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Patrioticbreed9:
relized that when you love a lady sex isnt the first thing that comes to one's mind, it only when you have lust that sex becomes the main deal of the whole union, what i have for anita is true love when you love someone atimes there presence, voice and touches are enough to keep the train rolling, i do call anita from time to time and we communicate physicaly and soulicaly.. i know our love is still young but with the fondation we laid am optimistic of better days ahe

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webhead:
Yes. including Grammer errors and incorrect tenses.

if your were someone who is capable of independent thought and open to knowledge (which you are not), then you would've tried to educate yourself on what a first draft is.

Writing and editing and two different things: the former involves letting your mind free and the latter is placing your thoughts in correct sequence---- and not just correcting tenses and grammar.

if you're are doing both at the same time you are impeding the full potential of your creativity, because you're subconsciously telling your brain that you want only polished sentences.

the human mind isn't programmed that way; that's why you have to think more when editing---- resulting in reduction of effeciency when writing.

i am a writer, so further argument is pointless.

improve your self first before you bother about other faults

adeadeyera:
Olofo ni baba e

habsydiamond:
I know this is where u are going b4... Op na ashawo....

Patrioticbreed9:
relized that when you love a lady sex isnt the first thing that comes to one's mind, it only when you have lust that sex becomes the main deal of the whole union, what i have for anita is true love when you love someone atimes there presence, voice and touches are enough to keep the train rolling, i do call anita from time to time and we communicate physicaly and soulicaly.. i know our love is still young but with the fondation we laid am optimistic of better days ahead..

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gozie4naira:
you dint tell us that you went to unconplited building befor going to the mall

adeadeyera:
No, you no sabi anything.
No rule in blogging says you can't construct very good sentences and still go over again to proofread.
You're just a poor writer.

Molahnelson:
If this will have happened in Eastern Europe or in asia-pacific I would have believe you
but is in Nigeria a girl to love you that can only happen in Utopia, especially the rich one

Nigerian girls ain't capable to love unconditionally
Please don't bring this fiction here. again I'm sick I'm tired of all this loving s*** please

I tell men to focus in building their career and businesses, forget about this farm tools they don't have love to give you, they can only claim love only when it's beneficial to them

In Nigeria love only exist in Utopia.
That is the harsh reality believe it or not

adeadeyera:
Your own mind is not programmed that way because it's feeble and obviously, because rather than challenging yourself, you come on Nairaland to defend how your mind functions at suboptimal capacity.

Get help.

webhead:
then you're implying that great writers--- like Stephen king, Gillian Flynn, James Patterson, j.k. Rowling, Anne lammot--- brain's are suboptimal??

Sorry for you.

Erkhalifa:
We never can tell bro, maybe he is working on his writing ability, so bear with him, just as long you can understand the story is trying to pass.

Patrioticbreed9:
op true love exist in nigeria, you neva go the whole 36 states in the federation you neva meet my sista.. if u check the right places you go find one

adeadeyera:
Isn't it even sicker that you coequate the functionality of your own mind to that of greats like Stephen King, Flynn and Patterson's?
So, when those great writers scribbled down their drafts, they were fraught with common tenses and grammar errors? Masters of the language? Native speakers?

You should be sorry for yourself.

adeadeyera:
Isn't it even sicker that you coequate the functionality of your own mind to that of greats like Stephen King, Flynn and Patterson's?
So, when those great writers scribbled down their drafts, they were fraught with common tenses and grammar errors? Masters of the language? Native speakers?

You should be sorry for yourself.

dave4rella:

Tell us whenever you wake-up from this dream

NiRfreak:
Guyman stop disgracing yourself. It's normal for first draft to have typo errors and some sprinkles of grammatical error which is usually not intentional..doesn't matter if u are native speaker or a literature Nobel laurette ..it happens cos during writing- first draft.. you are following your thought speed as the inspiration comes on you, so u don't have time to be going back to correct errors ..if you do...that's a poor way to write as u might lose your concentration, sequence of the story and inspiration......
Just stop the blind argument. There's a reason why we have proofreaders/proofreading after writing.

webhead:
your post shows how much of an apathetic fool you are.

where did I state that I write as well as the writers I mentioned.

but I can get to that same level, by learning and following their footsteps---- one of them being writing a crappy but idea-rich first draft.

this writers have admitted to writing horrible first draft.

but your proudful and shallow-minded brian won't allow you accept that. that's why you will quote me again with another dumb post to mask your naivety.

people like you don't learn; you'll always stay empty.

Osashalom:
Tales by moon light!
Even though I know you are lying, but just continue.

adeadeyera:
No, you're the apathetic idiot for saying I implied that the greats you mentioned had to have error-fraught drafts in all their writings.

If you weren't an irredeemable dumbo, you'd know that simple tenses flaws and typos blunders aren't on the same level in writing - even though they're all errors.

Bush meat!

webhead:
Dumbass, so you have switched from "so, when those great be writers scribbled down to their drafts, they were fraught with common tenses and Grammer errors ?" to "simple tenses flaws and typo blunders aren't on the same level in writing".

you have indirectly confirmed how embarrassingly unsophisticated your brain is.

chameleon!

adeadeyera:
You have an unembarrassingly sophisticated brain, yet you can't retain simple thought patterns without tenses and grammar errors.
Ani se, you're an idiot.
ORDEH!

webhead:
why are shifting the topic?

my Grammer error (which I am proud of) proves everything I've been pointing out to your unlearning mind. not to mention that you have also made other grammer mistakes in your previous post.

don't be a coward and prove all your previous statements to me.