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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Nadoson: 11:38pm On Dec 08, 2013 |
Diz is gud. |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by PrinceAdepoju(m): 12:05am On Dec 09, 2013 |
adegwurulez:I Already Followed! *laffing at him,#using him to laff* buhahahahahahahaaha |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by DEllaluv(f): 4:20am On Dec 09, 2013 |
Oya na |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by kingphilip(m): 6:28am On Dec 09, 2013 |
The twist wey dis tory de take me like it n i knw say tho na short tory u fit stil carry am reach 25pages now |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Mcmooney(m): 6:48am On Dec 09, 2013 |
FBI and CIA tins combine |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by NiggaBoi(m): 7:11am On Dec 09, 2013 |
Okay, ¦ must to comment now. Yoυ are one damn good writer. ¦ love †he twists αnd turns. Keep it up bro αnd come αnd update fast fast |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by write2obi(m): 7:25am On Dec 09, 2013 |
adegwurulez: NATU HEADQUATERS LAGOS NIGERIA, 21ST OCTOBER 2013.you musa is now an agent? after all he did in UaM and Kevin the good MAN ended up a farmer. I see am loving every bit of it 1 Like |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by dammygoody(m): 9:08am On Dec 09, 2013 |
write2obi:funny bro 1 Like |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Rapsainot(m): 9:32am On Dec 09, 2013 |
OGA ADE, abeg make u drop ur number, so dat i can start disturbing you..... ME & GIRL cnt wait 4 d next update jare, abi u want her to leave me ni |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by opesanchez: 10:28am On Dec 09, 2013 |
oga abeg cme giv us upd8 mak dis story end na |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 10:46am On Dec 09, 2013 |
@ gucciangel, i don dey update @nadoson, thanks @princeadepoju, laughing at who? @D.ella.luv, you think say na only your church the hold programme shey? me sef go vigil, i just the wake. @kingphilip, page25? i'll see what i can do @mcmooney, lol.. dis one na police, soldier, navy, civil defence etc. @niggaboi, thanks sir, make i begin type @write2obi, you know musa had that trait na. btw, wait till you see philip @dammygoody, no mind am @rap_sainot, ah!!! sorry sir, my number dey signature incase ur girl wan call *evil grin* @opesanchez, patience bro.. update in a bit. typing... |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by kroosx: 10:46am On Dec 09, 2013 |
ma guy am a very reserved reader o....but guy this your story bad gan I can't hold bk but to comment...guy u tight pass kpekus wey dem neva pin once....keep it up Bro...nice piece |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 10:50am On Dec 09, 2013 |
kroosx: ma guy am a very reserved reader o....but guy this your story bad gan I can't hold bk but to comment...guy u tight pass kpekus wey dem neva pin once....keep it up Bro...nice piecelwkmd... i never see kpekus sha, tlk more of the one wey dem never pin, so i no know how e be o |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by kroosx: 10:54am On Dec 09, 2013 |
adegwurulez:Lol my brother wait till u see a pregnant virgin....:. Btw I gbadun ur stile jare |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 11:05am On Dec 09, 2013 |
Agent white walked into the building dejectedly. He dropped the bag containing his sniper on the table and located a chair to sit without caring about the four men who were staring at him. "Tunde what went wrong?" Paul asked. Tunde was white's real name. They only use their various pseudos when going for operations. "It was just some technical glitches" white replied. "Hope you weren't followed" one of the men who had been silent asked. "Can they follow shadow? I made sure they lost track of me" white replied. "Good. We just received intel that Grace has been admitted in Blue-cross Hospital" Paul informed him. "Alright then, i will have to finish what i started" white said. "Nah mehn, i'll just have to visit an old friend" Paul said and smiled. ****************************** A Hilux van drove into the NATU building and went straight to the parking lot and parked. The driver first came out then four other men came out. One had handcuffs on his hand and from the look in his eyes, you can tell he was in a sorry state. Two men led him into the building while the remaining men stood outside gisting. Immediately sani saw the men he went towards them. "Good job agents." he said "Take him to the holding room. I will be there in 15minutes." The two men led him to the left wing of the building and followed a single lane route which led to the holding room. "Jimmy i want you to pull his records for me" sani said to jimmy. "Am on it" he replied. **************************** Instead of the normal police station where Jacobs was previously kept, he was transported to the kiri kiri maximum prison located in ojo, Lagos. According to the policemen, it was for his own safety as the kiri kiri prison is more secured than the police cell. Jacobs had protested and wanted to call his lawyer but he remembered that his lawyer had been shot so he resigned to fate. The prisoners he saw there were not smiling. They all had this 'dangerous aura' radiating from their body. He stood there looking like a kid who was entering his class for the first time. "Come, na ajebor you come form for prison? Shey our face look like television" someone asked him. He didn't know how to reply him so he just stood there and continued staring at them like a scarecrow. "You be kuruma abi? Oya