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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 11:12am On Jul 20, 2020
Nickshrapnel:
I know the politician is Chief Salami, I just didn’t mention it for obvious reason wink


Okay.
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Nmezor(f): 11:14am On Jul 20, 2020
Thanks for the update oga Larry...I do hope Black overheard him
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 1:12pm On Jul 20, 2020
Larry, I don't know how you'll do it, but please send Maria and Petee back to school.

23. Such a young boy... with a wife and baby on the way.

He should quit crime, set up a business and get some education.
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 6:29pm On Jul 20, 2020
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Ohhh. I think that was the surgery she was supposed to go for at High Cross Hospital before she escaped.

It was why Officer JB desperately wanted to help her receive treatment first. What a life!

Misery all around!


By the way.... @LarrySun, all that money Chief Salami spent on winning a local government chairmanship just didn't make sense. Nobody goes to that extent to become a local government chairman. How much is there to be made? If you ever review the story, I think it would be more logical to change the elections to a gubernatorial election or Senatorial.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 6:34pm On Jul 20, 2020
EkopSparoAyara:
Yes, Maria had a terrible time in the hands of the Matron, it will not be wise to think that the ill treatments meted on her will be inconsequential..

However, I expected them to be temporarily consequential, if permanently, it should be scars sustained from the brute..

Little did I know that the after effects of the sufferings will be life threatening, The woman still extended her wickedness to her even in prison, I wish she stayed alive to feel Peter Black's wrath,Chief Salami can attest to that..

Peter Black is about to be robbed off of happiness again..

It has always been so, everything that makes him happy are taken away from him. Maybe it has something to do with his name-Black- which is widely believed to be associated with evil, sadness and other forms of negativity..[b][/b]

BRAVO LARRYSUN..


@emboldened. I was going to say that. He should just change his name to Saint White.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 6:37pm On Jul 20, 2020
PrimadonnaO:



@emboldened. I was going to say that. He should just change his name to Saint White.

Or maybe Peter White, lol..
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 6:44pm On Jul 20, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


Ohhh. I think that was the surgery she was supposed to go for at High Cross Hospital before she escaped.

It was why Officer JB desperately wanted to help her receive treatment first. What a life!

Misery all around!


By the way.... @LarrySun, all that money Chief Salami spent on winning a local government chairmanship just didn't make sense. Nobody goes to that extent to become a local government chairman. How much is there to be made? If you ever review the story, I think it would be more logical to change the elections to a gubernatorial election or Senatorial.

Speaking of which, there is money at the Local Level of Government, especially in a state like Lagos, apart from that, you might also want to consider the fact that Chief Salami was a desperate man, he wanted power at all cost, no matter the consequences, his rival spent money to buy radio, it is only logical that Chief Salami had to up his game, it gave Blackie a not so Herculean task in brainwashing the man..
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 6:44pm On Jul 20, 2020
LarrySun:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME

smiley smiley smiley

Awwn. July baby. A belated happy birthday to you.
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 6:48pm On Jul 20, 2020
EkopSparoAyara:


Speaking of which, there is money at the Local Level of Government, especially in a state like Lagos, apart from that, you might also want to consider the fact that Chief Salami was a desperate man, he wanted power at all cost, no matter the consequences, his rival spent money to buy radio, it is only logical that Chief Salami had to up his game, it gave Blackie a not so Herculean task in brainwashing the man..

Maybe for desperation, I'll agree, because desperation purely defies logic.

If not, trust me, there's nothing extraordinary about being a local government chairman. A section of my family is into politics... been there.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 6:49pm On Jul 20, 2020
EkopSparoAyara:


Or maybe Peter White, lol..

Lol. Peter denied Jesus. His name shouldn't be synonymous to anything unworthy again.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 6:51pm On Jul 20, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


Maybe for desperation, I'll agree, because desperation purely defies logic.

If not, trust me, there's nothing extraordinary about being a local government chairman. A section of my family is into politics... been there.

Inside Politics, politics dey oh, lol...

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 6:54pm On Jul 20, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


Lol. Peter denied Jesus. His name shouldn't be synonymous to anything unworthy again.

Lol..I agree with you, but it could expose him to danger considering his bad reputation in the country..

