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Literature › Re: No Matter What by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:33pm On Dec 06, 2013
Jhymrod: Wao,great work,weldone. Looking forward τ̲̅ȍ d next story.
Thanks xo much.. U can follow this link to the one I'm currently writing.


www.nairaland.com/1447941/total-love
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:02pm On Dec 06, 2013
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A GUNSHOT WAS HEARD.


••••






Since the incidence of the acid has happened, Daniel had been following Darasimi around the school with the help of one of his room mates. They both sat to discuss ways of saving her from problem. Emmanuel, his room mate brought different ideas of knowing who the people had been trailing her and the ways to deal with them all. They've started going around with camera to record and take pictures as their evidence. Daniel had gone back to the palace too to pick the car that was brought for him by the King in case something will happen.


"Guy, are you this crazy for love?" Emmanuel asked him wondering as he got down from the parked car.


'Sure, but you'll help me a lot..' He uttered.


"Sure now, I've started helping you." Emmanuel replied.


'Not only that, I want you to help me to be sleeping behind her hostel for like a month.' He uttered.


'What! Na me dey date her!' Emmanuel shouted.


"We'll be sleeping in my car, no problem." He replied.


'No.. I still don't want that. Its not ideal, if you die because of her, who told you she won't marry again!' Emmanuel convinced.


"I know but I must still protect her." He replied.


'We both know that the security of the hostel is now tough, if at all anyone wants to catch her, it should be in the afternoon and we'll always follow her.' Emmanuel said.


'But this work will be tiresome. We won't have rest?' Dan laughed.


"Na you wey wan protect now." Emma laughed.



...



It was Monday morning, Darasimi was off to the lecture hall, dressed in a pencil jeans and fitted blouse. She had her handbag on her and was looking beautiful. Everywhere was quiet and people were scanty. The guys got down from the car and drugged her into the car and ran off.


They were behind the hostel as quick as possible and had been following her till they saw what happened. They zoomed off after the car immediately, looking so afraid. "Should we call the police?" Emmanuel asked.


'No..'

'Why not the policemen?' He asked trembling with fear.


" I don't have any number that leads there now! They'll be late sef. You know too, we don't know what they'd have done before those useless policemen arrive! Are those stuffs in the booth?" He shouted reducing his speed so that he won't be suspected.



'Yes. Stop shouting jurh, I'm dead afraid, running after hired killers with just siren radio and bangers.' He shivered.
...



They got her to an uncompleted building as wished and tied her with a rope against a
pillar at the second floor. They got a place
that was very quiet and no one will ever
believe some one was there.
The princess and her friends were already
gathered there also and rounded her up,
staring at her angrily. The boss of the hired
assassins already stood at Dara's from
laughing wickedly, Darasimi's vision was
blurred then and couldn't see properly.



Daniel and Emmanuel were by the bush side. "I guess they want to kill her now!" Emmanuel shivered.



They lighted a banger stick with them and threw if further. The radio siren was also gotten and everything turned out to be as if the policemen were around.



A GUNSHOT WAS HEARD.


It was a banger sound but everyone dismissed immediately and on hearing the siren, they didn't wait but all ran away. Emmanuel was busy recording and taking pictures from where they were so as to use as an evidence for the policemen.



They waited for a little time and could see from where they were hiding that everyone had ran away, they ran up and untied her, straight to the hospital and picked things that can serve as their evidences.



••••



Emmanuel and Daniel were at the reception discussing about all that happened that day.


"But you are rather brave and strong. For us to have followed and use bangers as our gun and dismiss them all. But I'm still eager about something. Do you think the policemen would listen to this?" Emmanuel asked


'Why won't they? We have our evidences. The pictures, video, the handbag of the princess we met at the scene too.' He replied.


"But, we might have died if not for God's mercy, using a banger and trailing hired-killers." Emmanuel said still shivering.


'Its God's mercy. I don't have any policeman's number and before we start describing everything, and before they'd get there the man at her front might have killed her, she might have died if we'd not been following her!' He uttered, his heartbeat still beating at a fast rate.



The Doctor came out to them. Both stood up at him immediately. "Was she drugged?" The Doctor asked.


'Yes ma, she was.' Dan quickly replied.


'Hmmn..' The Doctor sighed.


"Can I see her parents?" She asked.


'You can tell us anything.' Emmanuel said.


'I'm sorry..'


