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hmmmmmmmm
Interesting..... Steveson now the killer


Everything now falling to place
poor Okudili

DeadRat:
i will mention u when i drop it

ok dear... waiting patiently for it

hmmmmmmmm
Interesting..... Steveson now the killer


Everything now falling to place
i believe Patrick Kristenssen (also stevenson) knows Amara saw something that would bring him down

I think Stevenson might have a mental disorder and something might have triggered it,which he finds appealing.

But what if Stevenson didnt killed his wife?

What if he ran away just like Okudili did since he was already convicted before judged?

I doubt that though.
The writer can still make a story outa the above question... Like making in longer



ASIDES: mehn this story is about to end,i'd miss this great piece

Souloho19 i know you hear/see this everyday, But i want you to know that AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN

The devil as we all knw is never a dirty guys,he the wag swag pass,alway with Gucci backbag...nd Armani V neck shirt..nice work

Ok maybe Stevenson was the killer of 1 of the girls (the first girl) but then i think he s not the devil! The devil might be a copycat serial killer.

This story deserves to be nominated for the fiction awards, Wattys, the IF list. all join.



no mind me, jus passing by



still on the edge of my bed o

Oh Lord! Souloho! you are actually killing me,! in fact you're worse than that okrika devil Stevenson guy! �haba!

now you made me come out of my very comfortable ghost mode!� tisk tisk!

Awesome story tho, I'll just go ghost again, know I'm here tho, try not to make me talk! ☺

meneski:
bossy512 How do u like ur beer ma'am? Hot or warm?

. COLD WITH HOT PEPPER SOUP

bossy512:
. COLD WITH HOT PEPPER SOUP

... Am afraid we only have cold pepper soup filled with juicy okudili's meat sold to us by the butcher and hot beer distributed by De John's Brewery... I guese that will do Ma'am? Any one also hungry?

Souloho19 you good I must commend, you got a big fan in me.
Well done bro

Ayomicome:
Hmmm...you must have played alot of [b]surebet[/b[.

Lol

Thank God,I dnt play Surebet,I do bet 9ja ;-) ;-)

[quote author=bakeuhappy post=59308637]I think Steve is the devil..(pointers) Osi is surprised Steve knew he is the pastor meaning he overheard the conversation between Amara and Osi. Firm handshake... my thoughts though!
Another pointer Osi broke into steves house n got caught. Steve switched from the perfect gentle man to someone else.. meaning he might have a personality disorder (ALTER EGO e.g Charly boy saying his female side Is Linda)
After spending time with Amara... the devil haunted for a specific AMARA.... still my thoughts keep up the good work.

Chai the story don dey end small small b dat, i go miss the devil wearing second hand o.
From your number one fan

Steveson is not d devil... I tell u... Stevenson probably killed his wife and he regrets it and ran away from home... But he is not d killer...

Wapapod:
Lets start putting down our odds.

WHO IS THE DEVIL??

Stevenson (3.28)-The European

Paul(1.99)-The Lagosian.

Benedict(1.42)-The butcher

Okwudili(0.0)-Dead

Pastor Batholomew(1.56)

(Souoluho)(153.00)

Is anybody with me?

Yes.
I place my bet on Steve

Slimberry123:
ahahhhh... let me fall oo.. just keep my secret abeg no tell hin wife biko... ose bby

Okay i will not tell his wife.....

But u will start to bribe me.
if u did not want his wife to here u.




souloho someone is falling for u oooo

Wapapod:
Lol

Thank God,I dnt play Surebet,I do bet 9ja ;-) ;-)

like there's any different. I bet you sell okrika to the devil....don't ask me about the odds

Pinkfeet:
Okay i will not tell his wife.....
But u will start to bribe me. if u did not want his wife to here u.



souloho someone is falling for u oooo

thanks oooo... dnt worry i ll pay. name ur price

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Slimberry123:
thanks oooo... dnt worry i ll pay. name ur price

if u want to fall in love with souloho and u did not want me to report to his wife.




u will give me #500,000 at first to keep short my mouth.


so if souloho now fall in love with you.




u will pay me #150,000 per week.

[quote author=Pinkfeet post=60035727]if u want to fall in love with souloho and u did not want me to report to his wife.




u will give me #500,000 at first to keep short my mouth.


so if souloho now fall in love with you.




u will pay me #150,000 per week.






