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Re: ... by Winneygirl(f): 7:06pm On Aug 18, 2013 |
U guys have done well. I have no personal affiliations & hav not had any serious encounter wt any of d writers, so I'd like 2 give an objective criticism. . 1. D story started well, with a lot of enthusiasm. But some people didn't build on wat d 1st writer wrote.So after so many abstract chapters,it has become hard to reconcile d chapters. . 2. Some writers just had 2 include their friends whether relevant or not. E.g. In d middle of class,1 character walks in, and is hailed by some. Then dat character has ended. If everyone were to include all their friends walking in, then we would have no storyline. . 3. S;exual overtones: We know U can't rule them out completely, but it'd be nice if we can be civil. Use of 'dcckk', 'fcck', etc are not languages for a good novel. . This post is long already. Otherwise,I've got more to say. |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 7:26pm On Aug 18, 2013 |
This Has Gone Way Beyond My Control... |
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:35pm On Aug 18, 2013 |
Winneygirl: U guys have done well.this is great, and I like it because criticism isn't about changing the way you write but correcting the errors and cliches. What however we failed to work together as a team and at the end everyone was pulling at his or her own corner. |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 10:23pm On Aug 18, 2013 |
Winneygirl: U guys have done well.Haven't you heard that too many hehehe spoils the hohoho 1 Like |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 7:11am On Aug 19, 2013 |
Eze Promoe:Lmao. Don't Even Go There... |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 8:37am On Aug 19, 2013 |
Dygeasy: Lmao.I said nothing |
Re: ... by tobex23(m): 6:59am On Sep 28, 2013 |
it shouldnt end like this now! |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 6:58pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
Should We Revive This Thing? |
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:06pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
Dygeasy: Should We Revive This Thing?yep Can't wait |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 7:20pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: yepHelo Me.. |
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 8:36pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
Dygeasy: Helo Me..I refuse You helo me. |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 8:50pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
DA FUQ |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 11:16pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
Eze Promoe: DA FUQ |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 11:16pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: I refuseOh Jeez! I Meant To Type Help... |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 10:42am On Oct 01, 2013 |
Re: ... by tobex23(m): 10:58am On Oct 01, 2013 |
dygeasy sorry for what i said in the complaint thread, please revive it! Thanks! |
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 12:36pm On Oct 16, 2013 |
Nairaland a story, revival, polished and a whole lot more, coming soon.....watch the space. |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 12:42pm On Oct 16, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: Nairaland a story, revival, polished and a whole lot more, coming soon.....watch the space.Copy That! |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 9:54am On Oct 17, 2013 |
What happened to the name of the thread |
Re: ... by Nobody: 11:11am On Oct 17, 2013 |
Eze, they got smarter than ...... Hahahahaha |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 4:12pm On Oct 17, 2013 |
Damex333: Eze, they got smarter than ...... Hahahahaha |
Re: ... by Mynd44: 4:15pm On Oct 17, 2013 |
Damex333: Eze, they got smarter than ...... HahahahahaThey are going around in circles |
Re: ... by joshmoy(m): 2:28pm On Dec 10, 2013 |
and what happened to the revival |
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