...
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Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:53pm On Dec 06, 2013
Dchiefpriest: ***appears on d tread dancin skelewuu*** yea i don catch upp.hmmm DANIEL my name sake ,gud job boss....ama waitn 4 updation....
I'm ur namesake? Wao.. Welcome, come pick seat beside Hameenat...
Politics › Re: Why Do Whites Love Mandela And Hate Mugabe? by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:44pm On Dec 06, 2013
[quote author=Mynd_44]Cos Mugabe does not want to step down as president. He wants to die there[/quote]Lol... grin
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:25pm On Dec 06, 2013
ollyboy009: heheheeeeee,still watching ur back dude. Darasimi will not die,d gunshot has already confirm dat. Darasimi and her friends will b called and dealt with because d king will soon realise that she is not her daughter.D queen will probably b sentenced.
Twins issue?? i guess only gloria,funke and daniel can exposed dat.
Mistake so farhuh I notice typo errors and incomplete or incorrect sentences at some point. Dats cud av resulted from fast-typing mode. Above all, I say thumb up guy! You are bomb...............****Relaxation mode: expecting DAN while chopping cola******
Hmmmn.... Relax wella, cola? For my thread. Order for suya na.. *winks*
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:21pm On Dec 06, 2013
Hameenat94: dara wont die. D princess nd her frnds will definitely b caught.only Omisola daughter(seun) so she will cum 4rm nowia 2 say d truth.waitin
Someone was shot, on her heart grin, she won't die? gringringringringringrincheesy


C ds Hameenat oh.. Lolz
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:19pm On Dec 06, 2013
mayor10: The gunshot I think should be from the policemen ...that were trailing the kidnappers from skul..but stil here. Dying of suspense
Lol.. Policemen.. My mouth will be closed oh.. I won't disclose anything buh policemen sha...... Hmmn... cool
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 3:28pm On Dec 06, 2013
Gunshot was heard
Tip-toeing into the thread, why are people sadhuh huh huh huh huh Just saw LogDwhiz correcting me, it has been ammended immediately!


Lakeshizu, sad? huh Please don't be.. Updating soon.


I'll attend to the comments of everyone later, lemme start typn but I want you all to check back 5:00pm, I mean it, from 4:55- 5:05pm I'd have updated..


#love u all#
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 12:16pm On Dec 06, 2013
gringringringrin


Please at this juncture, if you've never commented, I need ur comments now.


I want us 2 rub minds together, suggest, discuss before I drop another update by 5:00pm.



1) Did Darasimi die?

2)If she died, do you think when the princess and her friends are discovered, they'll be set free?


3)How do you think the secret behind Ray and Tony being twins will be revealed?


4)What mistake have you noticed so far, please drop it so that I can ammend.


LOVE U ALL, YOU ARE DARLINGS! cool
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 12:11pm On Dec 06, 2013
otunlexy: Fingers crossed
Uncross the fingers now oh... grin
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 12:10pm On Dec 06, 2013
Ozymog: cool He he he he he he he he dis guy don start again.
Oga T.Dan hav U started with Love and Wisdom?
NEXT PLEASE!!!!
Np, I guess you were the one that said I shouldn't start with it now... I want to end this story, it'll soon end...*within a week..*
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 12:07pm On Dec 06, 2013
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'Preg what?' Tomi barged in.


"Pregnant." Tony answered frankly and turned his head towards where she was.


'You've never told me this!' She exclaimed.


"And I've never remembered to.. Just remembering.


"Come and have a seat here madam. Its nothing." Winnie called her.


She sat down beside the psychologist staring at Winnie and Tony.


"So continue with what you're saying, sir." Winnie addressed.


'....Yes, I'm sure she didn't know and even doesn't know I'm still alive. It'll be like a great surprise to meet me hale and hearty. As for Funke and Gloria, they must be dead by now because I know the Queen very well.' He concluded.


"This is awesome." The psychologist said and shook his head.


"We'll be going for now and get back to you later, against what we'll do." Winnie said and stood up.



••••



Deaola's Father was invited to the palace by the King to sort out things. The King was also in support of the investigation but his daughter was with him throughout. Darasimi had been gotten also for further investigation to know why the hired assassins were looking for her.


The King provided adequate support concerning the investigation of the death of Deola. Darasimi was interrogated by the policemen on who she was suspecting concerning the issue of the acid attack. She couldn't mention anyone as she wasn't suspecting anyone.


It came to a stage the whole investigation turned out to be nothing. Hon. Olukayode himself later removed his hands from the case and the school started their work back.



