people no wan comment... ok, lemme give you a taste of the show that's about to go down...

ACT THREE SCENE ONE
(Jetar is making a secret call inside the toilet).
Jetar: (on phone) Situation report. Mission complete!
Man: (also on phone) Annihilate Prime and move out!
Jetar: Order accepted!
* * * * *
(Jetar can be seen serving Addin tea. Addin is about take the tea, but Mary shouts from outside ordering him to stop).
Mary: Stop! (Addin and Jetar are shocked to hear this suddenly, as they both look at the direction. Masit – the owner of the training school Addin and Jetar graduated from, and Mary are shown entering the room. Masit’s hands are tied with rope)
Jetar: (shocked) What happened? Why are your hands tied? (to Masit)
Mary: (smiles as she goes to have a sit. She is having a device in her hand) Just call him your dad already (Addin and Jetar are surprised to hear this. Addin looks at Jetar’s face in amazement. Jetar looks at Masit’s face to confirm if Mary knows the truth already. Masit gives her an affirmative face. She is so disappointed).
Addin: (surprised) What the hell is happening here?
Jetar: She’s just saying rubbish. (she wants to pounce on Mary. Mary, without looking at her side, speaks out).
Mary: There’s Prolin Inhibitor inside your father. (Jetar stops immediately as she is so surprised and scared). Once I press the key on this device, the Inhibitor will cut his intestine, kidneys, lungs, and everything inside him. I hope you understand. (Jetar looks at Masit again).
Masit: She kidnapped me, drugged me, and operated on me. She placed the Prolin Inhibitor inside my stomach.
Jetar: (scared) What do you want? Why do you have my father? (Addin is so confused at this point for being left out of the loop).
Addin: (confused) What’s happening here? Is Masit Jetar’s father? Is Jetar Masit’s daughter? (to Mary) Why did you kidnap Masit, and place Inhibitor inside him?
Mary: Addin, you are about to hear the story of your life. You are going to listen to how you were only used to accomplish things.
Jetar: (still surprised) You should know the high boss will kill you for this. Why are you obstructing the mission?
Mary: I told the high boss to leave Addin since the mission is complete, but he refused. I can’t let you kill Addin.
Jetar: But why?
Mary: (she blinks her eyes) Because I am in love with him and I have his baby inside me.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Addin: (still crying) But what do you think I should do?
Mary: Fight!
Addin: What if they get angry, and kill her in the process?
Mary: If you don’t fight, she’s going to die anyway. The only way to get Jetar out alive is to fight. You can do it. (she moves to the bed, sleeps beside him and holds his hands to comfort him through the night.
Addin drank to stupor so, he could stop hurting. He doesn’t know what happened during the night, but Mary does).
O O O O O
(back)

Hell blood of Jeshua my eyes!
Silver, u get luck say 4 where I de check 4 update my mb don finish, u 4 see comments tear race, only me 4 gv u 67comments so u cn post the remaining story at once

I love commenting o and I love it whn ppl comment, but whn am reading, I don't like stuffs impeding my reading...
Are u on Facebook dear Silver?

I'm Confused Oo,Abeg Continue This Story Before I Commit Murder Oo

Favyo:
I love commenting o and I love it whn ppl comment, but whn am reading, I don't like stuffs impeding my reading...
Are u on Facebook dear Silver?

Yeah!

Akinwale14:
I'm Confused Oo,Abeg Continue This Story Before I Commit Murder Oo

Abeg, don't o... instead beg this people, i have 2... 48 to go

guy update plss nahh..u re making some peoples lost their interest in this ur wonderful story.....plss do something

SilverSpoonEnt:


Abeg, don't o... instead beg this people, i have 2... 48 to go

Abeg Forget Comment And Update Now,I Wan Sleep And I Wan Read One More Episode Before I Waka Enter My Hard Bed.

Abeg Do Something,My Body Dey Do Me Somehow.

