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| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 9:47am On Sep 02, 2018 |
You did great Maddonna222. My only regret is not seeing you pout those adorable lips of yours in real life  . I hope you had a night deserving of the beauty that you are? |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by xamster(m): 11:32am On Sep 02, 2018 |
Maddonna222: Smiles. Anyways, your story is good. It really is good. But then you have to make it neater in terms of; paragraphing, punctuations and as well the employment of intrigue that makes viewer laps and tent at your thread for more. Then again you should be more creative and unpredictable to what end the next episode will follow. All this and more will attract more viewers and as well make other peeps share the link to your story. Even the shy and anonymous fans will be forced to comment on your thread. Till then, you're not doing bad I tell you. Am following... 1 Like |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 2:17pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
xamster:Wowee you know what send your account number right now. |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 2:18pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
scarra:Gee thanks*blushing*how do you know if I am a beauty??  don't worry you can see me pout in real life I live at....................My house |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 2:32pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
Maddonna222 You know they say beauty is in the eye of the beholder which i believe i am. No update for us today? |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 2:58pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
IN NO PARTICULAR ORDER,DEDICATED TO...... Angelinastto Pweetymhi Olatex25 Xamster Scarra Yungtemy I owe you guys a lot*wink* KIZZY. "You still laugh the same way,gosh I thought you'd have tushed up a bit" kyle said making me laugh the more.Ever since he arrived he had made me laugh more than five times,it felt so good that for a split second I imagined what marriage to such a man would feel like.I immediately brushed the thought aside,I am kizzi ozemoya daughter of Chief Ozemoya and I refuse to be sorry for myself,I took a decision and I would stand by it. I heard a car honk outside and I immediately recognized the sound as that of Helen. "Helen would be so pleased to see you again she always talks about you" "Is that her" he asked after taking a sip of the water I offered him, he had refused taking any drink at all I literally had to force him to take the water. The door opened and Helen walked in rushing at me. ********************* HELEN. I rushed at kizzy immediately I saw her sitting on the couch.The room was quite dark as I made my way across to her. "Kiz you are not going to sleep here tonight just come with me to my house,okay?" "He'll hold off a bit about this,there's a gue..." "No way that bastard can't treat you like this and go scot free,like nobody should beat up a woman even if he's Duncan mighty and......." OMG I didn't see him quickly I saw kiz gesturing with her eyes and I looked in the direction only to meet kyle staring at me with those blue eyes of his, the glare was icy. What the heck have I done!!!! I screamed in my head. Kizzy looked like she wanted to cry. "No no no no no n....." It was too late the tears had escaped her eyes.I moved closer to her and held her,I started crying silently too even though I never cried. "Stay......" Kyle said so quietly I could have imagined it. Kiz raised up her head to look at him. "I think its time to tell me why you didn't stay years back, I loved you you know." "I..i..I'm sorry kyle I am" she said still crying. "What!!!!you're sorry??" Kyle jumped to his feet he was shaking.just then the door opened and Daniel entered.I gasped could this shit get any more real  ?.T.B.C Happy Sunday people. (Please any one from Edo state??)  1 Like |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 3:22pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
scarra:Update ready,I like your use of words P.S are you a he or she |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 4:50pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
Maddonna222:None of the above beautiful  but you can be rest assured that i can't get either you or your writing of my mind. P.S : Should we expect dinner? I hope you don't amaka me later tonight 1 Like |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 5:09pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
scarra:Really Not a he or she ummmmm Well well well dinner would be served in 2hours but for now just chil down with something nice and sweet  |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 5:10pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
scarra:Haaaaaaa gotcha,your profile shows you're male |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 5:21pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
Maddonna222: That would be a great end to the day, sha don't make the dinner something light. I hope you have had an eventful day so far? 1 Like |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 7:14pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
Kizzy. Dan entered the living room then scanned the occupants and when his eyes rested on Helen his frown became a smile. He was dressed in a black turtle neck long sleeve top,white denim trousers and a pair of black sneakers with silver skull designs. He was handsome,if only our marriage could work. "Helen I never expected you to be able to step into my house again I thought you were mad at me"why would Helen be mad at Dan,I reminisced in my mind. Hel cleared her throat and ignored him,then his eyes fell on kyle. " who's this baby"he said. At first I had trouble gathering my head around who he was referring to by "baby" then when he looked in my direction I knew he was talking to me, wow could he be a better actor??. "Honey"I said with my second best smile,I always reserved the best for important things like convincing my elder brother to send me some of his allawee back in the days when he was serving" this is kyle we...we...we um schooled together in university, kyle meet Daniel my h..husband". The two men stretched forth their hands and shook. Then after some lame talk on why I was crying on which kyle said it was on account of me hearing about his mom's death Dan left. Kyle made me promise to tell him the full story on "why I left", and I promised both him and Helen the truth.kyle was to check up on Jake in the hospital before going home and,I made a mental note to call Bibi before seeing both kyle and Helen to the door.It was already dark. ((((((((((((((()))))))))))))). DAN. I wondered what was going on,a part of me told me her story about the guy being a schoolmate was a lie,then I heard the guy make her promise to tell her why she left.why she left what their relationship?? Woah if she had left a relationship with a handsome lad like that just to cling onto me then she was a complete idiot and,somehow the thought of her breaking a guys heart just to force herself on me was irritating. I heard as the visitor's cars left the compound,then I thought of Helen, I had not expected to see her here,and she looked so beautiful sitting on that chair I wanted to just hold her and ........ " Dan I wanted to know what you would have for dinner"kizzy interrupted my thoughts,and then I wanted to kill her for telling Helen about the way I was treating her,and I knew the perfect way. I was going to rape her so hard she would wish she never had a vagina. T.B.C. Sooooo guys what do you think is between Dan and Helen, and now kiz has a crazy husband and three men in the picture for her now,kyle her university boyfriend which she broke up with for reasons best known to her,Jake the handsome new CEO who lost his wife and shut his heart at love after that,and Timi the new P.A to her immmeadiate boss who do you think She'll end up with KYLE,JAKE,TIMI OR DAN. we never can tell!!!!!!!!!! P.S. scarra today was eventful all went well except when it was time to listen to the preaching..... |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 8:08pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