[/quote
jesuuuu ahhhh.. ok i will pay but first make Souloho fall in love with me first...winks

Wapapod:
Lets start putting down our odds.

WHO IS THE DEVIL??

Stevenson (3.28)-The European

Paul(1.99)-The Lagosian.

Benedict(1.42)-The butcher

Okwudili(0.0)-Dead

Pastor Batholomew(1.56)

(Souoluho)(153.00)

Is anybody with me?

Kai bro my odds no be here ooo

marvwhite:
hmmmmmmmm
Interesting..... Steveson now the killer


Everything now falling to place
i believe Patrick Kristenssen (also stevenson) knows Amara saw something that would bring him down

I think Stevenson might have a mental disorder and something might have triggered it,which he finds appealing.

But what if Stevenson didnt killed his wife?

What if he ran away just like Okudili did since he was already convicted before judged?

I doubt that though.
The writer can still make a story outa the above question... Like making in longer



ASIDES: mehn this story is about to end,i'd miss this great piece

Souloho19 i know you hear/see this everyday, But i want you to know that AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN

Bro Jah bless you greatly...I always look forward to your analysis...I'm your biggest fan also

[quote author=Slimberry123 post=60037482][/quote]Don't worry I've fallen already too
@ pinkfeet oya my commission is 40% ooo

Osi got more information about the murder onine. The internet trully had answers to everything.

The murder case had been a very popular one in Ukraine and he even saw some recent updates about few months old. The case was infamous. Stevenson was a professor, his wife was a doctor. They were a power couple one of society's finest and so it had been a terrible shock when the wife had been murdered and Stevenson or Patrick had fled the country. His whereabouts were still unknown till today.

Well that wasn't quite true, Osi knew where he was and it seemed Steve had brought his thirst for murder along with him.

When he left Amara's home, Osi was a bit confused. He asked himself what now?
Now he knew what the man had been trying to hide but how could he link it with the recent crimes that had happened in Amaife.
Should he confront the man again or should he meet with the elders?

He brought out his phone to look at the picture once more. He studied it for minutes wondering what would have made Stevenson kill his wife and rape her brutally also.

He swiped the screen and Paul's face glared at him. He had almost forgotten about the leather jacket man.
He was fully convinced the European was the killer but what if he was being too hasty? This man was a prime suspect in Okudili's murder after all...
He considered the factors for some seconds then changed his direction and headed for the bus park.
It was time to open the closet and have a glimpse at the skeletons.

°•°•°•

It took Osi precisely 30 minutes to locate the village. He marveled at the closeness and he was beginning to see sense in Amara's earlier suspicions.
It would be possible for Paul to strike in Amaife and retreat back to this village under the alias: Emeka.

At first he moved around quite aimlessly as he sought someone he could show the picture to.
He noticed an elderly man standing walking at a snail's pace. He had a walking stick in his hand and used it to support his weak limbs.
"Good day sir...sorry to disturb you..please I'm looking for my brother...its very important, we lost touch for years and I managed to trace him here. His name is Emeka"
As he talked he held up the phone for the man to see the picture.
The man didn't even glance his way but kept on wobbling about.
"Sir please help me out..have you seen this man?"
The man still ignored him and Osi gave up.

Next he targeted a road side mechanic shop.
He showed him the picture and offered him the same story. This time the man was willing to help but unfortunately after studying the picture for minutes he decided he had never seen the face before.
After showing the picture to two more men and getting negative replies, Osi knew what he must do. If anyone would recognise Paul Emeka there was every possibility it would be a female.
As if to prove his thought, he approached a young girl Wheeling a barrow full of cassava, no doubt to grind it and process garri.
"Excuse me, please I learnt my brother has been here all along and I've been searching for him..there's something extremely important I need to discuss with him"
The girl was friendly, she stopped moving and collected Osi's phone to observed the picture closely.
After some seconds she asked: "what's his name?"
"Pau-errm Emeka"
"Hmmm.." She studied him again "you're his brother you say"
"Actually first cousins..please can you help me out?"
"Okay..there's a big catholic church few miles away. The third compound opposite on the right, knock on the gate and explain yourself"
"Oh, thank you..I'm grateful"

°•
On his way to the Catholic church his phone rang. It was reverend Okonkwo.
"Osi, what's going on son..how are you?"
"I'm doing great sir..I believe I'm on the edge of an important discovery"
There was a short silence then the reverend said in a solemn tone: "Osi..we are interceding for you fervently from this end, but also you must endeavour to remember...don't be yoked to anything else apart from God if not you'll miss the fertile soil God wants you to plough"

They spoke throughout the duration Osi used to locate the church. He located the third house on the right just as the lady had described and then quickly but stylishly ended the call.
He knocked on the gate.
He knocked again and waited. He could hear approaching footsteps from inside.

