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Zeus_Ayo: **in rybaks voice** feed me more!!!*john cena comes out and rybak runs away. Like a cat with his tail between his legs. |
Timothy3113: haha dey are also food now. Compliment ha now she can cook something. What of your girlfriend only God knows wheather she can even boil wateri don't have maybe you can borrow me one. |
Timothy3113: Pls update i av been following thes thread for a long timeummmmm yargarh |
spaghetti and indomie is all your school mum can cook... Her hubby don suffer o. |
Una done enter one chance (lol) |
didn't say you'r lazy. |
Hey my critism is for you to get better. I am(was) a science student, but i dare blow my trumpet that i can write. But when i get story conjured in my head; i start thinking 'bout programming (no be my fault.) but you on the other hand. U've got good story. True.... But you are like a... Umm.. A waiter no a cook! You cook good food only to serve it on a dirty plate! Intruded! intruded!! And more intruded!!! Know how when and were to use words. My english teacher from junior high will write the total mark of your paper, then each word mispelt, misused; ten marks he'll deduct. And if it were you @prince you back side would've have been hotter than pig iron! Keep writing, and i'll point out mistakes where i see it. good writing. but the "gbaguan" plenty pass wizkid own abego if any mistake they my long super story, no be my fault na t9 keyboard fault. |
Kingademos: d science part is abt d pole brothanks man. it seems he missed that part. |
like the new scope of your update. I use to go to my villa. Xmas period mangoe pickers wake up early to get the most juicy one and stumbles on snakes xpecial PYTHON yes python is ubiquous with eastern and southern part of nigeria. Plus python is not coloured, they are white or dull grey with black random rings. And don't make such silly mistake (guess you ain't a science student) THERE IS NO EAST POLE!!! there is only north and south. And 'bout your "supposed fiction" on my other reply, that is the most realist on your story (i don't need to ask ifa or dibia to know) think i don't know? Any way you painted a supperb picture for those who have been to there home town (if anyone on this thread haven't been; shame on you!) pardon my super story but again. But the python you saw must have a good supper to lay lazy. In my town python don't chase people anyway. If there is any error in my writing; it's this t9 keyboard no be my fault o! |
hey "mr niblecracker" masturbating? Lol |
pls no update should be posted today (*golden halo circles my head*) don't want no corrupted mind. Feeling holy *halo appears on my head* |
why are all the girls mute. lol |
Udehpaschal1: [color=#006600][/color] pls be fast im waiting impatiently.when you choose the color. Make sure to place it in between the brackets so the html code doesn't show. |
360prince: .he is dead won't be waking up again. |
yawns *looks left and right, no one in sight grabs a ps3 controller and kills zeus* am not guilty. |
phyno bu nwoke gbara aji na obi. Umu guys ne si a anya fo ya aji. Ayi eyi ha akpa aji,.. Haha. |
360prince: . You are lucky they didnt fuckkk you drastically. |
Listen troll go homei had a similar experience in js3 but i almost got ganged rape. |
jj9ice: Thanks, I have never commented since i started following this thread because all DESERT HALL scenes, i dont think that can happen anywhere in nigeria without school authority doing nothing. moreover, attitude of ur principal to all those seniors strokes of cane, i dont think that can happen anywhere in nigeria at this human right age. But truelly u get what it takes to be the next CHINUA ACHEBE, u just have to work on your lapses.you're kidding...... Right? |
Mickchillz: I swear. Ve been waitin for someone to come up with some facts that doesnt rhyme with the story for bein a real one even though the story is a gud one. But at the beginin he stated that the story is real, of which i disagree on. there are certain things he said that logically disagree with eachother. i think its better the story is said to be fiction than true life story. Even then it would make the writer be seen as more talented to have written a story this interesting and seemingly real out of his thoughts and imagination. Keep it up. But the writter should quit he lie of it bein real cause this story aint real. Its fiction.you're right... The story is fiction (most part) what irritates me the most; is when the story suddenly transforms to play. and the horrofic spelling.. It's a good story though. |
king of pool: Wow i love that......What a hell they must have passed through, that's the only decision we need to take in this country nija.......I xpect beefinbe carefull what you say. |
great story! Poor write up. |
man u go soon f up o |
WHY YOU NO GRAB POP CORN AS YOU DE IN THAT ACTION?