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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Pinkfeet: 10:08pm On Sep 03, 2017

Countrygirl:
not so fast bae souloho19, so you are cheating on me

NO OOOOOO . souloho19 is not cheating on you. But souloho has fall in love .
slimberry123 is rich dat is d reason y souloho fall in love fast.

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Slimberry123(f): 10:23pm On Sep 03, 2017

Pinkfeet:
NO OOOOOO . souloho19 is not cheating on you.
But souloho has fall in love .

slimberry123 is rich dat is d reason y souloho fall in love fast.

Pinkfeet thankz for having my back. Countrygirl how are you o.. Souloho19 my darling thanks fir d update oo... I think pastor bartholomew is the devil.. just sayin oooo....

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Bleeze2: 10:32pm On Sep 03, 2017

souloho19:
The devil walked round the market square, enjoying the clear sky and the cool breeze. His appetite had been satisfied temporarily. Very soon he would need to have another girl again. Very very soon. He had someone on his mind. She had been hunting his dreams recently.
He waved at a woman selling oranges, flashing her a charming smile and licked his lips in anticipation as he thought about Amarachi. Sweet Amara.....
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This extract from an earlier chapter shows it can't be Paul

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 12:04am On Sep 04, 2017

Honeydawealth:
Finally,I can comment!! I don know what d problem is dat I couldn't log in wit my previous accnt....

Anyways....... Those of u dat dat didnt believe dat d devil is stevenson... NOW U SHOULD BELIEVE!!! because u all 'heard' abi should I say 'saw' d devil when he was calling Joy a 'bitch'...... Which I believe its d language d foreign people uses in cursing alot.... So I believe SOULOHO! U're doin wonderfully well! Thumbs up!
It's ur girl Oyindawealth, now Honeydawealth.... Peace!

welcome back dear..missed you

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 12:07am On Sep 04, 2017

donkelz:
Are u back? Happy Sunday bro

thanks bro..happy new week..I'm back few hours ago

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 12:11am On Sep 04, 2017

Mariinee:
I just have to drop a comment. Souloho19,this is terrific,to say the least!
Jagugu88li,have you seen this paddie mi?

thanks dear pls don't touch that dial cheesy

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 12:17am On Sep 04, 2017

Tolezy001:
Soul hala me when update wan land o abeg.

bro I'm about to update..but to be truthful its quite short..honestly I'm tired and fighting with sleep like this. would make up for it tomorrow hopefully

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Nobody: 12:23am On Sep 04, 2017

souloho19:
thanks dear pls don't touch that dial

Before you say? cheesy

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 12:30am On Sep 04, 2017

Chapter 13
Dé Nwachukwu had never felt as angry as he felt that morning. He was breathing fire and every now and then he would stand up and pace round the living room.
His friends and fellow leaders: Dé John and Pa Kenneth tried to sooth him by quoting parables and words of encouragement. But Dé Nwachukwu was hardly listening.
"My daughter! My Joy! Almost killed...almost raped!" he kept on lamenting
"The key word is almost my friend...the gods didn't let that happen" Dé John said wisely. He was the most traditional of the three men and had voiced his disapproval concerning the crusade right from the beginning.

But this morning Dé Nwachukwu was not in the mood. "To hell with the gods!!" he snapped . He could remember vividly how his daughter had looked, her face swollen from the impact with the tree.
He sighed then repeated himself "to hell with the gods!!! They misled us in thinking Okudili was the killer but now there's another one in our midst"..
"It must be a copycat...we'd get him very very soon" pa Kenneth spoke up and managed to stop Dé Nwachukwu from walking about.
"My friend..let's be thankfully that your daughter is still alive..she was not raped and she's healthy" Pa Kenneth adviced
Dé Nwachukwu agreed but He shuddered as he thought about how close his daughter had almost been raped.
"I'd only she can recognise the person" Pa Kenneth said after some time.
"No" Dé Nwachukwu sat down finally "she can't recognize him, he had a mask on... A face mask. "My fellow elders you know what this means? Okudili was not responsible for the others...he was set up"

°•°•°•
Amara sat on the bed beside her younger sister.
Joy was still resting and the pain killers had pig her in a deep sleep.

She was really shaken to the core and she knew she couldn't stand it I'd anything happened to her sister.
She listened intently to the voices coming from the parlour.
Her mind immediately drawing a mental picture of the European.
Yes if Steve was indeed the devil then it was high time they set him up.

°•°•°•

Osi was 26 today. It was his birthday. The day didn't feel special, instead he had woken up with a bad feeling. Like a grey cloud hanging over his head.
He needed to see Amara..

((p.s: had to drop something..sorry for the short update)

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Nobody: 1:00am On Sep 04, 2017

Sleep well souloho kiss

Thank you for the small dinner.

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by PWEETYWIZZY(f): 5:37am On Sep 04, 2017

Quite short buh it will pass, as long as it's from u and by d way I can't predict who d devil is but am 100 percent sure of one tin THE DEVIL WEARS OKRIKA.

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Countrygirl(f): 6:56am On Sep 04, 2017

Slimberry123:
Countr ygirl baby, he is not cheating oo, he fell in love ni......

he has enough love to go round, can you imagine? I'm thinking of what to do with him

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Countrygirl(f): 7:01am On Sep 04, 2017

Pinkfeet:
NO OOOOOO . soul oho19 is not cheating on you.
But sou loho has fall in love .

sli mberry123 is rich dat is d reason y so uloho fall in love fast.

lol, no problem. There's love in sharing, remember he has enough love to go round.

Good morning to you

Slimberry123, I'm fine, trust you slept well.