°•°•°•
"Oluchi believe me Stevenson is a killer...I'm 80% sure he is responsible for the crimes" (the other 20% was reserved for Paul)
Amara had gone to visit her friend as she couldn't stand Oluchi being mad at her.
To her dismay her friend was dressed in an outrageously skimpy costume and she had told her rather boldly that she planned to seduce Steve.
"Oluchi snap out of it! This man killed his wife in his country and ran all the way to Amaife. He's a writer all right but his primary objective here was to lay low and stay undetected"
"Where's your proof? Where did you see such? Or are you that desperate that you revert to lies? Eh Amara...when did you develop feelings for Steve but even though the noble thing to do would have been to step down if you truly take me as your friend and know how much I love him"
"Oluchi why are you like this? Am I speaking French? That man is a murderer and I can't allow you go and see him!"
Suddenly her voice broke down "I can't afford to bury any of my friends again"
That seemed to strike home and Oluchi sat down defeated. "My God what am I doing...I've been so blinded with jealousy...please Amara forgive me"
"Its okay...its okay(sniff)"
Both girls hugged themselves and cried softly.
Their tear ducts was far from dry and it was a waterfall.

°•°•°•
Osi smiled at the woman that answered the gate.
He offered the same excuse this time adding a smile he hoped was charming and not scary.
"Hmmm...Emeka never mentioned a brother..I know he has a sister"
"Actually we're cousins ma'am"
"Well come in...come and see him for yourself"
Osi blinked "you mean he's in?"
"Yes"

Paul was astonished to see Osi. He stood up in disbelief "you...what are you doing here?"
"I came to see you of course.."
Paul scratched his head "why...what business do we have together"
"For starters I'd like you to please explain why you've been here all along but lied to your family that you were in Lagos"
Paul seemed worried but then he gave a resigned sigh "okay...but its getting dark..I'd tell you tomorrow morning...or better still if you could wait for me and we walk to Amaife together"
Osi wanted to tell him to just spit it out and get to the point but then a little girl ran out from one of the rooms.
"Daddy...daddy carry me"
She must have been about two years and there was no mistaking who her father was as she hurried to Paul and hugged his legs.

°•°•°•°

The devil had just settled in his new hiding spot and seconds later he heard voices.
Female voices laughing and drawing closer.
This was it...amara was going home and she would pass by him and he was going to strike. He grew hard in anticipation


"Okay dear..see you tomorrow...please don't forget that Nora Roberts book you promise me o" Joy waved her friend as they split up.
She walked happily to the house. Life was indeed romantic and her recent yearnings for romantic novels had increased recently majorly because of young George. The teenager had asked her out and she was very attracted to him, his cute smile and dreamy eyes, and his lips...
"This must be love oh, this must be love, I fall like a sparrow fly like a dove...it must be the dream I've been thinking of, oh what a feeling it must be love!"
She sang the lyrics to a Don Williams song as she got closer to her home.

Suddenly she felt a presence behind her. Not just any kind of presence, an evil presence..she half turned but strong arms grabbed her from behind holding her in place. She managed a short scream before the hands clamped over her mouth.

Chommieblaq:
Souloho19 you good I must commend, you got a big fan in me.
Well done bro

Thanks for your comment I appreciate 100%

light4life:
Awesome story tho, I'll just go ghost again, know I'm here tho, try not to make me talk! ☺

Thanks dear but endeavour to be a friendly ghost like Casper and comment now and then, I'm glad you're enjoying it

Frankenstein:
Sherlock Osi Holmes. But I think as a pastor, he's taken it too far.


Lying through his teeth
Deceit
Unfounded accusations
Breaking and entering
Theft
Trespassing
Recruiting and indoctrinating people into crime
Unlawfully playing the role of a detective
Hiding criminal evidence
Etc

Lol the pastor is really something else...
By the way you must be a good prosecutor/ district attorney...nice one bro

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