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 7:02pm On Jul 20, 2020
EkopSparoAyara:
Roberto Bonifacio.. The Lion himself.. At the mention of his name people tremble.. Am sure some persons regarded him as an evil demigod..

Mr Gold Osagie.. If Chief Salami has already disappeared before Roberto gets to him, then you're in trouble.. I know Roberto can track him down but in the fury of temporary loosing out on Chief Salami, he might just transfer the aggression on you..

Officer John Balewa and Mr Peter Black are in great danger.. If only they knew what they're messing with..


BRAVO LARRYSUN..

True. Mr Gold just exacerbated the situation.

He woke the lion and pointed him to a direction...

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 7:15pm On Jul 20, 2020
francium001:
this is the exact explanation of "trouble dey sleep yanga go wake am" Mr. Gold would have let sleeping dogs lye, but on the process of averting the dangers from his family he has completely made an offload of a lorry load of trouble, I pray Blackie finds a way to outsmart Roberto and save his friend Baskie as well


Thanks for the update Larrysun


This is all on Basky! His grandfather, old man Balè warned him to let go! If he hadn't been hellbent on finding Peter still, he'd never have found out about the diamond being stolen... he'd never have gone to Salami's house..

Mr Gold would never have remembered about the Boniface diamond and hastily acted.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by nkemdave(m): 10:58pm On Jul 20, 2020
UnusualJhay:


I think this is the point where Larry takes us back to book 1, the baby, Maria, Peter all doing fast and furious in the street! !

cool

smiles. I think the long awaited fast and furious of book 1 will be between Black, Black's son, wife to Black's son and the baby.....

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Ismaxx: 11:52pm On Jul 20, 2020
Out of all dis guy's works, frm blackmaria,maria the sequel,let d gun speak,kanu n so on..i've neva see him complete a story...even d brand of cain dat he tagged a complete story was not...darmian dat wrote "beneath d gloss" for good nine years shared it freely on one whatsapp group like dat,everybody loved it n were heaping praises on him,who knows where dat piece might have gotten to tru sharing from one place to another..ppl like soyinka,vp osiinbajo,obasanjo n d likes might get dia hands on it one day tru sharing..im not saying u shld give out ur books too for free but atleast complete one nd let ppl enjoy it..its only God dat crown one's efforts..money n fame works together,we av "money before fame" and also "fame before money"...but in this case,it is the latter dat work most for you writers..are u dat stingy?..if u continue like dis,den ur novels wont spread...i'l send dis to blackmaria page too so dat it will quickly get to u....no offence..i am ur die hard fans,i've searched tru wattpad,larrysun writes n so on,u just cut short of all d stories
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Kaycee9242(m): 4:55am On Jul 21, 2020
Nice one Larry
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by AdiscoPele: 9:33am On Jul 21, 2020
Ismaxx:
Out of all dis guy's works, frm blackmaria,maria the sequel,let d gun speak,kanu n so on..i've neva see him complete a story...even d brand of cain dat he tagged a complete story was not...darmian dat wrote "beneath d gloss" for good nine years shared it freely on one whatsapp group like dat,everybody loved it n were heaping praises on him,who knows where dat piece might have gotten to tru sharing from one place to another..ppl like soyinka,vp osiinbajo,obasanjo n d likes might get dia hands on it one day tru sharing..im not saying u shld give out ur books too for free but atleast complete one nd let ppl enjoy it..its only God dat crown one's efforts..money n fame works together,we av "money before fame" and also "fame before money"...but in this case,it is the latter dat work most for you writers..are u dat stingy?..if u continue like dis,den ur novels wont spread...i'l send dis to blackmaria page too so dat it will quickly get to u....no offence..i am ur die hard fans,i've searched tru wattpad,larrysun writes n so on,u just cut short of all d stories
You really did hit the nail on head. I think I must also add that the owner of this forum, Seun Osewa is the stingy one. This guys(I mean the writers on literature here on nairaland)has contributed so much so nairaland. They bring so much traffic to nairaland. I can't tell you how many times I log on juat to read some stories. I am always glued to literature section and spends close to 10hrs a day on this section. Seun makes so much from this guys and it won't take anything awqy from him if he shows appreciation to this guys.

