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yungeez:
Finally!!, Thanks 4 d update bro, bt i dnt think i would survive till d nxt update cos d suspense is killing me. who come dey tap darous 4 back nah, u sure say nor b one of those dagger boys, TBM, u wan kill person wit high BP

lolz. Thanx 4 being loyal

sparrow001:
good write up kudos

@sparrow001, are u d one plaigiarising her story? Or why would u b quoting the whole update?

stephenGee12:
Hesss. Theblessedman. I dash u my thunder. Abegi I wicked oo. Infact take three lightening untop am take do wash down. My guy nothing do you. I dey I ur back like pikin wey him mama tie for back with wrapper. But if kasala go bursna u and shango go remain for front while I go go gather boys from area

in olamide's voice. 'you know say I no be gbaroof, and I no like awoof, emi o waye maya, set the roof on fire?...... Bro u are wonderful. I hereby donate my grandpa's left kidney for u free of charge. Go sell am an keep the change..

Afz9095:
Hi TheBlessedMan, i have Been following this story since when you started it, and to be sincere you are a terrific writer and if i don't commend you i'll be an ingrate. More ink to your pen.
On the issue of the thunder you owe us, we are greatful and to show our appreciation we will all give you 1/2 thunder each, Hope you will also accept it in good faith ?

@bolded, which area is 'GOOD FAITH'? Here in Nija or pakistan? Just send me the address

mexzzy47:
Nice one blessedman keep it up.....

thanx boss. U are mouthed

PRINXWHYTE:
shey u dey whyne me ni

updated bado nla

Baccoboy:
Yeah bro, you owe 'em thunder, its my first time of commenting.. You owe me nothing.

just another evidence to proof that shango na nice guy...chisos! First comment after 94 pages? Chai! Pure wickedness that deserves thunder....anyway welcom to the commentaryHOOD bro. Welcome

yousooph:
thunder accepted. sha update now now

updated bro. Thanx 4 staying tuned

76. COUNTLESS


Jessica and I was totally spooked at the sight of the Barman panting slowly infront of us.

"China! Whats the defination of this rubbish?.....what If I was busy with my customer, is that how you will barge in here and disturb us?" Jessica lashed out at the dazed barman.
He nodded his head apologetically at her and shifted his gaze towards me

"bro, no vex abeg" He said rubbing his palms together "na you ah dey find"

"Me? Why? Whats the matter?" I queried with a slight tone of worry

"not a big issue bro. The 1k wey you drop on the counter, shey you dash me ni abi you give me?"

I was amused at his dumbness but Jessica only hissed and sat on the bed fuming with anger

"so na because of money you come inside dey run like an headless chicken? China you be Ewu?" Jessica smirked at him again and I can't help but grin at the awkward situation

"Jessy, no abuse me o, what is wrong with wanting to know if I should spend the money or not? Mind your own o!" He warned playfully

"taar!! Abeg! Meshior nu! Danboro ba! Na money go kill you...can't you just wait for him to come outside?...or no be your desk he go pass when he finish?...mugu!" Jessica fired back

"easy there tigeress, take it easy with him.....Jessy...." I was still saying when she cuts in

"easy with him? Hehehehehe, Says the guy that just walked inside some minutes ago and started insulting an innocent lady." Jessy simpered at me

"oh! About that" I joined her on the bed and pulled her into my arms "am sorry bae! Deeply sorry....please accept my apology bae."

"hmmm....ok, but apology will only be fully acepted if you can make a promise to me."

"ok....feel free to be my guest!" I cuddled her brests tightly and she let out a gentle moan

"only if you promise to fork me harder than the way you forked me last night...." she said with an intimidating look

"hun..hum..hum." The barman did a throat clearing tone to notify us of his presence in the room. I reached for my wallet and gave him additional 1k

"bro....thankz alot o!" He was smiling broadly. "bro anything wey you need! Ah go help you get am....if you wan fork Rihanna, or Alicia keys, just tell me ah go help you arrange am! Bro you too much!". He opened the door and smiled feraly at us. "bro am very serious o, if you need Alicia keys number, ah go help...."

