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There's no senior writer neitger a junior... we 're colleagues!

Following. WELDONE WHITEY

D9ty7: A piece of advice on how to make your story known:
The only way to make your story thread a bustling place is if you update regularly. This way it won't leave d first page of the literature section and more people will see it and if it is good enough they'll comment.
Ask Temitope Daniel, he will tell you how he made it big.

Why always Temitope Daniel? You 're a great writer too aren't u??

Lol. Weldone Marioking m back and better

BTW, D9ty7 una weldone ooh!

So as from tomorrow, update will resume fully, but righy now,

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Lol. Thanks Larry, awaiting more and all the errors so far will be rectified.

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you!!!!! WULLNP!

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please upload the suspence is killing moi.

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ink to my elbow lol.

Thanks for d gestures! Update coming soon...

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ANODA UPDATE COMING SOON TODAY.

A WEEK LATER.

    "Getting more critical, all you need is prayer." Doctor Kate entered into the ward as she finished speaking to Richard and left him to start fighting with his weird thoughts again.

    It was a week already, he had been performing wrongly in the office and would always visit the bar everyday after leaving his place of work to 'wash down his worries'. Were the worries really washed down?

    He'd get back home and sink into the bed and wouldn't wake up until the next day into his worries and agony again. What else could he do to stop these bad imaginations from manifesting? Everything was bad for him and his sister, he always imagined the pains she did pass through every minute as she'd writhe to the right and left of the bed, the new news he just heard was that she now had Jaundice which bad started making her skin and eyes turn yellowish. She also had arthritis, what else didn't she have that might cut her life short?

    He had tured to an overnight drunkard just because of Christiana, he had turned his back against God and even ladies because they might be a source of disturbance to him. What else could he do than to walk out of the hospital to play with his new friend- alcohol.

******

    "Pemisire, are you sure you will work at Hexagon Club and Bar?" Helen asked her as she stood up, dresses in an ankara gown and a pair of slippers.

    "Yes, for the mean time." She replied.

    "Alright, let's go there now because I have to iron the shirt I'll wear to school tomorrow." She took of her slippera and picked up her rubber sandals. Pemisire also stood up and wore one of Helen's sandals near the fan. "Are we set?" Pemisire asked.

    "Sure." Helen smiled and both walked out.

*****

     "I just found a name here, and also a mobile number." Lawrence told his guys.

    "Name? Tell us more boss."

    "Now, I found Helen and ber mobile number. As it was written in the diary, she's likely to be her best friend. She wrote something about Destiny or so.. I can't recollect but Helen is the only one found for now." He explained.

    "That's simple boss, Let's start with Helen." Another guy spoke.

    "So, we will start by calling her mobile number and disguising to be Michael." Lawrence smiled.

    "Michael?" The guys asked.

    "Yes, I also found that name here, she wrote something about that guy that he inspired her into singing, the day she went to the hall with her best friend, Helen. So, from there, they might know each other." He explained.

    "Wao! That's really cool boss." One of them grinned.

    "But what of the voice?" Another asked.

    "That one is small, if she falls and she asks about the voice, we will tell her the phone has problem. And, a place where problem might come from is that if she contacts the guy regularly or if she doesn't even know the guy or they aren't connected." Lawrence expatiated.

    "That's true, let's start from there." They laughed.

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   RICHARD.

    In no time, people will start criticizing me concerning the way I drink. In no time, many people will start criticizing me that I blame God and doubt his existence. Many people don't know that his existence is useless to me, really worthless! She now has jaundice and God is alive, he's not dead, people say he doesn't sleep, neither does he slumber.

    Hmmn! Now I k-n-o-w! He does sleep to some people's problems and wouldn't to some other people. I do say it, I do lay emphasis on it that he is partial! Yes, arthritis, pains, jaundice, yellowish skin and many more. This is too much for her to bear, just unbearable! I wonder how she's been living, holding on to a thin rope that might cut at anytime.

    She cries and shows her sadness, I think Doctors are even getting tired of us. Useless at both work and home, heading to an unknown destination and you tell me God exisits? You tell me he's not partial?

That's a lie!

******

    Helen and Pemisire walked into the room together as Helen shut the door

Yeah! I've really been down since mawnin, I'm sorry I haven't updated, deeply sorry... it's due to my health, you should know!

I pray God give me sound health tomorrow, I'm gonna update tomorrow morning.

TEE'DAN.

b bak with an update... update loading.

marioking: Welldon Oga T-DAN


Come drop something for here naw

I've been down due to ppl's reactions, many ppl aren't showing up and many that 're reading aren't dropping any comment


I'm even kinda sick, lemme try and type something now

My boss! Come drop something na...

tenajtek: Thanks for the update. U r strengthened IJN. settles in to consume d meal.

Amen tenajtek, Thanks for reading.

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PrinceAdepoju: Interesting.

I'm 99.5% sure you've not read this work...

Ziziola: Hmmmm....... I pity christy and pemisire

Trials of life....

