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Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 7:45am On Nov 26, 2013 |
I guess this story would not be rid off criticism anytime soon. But its all good, i love it, keep it coming. as for ur question chuks, can I argue that Daisy was already spent and tired of the whole fights, she wanted her marriage to grow and be rid off the misunderstanding that has so enveloped it from the start? She's also just coming from her cousin's where she supposedly got useful advice and where she'd run to for the past three days. And there was offcourse the three keys of marriage she learnt, of which, forgiveness was part of.. And then, she finally did face Grace for who she was, and sent her out of their home and hopefully, lives. So I guess this is enough reasons why she should not let that incident affect their lives. Instead they should just move on, before she destroys the whole marriage. And then offcourse, me I was tired of writing oh, and I wanted to dance into the sunset atlast! So No need to prolong their matter Jo |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by fidinwala(m): 1:58pm On Nov 26, 2013 |
@ princesa your signature sentence " some of us have success written in our stars deal with it " sound arrogant and prideful. I guess it is a product of your inertness. I girl lost the position of a VP in my faculty election during my school days as a result of that kind of statement in your signature. think about it dear, one love. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 7:27pm On Nov 26, 2013 |
fidinwala:I wasn't seeing it that way |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by fidinwala(m): 7:32pm On Nov 26, 2013 |
OK we learn everyday |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Chuksemi(m): 7:34pm On Nov 26, 2013 |
My Princess, I understand perfectly well. Looking forward to another story from you, your majesty. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 7:37pm On Nov 26, 2013 |
Thanks you both. I've modified the signature as i can... And am looking forward to writing a new story soon and hearing from you both |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by fidinwala(m): 8:08pm On Nov 26, 2013 |
looking forward to the story. the new signature is cool. 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by stefikal(f): 4:39am On Nov 30, 2013 |
Chai! E pain me ooooo, I like my food being served as e dey hot, but by d time I register 4 NL, u don complete ur story...na cold food I chop....but anyways dt next story ehn...i don do seat reservation 4 front sharply.... #Respect ooooo I luv ya narration #TeamDaisy 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by DEllaluv(f): 5:26pm On Nov 30, 2013 |
I bn tnk say d tori get part 2,anyways waitn 4 d nxt story 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Jhymrod(f): 4:19pm On Dec 08, 2013 |
Wao princesa. I enjoyed ur story,keep it up dear 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by 360prince(m): 12:13pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
Wow! An attractive and captivating story you've got here Princessa. I so much enjoy and loving the element you involved in your story. I wish i was a better writter like you, but am just developing the art now. You are my mentor.... Keep the fire burning as i helped gather the firewoods prince + princesa = 1 kingdom 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by realsamxtra(m): 9:48pm On Dec 20, 2013 |
Still on page 35. I can't wait till end before commenting. This story is bomb. Always getting me glued to ma little screen. P, I must say you're really good. 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 10:09pm On Dec 20, 2013 |
Okay oh, make sure you buy bread for us before u get to the last page oh. thanks realsam, 360prince, everyone...i am honoured |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by realsamxtra(m): 11:13pm On Dec 20, 2013 |
Now from page 41. Always giving out the unexpected. Kudos to you P. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by realsamxtra(m): 11:19pm On Dec 20, 2013 |
princesa: Okay oh, make sure you buy bread for us before u get to the last page oh.Nothing do you P just for you, I will gather as much bread as I can. But are you the princess of which kingdom? Maybe that will give me clue on the nature of the bread to get. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by realsamxtra(m): 3:34am On Dec 21, 2013 |
Did I just see *the end*? Finally....... I have to comment my reserve. P. You really did a wonderful job- keeping the tempo high till the end and I will say that the suspense was superb, always coming up with an unexpected action. I won't be suprise if I see something in black and white having author as C*****a at the back cover. Did I tell you I love that name¿ 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 5:58pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
realsamxtra:princess of Agege land, so you know the type of bread to get. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by realsamxtra(m): 10:53pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
princesa:I don ship am de come ur domot. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by lanicky(f): 4:34pm On Jan 09, 2014 |
Wow !! Dis d best story ever. I came across dis story dis week. Can't believe am through wit it. .....so diiiiizzz wat i af been missing all dis while.*.*.stamps leg on d grand*.*. . More honey to ur tea nd more ink 2 ur biro. *.*.*. Look left nd right, wispers 2 princesa *.*. Check ur neck ur head dey dia*.*. *.*.where is my legidisbenz, tis time 2go home*.*. 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nadoson: 11:08pm On Jan 09, 2014 |
princesa: The rest of the ceremony dragged on slowly, Jide's anger increased with each activities they observed that was stipulated on the program menu. When it was time to feed eachother the cake, Jide almost stuffed Daisy |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nadoson: 11:10pm On Jan 09, 2014 |
