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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by mkoabiola: 2:27pm On Mar 16, 2013
@op
Leaders&corruption.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by JEMMYP(f): 2:30pm On Mar 16, 2013
Wow, u are good!
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by LushGreenz: 2:30pm On Mar 16, 2013
Please weave "Nature & Creation" for me.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by miredia(m): 2:34pm On Mar 16, 2013
masterpiecer:

Bokoharam and bomb

Kaboom! kaboom! kaboom!
resonated the deafening sickening sound
children scurried
women hurried
men, left in utmost dismay
entrapped in a terror display
i have seen this before
no, its not a deja vu
i use to watch it on CNN
i cant believe its already happening here
in our own dear country
leaving us in a state of endless fear
but the culprits are faceless
a name without a face
doesn't seem to make sence
Bokoharam
like the slaughtering of a ram
bloodily you have caused so much harm
how long will it take you to calm
when will you lay dowm your arms?
when you see a child without an arm
or a man who can no longer farm
begging for alms because you took away his palm
doesn't it ring an alarm?
were those the teachings of the Imam?
you are an epitome of doom
you, your bomb and its boom
soon you too will be doomed
we will sweep you out of this room
like the dust with a unified broom

Dude pm me for an offshore deal.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Akshow: 2:36pm On Mar 16, 2013
Enitsua: isn't a poem supposed to have ryhme, everybody can come up with this but not everybody can put it into a ryhme...try to ryme and see more appreciation.
see this Ewu Burundi wit him Yeye criticism. You wey no fit spell rhyme de make point from this very creative write up. In case you dont know it's on the spur of the moment on a topic unknown and he comes up wit this write up. Common i dare say the guy is a genius. Abeg carry your yeye criticism commot from here before i give you dirty slap. Atulu

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 2:40pm On Mar 16, 2013
since master piece aint around let me try and fill in for him. first i will write about my oga at the top
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Capnd143(m): 2:46pm On Mar 16, 2013
NIGERIA AND OIL
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Babycake(m): 2:55pm On Mar 16, 2013
God and Money
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 2:58pm On Mar 16, 2013
Its obvious the op ain't around, so i'l take a shot @ "Oga at the top" for those askin 4 it.

Oga At The Top

He made us laugh and we couldn't stop
With his crooked fingers pointing high
Directing every little question to the sky
Perhaps, d abode of the oga at the top

To get employed in your agency is becomin tight
Kind sir, direct us to your official website
www. nsdc, den he went mute, begining of d fall
"Is dat all sir?" We asked in surprise. "Yes, daz all"

The youths took to social media
Turning the web to a large stadia
Some made shirts, some made songs
To make sure we don't 4get, dat we've been enduring 4 long.

Such blunder from the commandant
Portrays the agency like cake without fundant
Not good i must say, but who am i to talk
When d decision will b made, by his oga at the top

Incompetence at its peak
Driving a once thriving land sick
Would av loved to solve diz, bt ryt now i must stop
Coz i dnt want to say somfn, only to be discredited by my oga at the top!

TLS.

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by safarigirl(f): 3:14pm On Mar 16, 2013
Arenal and Trophy Drought

8 years and running
It's no longer funny
The fans have waited
With breaths bated
Egos have been deflated
Jerseys gone faded
Wenger says we need patience
But how long do we wait?
8 years have passed, do we keep faith?
We're mocked amongst friends
Arsenal jokes are the new trend
This failure road has no bend
We ride alone, our heads bent
We'll get there next year
Tell that to the cobwebs
That have riddled the trophy shelves
Voices lost in the shout
"WE MUST END THIS DROUGHT"

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by moderatorr: 3:17pm On Mar 16, 2013
i dont need to write much
just the much i can write
boko haram and bomb
bomb and boko haram
peace that we had
now its hard to have peace
then came oga at the top
and it topped on the oga
was a thing for a laugh
so we laughed on the thing
i can keep playing on more words
while my words keep on playing
like i said
said i liked
not to write much
but the much i should write smiley

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 3:19pm On Mar 16, 2013
safarigirl: Arenal and Trophy Drought

8 years and running
It's no longer funny
The fans have waited
With breaths bated
Egos have been deflated
Jerseys gone faded
Wenger says we need patience
But how long do we wait?
8 years have passed, do we keep faith?
We're mocked amongst friends
Arsenal jokes are the new trend
This failure road has no bend
We ride alone, our heads bent
We'll get there next year
Tell that to the cobwebs
That have riddled the trophy shelves
Voices lost in the shout
"WE MUST END THIS DROUGHT"

Nice one! Me like.
TLS.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by tblackE61(m): 3:21pm On Mar 16, 2013
Nice 1 mr writer.....pls help me write a poem on poor A̶̲̥̅̊₪d̶̲̥̅̊ rich
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by StKiu93s: 3:35pm On Mar 16, 2013
Before Dawn
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 3:35pm On Mar 16, 2013
LOL grin grin
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by bbkkatunxo: 3:36pm On Mar 16, 2013
Epitome of beauty that's what you're!
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Enitsua(m): 3:40pm On Mar 16, 2013
Am more of a lyricist so pardon me if my piece hosts too many ryhme schemes.