Akinwale14:
Abeg Do Something,My Body Dey Do Me Somehow.

ah... i never type am o... i dey serious, i never type am... i no get the zeal to type am, as i no see what i want... i just get am for head ni...

not let people die for your neck because of suspense o.. well thanks for the updates and hope I completes the 50 comments with mine

SilverSpoonEnt:


ah... i never type am o... i dey serious, i never type am... i no get the zeal to type am, as i no see what i want... i just get am for head ni...

That Means No Update Again Tonite?

Good Night Then,2moro Thinx.

Akinwale14:
Good Night Then,2moro Thinx.

lemme drop one cos of you...

(All of them are shocked at this, especially Addin)
Addin: (so shocked) Mary, what did you do?
Mary: I am saving your life.
Jetar: (surprised) You dare slept with him!
Mary: Yeah. I love him, but you used him. Now you are even ready to dispose him. I can’t let you do that. (Addin is so surprised and confused. He is having headache, as he doesn’t understand a bit of what is going on).
Jetar: You will surely regret this
Mary: I know. (to Masit) You have to start talking now. If you try to skip a bit, I will skip my hand to press the key. (to Jetar) I know you love your dad so much, if you try to interfere, your dad is gone.
Addin: (so confused) Please, what’s happening here?
Mary: (to Masit) Start talking.
Masit: You are risking both Addin’s life and yours with what you want me to say.
Mary: (she playfully touches the key without pressing, to scare Madot) Start talking.
Masit: Okay. (to Addin) You made the biggest mistake of your life when you mistakenly told me the name of your mother.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Addin: The only one person that made me to see my dad’s dead body on the floor. (crying) The only one person that made me to witness the death of my mum. (cries harder). The only one person that changed my mum’s dream for me to become a medical doctor. The only one person that framed my mum of false offences. The only one person that tried to kill me and actually framed me also of me of false offenses. The only one person that made to kill someone for the first time in my life. The only one person that made to do plastic surgery so that I won’t be recognized. The only one person that made me to change my name entirely.
Masit: (shedding little tears) The only one person?
Addin: Yeah! I remember my mum every time people call me by my name.
Masit: Addin?
Addin: Yeah! Addin is just the reverse form of my mum’s name.
Masit: Reverse of Addin, as in Nidda?
Addin: (stands up) I don’t know. (Enoph comes to the place)
O O O O O
(back)

SilverSpoonEnt:

lemme drop one cos of you...

Thanks Bro,God Bless You.

so won't u drop one for me too or is he d only one reading this nice piece of work?

rukidanty:
so won't u drop one for me too or is he d only one reading this nice piece of work?

ok, wait up, one coming for you too and favyo...

francis6611:
guy update plss nahh..u re making some peoples lost their interest in this ur wonderful story.....plss do something

if people can loose interest in my story rather than taking less than one minute to comment, then i am going to loose interest in updating too rather than taking less than one minute to... i won't update again, once i drop the ones i promised... until i get what i want...

