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Valwezzy:
Not bad, there's still room for improvement. Always resist the urge to use "I"... No one f**king cares about you.
PS - Use the PASO technique when submitting a proposal.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh. thanks sis

AtoningBlood:
Omg, @ Venal, selfless guy, God bless you richly. I pray someone's life will be changed from this training just as mine changed.

I did a training with him I think 2 years ago, I know nothing about what freelance is, I don't write either but I channelled all I learnt from him to my own niche.

Today, for over 2 years now, I earn weekly/monthly like someone on a regular job, yes I'm on a regular freelance job. Bought a car, and almost completing my house.

Freelance is sweet, I pray for only one person to share a positive story from this class come 2022 if Jesus delays His coming and by His grace.

Thank you Venal, thank you and thank You!!!!!!!


Let me add this: one of the things that kill freelance success is greediness, don't be greedy, start small no matter what, as a newbie, please bid low, you start increasing your rate as you grow.

And lo, I tell thee, this your testimony shall be a national anthem. Thou shall read it morning and night.

Olawrites:
Graphic design or so. I know her on the Fiverr thread

All right.

CORRELATION BETWEEN AIDA & PASO TECHNIQUE. (how to use the two simultaneously)

Grab potential customer’s “Attention” by representing their “Problem” in an innovative way.

Then “Agitate” it long enough to keep their “Interest” alive.

Now, provide your “Solution” with some details to make them “Desire” (target their emotions).

In the end, present the “Outcome” (how they would feel after getting the solution) with some third-party testimonials (also provides some “logical” reasoning to support their decision) to emphasize the trust element together with a “Call to Action” immediately.

AtoningBlood:
Omg, @ Venal, selfless guy, God bless you richly. I pray someone's life will be changed from this training just as mine changed.

I did a training with him I think 2 years ago, I know nothing about what freelance is, I don't write either but I channelled all I learnt from him to my own niche.

Today, for over 2 years now, I earn weekly/monthly like someone on a regular job, yes I'm on a regular freelance job. Bought a car, and almost completing my house.

Freelance is sweet, I pray for only one person to share a positive story from this class come 2022 if Jesus delays His coming and by His grace.

Thank you Venal, thank you and thank You!!!!!!!


Let me add this: one of the things that kill freelance success is greediness, don't be greedy, start small no matter what, as a newbie, please bid low, you start increasing your rate as you grow.

you are right bro, I don't mean to praise venzal, but I must say he is a great teacher, he would do well as a teacher in a school honestly, I followed his thread on Fiverr in 2016, people who didn't know anything about freelancing and have never heard of Fiverr before, took action, followed his teaching on the thread, and were making hundreds of dollars, am following this one bumper2bumper, and am learning a thing or two, I want to believe that if people who followed his thread on Fiverr in 2016 are to say a word or two in this thread, they will be like "man, venzal is great, and just like the agama lizard, he (venzal)needs to nod his head, slap it a little bit on the ground and give kudos to himself for allowing God to use him in changing people's lives.

Meklex:
I see a lot of people rushing to create their Upwork profile. Creating a profile is secondary —you need to learn how to write first else you will get frustrated.

You need to practice as much as you read/study. That's the only way to learn effectively; learn and practice.

With the permission of Ven.zal, I can drop some of my old clients' requirements (one requirement per week) and you can attempt it.

This is my earning so far this month. I have people (Nigerians) I write salescopies and ad copies for at 20,000 naira for 500 — 1000 words. That is to tell you that your target audience are not only limited to oyibo people.

You only need to learn and practice.

Even me still dey learn, that's why I always come here every day.

You honestly don't need my permission, chief.

You are free to contribute here anytime. Thanks for taking time out of your busy schedule to share with us here. You are doing well.

OYENIYIJK:
when do you need them sir?

Dear Telim

I can see you need a very good copywriter for your different CPA products. I can be of help. You want a copy that gets attention, gets its message across and convinces the customer to buy your products - I will help with that - that is my area of expertise. I will take your products, study it and I will take hours to find what is unique about it and present that "uniqueness" in a way that will motivate the customer to buy it.

Do you like working with me? If yes, I will like to ask you some information needed about your products and I will work extra miles to provide a strong copy to stand out to get our prospect's attention.

Don't forget, we provide free emails and a discount work.

Looking forward to hear from you.

Venzal student!!!

Man you're scaring , good work

I have been silently following this thread with keen interest, I must confess that VENZAL, the boss with a rare personality, is really doing a great job here.....


Dishing out tons of free relevant contents on Email Copywriting that could change ones lives for the better.


May God bless you richly and abundantly. Kudos to everyone that have been providing helpful resources.

infohenry:
Please help look at this work, trying to build my portfolio using the resources send by Mr Venzal. I am ready to receive all your flogging.
Thany you.

