auwal87:

Quite nice of you, I shouldn't have mentioned 'masterpiece' even though I was referring to my own collection of poems which I wrote my self not world masterpiece.

Are you finding it hard to believe that I wrote the poem? Well, I don't blame you, you may not understand the veracity of it either.

I don't have any doubt you wrote the poem. But what makes you think it's a masterpiece? It's like Messi scoring a goal and says this is the best goal ever. You are not to judge. As you can see, I avoided critiquing your poem because I know that's not what you are looking for. You posted it here for people to explain it. I just didn't jump on the bandwagon of people trying to explain it. I'm more concerned about you not blowing your own trumpet, hence you think you've arrived when you are just starting.

Good luck on your poetry journey.