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timpaker: I just dropped a little piece there.... I must confess I got scared reading some poems there.
people get mind ooooo
***Doing sign of the cross***



As for the review/critique of the featured poems.... I'm silently following

you're scared over those amateur pseudo scary scribblings?

anyway that was years ago and i don't do darkside anymore, saw ur own bloody piece, thanks for dropping by

Aliyeous: Ghost mode deactivated: congrats miss glow i rili luv ur up write or soree ur write up...n i can even see my dear princesa also following. I so mch luv readin beautiful write ups sch as dis...2 u glowing scenes n 2 ur oda kinds lyk princesa omolola n co i say kip up d gud work we luv u all

yes oh, dear aliyeous, am here! Always where a good story is brewing

Saw your 'hi' in slickest piece, thank you dear. Now am *nostalgic* cos i miss all my buddies from Taking chances

All this poets that dnt want this thread to hibernate for good, are we having an after party or what?

[quote author=Mynd_44]Are you okay? You need something?[/quote]no

i need creamy yogurt, a warm bed and duvet to cover up. And then a 'Do not disturb' sign written above the closed door.

[quote author=Mynd_44]Okay lemme do that for you a lil[/quote]oh jeez, am not feeling up to that now, got this obscure pain somewhere and am feeling a bit stressed and sleepy


poor me

ayd91: lol, okay. *hands out a magic eraser*, you can use this .
Your personality is what it is, subject of another essay. I just might open a thread on that .

oh please don't, i like to remain in the shadows

and no, you don't need to wear red, just hold tightly to ur heart

well i wasnt moved to tears

[quote author=Mynd_44]Well the info you gave is vague. I can't explain it and I know you won't be more explicit[/quote]just humour me some more sir

firestar: Good morning dear... How are you this cold morning?

she called me dear!
am cool, but not cold, and just trying to keep body and soul together

[quote author=Mynd_44]Whatever that means[/quote]since you're gonna be so uptight, thought I'd seek solace somewhere else


now wish me well


#morning firestar

But... If you're still strung on blood, here's the link to the bloody side of me


www.nairaland.com/146433/lets-get-bloody-rhymed-poems

No way, am now on the light side and trying big big hard to erase the memories and the urge

well, since the poem has been graded already, i guess the chapter is closed? Thanks for the review though


#do i have a dark side personality on nl? I thought it was a happy-go-lucky one

[quote author=Mynd_44]Tell me about it [/quote]its the erratic hormonal-naughty self and my beautiful e-pass time

simply put, am just trying to give a dude somewhere, a run for his time and money

[quote author=Mynd_44]Good morning to you too. So what mischief have you been up to?[/quote]mischief is my middle name

and yes, i have one brewing somewhere already

[quote author=Mynd_44]What am I gonna do with you?[/quote]tis a blank cheque dude




goodmorning all! Isn't it gonna be a lovely day today

[quote author=Mynd_44]Thank you[/quote]for what

Snap out of this now!

[quote author=Mynd_44]But I am effective right?[/quote]

#walks in for defence of my poem#


- let me start with the dark side thingy: why would you think i have the ability to explore dark side in poetry? Did you read any poem of mine where i explored that theme? Anyways, i do have a thread on something like that, but its past and was done quite far ago! And So is my thirst for exploring dark sides

- you also say it ended abruptly? Well, am not one to love lengthy poems, so while i was writing it, i was very conscious of its length so i dnt put off and bore scanning readers. that should be my defence for ending the poem rather abruptly.

- then i instead of I? for crying out loud, its a poem not some English essay! Have you Heard about poetic licence before? Okay, am not trying to say am right, but just that error like that should easily have been over looked, especially by the infamous judge 1 who am sure marked people down because of it

- and finally the lady was very remorseful all tru out the poem, remorse was basically one of the motif of the poem, so i don't know why you feel she wassnt remorseful enough...

[quote author=Mynd_44]You are welcome[/quote]one word to describe you: Taciturn

and It can be annoying at times

Irshittabey: You sure are a funny and hilarious person,I Have been following your posts and I'll say you have a good sense of humour

thank you sir/ma
life already is too serious to still be taken so seriously

[quote author=Mynd_44]I am not a physicist[/quote]well since you know so much about the planets and sun and stars and earth and asteroids and bla bla bla...i just thought so




anyways, thanks for taking us to fp and promptly too, here's a kiss for you

Divepen: chocopearl----2

N.Q
what genre of literature is Everyday

where da heck are my points?

[quote author=Mynd_44]Hello Firestar.

Hi everyone else[/quote]and why is the physist grinning

vent it on the epistle poster

err Mr. legal, some of us are tryn to relax. So we dnt need long epistles at all. try the next room

We are on frontpage already!

Don't i just love mynd?