Email #1

Subject: So Here Is The Solution

OK let me disappointment you…
“Make money online” as you have made to believe does not exist.
What I mean is that the internet does not mint money and there is no magic wand to spin and money will start rolling as you can see in any fantasy movie.

Money is made online in the same way it is made offline ... offline goods and services are exchanged for money, online is either you sell stuff to people or you offer a service that helps people solve a problem.

What it means is that people making money online have BUSINESS they are running on the internet.

Yes What I mean is these people are leveraging on the powerful tools available on the internet to run their businesses. You must understand this if you really want to turn the internet into your fantasize money making machine.

I know what is going on in your mind right now..
Making money online is not for me, I don't have any business and have not run a business before, how the heck will I make money online.
I totally understand your struggles, creating products to sell online is not an all comer affair, because it involves a LOT of resources and time consuming.

Your struggles are over as there is a business model buzzing now on the internet where you ride on the back of established people and organisations to make money by promoting their product and services on the internet and earn commission on every sale you generate.
Sounds simple RIGHT… welcome to the world of AFFILIATE MARKETING.

I will be leaving you with loads of [url]free resources[/url] that will help you learn how this business model works.
[url]Click here now for your FREE resources. [/url]

Take care,
Henry

Well done for the attempt. Just keep at it. No one gets it right the first time. With time you will improve.

I just have to say, in copywriting, grammar rules that we adhered to in school fly out the window.

Never cluster your texts.

Make them short and punchy. It makes for easy reading.

Today's audience is said to have a lower attention span than that of a goldfish. So you don't want to do things that make people scared to read your text.

.

TommyAnthem:
Do they also accept voters card as a means of identification, cos that's all I have at moment.

Yes.

ImahGabi22:
Revealed: 4 Steps to Making Your First Million ( No one Thinks About No 3)

Hey Venzal,
Did u know that in the next five years,you will be the same person you are except the books you read or the people you meet? - Charles Jones.

Well, I wouldn't want you to be the same person because we need change to evolve so I've decided to share a lesson from one of the books I've read and I would like you to read it too.

But,before I do,
I would like to share a story with you.

I stumbled upon a book which has enjoyed the coziness of my library for too long and hadn't served it's purpose.

I decided to feast on it's knowledge and share part as dessert.

Have you every heard of the millionaire equation?

Don't fret,we aren't going to solve math�.

Well,it's a linear equation which goes thus;

A dream+ A team + A theme= Millionaire Streams.

Complicated?

I'll explain...

1) A dream: This simply means having a vision of what you want. In this case,it's to be a millionaire. Attached to having dreams should be a burning desire and positive mindset.

2) A team: A popular saying goes thus " two heads are better than one". You need to be surrounded by like minds who will fast-track the process of achieving your goals.

3)Theme: Having a millionaire model to follow will give u inspiration to succeed.

Easy in'nit?

Now, let's get to the meat and potatoes of this email.

THE STEPS TO MAKE YOUR FIRST MILLION.

1)Decide it's okay for you to become a millionaire.

Don't join the bandwagon of those who foolishly program their minds into thinking that being wealthy is an abominable act. Think of ways to create wealth that support your beliefs and values.

2) Constantly paint the picture of wealth in your mind: Most millionaires firstly, believe it ,then they see it. Even the Holy Book acknowledges this.

3) Spend less than you earn: A simple way to do this is by budgeting. Pay yourself first. Always deduct 10% off your income for savings. Do this consistently to see results.

4) Investment is the difference: When you constantly invest,you create a second stream of income which will augument whatever you're earning.


I know you've learnt something.
I have too.

Anticipate my next email. I'll be sharing a new secret to a few people.

Talk to you soon.

Here's the link to the book if you'd like to have the main dish.

[ Link ]



How'd i do?

Cc: everyone

Subject line reads more like a blog post headline. I would remove everything apart from 4 steps to making your first million...

You did a good job.

Keep at it.

shotanny:
@Boss venzal....thank you very much sir for the corrections and reviews, pls I have three questions...

1. For we that have not signed up to the up work account yet,( you adviced us to be patient)...should we go ahead now


Secondly.. I don't have any ID..except for my school ID...can I make use of that


Thirdly I browsed and searched for the grammarly..word checker and I saw a grammarly app..that I can download on google play store.. Pls does it serve the same function as the grammarly premium account.

1. You can.

2. I don't think so.

3. Nope... that won't cut it. You need grammarly premium. Not the free version.

adsmaster:
@ venz.al

What holding me back is:

My copy is really not great yet, I dropped one yesterday and my flaws was pointed out. Am grateful it was criticize and thankful to the- CRITIQUE!


Lots of grammatical errors...Need to get the grammarly account.


Have gotten the hang of things in the aspect of the discipline of an email copywriter, but still need to dive in deep.

