mother. I could see thousands of prestigious people in the society seated in the pews, some of them were now thumbing their phones in boredom, while others were gossiping in hushed tones. " Where is Kelvin? he ought to have gotten here by now" Auntie Maggie asked. " He will soon get here, he forgot something important at home and he went back for it" " I thought you went back for it!" His mom said worriedly. " I couldn't find it so i gave him a call and he went back for it" I lied. " What is so important that he had to go back home?" " The rings" i replied tersely. " How could he forget the rings?" His mother asked. " Please go back inside the church, he will get here soon." i replied. The women went back into the church while i walked to the back of the building and knocked on one of the doors. Onyinye, the chief bridesmaid opened the door. " Is Kelvin here now?" She asked. " What took him so long?" I ignored her and entered the room. " Where is he?" Linda asked, " Is he standing me up?" " Tell your friend to excuse us" " Onyinye out!" She ordered. " But...." Onyinye trailed of with her protest, walking out of the room with a huff. " I know he has stood me up" She said to herself. " Tomi is alive" i informed her. She clutched her chest with her left hand, her legs buckled under her and i pulled her close to prevent her from falling. " How? how? how's that possible?" She asked in disbelief. " She.....she is dead." " No she didn't ". " Then why did you all fool me that she died! is this some kind of sick joke? is this Kelvin' s way of punishing me? by deserting me on our wedding day?". " No. He only found out few minutes ago that she was alive and they have reunited" She moved backwards, her chin held up higher. " I will go tell them the wedding has been cancelled" she said, picking up her gown and starting towards the door. " Wait Linda!". She whirled around and paused. Tears of humiliation shinning brightly in her eyes. " Don't you want to know what happened first?" I asked. " There will be tons of questions " She shook her head. " Tomi is alive and that is one guilt off my shoulders. I am not even in love with Kelvin, so he should be with her". She dapped at the tears sneaking out of the corner of her eyes with her finger. " Tosin i have done things which i am not proud of and if given the chance i probably will do them all over again to get what i want. That is just who i am, i always think of myself first before others and i have hurt so many people, innocent people. This time around i want to think of someone else's happiness before mine. If my punishment is to be humiliated in front of thousands of people and be the main dish served for dinner in every home then i think I deserve no lesser punishment." " Your life and property is also at stake here" I reminded her. " No" she shook her head." It no longer matters to me, i will accept it as my fate and i will leave the country " " You can't let your father win. You can't let your mother' s inheritance go to someone who heartlessly squeezed the breath out of her. You have to get back all what belongs to her!" " I don't think it is worth the trouble i have put so many people through " she smiled through her tears. " Vicky was right. You are such a good person. Thank you" she picked up the sides of her flowing white gown again. " I better get this over with before the media gets winds of it". " There will be a wedding" i said, surprising myself. " Whose?" She asked. " Ours" i answered. TBC 23 Likes 12 Shares |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by smokeydrinky: 6:31pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Ha!!!! The twists don too much o. Ha..... Im developing hbp on top this matter.how can anyones life be so complicated ? |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 6:34pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
I gatz read all over again; gigantually complicated 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 6:35pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Bibi Bibi Bibi, yuah just too good. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by toboski1(m): 6:35pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
nice 1 Bibi, you got me refreshing tis page over and over but this latest update refreshed my chills. what more can one ask for? more updates ofcos..... thanks Bibi *kizzes* 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by monsieurp: 6:36pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
bibijay123: wow I didn't see that coming. Men the twist is crazy. Good work bibijay |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by JMK9600(f): 6:40pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
Tosin and Linda? Baddest combination. More ink to ur pen bibi. Tanx for the consistency. God bless you |
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