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| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 9:23am On Mar 17, 2013 |
@michade, diz onez 4 you. Engr Ajasa and Control engineerin course We know u lov teachn, and want d best for us But sir, be gentle wiv ur control engineerin course We agree to be drilled, but not pushed to failure Coz dats wat happens when in d exam hall We enjoy ur lectures, u r one of the best But u leave us scared, of ur soon to come test What shall it profit u to teach us so well And set ur questions fiery hot lyk hell? Engineering requires attention, passion and skills Please be careful sir, our passion not to kill Anoda exam is by d corner, i hope u'll be kind So wen results r out, an A is what i'll find TLS. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Lordsocrates: 9:36am On Mar 17, 2013 |
Ur realy r creative, v bin dreamin of performin such feat...pls write me sumtin on CREATIVITY |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 9:53am On Mar 17, 2013 |
@Lordsocrates, herez yours CREATIVITY Just like an infant, it grows with time Giving freely by God, it doesn't cost a dime Some say its nature, others say its nurture I can't be sure, coz its diverse like culture It keeps u up at night, ur head ringing The ideas form in ur heart, u start singing What exactly is this, creativity? It drives me crazy, i call it crazitivity It makes me write, it makes me rap It gives u ur lyrics, n makes ur painting tap I no d feeling, wen you create somfn new If u are blessed with it, d world will reckon with u. TLS. 1 Like 1 Share |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 2:22pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
nice.  toluls could you do one one with the following words: msdarkskin, shy girl, introvert. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 4:04pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
@MsDarkSkin, Herez 4 U MsDarkSkin, Shy girl, Introvert She sits quietly, Lukn pretty wiv a smile To know wats on her mind, I'l walk a thousand mile I've tried a couple times, just to chat her up Buh she always turns away, like a freightend pup Perhaps she needs somfn, shuld i offer to buy? Den suddenly it hits me, d girl is probabli shy! Oh! MsDarkSkin, come out of ur shell I'll b a gentleman, will treat u very well Just so u know, I'm an extrovert N it will pls me to b wiv an introvert Though silent as alwys, keep the smile on MsDarkSkin of life, u are number one TLS. 1 Like |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 4:07pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
toluls: @MsDarkSkin, Herez 4 U she's not shy she's scared of trusting peeps on here....but nice try. You can as well spice your poems up with some rhymes |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 4:09pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
lemme pick my own words. errrrmmmmmmmmm......eyes and lips |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 4:26pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
adaobi123: lemme pick my won words. errrrmmmmmmmmm......eyes and lips ah...u dont put me for tight corner...toulus let me try this,... Ada..this is for you  Eyes and lips.. such beautiful eyes, the kind that mesmerize, You could sense the innocence in them A peep in those eyes draw tears Reminds you of the pains of days passed and any man would want to remain in its mirror Like butterfly stucked to a nectar and oh she tops it all with a beautiful lips Such lips you are willing to die to kiss. So tender and soft Just like petals flourishing in the morning dew A touch of those and a man could be transported to places places his imagination would run wild and heavenly. I wish I could explain the way I feel more but your beautiful eyes and your beautiful lips i could never reveal to you, I close my eyes and dream of you in the best way my mind can do and wish when i wake up i find thos eyes staring back and those lips against mine... I hope say i try small I have to go to bed now...battery is low.. 1 Like |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 4:29pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
onegig:thats so so sweet......lemme go and cry to sleep  do you write in your free time ? |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by uncletbuddy(m): 4:46pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
someone is being revived... Life is been touched by this... God bless the öp... I wish someone understand my state... Uncletbuddy noni! |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by xpizzy(m): 5:03pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
Dystopia |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 6:55pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
adaobi123: i used to .that was a favourite past time.. Maybe in the nearest future i may return back to what i loved doing... |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 6:56pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
onegig:awwwww so cute  |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 7:00pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
onegig: check my rhyme scheme, its usuali aa,bb,cc and so on. Nice try wiv adaobi's poem. Culd b beta though. TLS. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 8:59pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
toluls: sorry i commented without checking her request...Didnt see her words. Thought you were the one freestyling about her nature.. Thanks for the comment. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by doublezero7(m): 10:49pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