"just close the door and get out! Idiot, not only Alicia keys, na Alicia padlock you go find....mumu!" Jessica lamented again probably feeling irritated at the repungant attitude of the barman

He tongued out at her and slam the door shut

"when did you accept a friend request from jealousy?" I asked teasingly when I saw the daunting looks in Jessy's face

"jealousy? jealous of who?...you or your tiny prick?" She let out a mischievious smile and placed her right palm on my chest "hansom, there's nothing to be jealous of, because If you go and fork Rihanna, I'll also go and fork Chris brown...you see, tit for tat...."

"hmm, but just like you told China or whats his name?, no be only Chris brown, na Chris Black you go fork......"

Forgetting my vow of 'No more Jessica', I knelt down and pushed her back so she was now lying on the bed "abeg, spread your Rihanna pvssy very well, make my Nija-made Chris brown d!ck kon fvck elasticity outta yah hole." With that statement, we commenced on another Night of Condomless Sex.(N.C.S)

***

A loud knock on the door woke me up from my dreamless sleep. I was very exhausted after so many rounds of rigorous sex with Jessica. We were both lying nakèd on the bed. The knock landed again on the door albeit slightly louder this time around. I reached for my phone to check the time. The phone was on silent mode and 32missed calls was on it already. 13 from Joke, 3 from Doris, 10 from Adedoyin, 4 from Chioma and the remaining 2 was from an unsaved number. I checked the time and It was the square of five past the hour of 2 plus 1. In simpler terms, 03:25am

Who could be knocking the door at this ungawdly hour? Could it be the bar man?

To confirm my suspicion, the knock landed again followed by a gentle whisper
"please, quickly open the door, na me China, bar man."
Confirming who it was, I rose up and wore my cloths. I glanced at Jessica who was still enjoying her sleep nak3dly. I pulled the blanket over her and walk towards the door and gently open it

"what do you want this time again?" I queried impatiently

"bro, no loud am o, some guys dey for bar right now, they are looking for you." He stated in an audible whisper that got me feeling nervous immediately

"looking for me? On top wetin?"

"ah no know o, they were 4 in numbers sha. They say they just want to tell you something very important, but I told them you don commot for here since yesterday when I mistakenly saw the dagger inside one of their hand."

"dagger!" I exclaimed tensely "how do they look like?"

"just 3 of them are slim but all tall....bro maybe you should commot for here now fast fast". He adviced plainly with a concerned tone

"go where? Ah no fit see cab by this time nau, and am not so familiar with this place"

"bro am only doing this because I am feeling indebted to you of your kindness. Your 2k helped me to cover a part of my debts yesterday, please leave now because those guys might later find you here. They are inside the bar lounge drinking right now as I'm talking. You can take the back exit and leave." He headed towards the door

"thanks buddy...you've really tried. I'll leave once I figure out something". I stated worriedly and he nodded and went out after closing the door

I leaned on the closed door and began to ponder on whats been happening to me since I set foot inside this city.

Have been robbed twice, narrowly excape getting beaten by those hooligans, and the one that even pained me pass na the way I fell for that Favour or whatever her name's trick.
The only two good things that came out of my visit here were the death jinx with Adedoyin that was broken and the good sex have been having with Jessica. Apart from those two, nothing else! Ah gawd of thunder, whats going on? Ehn? I was even beaten by my own very close friend! Eh? Jide! beat me? Chai, ah don suffer!

Yes speaking of Jide, how did he even know this place as much as I do? How? (thinking....thinking......) Oh! Maybe a lucky hunch led him here or.....or he's been monitoring me around! But could Jide really be following me discreetly? What could be his aim for doing that? And again, if he truly was here and have really seen me here on friday, why didn't he attacked me downrightly when he came inside yesterday morning? Why did he believed my lie of going to church? Why? I think there's more to it than meets the eyes.

