I had to repost Bracha's critique of Someone's SOP to serve as a guide for all applicants.

If you follow that format by Bracha in your own words, then you are good to go.

[/b]Do not pay anyone to help you with SOP[b]

Nobleman61:
Please gurus in the house
My friend just got her note now
How can she tackle this please?

I don't know the applicant's profile, but this shows she was not able to convince the vo she will leave Canada after her program. She can do this by showing strong family-ties(parents and siblings), potential jobs waiting for her in Nigeria after graduation, family investments/properties she will like to go back to manage after studying......

nicerichard05:



So for UK, ur Brother can not act as your sponsor?

Yes they cannot except they have changed the rules.

Nobleman61:
Please gurus in the house
My friend just got her note now
How can she tackle this please?

This is a case of poor job prospects and the poor economic situation in the country. Apparently the vo doesn't think the future job salary and all will compel her to come back to Nigeria. Also poor document compilation/expression and poor study plans was also a huge factor. I'll advice that your friend joins the thread to get more tips.

She also needs to work on presenting a compelling proof on why Shell return back home to take the job.

P.s: if the job isn't a government agency or family business then it's a waste of time really. All the best to her.

Qudkom:

This is a case of poor job prospects and the poor economic situation in the country. Apparently the vo doesn't think the future job salary and all will compel her to come back to Nigeria. Also poor document compilation/expression and poor study plans was also a huge factor. I'll advice that your friend joins the thread to get more tips.

She also needs to work on presenting a compelling proof on why Shell return back home to take the job.

P.s: if the job isn't a government agency or family business then it's a waste of time really. All the best to her.

Okay thanks

mcobex:
I don't know the applicant's profile, but this shows she was not able to convince the vo she will leave Canada after her program. She can do this by showing strong family-ties(parents and siblings), potential jobs waiting for her in Nigeria after graduation, family investments/properties she will like to go back to manage after studying......

Thanks

george009:
I asked for only review;

That's bad then. I can vet it if you want

It’s necessary. They will clip it to your document.if you don’t go with passport, they will ask you to get it outside and the price there is so annoying. Something you can do in your area for 5H they will be giving you price of 2k there.To avoid been sent back, take passport along with you and if they don’t demand for it, it all well and good.

Kjoy:


Hi ,

I thought we don't need to submit passport photo graph during TRV application so far you give biometrics..

Please correct me if I'm wrong.

Cheers

I think many agents are on this forum. I was once asked to pay 100k by some one here for my SOP yo be vetted.

Dhinmmar:

That's bad then. I can vet it if you want

@Vestment can you please attend to the mail I sent you some weeks back, I would appreciate, Thank you

Chosenone31:
@Vestment can you please attend to the mail I sent you some weeks back, I would appreciate, Thank you

am sorry bro. i sent you a Pm

Nobleman61:
Please gurus in the house
My friend just got her note now
How can she tackle this please?

Can I Inbox you please?

Chukwuemekatehi:
I think many agents are on this forum. I was once asked to pay 100k by some one here for my SOP yo be vetted.

100k
Sometimes I think they prey on one's desperation tho. Nobody can write SOP more than you. Google can help too.

mcobex:
Sorry about that. When do you intend to reapply? Let's see if there's a way I can come in and review things with you(when you intend to reapply will determine that though)

I already deferred to winter 2020 and will like to re apply as soon as possible.

Thanks for your response, I'm grateful.

Vesment:

am sorry bro. i sent you a Pm

waynee2baba:


Nah dude... even if you ask someone to write it for you, he/she shouldn't even ask for money. At least not from a member of this forum. Yes or No would do. Y'all be your brother's keeper meehn.

No baba people are asking for money and making fool of someone when you send them PM. Except some old members here that I know from other thread and Frank.... alot of them ask for money even just to review.... some ask as high as 20k, 30k. After a painful denial imaging someone trying to scan your hard earn money again.

JummyFash:
It’s necessary. They will clip it to your document.if you don’t go with passport, they will ask you to get it outside and the price there is so annoying. Something you can do in your area for 5H they will be giving you price of 2k there.To avoid been sent back, take passport along with you and if they don’t demand for it, it all well and good.

Thanks JummyFash, I'd go with my passports

Mfondara:



Can I Inbox you please?