Need to get template and format of a product launch sequence, autoresponder email campaign and email sequence.


Also need swipe files on real copy that has been written

You don't have to be GREAT before launching into the deep.

Most of the things you will learn will come from actual job experience

Tickles001:
I want some Upwork gurus in the house to please take a look at my Upwork profile. I need to know if am on the right track.

https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~019187a72193b06e3c

What am I doing here? (Thought of any client visiting your profile)

Your profile isn't interesting even though am a newbie.

You can work magic by reviewing top folks profile...

Avoid emphasis on "I". Avoid it as you would avoid rattlesnakes and COVID 19. Lolz...

You need to arouse in clients an eager want...

When creating your profile, remember you're dealing with creatures of logic. We are dealing with creatures of emotions, creatures bristling with prejudices and motivated by pride and vanity.

Your profile should make clients want to hire you.

Anyway, the issue is dead.

The sky is your limit.

I maybe wrong though.

Cheers..

P.S. Apologies for my criticism.

OYENIYIJK:
when do you need them sir?

Dear Telim

I can see you need a very good copywriter for your different CPA products. I can be of help. You want a copy that gets attention, gets its message across and convinces the customer to buy your products - I will help with that - that is my area of expertise. I will take your products, study it and I will take hours to find what is unique about it and present that "uniqueness" in a way that will motivate the customer to buy it.

Do you like working with me? If yes, I will like to ask you some information needed about your products and I will work extra miles to provide a strong copy to stand out to get our prospect's attention.

Don't forget, we provide free emails and a discount work.

Looking forward to hear from you.

Ven.zal student!!!

Always break up your copy. Makes it easier to read.

Learn to tune into the WIIFM station more. That is "what is in it for me?"

You are reading this thread only because of that. It's what all humans care about. That's the foundation of the "How to win friends and influence people" book.

So resist the urge to talk about yourself and beam the LIGHT on your client.

Also, if you are not sure about a topic or product a quick Google search would come handy. That would help you know exactly what to say.

Lastly, stop talking about the hours you are going to spend in executing a project when sending a pitch. Clients expect you to do the hard yards. So that's no selling point.

HERE'S WHAT I AM GOING TO DO NOW...

Between now and Saturday evening, I'll share 14 HiGH converting email templates that you can use to write HUNDREDS of emails in ANY niche.

Then I'd also share examples.

After that I am going to talk about getting clients generally. I'll cover Upwork a bit, talk about LinkedIn, FB, Twitter and via EMAIL LISTS.

Stay expectant -- I' be back later with lessons.

Venzal:
HERE'S WHAT I AM GOING TO DO NOW...

Between now and Saturday evening, I'll share 14 HiGH converting email templates that you can use to write HUNDREDS of emails in ANY niche.

Then I'd also share examples.

After that I am going to talk about getting clients generally. I'll cover Upwork a bit, talk about LinkedIn, FB, Twitter and via EMAIL LISTS.

Stay expectant -- I' be back later with lessons.

Take your time sire.

Thanks a bunch.

Venzal:
You can leave that blank for now.

boss in writing email series lets say like 5,
do you first write their subject lines before writing their bodies or do you complete one email ie their subject line and body before moving to next email

Venzal:
HERE'S WHAT I AM GOING TO DO NOW...

Between now and Saturday evening, I'll share 14 HiGH converting email templates that you can use to write HUNDREDS of emails in ANY niche.

Then I'd also share examples.

After that I am going to talk about getting clients generally. I'll cover Upwork a bit, talk about LinkedIn, FB, Twitter and via EMAIL LISTS.

Stay expectant -- I' be back later with lessons.

Patiently waiting

Venzal:
Well done for the attempt. Just keep at it. No one gets it right the first time. With time you will improve.

I just have to say, in copywriting, grammar rules that we adhered to in school fly out the window.

Never cluster your texts.

Make them short and punchy. It makes for easy reading.

Today's audience is said to have a lower attention span than that of a goldfish. So you don't want to do things that make people scared to read your text.

Thank you very much, I will work on that. I really appreciate what you are doing here.

Venzal:
HERE'S WHAT I AM GOING TO DO NOW...

Between now and Saturday evening, I'll share 14 HiGH converting email templates that you can use to write HUNDREDS of emails in ANY niche.

Then I'd also share examples.

After that I am going to talk about getting clients generally. I'll cover Upwork a bit, talk about LinkedIn, FB, Twitter and via EMAIL LISTS.

Stay expectant -- I' be back later with lessons.

it seems I'm missing a lot already. Good morning OGA venzal.

I am a writer, and I know how it feels if your editor asks for revisions. After spending hours on your blog post/essay or document, you are asked to revise your work. How painful!

I have a solution for you, get Premium Grammarly!