Of note is TBM(TheBlessedMan) who accomplished over 1million views on one of his treads and others too numerous to mention, who have gotten more that 300views. This translates to mega pay for Seun and he smiles to the bank but this guys gives their time, energy and resources to make millions of us happy for nothing, except the meagre 5k monthly for best writer. It speaks volume tge type of person Seun Osewa is.

I am of the opinion that Seun should compensate those who takes their time to write and bring traffic to his site.

We have sites that pays for just commenting on threads and also some that pays for writing, so @Seun should do the needful and encourage this guys.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Nickshrapnel: 11:02am On Jul 21, 2020
How come I’ve read the complete book and you have not?

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by domido(m): 9:56pm On Jul 21, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


Lol. I'll even yawn. What was all that nonsense? grin

Thank you for the confirmation oo grin grin

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 10:58pm On Jul 21, 2020
domido:


Thank you for the confirmation oo grin grin

Lol
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by dejavuh0007(m): 9:57am On Jul 22, 2020
PrimadonnaO:



Way too wordy... and with generic lines. It wasn't a special profession of love. The same words could be said to hundred more girls.
Lol. So u mean to say you won't be swept off your feet by a guy, after he reads out this epistle?
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 9:59am On Jul 22, 2020
dejavuh0007:

Lol. So u mean to say you won't be swept off your feet by a guy, after he reads out this epistle?

Lol. I'll yawn... and tell him to stop talking...or continue next year.
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 10:06am On Jul 22, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


Lol. I'll yawn... and tell him to stop talking...or continue next year.

Lol.. Me I no even like plenty talk, I'll just go straight to the point. What if after all the plenty talk, she come say am not interested, lol..

By the way, it's possible that Doctor Rukewe has their address but it's a wrong address, I can only imagine his fate, I just dey laugh..

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by dejavuh0007(m): 10:14am On Jul 22, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


Lol. I'll yawn... and tell him to stop talking...or continue next year.
Lol. Imagine if Maria had yawned and told Peter to stop talking and try again next year. There wouldn't be any story to read anymore, or will there?
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 1:06pm On Jul 22, 2020
dejavuh0007:

Lol. Imagine if Maria had yawned and told Peter to stop talking and try again next year. There wouldn't be any story to read anymore, or will there?

He had already said what was important at with the first few lines... the others were just extensive and unnecessary.

And truthfully, I don't see any good that Peter Black's presence in her life did. If he hadn't helped her escape, she'd have done her surgery and not become pregnant.
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by PrimadonnaO(f): 1:08pm On Jul 22, 2020
EkopSparoAyara:


Lol.. Me I no even like plenty talk, I'll just go straight to the point. What if after all the plenty talk, she come say am not interested, lol..

By the way, it's possible that Doctor Rukewe has their address but it's a wrong address, I can only imagine his fate, I just dey laugh..

Do you understand? Going straight to the point is the best.

Dr Rukevwe doesn't have the current address, but even then, he'd be giving Basky a trail.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by dejavuh0007(m): 2:07pm On Jul 22, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


He had already said what was important at with the first few lines... the others were just extensive and unnecessary.

And truthfully, I don't see any good that Peter Black's presence in her life did. If he hadn't helped her escape, she'd have done her surgery and not become pregnant.
...and she'd still be in jail after all. Moreover, It wasn't Peter that led her on the heist that got her arrested in the first place.
In my own opinion, I think they're both good for each other. They inspire each other to be better.

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 2:18pm On Jul 22, 2020
PrimadonnaO:


Do you understand? Going straight to the point is the best.

Dr Rukevwe doesn't have the current address, but even then, he'd be giving Basky a trail.

I understand you well,perfectly, majority of the girls I know likes it when the guy comes out plain, instead of too much grammar..


You're right, he might be pointing Officer Balewa to a direction..

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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 2:23pm On Jul 22, 2020
dejavuh0007:

...and she'd still be in jail after all. Moreover, It wasn't Peter that led her on the heist that got her arrested in the first place.
In my own opinion, I think they're both good for each other. They inspire each other to be better.

That's right.. Peter only saw a lady that desperately needed help and decided to help her(at the cinema)
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Nmeri17: 9:23pm On Jul 25, 2020
LarrySun:
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well written
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by LarrySun(m): 12:54pm On Jul 26, 2020
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