Jessica rolled to the right side of the bed and embarked on another journey of sleep

'Where will Jide even be by now? Home I guess. Probably sleeping alone in the room that was meant for the two of us. I'm......'

"why aren't you sleeping?" Jessy's voice interrupted my thoughts. "You are even dressed up?" She rosed up from the bed and walked nak3dly towards me

"um, yeah, I needed to be somewhere very early so I was waiting patiently for you to wake up, so I can pay you and leave very early." I picked my phone and transferred 10k into her account

"thats very sweet of you." She gave me a peck and her phone number. After saving it, I opened the door and peeped into the hallway, seeing it empty, I dashed out and headed for the back exit

***

It was cold outside and after waiting fruitlessly for 20mins at a T-junction for a cab or bike, I began to trek very fast back to Mr Ifa's house with the optimism of seeing one along the tarred road.

Now very far away from the brothel, I saw someone walking ahead of me on the same pace as I am on the same route. Glad that I finally saw someone to accompany me on this cold Sunday morning, I increased my steps with the aim of catching up with him

Few meters between us, the person never looked back, he was so engrossed in his threading that he didn't notice that someone was coming behind him, or perhaps he noticed but was just ignoring it. Feeling that he might not be a fun person to walk with, I slowly reduced my steps and continued the trek at my own convinient pace

He was about to round the C-corner ahead when a cab's headlight aproaching from behind us illuminated the road

"what! Who am I seeing? Jide!" I cried out silently in shock when the headlight shone on the man ahead of me

His cloths, stature and complexion all came into view. An earpice was stucked inside his ears as he walked on.
Everything about his appearance screamed Jide. To further confirm it, I dialed his number on my phone. It rang and I watched him keenly from my vantage as he ignored it.

I began to think. 'what is he doing outside at this time? Was he coming from the brothel also? This guy is really scheming something for me.'

He turned away from the road that leads to Mr Ifa's house and changed direction towards another narrow but also tarred road

'where could he be going? Should I call him? Or just let him continue walking to see where exactly he's headed?'

After 2mins of walking deliberation with my brain, I concluded on the latter and slinked after him for some miles until suddenly he stopped and brought out his phone to receive a call

Scared that he might turn around and see me, I quickly ducked beside a big container beside the road and continue watching him from there. My heart was pounding heavily

He ended the call and resumed walking. I was prepared to get out of my hide out when I felt a gentle tap on my shoulder

'WHAT THA HELL!' I screamed barely audible to call attention.


T.B.C. Guys I apologise for the delay in updates. Have just been very busy this week. A close friend of mine gave birth to another version of Chumzypinky, Pamelb and Matilda last week. Today wednesday is the Naming ceremony. I'll update before or after the party. Thanx for understanding or overstanding. Never forget, 'I OWE YOU ALL A THUNDER

ernecity:
Still waiting oh

bro, thanx. Updating now

Guys, please only Gawd can help me to beg you for my absence.... abeg no vex 4 me yet and I pray may gawd refuse to grant u the strenght of vexing.

But I'll definitely update this night.

The funniest thing is, I already typed the update this night, but was about to proof-read it without saving it when the PHCN suddenly brought the light. I dropped my phone on the cushion excitedly to go and do change over from Gen to PHCN but unfortunately, my phone was off when I got back to it. I think the ba3 must have shaken from the effect of how I dropped it on the cushion.