Ouch! Grammarly is a tad bit expensive. How many people can afford the $135 a year subscription?

I have a solution for you. I will get you a Grammarly premium account for a pittance. Chikini money o.

No DM for prices, I'll sell you a Grammarly account to you for ₦2,000.00 only.

Send me a message here on WhatsApp for your Grammarly Premium account

telim:
Nice thread. I need a good email copy writer for different cpa products mostly in insurance niche, sweepstakes and biz pop

Hello Telim,

Your job post got me thrilled enough to want to do three cartwheels in my office.

Why?

I perfectly understand your desire to hire a "good copywriter" for your cost per action affiliate offers.

It will totally break your heart if conversion rates are abysmally low you can't even break even.

...or even suffer a loss after you've committed so much resources to promoting your cpa products.

The truth is, a great copy by a good copywriter is all that stands between resounding success or heartbreaking failure for all your campaigns.

I'm glad you acknowledge that.

Speaking about your desired campaigns, what kind of insurance policies are you looking to promote?

Barely a year ago, I wrote a copy for a client who was looking to promote a Fixed Life Insurance policy.

He had retired from his job as an insurance agent and was looking to earning commissions by referring people to great insurance policies he personally could vouch for.

You can take a look at the copy I wrote here [LINK]

I still have an active client who promotes affiliate offers with the Panthera CPA affiliate network. You can access this folder to check out some emails I wrote for her a while ago [LINK]

Tell you what Tellis, I'm already brewing with ideas on how to position your chosen offers with the power of copywriting such that you get really high conversion rates.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Venzal:
Always break up your copy. Makes it easier to read.

Learn to tune into the WIIFM station more. That is "what is in it for me?"

You are reading this thread only because of that. It's what all humans care about. That's the foundation of the "How to win friends and influence people" book.

So resist the urge to talk about yourself and beam the LIGHT on your client.

Also, if you are not sure about a topic or product a quick Google search would come handy. That would help you know exactly what to say.

Lastly, stop talking about the hours you are going to spend in executing a project when sending a pitch. Clients expect you to do the hard yards. So that's no selling point.

It was done for correction. NOTED

Venzal:
HERE'S WHAT I AM GOING TO DO NOW...

Between now and Saturday evening, I'll share 14 HiGH converting email templates that you can use to write HUNDREDS of emails in ANY niche.

Then I'd also share examples.

After that I am going to talk about getting clients generally. I'll cover Upwork a bit, talk about LinkedIn, FB, Twitter and via EMAIL LISTS.

Stay expectant -- I' be back later with lessons.

God bless you boss

Qulink1:
God bless you boss

Boss you dey log in for WhatsApp? This business don take your time

Virgo01:
Hello Telim,

Your job post got me thrilled enough to want to do three cartwheels in my office.

Why?

I perfectly understand your desire to hire a "good copywriter" for your cost per action affiliate offers.

It will totally break your heart if conversion rates are abysmally low you can't even break even.

...or even suffer a loss after you've committed so much resources to promoting your cpa products.

The truth is, a great copy by a good copywriter is all that stands between resounding success or heartbreaking failure for all your campaigns.

I'm glad you acknowledge that.

Speaking about your desired campaigns, what kind of insurance policies are you looking to promote?

Barely a year ago, I wrote a copy for a client who was looking to promote a Fixed Life Insurance policy.

He had retired from his job as an insurance agent and was looking to earning commissions by referring people to great insurance policies he personally could vouch for.

You can take a look at the copy I wrote here [LINK]

I still have an active client who promotes affiliate offers with the Panthera CPA affiliate network. You can access this folder to check out some emails I wrote for her a while ago [LINK]

Tell you what Tellis, I'm already brewing with ideas on how to position your chosen offers with the power of copywriting such that you get really high conversion rates.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

nice one bro!!! this itself is a template

OYENIYIJK:
Boss you dey log in for WhatsApp? This business don take your time

I still dey login small small ooo. Learning is really taking my time this days. Thanks for remembering me Boss

tshege:
I am a writer, and I know how it feels if your editor asks for revisions. After spending hours on your blog post/essay or document, you are asked to revise your work. How painful!

I have a solution for you, get Premium Grammarly!

Ouch! Grammarly is a tad bit expensive. How many people can afford the $135 a year subscription?

I have a solution for you. I will get you a Grammarly premium account for a pittance. Chikini money o.

No DM for prices, I'll sell you a Grammarly account to you for ₦2,000.00 only.

Send me a message here on WhatsApp for your Grammarly Premium account

Park well

shakyum gave me for 2h MTN.

OYENIYIJK:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh.
thanks sis

Boss Ven.zal mentioned that you reached out to him with domain sales letter written with the PASO method or so.

Do you care to share the letter with me? I want to try my hands on outbounding today.