Rachael wasn't pleased about all that happened. She hated Darasimi like ending her life anytime she sees her. She brought up the idea between her friends again that Darasimi should be kidnapped and killed so that they'd have their way.



They invited their normal hired- killers to get Darasimi kidnapped. They scheduled their job to be Wednesday morning, on her way to the lecture hall.


**********



It was Monday morning, Darasimi was off to the lecture hall, dressed in a pencil jeans and fitted blouse. She had her handbag on her and was looking beautiful. Everywhere was quiet and people were scanty. The guys got down from the car and drugged her into the car and ran off.



....



They got her to an uncompleted building as wished and tied her with a rope against a pillar at the second floor. They got a place that was very quiet and no one will ever believe some one was there.


The princess and her friends were already gathered there also and rounded her up, staring at her angrily. The boss of the hired assassins already stood at Dara's from laughing wickedly, Darasimi's vision was blurred then and couldn't see properly.



A GUNSHOT WAS HEARD..



....
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 10:25am On Dec 06, 2013
[quote author=heywhy.kum]#still following.... Till wen are u na updating??[/quote]Soon..


@ Mayor, I go update soon jere..
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:59am On Dec 06, 2013
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The King rose from his throne angrily. "Who's the man that has the guts to get my daughter detained?" He asked shouting.


'Get the car ready, I want to get one or two things, I'll be with you now. The man will face the music!' The king exclaimed and walked into his room angrily.


••••

They got to the police quatres. They met different parents their pleading for their children. Everyone was silent on seeing the King and the Queen there. "Your Majesty" they addressed.


'And who is the head of this place, I want him to come out and see me.' The King shouted.


'Alright you highness.' A sergeant at the bar stammered out and rushed to call the D.P.O. The king and the D.P.O walked to the car while the king was talking to him angrily and commanded that his daughter and her friends to be released. Investigation isn't done that way!


The princess and her friends were released to the King immediately and taken home. The policemen continued their secret investigations.


...


The Doctor and the psychologist were invited but the psychologist brought along a woman that could help them predict things from Tony who's named Winnie. The woman is into writing and reading of stories. She had gained a lot from their and good at predicting and as well guessing. They all got to Tony's house while they went to the balcony upstairs to start their discussions.


The doctor started everything by asking him how much and well he forgets things since the incidence. Finally the job was handed over to Miss Winnie to complete.


"The name of that your friend is?" She asked.


'Raymond.' He replied.


'What are the things you do together?'


"I don't know?" He replied.


'Hmmn.. You can eat, play, hunt, since its in a Kingdom. You can farm, go to the stream. There, you can meet different girls sent to go and fetch........'


"Wait!" He uttered suddenly.


He remembered the day he and Raymond went to the stream and met two girls. He couldn't remember their names but was still thinking on it. "That's true, we go to the stream to look at girls."


They all laughed. 'So which girl exactly have made friend with?'


'Em..' He remembered the day at the supermarket when he heard Damilola. "Damilola!" He voiced.


'That Damilola, she should have friends you know with her, and maybe her scent, and other things.' Winnie said.


'I can't recollect.' He replied.


'Do you still remember the name of your kingdom?'


"Yes.. Rily." He quickly replied.


Winnie brought out her laptop and typed rily to search. There was a map that was brought out that shows how they could get there from exactly where they were to that place. 'I guess once you get here, you'll be able to remember some things.


'No.. I was told by Mr Akinola that I was thrown at the road. I can't possibly go their wh..' "Wait!" He uttered again.


'Haa.. Damilola! She should be the one. I'm remembering..'


'Good. Be fast at that!' Doctor uttered.


'Raymond was in a relationship with a lady, Funke and that lady has a friend, Gloria. Both overheard when Damilola told me she was pregnant.


'Preg what!' Tomi barged in.


...
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:57am On Dec 06, 2013
prettycee: suspense filled. keep up d good work
Fenx pretty..
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:57am On Dec 06, 2013
kingphilip: So the doctor neva still pick the call?abeg make him pick am quick quick make we knw wetin dem wan yarn
Lol.. Dem don pick am oh.. Sha wait..
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:18am On Dec 06, 2013
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The princess and her friends were still in school, vexing and annoyed about their Bleep-up. Stella stood up when everything was so quiet and boring to talk to them all. "I don't know why you all are quiet as a graveyard. Is it because it wasn't Darasimi or because Deola died. Cheer up babes." She encouraged.


