All those who left guest mode just to comment, I thank you. Please kindly go and vote for the writer. Old commenters if you havnet voted for her, please do so before 8pm on sunday. Yes, I'm the self appointed thread prefect.

Weldone T. Dan. This is your best yet! I'm not talking about the story. I'm talking about your composition and grammar with minimal errors. I knew you could do it. Please keep it up. Nice story by the way. Thanks.

https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every

That's the link. I hope I got it right. Let's vote her to victory!

Hello my fellow readers. Please it isn't enough to just thank her for this great piece of work, let's encourage and support her by voting for her. She never fails to keep us entertained by posting everyday. We can't pay her bt d least we can do is help her get paid. Dis is all we can do 4 her. At least let's be able to boast that we r her true fans by helping her get to the top. It will cost u nothing. I've already voted for her. Do yours 2day. Thanks.

AudreyTimms

TemitopeDaniel: Learning never ends, I've learnt more today. Thanks so much ThePatriot, I really appreciate this. I'll ammend all ASAP. Btw, thanks for joining this family, u 're loved!!

Tee..

. I heaved a sigh of relief when I read this. Tanx 4 accepting d criticism in gud faith. Nw I can enjoy following the story with a free mind. Glad 2 b here.

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLEASE O!

Lovers of T. Dan, please no one shud beef me cos I came here to say my mind and point out sum tins 2d writer.
I left guest mode jst bcs of him.

T. Dan, no doubt ur stories r interesting and captivating and u r very talented in bringing stories to life bt ur grammar and composition aren't doing anything 4me.

Some tyms wen I read ur stories, I'm lyk WTF! I can't evn differentiate wen one of ur characters is having a thought or talking out loud. Pls make use of italics 4d thoughts or bold them or sumtin.

Then ur composition isn't working 4me. While I understand rushing to write 2 entertain ur readers, I'd prefer u take ur tym 2 edit ur story b4 posting. Sumtyms d names r mixed up. Sumtyms I dnt evn get wat u r writing until I read it again and re-compose it in my head. I min y serve bread and tea wen u can take ur tym 2 cuk and serve delicious fried rice and chicken?

Please don't ask me 2 giv u examples cos it wud b 2 much 4me 2 write out. Bt one example is-
'He gave her a scary look'.

U r fond of using dis wen itsnt called 4 in d situation. There r many kind of looks dt wud fit perfectly in dose instances.

I cud go on and on bt I hv 2 stp here. I hpe what I call CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM wud b taken in gud faith. Some readers MIGHT nt get it bt being in the literary society, one jst can't help bt notice dese tins.

I luv ur talent and hw u input researches or personal experience into ur work. Kip it up!

Tanx