Welcome souloho, I still believe Steve is the devil, can't think of any other person aside him.

Happy birthday to our darling Osi

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Nobody: 7:11am On Sep 04, 2017*

Criis:
That the person said 'Bitch' doesn't mean it's Stevenson na

I still think it's the pastor , Bartholomew

>In the beginning, when a meeting was called, He was invited to give the opening prayer , I don't think Steve was in that meeting

>There was also an instance where a victim thought the voice of the killer sounded familiar, at least to most of the residents of Amaipe...

Everyone knew and loved Stevenson , His accent, intonation, way of speaking would be different, but I don't think everyone goes to church. Not everyone will know the pastor's voice.

More submissions as I critically study this case.

The communion wine

When an attempt was made to poison Pastor Osi

Who would have had easy access to the wine?

Who would have had extra communion wine?

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by kukoyi: 7:24am On Sep 04, 2017

He was the one finding out, if they had their communion at home to know if his devilish plan worked, he lied about his name and other things, there's no other person the Steve or his twin brother in the spirit realm. shocked

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by larride(m): 7:35am On Sep 04, 2017

Souloho19

Wonderful piece this one. more ink to your notepad.

So we are both serving in Ebony, maybe we need to see so that you can just finish the story for me at once.

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by bossy512(f): 7:40am On Sep 04, 2017

Thanks for d update, more wisdom

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Tolezy001(m): 8:25am On Sep 04, 2017

Thanks for the update and dont forget to always hala when u wan update o abeg.

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by GODSMILEFOREVER: 8:29am On Sep 04, 2017

Am 100% sure that the killer is Stevenson ;
Consider these

1 The Letter : It was because of this letter that Obioma's mother and the last girl was killed.

The only reason why Pastor Osi was set free was because the European saw the letter with him.

2. The content of the brief case.

3. The exchange of the holy communion wine.

These all point to one person I.e Stevenson the European.
This is my own analysis

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:49am On Sep 04, 2017

If, eventually, Steve happens to be the killer, the story won't be extraordinary. Souloho, I am very sure of you. The killer is not Steve. Someone else must have known who Steve was. That someone else is simply a copycat of Steve's past. I suspect someone close to Steve himself. But, who?

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Jazmiynne: 9:52am On Sep 04, 2017

OluwabuqqyYOLO:
If, eventually, Steve happens to be the killer, the story won't be extraordinary. Souloho, I am very sure of you. The killer is not Steve. Someone else must have known who Steve was. That someone else is simply a copycat of Steve's past. I suspect someone close to Steve himself. But, who?

Well said

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Sexyolori(f): 12:01pm On Sep 04, 2017

Stevenson is not the killer. The killer is someone we never thought of or suspected. @Souloho, please give me the link to your other story Delayed Diagnosis...

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Gabsi422(m): 4:32pm On Sep 04, 2017

Guys, I am 100% sure that the killer is NOT Stevenson. It should be Pastor Bathlomew, his brother or even De John.

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:41pm On Sep 04, 2017

Mariinee:
Sleep well souloho
Thank you for the small dinner.

thanks babe..I definitely slept well. don't worry I'd update heavily later today..tnx for commenting

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:42pm On Sep 04, 2017

PWEETYWIZZY:
Quite short buh it will pass, as long as it's from u and by d way I can't predict who d devil is but am 100 percent sure of one tin THE DEVIL WEARS OKRIKA.

lol..tnx...its getting clearer trust me

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:43pm On Sep 04, 2017

Countrygirl:
he has enough love to go round, can you imagine? I'm thinking of what to do with him

lol...my very own joy..what do you want to do with me na cheesy

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:45pm On Sep 04, 2017

Criis:
The communion wine
When an attempt was made to poison Pastor Osi
Who would have had easy access to the wine?
Who would have had extra wine?

bro I must commend your reasoning..ur thoughts are really making sense

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Nobody: 4:46pm On Sep 04, 2017

souloho19:
thanks babe..I definitely slept well. don't worry I'd update heavily later today..tnx for commenting

Okay dear.
I'm looking forward to the update.

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:47pm On Sep 04, 2017

kukoyi:
He was the one finding out, if they had their communion at home to know if his devilish plan worked, he lied about his name and other things, there's no other person the Steve or his twin brother in the spirit realm.

lol..twin brother spirit realm...I agree all clues point to Stevenson..but I like to call myself 'twisting tiger' grin

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:49pm On Sep 04, 2017

[quote author=larride post=60111044]Souloho19

Wonderful piece this one. more ink to your notepad.

So we are both serving in Ebony, maybe we need to see so that you can just finish the story for me at once.[/quote

tnx bro..wow where in ebonyi are yoj serving. I remember you from the sports thread..gracias bro

Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:52pm On Sep 04, 2017

GODSMILEFOREVER:
Am 100% sure that the killer is Stevenson ;
Consider these

1 The Letter : It was because of this letter that Obioma's mother and the last girl was killed.

The only reason why Pastor Osi was set free was because the European saw the letter with him.

2. The content of the brief case.

3. The exchange of the holy communion wine.

These all point to one person I.e Stevenson the European.
This is my own analysis

thanks bro..ur analysis is deeply appreciated...tnx boss

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Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by souloho19(op): 4:59pm On Sep 04, 2017

OluwabuqqyYOLO:
If, eventually, Steve happens to be the killer, the story won't be extraordinary. Souloho, I am very sure of you. The killer is not Steve. Someone else must have known who Steve was. That someone else is simply a copycat of Steve's past. I suspect someone close to Steve himself. But, who?

hmm..mind stimulating..but who..that's the question?? thanks for your comment boss I appreciate.