"In one word, we are *murderers*" The princess said and gave a heavy exhalation.


'No, we didn't carry out the job ourselves so we aren't the murderers and this is not the end. That Darasimi thinks she's smart, we must still dear with her!' Stella shouted



'After wasting a soul?' Princess asked wondering.


"Please jare..." Rachael curt in. "Please, forget about the issue of soul. We all have our various destinies. That's what her destiny is all about, we didn't kill her. Its annoying me how you guys are doing. If you are ready for us to strike a deal, call me. I'm logging into Nairaland to read some literature series." She uttered and picked her phone angrily.


'We must at least pity the girl that loosed her life. I'm afraid of something, we all know that this girl's father is stinkingly rich and I think....'


'She's the only child, don't think!' Beatrice completed.


'Can it be traced to us?' Rachael wondered.


"You all, let's just get those guys now and tell them they did a wrong job. I've been told she went home this afternoon with Dan. She should be trailed but this time around I want us to change the technique." Rachael dropped her phone.



'Let's conclude this first!' Princess exclaimed.



SUNDAY MORNING, 7:15 AM...



Honourable Olukayode arrived with policemen into the school and sent them around the school, especially to the hostel to arrest everyone their. All the girls in the hostel were arrested and taken to prison, investigation commenced.



••••


Tony and his wife was in the living room watching a program, not quite long after, the program was ended and news started about THE RILY KINGDOM. As Tony heard the name of that Kingdom he stood up immediately and stared at the television set. "Rily" he kept repeating the name.


'Is anything the matter?'


"No.." He replied and smiled, took his seat back but still worried.


One of his daughter walked downstairs with a Nokia booklet and sat beside her mother. The magazine contained the pictures of all the phone Nokia has made. The continued checking it and was smiling while Tony was still watching the news. It was after some minutes the news ended he could notice things around him. He stood up and walked to his wife and daughter to watch the phones they were watching.


He was smiling and pointing at different phones. Soon, they got to a point with the heading "OLD MADE PHONES". The continued checking it and were laughing at the phones people were using then, suddenly Tony sighted Nokia C1. "This phone." He tapped the magazine and stood upright.


He started remembering how Raymond brought it to him. "Raymond!" He exclaimed suddenly.


The wife and daughter were staring at him and dropped the magazine.


'Raymond brought that phone to me and told me that the King said its for the two of us, but I can't remember where exactly I was that day.' He uttered.


'You, go to your room.' Funmi said to her daughter and she left.


'Who is Raymond and who was he when you were together?' Funmi asked.


"My best friend, we do things together." He replied.


'I think this is the best time to call my friend. That guy that I said he's a Doctor, he should bring along a psychologist so that they'll help us from this that you just remembered.' She said and brought out her phone to call them.


...
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:14am On Dec 06, 2013
mayor10: Xo when you go drop d oda parts of d story
Stated, shey mom'c sha no hala 4 u again sha.. grin
Ozymog: Kai C as T.Dan chuk me suspense dis guy is a badt Guy. Ooohh boy U goodt.

Oya come cantinue.........
Me? Badt? *sad*. Thanks Boss! 4 following...





U guys are the best! I c u all!
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:11am On Dec 06, 2013
miss2895: Nice 1. We ar already waitin 4 more ooo
8:30am.. Coming soon miss, u are dah best!


abimbs: T dan knw worry u re going forward to ur promise land by God grace. Gud work keep it up cuz ur future is bright.
Sure? Amen thanks bro! U are great!
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:08am On Dec 06, 2013
Nancydearie: What a piece of work,u are a good writer,keep it up.May GOD continue to inspire u.
Amen sis. Thank you.. U are dah best!



Hameenat94: Na so Dara 4 die?
Abi na, thank God, me 2 fear on seeing it.. cheesy
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:02am On Dec 06, 2013
benibank: Suspense suspense!
Shey dt 1 na suspense ni.. Bro u are good.. Dnt leeme on ds thread oh, updating soon...
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 7:55am On Dec 06, 2013
Can't believe I just woke up.. Sowie guys for keeping u waiting. U are all darlings! I'll drop an update by 8:30pm anoda by 9..