Pls the word is Campus Hair Star...pls somtin cool! |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by abdulmaliq(m): 11:21pm On Mar 17, 2013 |
Pls op: do this 4 me... "SHADOWS AND THE UNKNOWN" |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by masterpiecer(m): 8:24am On Mar 18, 2013 |
Hey every1, I am glad u guys like my work, I have been outa nl 4 a while now, busy with some other stuff, thanks to all'y who sent me pm. Dunno if I can keep up with d request up on here  , lol, but I will give it a shot, I see some folks r doing a gr8 job already, @Toluls, thumbs up, I love urn skill. Also to every1 who has contributed to dis thread; double thumbs up to u To every1 who sent me pm, I will certainly reply u, and those who dropped their contacts, I Will hala @ ya. Thanks every1, love u mucho  1 Like |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 12:44pm On Mar 18, 2013 |
masterpiecer: Hey every1, I am glad u guys like my work, I have been outa nl 4 a while now, busy with some other stuff, thanks to all'y who sent me pm. Glad u are back man, fnks 4 the mention. + ur boko haram write up is tight! Its a bit challenging 4 me coz i browse on bb, bt hey, let's make tinz happen. TLS. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 12:49pm On Mar 18, 2013 |
onegig: No p bro. Glad u noticed her request. TLS. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by toluls(m): 1:03pm On Mar 18, 2013 |
onegig: |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 1:23pm On Mar 22, 2013 |
toluls: @MsDarkSkin, Herez 4 U thanks!! |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by Nobody: 1:25pm On Mar 22, 2013 |
onegig:   very interesting. i don't trust anyone on herebut in reality i am shy and very quiet. anyway thanks guys. you're awesome. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by tayo69(m): 3:20am On Apr 02, 2013 |
nyc poems my phrase is "I am not looking serious" |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by princesa(f): 7:15pm On May 24, 2013 |
tayo69: let me try... quizzically i peer at uptight creatures Speaking like they affect the world in measures they must feel so high and fly strapped up in that hook called a tie Giving off annoying smiles like without them the world would die life to them is work, work and work if you didn't, you become a downtrodden dog oh well, their life with them what's in becoming too serious men? when my money triple high find me in Bahamas carousing with the chicks of class then when it runs dry I get back to till the ground hard And when in scorn they peer at me them dumb aristocrat brats with a gaze no less mean I'd tell them: 'am not looking serious'  1 Like |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 7:37am On May 25, 2013 |
princesea.......wow lovely... I love it. Ok. Try this "in a stitch" 1 Like |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by princesa(f): 3:59pm On May 25, 2013 |
onegig: Am not here to blow steams Am here to treat the broken seam of your disrespectful speech yeah, one stitch i need to mend that attitude you bring Don't come running that hole of s.hit All over my three piece suit cos amma give in to it and slit your face in countless piece know that phrase? A stitch in time saves nine yeah, where we heading is that phase....... like a cat, your lives might be nine but in a stitch, you're going down You ain't got the chance to go nine yeah baby... In a stitch, you'll be going down what would be left? your catty meouws  #phew! a writtable phrase next time please  1 Like |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 6:50pm On May 25, 2013 |
princesa:wow awesome...what can I give for this beautiful piece....  princess give me a phrase let me piggy you back with a lovely one. |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by princesa(f): 7:50pm On May 26, 2013 |
love and pain |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 5:21pm On May 27, 2013 |
princesa: love and painok tough one here and little time but i gave it a shot |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by onegig(m): 7:42pm On May 27, 2013 |
Love and pain I look into the deep blue sky Thousands of stars twinkling in the distance The breeze whizzes past my face The beautiful night sounds of humming birds But in all of nature's beauty I found no solace My heart heavy and empty And I feel like a walking ghost Two words,so close Two words, so intertwined Two words so different but aptly related They say Love is pain And Pain is love But question, How can a thing of pleasure be the harbinger of hurt? How wrong was I To think love could free me from pain But alas.. The world now feels voided and empty Only filled with fading echos of your laughter And I go on talking to empty space in pains Two words,so close Two words, so intertwined Two words so different but aptly related They say Love is pain And Pain is love Been told nothing good comes easy And in pleasure lies pain But why should love bring me pain It hurts so much i can't put out the flame I laboured so hard to make things work The more I try, the more the love becomes elusive Think am gonna lose my mind But before I evaporate into that sink hole I am gonna give it one last shot Not because i am masochist But because No love ,no pain! Hope i tried princess? |
| Re: Give Me A Word/phrase And I Will Make It A Poem by princesa(f): 4:21pm On May 28, 2013 |
with 9/10 rating, you over try 1 Like |
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