Cyberrex:

I'm in, 'll do the little I can

graciers ma broda. 1luv

To me, this would have been better if the writers wrote their own individual stories and somehow make the story have a connection with the story written before theirs. Or it could be several stories that revolves around an object or in a particular city, or even someone. Then every writers will bring what they are good at to the table. The action-thrillers will write theirs, the romantic ones will do theirs and so on.

Example. (A particular Bar)

Action- thriller.

Hit team are in the bar sorting or perhaps came to the bar to meet and sort out ways on how to get their target. They leave for the job and succeed in accomplishing it. Or end up being taken out by their target.

Romantic.

That same bar, a guy waiting for a girlfriend or a girl waiting for a lover. Infact a romantic story that started in the same bar. And in the story, the main character might have cast a few glances at the hit team or bumped into one of the men as they where leaving the place before the romantic story began; just a short connection. The writer of this genre knows what to write sha.

Detective.

An undercover cop in that same bar following some leads about a serial killer or professional killer. The hit team somehow gets his attention, maybe through a brief argument they had with the guy or girl(second story) that they bumped it on their way out. But he waves them off cos he is so close to finding the person his is after cos his source of information lead him to the same bar.



Then an intelligent writer might read all the stories and somehow be able to create a connection. Larrysun is probably good at that.


The name of the story could be the name of the bar.

Just my opinion.

Trying to write a story about a character that someone else created is kind of difficult for me. I can only write based on the character i created.

ironkurtain:
Trying to write a story about a character that someone else created is kind of difficult for me. I can only write based on the character i created.

Boss it is finally good to c u.
Wen wud u do the part three of bloodline I wanna read how jack is going to rule.
One love bro.

Aripotta ur entance is good but we don't quite get you.
How did they get there? Wat are they doing there? Who si their target and besides it is davina.

Ghosst is meant to have gone away .
At solouho19 boss awfa u abi u no reason am.
Cyberrex u nko
Apollux wat of marvel chronicle.

I wud have love to write but I am a reader nt a writer

One love.
Ladies u gals shud do something.

Yes

stephenGee12:


Boss it is finally good to c u.
Wen wud u do the part three of bloodline I wanna read how jack is going to rule.
One love bro.

Aripotta ur entance is good but we don't quite get you.
How did they get there? Wat are they doing there? Who si their target and besides it is davina.

Ghosst is meant to have gone away .
At solouho19 boss awfa u abi u no reason am.
Cyberrex u nko
Apollux wat of marvel chronicle.

I wud have love to write but I am a reader nt a writer

One love.
Ladies u gals shud do something.

Ahn ahn, its a lie you can write. Oya write something nah

stephenGee12:


Boss it is finally good to c u.
Wen wud u do the part three of bloodline I wanna read how jack is going to rule.
One love bro.

Aripotta ur entance is good but we don't quite get you.
How did they get there? Wat are they doing there? Who si their target and besides it is davina.

Ghosst is meant to have gone away .
At solouho19 boss awfa u abi u no reason am.
Cyberrex u nko
Apollux wat of marvel chronicle.

I wud have love to write but I am a reader nt a writer

One love.
Ladies u gals shud do something.

I dont think there's gonna be a Bloodline 3.

The sky is blue, the weather is cool too. Everything is an irony of what is to start in the next few minutes.
"Are you sure the boys are on ground?" That is Don Gucci asking his right hand man. "Yes sir. We also have snipers on roofs around." I think we have to move to another location for the deal. I am not comfortable here. Take fifty men. Leave the rest to take care of this place." Five minutes later, the two guards on the main entrance had medium sized holes on their foreheads. Three hooded figures moves stealthy towards the entrance. They opened the door, one guard was coming towards the entrance. he was silenced before anything meaningful comes out of his mouth. There was a turning to the right loud chattering could be heard. the hooded figures stopped, one of them, a female, brought out something that looks like a perfume, sprayed it forward. within two seconds, the guards were already sleeping. The lady then gave them a stab each on their necks. As she signalled to the other two, the white lights in the house went off, and was replaced with red lights, and a siren wail. A lot of foot steps were coming towards them. " They are coming towards us!" The girl shouted who turned out to be Jambe. "So what do we do now?" Asked Anderson. "We fight!" shouted Eva. with their wrap weapons in the automatic mode, they opened fire at the guards, cutting them down in their tens. Though they survived the attack because of the bullet proofed hood they were wearing.