The rest of the ceremony dragged on slowly, Jide's anger increased with each activities they observed that was stipulated on the program menu. When it was time to feed eachother the cake, Jide almost stuffed Daisy with the cake, that act had given him pleasure. 'serves her right' he thought to himself. Daisy had however tenderly given him his part of the cake, but inside she was burning with anger, Jide was really acting s.tu.pid and childish, she thought, he didn't have to be so wicked trying to choke her with the cake, so she would cough out her pitiable self infront of all these people. Well, she wouldn't retaliate because there was no telling what lay in the sleeves of this husband of hers, and so she carried on the facade of the happiest bride on her happiest day. How hard it was! Also, during the couple dance, No matter how ostentatious Daisy had tried to be, it was obvious that the rift between them was far from friendly much less conjugal, those who had an inkling that somethings were wrong with this couple could really rest their case. Because Jide had been miles apart from Daisy and seemed to be dancing with one of the female guests who had come to dance with them, even the M.C observed that and chipped in: 'It seems our groom here can't tell the difference between a lady on white and one on red' But jide was far from caring, if they wanted a dance, he reasoned, then dance he must give them, no matter who was on the receiving end. He so hated his wedding and loved every opportunity he could get to create a scene, that would atleast teach his manipulative family spearheaded by his grandmother to stop meddling with the affairs of a grown man, he had had his misgivings about working in the family company, which meant he had to see the face of his over bearing father and annoying brother almost on a daily basis, an interaction which had finally led him to this sham of a union. And although it was too late to turn back the hands of time, it wasn't too late to create a media scandal that would get through the thick skin of his family. This dance was therefore, short of the expectations of what lay ahead for them and their docile pet, Daisy. The wedding finally ended at about 6pm, Jide, to the chagrin of everyone wasn't available to give a 'vote of thanks', it was said by his father, he had left halfway during the presentation of gifts and his space was filled by Ade, that act had almost brought Daisy to tears, it took words of encouragement from Ade to calm her, he had said: 'Daisy don't work yourself up unnecessarily, Jide can be impulsive atimes, but he's a wonderful guy most times' 'yeah right' Daisy had snorted in reply. The other reason why she was smiling was because she was receiving gifts from the guests, gifts that seem to go on forever. The Olukoyas had friends who were very generous, she hoped she would soon get mixed in their world. 'Well, this is enough to compensate all my loss right now' she thought, calming herself. But at about 7pm, Jide still had not shown up, his number wasn't connecting and nobody could say for sure where he went. 'this is an exclusive case oh', it has always been the bride who gets missing before or after the wedding not the groom, this definitely is a shockker' Ade had replied dryly to Jide's father when he had asked him of Jide's whereabouts. 'That's how stupid and childish Jide is, let me just set my eyes on him, he will surely have a piece of me' his father had replied angrily and stormed off to go quiz more of his friends. Ade had just shook his head, and walked towards the exit door, he was already tired of Jide's attitude and the drama of the whole evening, 'whatever happened to pretending' he said to himself. Daisy on her part had calmly gone to one of the rooms they rented in Queens hotel to moan her situation, she just wanted to be far from everybody. Although she did not expect the wedding to be so rosy, she hadn't imagined it would be this bad, she was starting to regret everything now. She wondered when her tears would break forth, she was showing so much strength and calmness than she ever knew she had. 'You never know how strong you are until you have to be strong' she said quietly to herself as she slowly lay on the bed she had been sitting on. Just then she heard a knock, she didn't feel like seeing anybody. 'Why wont they leave me alone for once' she cried silently without making a move to see who had knocked. The door opened and in came Jide's grandmother 'Daisy Omo mi' she said going to seat by her on the bed 'Am really sorry for all that happened today, Jide was so...' 'Mama its ok, there's no need to feel sorry' cut in Daisy then she squeezed herself more, her wedding gown protested the act. 'Only God knows all the pain you're going through now, noone envisioned tha nawaoo |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nadoson: 11:11pm On Jan 09, 2014 |
princesa: The rest of the ceremony dragged on slowly, Jide's anger increased with each activities they observed that was stipulated on the program menu. When it was time to feed eachother the cake, Jide almost stuffed Daisy |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 7:51am On Jan 10, 2014 |
lanicky: am glad it was worth your time. Thank you and make sure ur legizbenz carry you the next story oh. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Slickest(m): 8:38am On Jan 10, 2014 |
I find CHANCE, and I take am, it was worth the time ...*i no no y french kiss smiley no dey...*..good job gf..looking forward 2 anoda... 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nobody: 3:01pm On Jan 10, 2014 |
Wow |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by zyzxx(m): 8:50pm On Jul 05, 2014 |
princesa: Okay oh, make sure you buy bread for us before u get to the last page oh.princess Gud evening.. Pls what are you going to do for us about your last story... Pls |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 9:55pm On Jul 05, 2014 |
zyzxx: aww zyzxx, I'm going to put it up back. I just need to get back to school and my LP where the other chapters are. Plus I got a new chapter, I will put them all up, hopefully within the week. Thanks for caring. |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by zyzxx(m): 11:01pm On Jul 05, 2014 |
princesa:thanks so much I will be waiting. enjoy your service 2mao 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by yollychika(f): 2:49pm On Jan 17, 2015 |
Nice1 girl 1 Like |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Yemiolads(f): 8:01pm On May 08, 2015 |
Princessa, really cool stuff here. thumbs up, me likey. Check here for nice short stories. http://opeyemioladotun..com/ |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by sweetjenny305(f): 4:33pm On May 10, 2015 |
Job well done, keep it up@princesa |
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 11:50am On May 11, 2015 |
sweetjenny305:Thank you Jenny. 1 Like |
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