***Oga at the top***
What is the website of the NSCDC?
In earnest, exceedingly he chocked so seemingly

The anchors so fluent, the general so insecure, translucent.
Added to the comic food a new scent…

Nigeria security and civil defense corps, Nigeria’s insecurity inventory of intellectual corpse.
A stooge, with badges and military props… seeks solace in the strings of ‘Oga at the top’

What is your website? ...Wait! Wait! He spluttered...The last nail on the coffin, and I see no nail cutter.
I thought he would append @yahoomail… and let the face of illiteracy so far soon unveiled

But His mind was made up like Mary Kay’s make up.

So do you have multiple websites? They gave him no respite
They pressed on like hot iron, till they made him a star in his environs...

Ww dot NSCDC… his post should be erstwhile, a presidential pardon? maybe he found ‘Dot cum’ too sexxual

That’s all!

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by hazard1759(m): 3:50pm On Mar 16, 2013
Stephanie and James....4 me n ma chick pls
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Asis(m): 3:51pm On Mar 16, 2013
Oga at the top
Within d uneven seconds reflecting on d gone day
The phone rang,sitting me angrily up on what to say
Hello hello,anyone there pls
I couldn't help but patch through with the voice in ease
Yes yes,you on to the commandant....
Oh oh alright!Gudevenin sir,this is I...
Calling u on u on behalf of Channel tv,
We need to have u,on an interview by morrow
Ok,let's see first if 2moro allows me a bite on a bone
It was there n then I signed a deal,a clown subliminally
What is your website? they re echoed
Just realizing what hit me,I had 2 try
Bulging out my eyeballs,chesting out like a doll
Hands flapping and shaking in air for a cease
Wrestling with my thoughts and buccinator muscles
With confidence,I finally said www.nscdc...dtz all..
Collapsed in my chair,wishing like baby,a cuddle
U mean you have multiple websites..another hit
Ur websites,ok ur websites!yes yes
Wait wait wait, wouldn't want 2 mention one now
Then my oga at the top indicates another
Oh my God..didn't even know what I have done
Until d social media blew me d whistle "Oga at th Top"
I have dived bellow,sought after pears
Only to find giant snail shells...am now d talk of d town
And yet..Only my Oga at the top can explain.....

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by abdulkayus(m): 3:56pm On Mar 16, 2013
Imagine, if dat this thread has made front page on time, we could hav enjoy d OP more. Bt nay, its only after almost a year dat d thread is makin front page and d OP cannot be found. Rather some useless threads will be makin FP after jus some few comments. OP, pls come bac, somebody shld get him for us pls.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 4:08pm On Mar 16, 2013
@hazard, diz one's for you.

Stephanie and James

Come to fink of it, Stephanie and James!
The sound of d names, calm lyk d river thames
On d bank u both should b, holding hands
Sharing sweet tales, ur feet in sand

Time will tell, aw far ur love will go
But lyk gud music, we already know
Its gona play straight and sweet until the end
Haters will hate, but please don't send

Its funny this feeling called love, coz some fake it
But if u readn diz stephanie, bliv james got it
For he requested diz for the both of you
And i had to do this, coz i bliv its true!

TLS.

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 4:29pm On Mar 16, 2013
COME ON GUYS DONT EXHAUST THE OP,S CREATIVITY. OP I THINK YOU MADE A HUGE MISTAKE ASKING EVERYONE FOR A WORD TO MAKE A POEM. YOU SHOULD HAVE SAID THE FIRST FIVE PEOPLE WHO COME UP WITH PHRASES OR WORDS, I WILL MAKE INTO A POEM. LOVE THE BOKO HARAM ONE
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Adanyebe(m): 4:29pm On Mar 16, 2013
AGBERO AND OVERLOAD
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 4:36pm On Mar 16, 2013
Akshow: wow! You are good. Make it more esoteric and you are the next wole shoyinka. Much respect
MORE ESOTERIC ? YOU MUST BE HIGH ON GBEGIRI SOUP.
JUST FOUND OUT THE THREAD IS OVER A YEAR AGO LOL. AM OUT
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by hazard1759(m): 4:39pm On Mar 16, 2013
@tolul tnx a mill
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 4:41pm On Mar 16, 2013
NLders wicked gan O°˚˚˚ º°˚˚°ºoo.. M sure d op won't be able to handle diz quantity of request. Buh i'll try to do a write up for requests directed at me. @toluls. Let it roll. I lov challenges.
TLS.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by hbabe(f): 4:42pm On Mar 16, 2013
OP is really talented.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by YorubaOmoge: 4:47pm On Mar 16, 2013
Omoge Yoruba
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by bluesaint(m): 4:58pm On Mar 16, 2013
More of a prose than a poem. Very nice tho.
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Giftedhands2(f): 4:59pm On Mar 16, 2013
Nigeria really got some raw talents!
@masterpiece, i dnt knw d adjective i can use right nw to qualify ur write ups. U are just too much! Take it frm me.

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Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Akshow: 4:59pm On Mar 16, 2013
obadiah777: MORE ESOTERIC ? YOU MUST BE HIGH ON GBEGIRI SOUP.
JUST FOUND OUT THE THREAD IS OVER A YEAR AGO LOL. AM OUT
Where did this clown fall from? The dictionary is your friend maga. If that is not handy enough, check your phone's dictionary application and stop displayin your foolishness on a social network
Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 5:03pm On Mar 16, 2013
hazard1759: @tolul tnx a mill

Uwc. My pleasure.
TLS.

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