No one deserves to suffer from Domestic Violence. I don't know why most affected people continue with such relationship and end up as statistics for spousal murder. Kizzy deserves a fresh start not with a vindictive Ex or her boss who is in aiding and abetting her Ex in his quest for revenge. Helen would be a better fit than all those unworthy men PS: Maddonna222 Pele dear and what made you not want to listen? |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by pweetymhi(f): 8:13pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
I think Kyle cz Dan isn't treating her well and there are stl a lot of things to be unraveled.. Lemme just fold my hands and watch |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 8:56pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
scarra: Sooooo you think she should become a lesbian Why not timi?? |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 8:58pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
pweetymhi:*smile*sis missed you. Kyle is good,but he might be in only for his revenge so,Jake might be good too  |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 9:02pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
[quote author=scarra post=70845120]No one deserves to suffer from Domestic Violence. I don't know why most affected people continue with such relationship and end up as statistics for spousal murder. Kizzy deserves a fresh start not with a vindictive Ex or her boss who is in aiding and abetting her Ex in his quest for revenge. Helen would be a better fit than all those unworthy men PS: Maddonna222 Pele dear and what made you not want to listen?  ? quoteDo you like listening to preachings,?? It always sounds boring, like I know all I should in the bible already |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 9:47pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
Maddonna222: I think she's older than he is coupled with the fact that most organisation frown at their employee's dating. Maddonna222 i do listen as my Pastor is quite adept at preaching God's world but i'm still in need of tutoring and you being my tutor doesn't sound so bad. PS: Something tells me you don't reside in Lagos |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Ann2012(f): 11:01pm On Sep 02, 2018 |
Where was I when this story started  Thanks for the invite Maddonna222 I'm following all the way.... Interesting!!! |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by pweetymhi(f): 2:56pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Maddonna222:Lemme just watch and see oo |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 8:14pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
I am so sorry for not updating everyone, its  a long story which I would not bore you by recounting, but i promise lots of updates tomorrow. #CROSS MY HEART . |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 8:16pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Ann2012:Ann my namesake been waiting for you like kilode,now jes enjoy the ride.lemme arrange for hollandia yoghurt and some chin chin for you 1 Like |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 8:19pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
scarra:Right she might be older buh let's just watch and see. P.S *whispering*something tells me you reside in Lagos,guess what told me......... Your profile Why no pictures?? |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 8:22pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
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| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 9:02pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Maddonna222:[quote author=Maddonna222 post=70876172] Right she might be older buh let's just watch and see. P.S *whispering*something tells me you reside in Lagos,guess what told me... How do you want the money, cash or transfer? For the rest of the items provide me with a forwarding address but its like your are living by bread alone and not minding the good book. I'm sorta glad you know i live in lagos and i hope you do as well. As for the profile pic kukuma come clean and tell me you want to know what i look like PS: What was your day like? |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Ann2012(f): 9:08pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Maddonna222: Thanks dearie I definitely need it.... Keep the updates coming |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 9:19pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
scarra:OK OK yep I wanna know what you look like ,you've kinda made this tread more interesting thanks  P.S.Today was horrible,sub finished,transformer spoilt,laptop charger destroyed by shango |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 9:21pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Ann2012:Tomorrow I promise,if I don't update come and spank me at my house. Shebi you know the way 1 Like |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 9:27pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Maddonna222: Kpele dear. It was horrible like you said. I have a spare powerpack and that your transformer ish na die. Don't expect power supply for days |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 9:28pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Lol Scarra, I don't live by bread alone oo,haha too much carbohydrate, I still depend on my personal oghono and garri,buh you know the good book also says work without faith is useless(I'm not sure if that's how the bible put it tho)so if I put faith in the cash and food items I'd be able to work on your spiritual life nau. |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by Maddonna222(f): 9:31pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
scarra:Chisos don't say that!!!!!who knows your mouth might be filled with anointing ,it might come true |
| Re: A Spark(getting Me Back) by scarra: 9:36pm On Sep 03, 2018 |
Maddonna222: My mouth is filled with anointing albeit one that could make you cum and start speaking in tongues PS: What prompted the removal of your pic? It was easy on the eye and soothing for the mind |
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