Tipiflexy: Am loving d story more n more n am sure Richard wil succor to d existence of God.Tosin Bucknor is a living testimony n she could testify to d glory cos she was a victim yet she survived it.

Hmmn... I pray Christina also survive hers...

seunfavor: Great job T'dan.., this is 'ipadabo Abija'. Sure u undastnd?

Ama Follow u till d end.

Sure na, a b confirm omo youruba


Thanks SFave.

Here at last, though I haven't read... brb

covered d updates, please drop another and please space ur paragraphs


I'm sure this will b great!

following.

acknowledged me? I feel humbled sir.


Following, I'll be back to read but I never knew you'd start dz quick, lemme alert ma thread so that this place can be bombarded.


WELDONE MARIOKING.

Another update coming tonight... vewi soon!


Sorry for d lateness bosses..

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Richard and Stephanie walked into the ward and met Christina in pain as she was treated by Doctor Kate and Doctor Esther. Both walked fastly towards them with widened eyes, wondering what had made her be in severe pain. "Doctors, what's wrong with her?" They chorused.

"I think you should see me in my office." Doctor Kate told him.

He quickly grabbed her hand and checked her pulse and face the Doctors again. "Her rate of breathing is severely bad, talk to me what's happening?" He started weeping as he saw tears in Christie's eyes. The Doctors also looked sad and unhappy with the situation on ground, "just let us meet." Doctor Kate said again and walked out with Doctor Esther, both were sad and downcast. "How are you bestie?" He held her hand again.

She shook her head continuously, trying to tell him she wasn't alright. She was in pain as she writhe to the right and left sides of the bed, weeping along. Her heartbeat had increased rapidly and she had shortness of breath. "I'll be back, let me check in the Doctor. But, crying won't solve the matter, please don't cry." He wiped her tears with his right thumb and broke down in tears again. "I'm sure you will live, I'm sure this is just a test, I'm sure it's just a trial to know if we can withstand this. You will rise again to be greater than who you... who you.. are." He kept crying as he stared into her eyes.

Christina wished to speak too but she couldn't. Her two lips were shaking but her words weren't heard again, Stephanie was crying also, pitying the condition she was in. She wished it could be taken away from her. If she really scrape through death, God really loved her and must have preserved her life for his glory. The room was filled with sadness and tears from them all. "Please stop!" Richard wiped her tears again, tears hadn't stopped rolling down his cheeks then but he couldn't watch Christie cry, even in her condition.


*******

"What's the problem now, Doctor Kate." Richard flung the door open as he entered into the Doctor's office with her. "Don't be broken apart Mr Richard, please sit down." The young lady said as she took off the stethoscope from her neck.

Richard sat quickly. "What's happening?" He asked again, impatiently.

"The problem for now is the shortness of breath, the rate of her heartbeat and painful joints caused by arthritis. What we should start doing is to be prayerful concerning her health so heart failure wouldn't start soon because of too much iron from blood transfusions." She stopped for a while and continued. "We also have to carry out these tests as soon as possible. The Complete blood count ( CBC ), Hemoglobin electrophoresis and Serum creatinine."

Richard placed his head on the table and continued crying. His face was oily already, the home sadness and tears. "Just do anything to save Christina, anything!" He repeated and stood up.

He pulled up his dress to wipe his face before he left the Doctor's office to check on Christiana again, and drove back to his abode- Hexagon Club and Bar to drink.


******

"I'm getting impatient, Jay. He didn't pick up his calls since morning, neither did he call. I think we should go and check on hkm in the hospital." Uche said.

"Do you think Richard is in the hospital? I don't think so." He hissed and squinted his face.

"But at least, let's go and check on him." Uche said and rose up.

Jay hissed. "I just pray this guy won't disturb my night, I have to be in club tonight."

"Let's try, let's look for him and I'm sure he must be there."

******


HEXAGON CLUB AND BAR

"What is your problem? I'm I not... not going to.. pay you?" Richard accused the bartender.

"I just feel you've taken enough sir, please you should now take your leave."

"What.. an insult! What's your.. own.." He spoke and hit his hand on the table before him. "I want Baron!"

Uche and Jay walked into the bar and sighted him at their usual place. They had gone to the hospital and couldn't find him, it was Jay that suggested their search to the bar. "I told you!" He said as he walked in with Uche.

"I never knew he could come here." Uche approached him. "Richard!" He called him as he stood at his front.

"Tope, how are you?" Richard asked as he tried to raise his head up.

"Who's Tope? This guy's completely out of it." Jay hissed and tapped him.

"What's happening? Since when has he been drinking?" Uche asked the bartender.

"For some hours. I was telling him to stop when you came in." The guy replied.

Jay shook his head continuously, pitying him. They paid for his drinks and drew him out of the bar.

*****

I'm deeply sorry for d delay, na ma cousins from PH come waste d life of ma battery, as soon as I charge, I'm gonna update.


Please.

anoda update coming soon....!

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Nice to hav u back Mr Tdan.hop u ve come to off load another wonderful story.missed u.keep flying noting mega.

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