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When this was going on, Williams and ghost after three cars on bikes. When they were few meters from the last car, they opened fire, drilling holes into the vehicle, it lost control, probably because the driver was hit. then with one precise shot to the fuel tank, the car burst into fire. The two remaining cars have started shooting at them from the windows and roofs. They were trying to dodge and shoot simultaneously. With one hand, Williams dashed one of the shooters a bullet in his forehead. With maximum alacrity, ghost released three arrows within two seconds. one of the arrows hit on his fore head with much force that almost spilt the head into two. William increased his speed, shooting the occupants of the second car as he was side by side with it. Within few seconds, the car was filled with fragments of the brain. There was no attack coming from the last car. Instead, the car's speed increased. The chase continued. there was a dead end to the road they are on. With a knowing smile, Williams and ghost stopped, allowing the car to go to its death.

arripotta nice one.
meneski we are back on track.

stephenGee12:
arripotta nice one. meneski we are back on track.

Thanks bro

stephenGee12:
arripotta nice one.
meneski we are back on track.

Yes, it's nice

I told you meneski, the fun has just begun
arripotta thumbs up

Yes!
Cyberrex Na you be oo oga pata pata

Heavyweight talented writers we got here.... Bring it on, its getting hotter.

cyber5:
Yes!
Cyberrex Na you be oo oga pata pata

bros I loyal

You guys are really trying, I'm enjoying the lines,so keep it up

abeg make una no vex. I have been very busy since morning assignments and the rest. I tried posting now, but the thing cleared when I minimized it. tomorrow morning, I will try to post a long update. And please any where I make mistake, tell me this is my first story sha

All right Garriporta...sorry arriporta we re waiting...mean why another writer shd keep us company bcus it seen all our writerz are on Sabartical,please oga meneski we need the rowcall again so that we can knw who nd who is in za house please

hmmm its good to be back...hello peepz how are you all doing?

Aiirporta i already scripted two updates but i chilled because u took over;..bro try not to type direct to nl, type it somewhere else maybe on whatsapp or any word processor and copy and paste so u won't be worried about losing the data.
Nice previous update. Anticipating more

souloho19:
Aiirporta i already scripted two updates but i chilled because u took over;..bro try not to type direct to nl, type it somewhere else maybe on whatsapp or any word processor and copy and paste so u won't be worried about losing the data.
Nice previous update. Anticipating more

It seems don gucci is dead so please u pple shud leave don peluzzini for me.
So wen u want him to die and also meet braham let me knw I have got something brewing in my mind so I can start to design.

apollux I love the way u describe those hardwares. However, I think you're not a good learner or...
I'm not saying my use of English language is the best but your updates contain too many errors and I noticed someone tried to correct you but you ignored him.
I also noticed some things you described are not so realistic. An example is William taking out 7 people (in the same place) successfully. Is it possible that the other people just stand like trees after the first shot brought down someone beside them?
Secondly, being a "don", I didn't expect him to step out of d car alone. Cmon, he was accompanied by 2 SUVs (which u said prolly carried armed men). Why then did he just step out like that? I expected his guards to alight first and even rally around him.

Sorry if I sound harsh but I'm only trying to be factual with my thoughts.
I was really eager to read this story but now, ma jux pack well.
Note: Me sef no hear English o.