Why inbox Say it here... these are the people ooo. They will nau start asking for money as if it's water... I have all my previous Visas with nairaland help with no kobo paid to anyone and I am also helping people now and I can't ever ask for kobo. I think I need to speak with justwise.... some persons need to be blocked here. Check my profile well I am not a baby on nairaland.

mzjokky16:
Approval Timeline: Approval at exactly 12 weeks of Application

Date Submitted: 18th June Paper application (1st Application)
Biometrics done: 18th June
Medical reading from : August 13th
Medical request: 28th August
Medicals done: 29th August at IOM lagos
Medical passed: 5th September
BVL: 5th September
VFS pickup mail: 10th September, then i checked my account and it has been approved
Approval : 10th September
Letter of Introduction : September 11th but has September 10th date



Documents submitted:
All CIC forms
International passport biodata page
Digital Passport
Admission letter MA Linguistics (Memorial University)
Funding Letter from school which fully covers tuitions
Statement of Purpose
Waec result 2009 (no English and Maths)
Neco result (2013)
NCE Music/Yoruba language Result (2013)
B.A Linguistics Degree Result (2018)
Nysc certificate (2019)
Mandarin language level 1 certificate (2019)
Nysc PPA letter
My birth certificate
6 Siblings Birth certificates
Letter of sponsorship by dad
His Bank statement (35m balance)


i used my Parent and six siblings as my home ties

above all, Prayer prayer prayer, infact i turned to spiricoco, this whole 12 weeeks almost gave me heart attack expecially when my medical started reading and even though i later received medical request after sending web forms and email, from that sep 5th that my medical was passed and bvl dropped, i coundnt sleep well at night, infact i went to buy a sleeping tablet a day before my approval and the anxiety all over me got me very sick after my approval.
i am specially grateful to AYODEJI786 my son , he was there for me through out this trial time, even though he was also expecting his approval and after he got his, he was keeping up with me from morning till night even in the midnight cos i coundnt sleep, Bp all over. you know i love you baby.

A special thanks to Blema111, Martinomi and to everyone here that i cant remember their handle, you guys really gave me hope.

I remember seeing tight applications here on nairaland and i started shivering, it was just Gods grace, i moved away from sins that i know off and i fasted and pray like its my last chance in life.
Frankrobbin, sopwritter, justmellow and the key personnel on this thread, may God continue to increase u in every way, I keep wondering how you never get tired of replying and helping us without getting paid, may God be merciful to you guys in every area of your life. Amen

To everyone still hopeful and waiting on God for approval, you will live to give a beautiful testimony by Gods grace. Amen

I felicitate with you and thank God it end in praise

Good day everyone, please I need solution to my canada study visa denial
I got admission for postgraduate program for jan 2020 and I submitted on july 25 and got denied on aug 26
The reasons they gave me for refuser is as follows:
I am not satisfied that you will leave at the end of your stay "purpose of visit"
I am not satisfied that you will leave at the end of your stay "family ties in canada and Nigeria"
I am not satisfied that you will leave at the end of your stay "employment

Amethyst1884:
Make una abeg help oooo
I recently got admited for a Master Prg. Applying for study permit. My questions:
1. Filling the forms, evidence of payment or part-payment has not been required, will it be a requirement for obtaining the Visa

2. Is it possible to use a bank reference letter alone stating the current balance or a bank statement even though the account show that a lump sum of money was recently transfered into it....

#abeghelpme

Hello Amethyst1884,

The payment of tuition fees isn't an essential part of the SP processing and as such the VO won't require you to pay before your application is processed or approved. You should do yourself some good by submitting a BS and the reference letter together. A reference letter only won't suffice because it doesn't show any transcational history and the likes.

Good luck!

george009:
The person I pleaded with on this platform to vet mine is demanding money;

Can you help to vet mine?

Hello George009,

I won't be able to assist you. I am sorry.

sunshine21:
Hello Everyone , I got accepted to UoR for a masters degree programme and am preparing my application for a study permit. The Letter of Acceptance doesn't provide details of the fees to be paid and I want to confirm what figures i can input in the form. Will appreciate guidance from anyone who applied to UoR or general comments that may be helpful.

You can assess this from the schools's website or rather contact the school's admission office.

Chukwuemekatehi:
I think many agents are on this forum. I was once asked to pay 100k by some one here for my SOP yo be vetted.

This is so sad. If anyone asks you for money on this forum, please report it. Of course, there are so many agents here.

obaxlove:


Why inbox Say it here... these are the people ooo. They will nau start asking for money as if it's water... I have all my previous Visas with nairaland help with no kobo paid to anyone and I am also helping people now and I can't ever ask for kobo. I think I need to speak with justwise.... some persons need to be blocked here. Check my profile well I am not a baby on nairaland.

I also think applicants should ask questions on the forum and stop sending PM's.