I begin a new typing now. Thanx guys, I owe you all my.......my.... Lets just agree that I OWE YOU all a Thunder each.

cyber5:
It's my BIRTHDAY

HBD to you MyMayMate.(M.M.M) wullnpp. Amen

gtin:
My question is TBM how soon is ur own soon? This is the 2nd day oh

bro pls b patient with me. Please...

ernecity:
Theblessedman xo no update today bah.....

bro no vex. Ah go update soon bro. Just been busy since morning. Thanx

TemiGURL:
TBM any update for today? Please!

very soon dear. Stay tuned

yungeez:
shit!!... hope its nt wat m thinking ooo, cos i go f person ooo, hope say nor b jide go arrange favour, still go arrange those... make i nor talk, nor b me b Op, make TBM do d talking, bt if say nah true, nah me go personally arrange jide after shango don use thunder scatter him body, cos frnd wen fit do frnd dat 1 nor b frnd, dat guy go fit keel person... oyah nah boss come update as e dey hot.
#OluwaAndYungeezBodyDonDeyHot.
#OluwaAndYungeezIsNowCategoricallyInvolved.

Happy Sunday All
Shoutout 2 queenitee #Swthrt

lolz! Happy sunday to u too bro....you are spiritually combined with blessing.!

yungeez:
shit!!... hope its nt wat m thinking ooo, cos i go f person ooo, hope say nor b jide go arrange favour, still go arrange those... make i nor talk, nor b me b Op, make TBM do d talking, bt if say nah true, nah me go personally arrange jide after shango don use thunder scatter him body, cos frnd wen fit do frnd dat 1 nor b frnd, dat guy go fit keel person... oyah nah boss come update as e dey hot.
#OluwaAndYungeezBodyDonDeyHot.
#OluwaAndYungeezIsNowCategoricallyInvolved.

Happy Sunday All
Shoutout 2 queenitee #Swthrt

lolz! Happy sunday to u too bro....you are spiritually combined with blessing!

manuelFORBES:
Mhen! Diz last update dope gan o... Jide! Fvk up man!

Tbm KeepItUp

thankx bro. Yewande1234, eyes on u ooo! Weldone

rosebuzz:
So, so interesting Jide is d betrayer

how cud u be so sure babe?

wagazala:
TheBlessedMAN no be small work you dey do..thumbs up sir, may shango continue to fire those engines from which the inspiration and will to write comes from.
Daurous na smelly guy, konji no gree am get sense...feel Jide has been up to no good. It's either Jide or Favor who barged in, but then that means he's been played again.

thanx bro......u are sighted...thanx bro 4 d compliment

rattyo3:
Let me guess, the person that barged in was Jide or Favour.
If its Jide you're doomed....
If its Favour, you'll get your money back and info about those that send her....



Looking forward to know the person that barged in...

me self is looking forward to know the person o!

jibs4lv:
more reasons why i dnt dout my instinct ! jide is a monster.

what a nice instinct.... Its very rare though... So can u tell us using ur instincts when Buhari ll return to naija? Or when Nepa go giv us light in my area?

gtin:
Nice update TheBlessedMAN u and suspense be like 5 & 6

lol.... Or 7and8

bossy512:
Well done TheBlessedMAN, i think there is more to Jide issue, may b Darous problems is from Jide.

thanx bae, for always dropin comments. U are awesome

Eniqurl:
Have been following this story from the beginning and I must say u are a very good writer but Darous is getting me vexed already abeg dash him small sense.

lolz! U want me to play Gawd on him?...... alwite...its done!

Eniqurl(f) I saw u viewing....wana be the FTC? Never saw your comment before on this humble thread of mine,

75. COUNTLESS

I couldn't see clearly inside the darkness but I managed to get myself up. I staggered backwards and stumbled on the bed

The party at the nearby compound was still going on with DJ Huntsman doing what he knows how to do best thereby rendering it practically impossible for anyone to know whats going on inside our room

A hand dragged me back on my feet by holding the rumpled collar of my shirt and dealt me another blow on my right cheeks. I winced and groaned in total pain and collapsed on the bed again.

"you bastarrd! How could you?.....how could you do that to me?" cried a familiar voice. It was Jide's voice

I groaned deeply and rose up again, still trying to adjust my eyes into the darkness and trying to locate where he was standing

I saw him when he was about to rush at me and thanks to my active reflexes, I quickly stepped aside thereby causing him to fall on the bed

I hurriedly pounced on him before he could turn around and tamped him with all my power and strenght on the bed

"Jide!....." I tried catching my breath "why? What did I do? Whats wrong with you?" He was trying desperately to wriggle himself out of my firm grip on him but I managed to restrain him from doing so "Are...you under a....spell?"