Good job meneski

profsomebody:
apollux I love the way u describe those hardwares. However, I think you're not a good learner or...
I'm not saying my use of English language is the best but your updates contain too many errors and I noticed someone tried to correct you but you ignored him.
I also noticed some things you described are not so realistic. An example is William taking out 7 people (in the same place) successfully. Is it possible that the other people just stand like trees after the first shot brought down someone beside them?
Secondly, being a "don", I didn't expect him to step out of d car alone. Cmon, he was accompanied by 2 SUVs (which u said prolly carried armed men). Why then did he just step out like that? I expected his guards to alight first and even rally around him.

Sorry if I sound harsh but I'm only trying to be factual with my thoughts.
I was really eager to read this story but now, ma jux pack well.
Note: Me sef no hear English o.

Good job meneski

Well thanks for the criticism but there are some things u should take note of. One this is a fiction not realism. Two if u get to read the story very well, "Simon" was not alone he was standing with other guards who came out from the other car (and for the record he wasn't a don) . Killing seven people at one time is something u should understand about sniping, if u have been under fire during a sniper attack, u will get to know how easy it is for a sniper using a gun whose effective range is around 2miles to kill 7 people in 7 seconds.
Now foe the Bad English, this language is not my 1st language, if u had taken time to read through my introduction before the story, u will realize I informed all that this is not a prepared work, I type them as I log in to Nairaland. So this is not a professional work, it didn't go through any editing Moreover I'm not well educated, so dont expect my English to be polished. I never claimed this work to be the product of a professor.

Apollux:

Well thanks for the criticism but there are some things u should take note of. One this is a fiction not realism. Two if u get to read the story very well, "Simon" was not alone he was standing with other guards who came out from the other car (and for the record he wasn't a don) . Killing seven people at one time is something u should understand about sniping, if u have been under fire during a sniper attack, u will get to know how easy it is for a sniper using a gun whose effective range is around 2miles to kill 7 people in 7 seconds.
Now foe the Bad English, this language is not my 1st language, if u had taken time to read through my introduction before the story, u will realize I informed all that this is not a prepared work, I type them as I log in to Nairaland. So this is not a professional work, it didn't go through any editing Moreover I'm not well educated, so dont expect my English to be polished. I never claimed this work to be the product of a professor.

ok bro.
"After some seconds, the limo and two cars that Streetwise described to him came up to the of the hotel. As the door open, a single occupant stepped out." This is what I'm saying. I expected his guards to alight first. Well, it's just an observation and you can either take it or leave it.
As for d English language aspect, baba no dey talk that "English z not my first language" o. It is our lingua franca and that's why you didn't write this story in ur local dialect. Just accept the corrections, make amends and move on. You may just think you're doing a freestyle but u neva can tell who's watching. In case u no knw, na free advert opportunity b dis o. Make d best use of it to show d world what you've got.

Since it seems u think I'm trying to form ITK by correcting u, I go face front now.
Mind u, "prof" wey dey ma name na scam o. I fail English for wayec. lol
One love bro.

Apollux:

Well thanks for the criticism but there are some things u should take note of. One this is a fiction not realism. Two if u get to read the story very well, "Simon" was not alone he was standing with other guards who came out from the other car (and for the record he wasn't a don) . Killing seven people at one time is something u should understand about sniping, if u have been under fire during a sniper attack, u will get to know how easy it is for a sniper using a gun whose effective range is around 2miles to kill 7 people in 7 seconds.
Now foe the Bad English, this language is not my 1st language, if u had taken time to read through my introduction before the story, u will realize I informed all that this is not a prepared work, I type them as I log in to Nairaland. So this is not a professional work, it didn't go through any editing Moreover I'm not well educated, so dont expect my English to be polished. I never claimed this work to be the product of a professor.

Oshe!

so wats wit the hold up pals

our story is 10 dis week.... Comon guys hu is on board ryt now Lets go nominate our story and keep this thread busy.

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ironkurtain:


I dont think there's gonna be a Bloodline 3.

Bros you didn't mention me.. there is God o

I was following this story from a point and i was enjoying it and I'm anticipating to see the of the story, organisers thank you for coming up with such collaborations to satisfy you followers but please do the needful by completing the story thank you.

arriporta why the delay Pls do the needfull