We built this community by helping each other.
If anyone asks for money, please don't keep quiet about it, report to justwise with evidence ASAP.

mzjokky16:
Approval Timeline: Approval at exactly 12 weeks of Application

Date Submitted: 18th June Paper application (1st Application)
Biometrics done: 18th June
Medical reading from : August 13th
Medical request: 28th August
Medicals done: 29th August at IOM lagos
Medical passed: 5th September
BVL: 5th September
VFS pickup mail: 10th September, then i checked my account and it has been approved
Approval : 10th September
Letter of Introduction : September 11th but has September 10th date



Documents submitted:
All CIC forms
International passport biodata page
Digital Passport
Admission letter MA Linguistics (Memorial University)
Funding Letter from school which fully covers tuitions
Statement of Purpose
Waec result 2009 (no English and Maths)
Neco result (2013)
NCE Music/Yoruba language Result (2013)
B.A Linguistics Degree Result (2018)
Nysc certificate (2019)
Mandarin language level 1 certificate (2019)
Nysc PPA letter
My birth certificate
6 Siblings Birth certificates
Letter of sponsorship by dad
His Bank statement (35m balance)


i used my Parent and six siblings as my home ties

above all, Prayer prayer prayer, infact i turned to spiricoco, this whole 12 weeeks almost gave me heart attack expecially when my medical started reading and even though i later received medical request after sending web forms and email, from that sep 5th that my medical was passed and bvl dropped, i coundnt sleep well at night, infact i went to buy a sleeping tablet a day before my approval and the anxiety all over me got me very sick after my approval.
i am specially grateful to AYODEJI786 my son , he was there for me through out this trial time, even though he was also expecting his approval and after he got his, he was keeping up with me from morning till night even in the midnight cos i coundnt sleep, Bp all over. you know i love you baby.

A special thanks to Blema111, Martinomi and to everyone here that i cant remember their handle, you guys really gave me hope.

I remember seeing tight applications here on nairaland and i started shivering, it was just Gods grace, i moved away from sins that i know off and i fasted and pray like its my last chance in life.
Frankrobbin, sopwritter, justmellow and the key personnel on this thread, may God continue to increase u in every way, I keep wondering how you never get tired of replying and helping us without getting paid, may God be merciful to you guys in every area of your life. Amen

To everyone still hopeful and waiting on God for approval, you will live to give a beautiful testimony by Gods grace. Amen

Hello mzjokky16,

Its a joy worth celebrating. You've finally overcome and your anxiety can go to rest now. The troubling past has become a blissful memory. Big congratulations.

All the best!

Hey;

After going through the contents in the forum I was really impressed that people out of their tight schedules still make out time to help people in regards to their applications;

...but the fact that I asked for help and someone offered to help and when I contacted him, demanded for service fee, really discouraged me;

Then again; with the responses in regards to the complaint, am really impressed the forum is against it and there are people willing to still help out;

Please let's try to assist each other,

Thanks.

PS: Attached is the email conversation.

Good day all
Please anyone in algonquin college or applied to the college, can I be able to apply with my unofficial transcript and secondly do I have to pay the application fee before I can submit my documents?

[quote author=Naijaforeigner post=82151309][/quote]

toluode:
Good day everyone, please I need solution to my canada study visa denial
I got admission for postgraduate program for jan 2020 and I submitted on july 25 and got denied on aug 26
The reasons they gave me for refuser is as follows:
I am not satisfied that you will leave at the end of your stay "purpose of visit"
I am not satisfied that you will leave at the end of your stay "family ties in canada and Nigeria"
I am not satisfied that you will leave at the end of your stay "employment

Guy sorry but that was fast. What's your academic background, proposed course of study and institute?

makes sense. [quote author=Naijaforeigner post=82151309][/quote]

george009:
Hey;

After going through the contents in the forum I was really impressed that people out of their tight schedules still make out time to help people in regards to their applications;

...but the fact that I asked for help and someone offered to help and when I contacted him, demanded for service fee, really discouraged me;

Then again; with the responses in regards to the complaint, am really impressed the forum is against it and there are people willing to still help out;

Please let's try to assist each other,

Thanks.

PS: Attached is the email conversation.

So big man @Sopwriter na you dey do this thing? So you divert people that need help with SOPs to your writing agency yeah? You fall hand o

Thanks. I tried to use Flywire, but it seems they don't have an agreement with VIU as I could not find VIU in the list of schools. It's payment for tuition. About $15,000 CAD. DO you know of any other options?

Francology41:

I used Flywire to pay my deposit. It takes 3 to 4 working days for processing and confirmation. You can use your Nigeria debit cards.