"let me go and...you will see if am under a spell or not, you this backbitter!". He said with muffled tone

"what! Me? A backbitter?......" I was still pondering on his words when he suddenly used his back heel to knock me from behind and that made me lose my grip on him as he hurled me over on the bed and pounced on me.

"I swear, you are so dead today!....." He declared with an angry tone and landed a blow on my stomach. The pain was so severe to the extent that I was praying for death

He started slapping my face vigorously and I was doing a very poor job at ducking it. My strenght was gradually fading away due to the effects of the alcohol and the punches I received ealier from him

This went on for what seems like eternity but it was less than 7secs in reality before the door suddenly flew open and Mr Ifa rushed inside and switched on the light before he ran towards the bed and pulled Jide away

I rolled down to the floor in pains and relaxed to regain my strenght

"let me kill that guy! Just let me kill him!!" I heard Jide voiced out with contempt after Mr Ifa had sucessfully pulled him away from me

"wo bi arakunrin (look here young man), you won't kill eachother in my house! Not in this house! I didn't use a human blood when building my house and am not gonna let you idiots paint it red with your stupidity!" Mr Ifa thundered with an angry tone

I stood up and saw that Bukky and her Mum was also inside the room. Their faces was laced with concern and worries

"Ji....de....what did I do? Why do you suddenly want to kill me? We are suppose to be br...."

"brothers right?" He curts in and tried to accost me but Mr Ifa held him back "tell that to the brother you lied to, and the one who nearly died because of your flirty mouth!"

"what! Lied to you? About what Jide!" I said with a raised voice of confusion

"you claim to be in church for vigil at midnight! But instead you bastarrd son of a thousand fathers was busy fvcking that b!tch! Favour! at the hotel!".

oh! Sh!t! Am damned! Its all about Favour

"Darous you are a devil! And a lying one for that matter!.....listen carefully! This is far from over....one of us is going to die this night unless I don't meet you here!". He declared furiously and stormed outside

"Damilare, pele pele o (meaning- Damilare, take it easy o)." Bukky's Mum stated in the local dialect and left the room with her daughter leaving only Mr Ifa with me

"Omo, (son)". Mr Ifa spoke gently after some minutes of silence. "you have to leave the house for this night o, maybe you should go and stay at my friends house at Imale, we will settle everything in the morning when your friend has calm down."

Mr Ifa escorted me out of the house to the main road where I board a late night bike that was heading to Imale

'Gawd I fvcked up. How could I have kept such a secret from him and expect him not to find out later? Darous you didn't fvck only Up, you fvcked every direction, Up, down, left, right, even middle. I should have explained to him'

This were the guilty thoughts that keeps popping into my brain as the Bike man approach Imale

'but wait, how did he even know that I already met Favour? I didn't tell him, then how did he found out? Or Jessica? Yes Jessica! That twathole must have told him while I was busy with at the party! Gawd this girl is so dead tonight!

I need to see her this night cos she already told me yestday that she only does night work and I don't have her number. Tonight is my best chance at seeing her before I go back to Abeokuta tomorrow Sunday

"oga, please can you take me to Nitel this night?" I asked the bikeman. He refused at first but when I told him that I will tripple the payment, he agreed and made a U-turn towards the direction of the brothel

****

"barman please, Is Jessica free?" I asked the barman after searching for Jessica among the half claded ladies sitting at the bar area but couldn't find her.

"which of the Jessicas?" the barman responded still busy counting some money in his hands

"the one that couldn't keep her mouth shut!" I wanted to say that but I refrained myself from acting rashly and blow things out of proportion.

"um...um.....Jessica.....,..Jenny's Mum...Jenny's Mum".