Sowie no b pm oh.. 8:30am grin

Don't fear.. grin
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 6:11pm On Dec 05, 2013
mayor10: Chairman na..abeg no let suspense kil me 4 here o.mum'c don dey hala 4me o.
I'm sorry man! Shey mom'c don c u bayi?
Literature › Re: The Murder Case- A short story by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:06pm On Dec 05, 2013
D9ty7: Just saw this story now. It promises to be mind blowin.
Oga mind, you never call me say u wan start reading ds oh.. *crying*

Oya ma boss, dey fire on, I carry petrol behind u... grin.. Following gently.
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:56pm On Dec 05, 2013
I need more of ur comments pals...

I c u jare @ princess B1, I feel u!


Abbey, na u sabi! grin
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:57pm On Dec 05, 2013
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"Who could that be?" Gloria and Funke were startled, staring at each other.


'Did you lock the door?' Funke asked very scared.


'No, when you came in, the happiness I used to escort you in made me forget you've arrived.' She replied quietly.


"Huh?"


'Yeah.' She replied quietly.


They heard people laughing outside. "Mum, come and open the door for us oh!" Daniel shouted.


He opened the door and noticed it was opened. He and Darasimi walked inside laughing heartily.


Gloria and Funke couldn't close their mouths and was staring at each other closely.

"Mum!" Daniel shouted.


She faced him at once. "What just happened?" She stammered out.


Daniel and Darasimi laughed out suddenly and shook each other.


'Mum, I've gotten home and didn't meet you so Dan and I decided to come here. We've been there for a while so we heard everything you've been saying. I...' She started laughing.


The both continued laughing. "I did as if the Queen was at the door." She concluded.


They continued laughing. Funke and Gloria couldn't take off their eyes from each opther, they were staring at each other non-stop and couldn't say anything.


"Em.. I can't just utter a word now. Why did you come home?" Funke asked pretending to be angry.


'Some people attacked my room, searching for me last night and I've gone for vigil then, the girl they met on my bed was washed with a bottle of dangerous chemical, maybe acid.' She uttered.


"What!" Gloria stood up.


'Yes mum.. This is serious.' Daniel said.


"What of that girl now?" Funke stood up too and questioned.


'She died this afternoon.' Darasimi changed her face, looking extremely sad.


'What!' Gloria shouted.


'Yes ooh. Its so painful, so I had to leave school, we can't tell the people trailing me. The police has been involved because that girl's parents are extremely rich.


'So despite all this, you have time to scare us!' Funke shouted.


"I suggested that. We came home so taciturn, I decided to at least make us laugh and happy." Daniel said.


'Oh my God! So that girl died?' Gloria sat down suddenly.


'Yes mum. I guess she should stay here for the main time or go else where, they might be searching for her.' He uttered.


'Heeeeey.. I'm fed up!' Funke uttered.


THE QUEEN? Gloria asked.



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Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:13pm On Dec 05, 2013
ollyboy009: See gobe ooooo.........How com? hop its not d queen sha!. Abeg Dan u better stop dis suspense and update quickly. Sorry I ddnt comment for some time nw,just kinda busy. Thumb up bro,still watching ur back.
Hameenat94: Hmmmmmm.ki lo ku ba yi?
[quote author=ollyboy009]I don talk say 5 grin, don't worry. I'm sorry 4 d suspense bt its necessary, without it a story is useless...
Literature › Re: <<THE UNDERCOVER AGENT¤¤Part 1 & 2>> by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:59pm On Dec 05, 2013
D9ty7: Thanks boss. Come sit on the high table where you have access to hotdog and a bottle of vodka.
Straight there.. Welcome oh LogoDwhiz... *winks*
Literature › Re: <<THE UNDERCOVER AGENT¤¤Part 1 & 2>> by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:49pm On Dec 05, 2013
1st prsn 2 comment ere! I'm following! #front seat tinz... Pop corn da bayi?
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 2:09pm On Dec 05, 2013
otunlexy: No...guy if dey sack me for my office,I go hold u responsible ooo...wen is d story gonna end nw...*md arrives**sneeks fone unda ma locker**checking for more updates*
Haa.. No make him sack u oh.. I'll update soon.. Let's c by 5:00pm sha.. grin
Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 2:08pm On Dec 05, 2013
kingphilip: present sir ride on boss wit ur gr8 work
Hmmn.... Longest tym. Fenk u ma #Boss!
Literature › Re: ~the Game~ by TemitopeDaniel(m): 2:04pm On Dec 05, 2013
Oga Abbey.. Where yu dey naw.. Kilode? Come and update, I'm falling in love with this piece!...

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