Masit: The mission had halted immediately your mum was dead. But when I learnt you are Nidda’s son, we resurrected the mission immediately.
Addin: (confused) What mission are you talking about?
Masit: The mission started 36 years ago. The five peagries tried to killed their trainer, Chan but they forgot that a teacher will always be a teacher.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Chan: (happily) You are welcome, sir. So, where is the package?
Mr Sameh: (not having anything with him) Yeah! Your package! I am surely with it. (immediately he finishes his words, blood starts to gush out from Mr Chan’s sweat pores, and he is in great agony).
Chan: (surprised while still in pain) Tallillin acid? (as he mentioned this, four men and a lady come out from a place, looking very dangerous) Why? Why? Why did you poison me? (stammering due to the pain).
Mr Sameh: (smiles) They poisoned you because they still remember what I told them ten years ago.
Chan: (still in pain) But I can never betray you.
Mr Sameh: I also guessed that, but I can’t allow any possibilities to fail us in this mission.
Chan: (in pain, going down, talks to the five) I urge to kill this man. He will betray you, when you finish the mission.
(he said and fakes being dead. Immediately Mr Sameh and the five peagries left, he stands up and begins to groan in pain. He knows he can’t live for long, but he feels so betrayed. He plans to plan his revenge before he dies).
O O O O O
(back)
Masit: Before he died, he made a video message and sent it to Secret Government Security Officials, SGSO in Clish.
O O O O O
(There is a conference meeting going on. There are men inside the room, with their best official also on seat – Cole)
Cross: (the moderator, he is in the front, pointing to the wall screen) I am about to play the video message sent to the unit by one of our past officials, Chan before he died. (he plays the video. Chan is shown in the video in much pain, but manages to talk).
Chan: (after minutes of talking) …there are five of them, and their leader’s name is Nidda. She is the girl in the middle of the picture that I will be sending together with this message. They are deadly, and have to be taken down. (the message stops there).
Cross: (he brings out the picture of the five holding themselves. One could notice that this was the exact picture Tunis had when Addin went to meet him inside the prison)

SilverSpoonEnt:


if people can loose interest in my story rather than taking less than one minute to comment, then i am going to loose interest in updating too rather than taking less than one minute to... i won't update again, once i drop the ones i promised... until i get what i want...

silverspoon don't be angry ooo
I think majority are ghost readers
But I'll suggest we give our comments to encourage him

SilverSpoonEnt:


if people can loose interest in my story rather than taking less than one minute to comment, then i am going to loose interest in updating too rather than taking less than one minute to... i won't update again, once i drop the ones i promised... until i get what i want...

Abeg Don't Mind The Boy Jare,Just Continue Ur Sweet Story And Don't Let Pesin Commit Murder Here O.

this is my other account... i got banned immediately i updated one more of the story, and the update was deleted... i dunno why the admins would do this... i can't update with the other account till tomorrow evening cos of the ban... i will try and chat one of the admins up anyway, if the ban can be lifted, and if the update can show back...

eeehhhh!! pekele pekele,,arugbo je gbese,,ta lo ma ba san!! this z to inform all d new and old reader on dz thread dat our oga@dtop((ogbeni silver)) don yearn say hz new decree na "no comment,,no update"..xo i would implore u all to start droppin ya comments yafunyafun.

Abeg no flex muscle oga mi,we wey dey ff am intoto knows we love it so don't dare stop else I denounce you citizenship as a Nigerian

lonesome501:
eeehhhh!! pekele pekele,,arugbo je gbese,,ta lo ma ba san!! this z to inform all d new and old reader on dz thread dat our oga@dtop((ogbeni silver)) don yearn say hz new decree na "no comment,,no update"..xo i would implore u all to start droppin ya comments yafunyafun.

i have kuku dropped one more o, but admin don delete am, and banned me till tomorrow evening...

silverspoonceo9:
this is my other account... i got banned immediately i updated one more of the story, and the update was deleted... i dunno why the admins would do this... i can't update with the other account till tomorrow evening cos of the ban... i will try and chat one of the admins up anyway, if the ban can be lifted, and if the update can show back...

E Be Like Say The Idiot Wey Ban U Wan Die Young Abi,Abi Which Kind Rubbish Be That,Ban U Without Reason,That's Why I Love Coolval22 Than Nairaland,If They Like Make Dem Ban Me I Don't Care,Bro We Go See 2moro Be That,Good Night Jare And Sweet Dreams.

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@silverspoon, don't be annoyed by comments pls. More grace to your efforts.

silverspoonceo9:


i have kuku dropped one more o, but admin don delete am, and banned me till tomorrow evening...

ooopps!!! All is well. Kindly message admin in other to know the genuine reason for the ban.

the ban has been lifted, and my update has been returned...scroll up to check...

45 comments to go... favyo, hope you've read to the last update...