"ok....I'll check on her for you when am through counting all this money....". He heard me grumbled and he quickly added still not taking his eyes off the money. "or you can check her in room 15, maybe she's through with her last customer."

I dropped a 1k note on his desk and headed towards room 15

Half the way, a dark and very fat lady was standing at the entrance of her own room and was winking at me.

"hey handsome, come and let me fvck you well well." She said seductively pulling her thongs aside and thereby revealing her dark pvssy. I looked at her scornfully, she reminds me alot about Beauty and Pretty, those two fat distant cousins of the devil and how I suffered at their hands. I just hissed and made to continue walking away but she pulled me back and repeated the same statement.

Feeling irritated, I leaned over to her and placed my mouth beside her ear

"why don't you go and fvck your ancestors! You this fat slob!" I declared in an audible whisper and disengage her hand from my cloth and continued my walk without looking back.

I got to room 15 and landed a knock on the door

"come in if you have a d!ck and money!" came the reply from inside by Jessica.

I stepped inside and locked the door. She smile excitedly when she saw that it was me and rose up from the bed.

"Hey my handso......"

"don't you dare handsome me atall." She was totally shocked at my effontery. "Jessica, apart from keeping every size of d!ck inside your pvssy, what else can you keep? Apparently nothing!, because your mouth is equally loosed like your public pvssy!" I lashed out angrily at her and a confused look erupted on her face

"what....whats the meaning of this? What did I do to warrant this kind of insult from you?"

"seriously? You asking me that? what didn't you do? Tell me? After I winked for 40day and 40nights to stop you from blabbing about my presence here yesterday to my friend you still went ahead to spread the word as if you are on some kind of evangelism?....Keep a secret you no fit...na only d!ck you......"

"stop it!..." She cuts in angrily "what is the meaning of this nonsense? How can you come in here and start accusing me of what I didn't do? Did your friend told you I told him anything atall?"

"will you just stop the pretence? If you didn't tell him, who else did? Who else knew about my visit here?"

"its like you are dumber than I think. Thank gawd my friend was there too, let me call her to come and bear me witness and you will see how foolish you are." She hissed and pick up her phone. I watched and listened keenly while she spoke to her friend and the door opened barely a minute after the call. The same lady that accompanied her to the party came inside and testified to it that Jessica didn't even utter a single word to Jide after I left the table.

"then how did he know that I was here yestday?" I asked feeling totally confused

"ah no know o. I was even suprised when you started winking at me, because your friend was even here yesterday night before you came into my room."
I was busy gathering the pieces of her words when her last statement stung my brain

"what! Jide was here? Yesterday?" I moved closer to her and stared at her face eagerly waiting for her response

"don't tell me you didn't know....I thought...."

"thats a lie! That can never be! Never! Maybe your eyes was seeing double...cos Jide doesn't even know this place atall...atall!"

"I don't know how he got here o, I thought you came here together when I saw you with him at the party which was why I wanted to talk about Favour before you started winking at me."

I was lost in thoughts for some minutes before I spoke again

"tell me, which type of cloth was he putting on?"

"erm.....I think a red polo shirt...and erm...a black pant trousers...thats what he was wearing yesterday". She stated confidently

Jessica was right, he was wearing that same cloths when I saw him came inside the room in the morning after I got home. I thought he must have slept off while watching film in the sitting room which was why I didn't ask him anything. I remembered that I passed through the back terrace of the house in the morning which explains why I couldn't ascertain wether Jide was in the sitting room or not

'But what could Jide be doing here at the brothel? How did he even know this place? Where did he got the money that he used to board a cab down here all the way from Mr Ifa's house?'.

This were the questions that kept banging in my head before someone barged inside Jessica's room panting heavily.


T.B.C.

Arnoldo:
Weldone theblessedman.

thanx bro. I app ur comment

StephanieElla24:
I no fit laff Hahahahhahaahahah
weldone bro

thankz dear... U are the best