skido go draw that guy come here" he ordered. A huge guy stood up and started advancing towards him. He nearly fainted only looking at the guy's biceps. The guy just came and hung his hand across Jacobs neck. "Make una leave this one, him never dey used to here naim make" the guy spoke. "Attah wetin be your own na? Na the third prisoner wey you don save today be this o, make e do you o" the guy barked. Attah didn't reply him, he just drew Jacobs to one corner and they started chatting. ***************************** Sani walked into the holding room with a file in his hand. He came with one other man. He started reading from his file "Philip mba, arrested for armedrobbery, grantheft auto. Convicted once and is just coming out of prison. Tell me, do they have sniper classes in the prison" "I dont know what you are talking about" philip replied. "You see this man here, he is a former police officer. He is trained to inflict pain without remorse" The man dropped his bag, opened it and brought out it's content. Inside the bag was one pressing iron, one 'talk true' and an electric wire. Sani brought out a picture and showed him. The man in the picture wore a black hood and a khaki, he was bending his head so his face wasn't visible. "Thats not me, i dont bend my head when walking" he replied. By this time, the other man had already plugged the pressing iron to an electric source, philip swallowed saliva when he saw it. "But you were wearing this same cloth in the same area at the same time we were looking for this man. Is that a coincident?" sani asked. Philip started getting the connection. "i can explain" he shouted "start talking" sani said. "I was in that mall when a young girl was passing without looking up. She was holding a liquid. Before i could stop her, she hit me and the liquid poured on my cloth. A youngman who was watching the whole event bought this cloth for me. I even saw when he bought it. I had to wear the new cloth because i was getting late for an event." philip explained The two men weren't satisfied with the explanation. The other man raised philip's shirt and use the hot iron to press his skin. Philip shouted, his screams filled the whole room. ******************************* Doctor the patient at ward 18 just woke up and is requesting to see you" a nurse informed Dr. Amos. "I will be there soon" Dr. Amos replied. Meanwhile, in ward 18, Grace had just woke up from sleep and the first person she saw was paul. "Hello sweetheart" he said. She wanted to scream but he quickly covered her mouth with his hand. "shhhhhhh!!!! am not here to kill you" he said. "Am just gonna give you this injection and you will go into a long sleep. When you wake up, you might be lucky to remember your name" Dr. Amos was walking fast, he was about reaching ward 18 when nurse Amaka called him. "Dr, you are supposed to be in the theater" she said. "yes, i'll be there shortly, Dr. Mark is already there" he said and wanted to go when the nurse held his arm. "what is it Amaka?" he asked. "Its just that Dr. Mark is relatively new to suggery, i think you should be there" she said. "Dont worry Amaka, i will be there as soon as i finish from this ward" he replied and still wanted to go but Amaka still held his arm. "Remember our date?" she asked, smiling mischiviously "i do, Dr" Amos replied. "can i go now?" Amaka was still thinking when he turned and started going. Amaka ran after him but she was too late, he opened the door to ward 18 and entered. *TBC* |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 11:08am On Dec 09, 2013 |
kroosx:i never see pregnant virgin o, but i don read am for bible |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by write2obi(m): 11:30am On Dec 09, 2013 |
adegwurulez:Well am not suprised, philip get light brain. |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Uthman51(m): 11:46am On Dec 09, 2013 |
U say na short story but suspense don make am dey long.....I dey feel you |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by ojoko1(m): 12:20pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
Bros na u dey keep my company at work na... Pls update sharp sharp.. Nice story |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Olarewajub: 12:27pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
Now Following.. |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by philcz(m): 12:47pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
Adegwurulez sent me to tell u guys dat he tried updating but antispambot banned him nd hid the post,so pls be patient wit him as he tries to put tins in order.. |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 12:59pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
ehm... thanks to my able mods, but una never release my post o. philcz my messenger , jah bless!!!! |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Nobody: 1:03pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
adegwurulez: ehm... thanks to my able mods, but una never release my post o.nice story dude |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by muyijazz1(m): 1:05pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
Now I do not liketo eat an half baked bread.....but I found myself in d middle of dis one....I wish u were done writing befre I strtd reading..........could you complete dis already. Pls? |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 1:19pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
i'll just have to retype. if you dont see an updage in the next ten minutes then know i'v been banned again |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Olarewajub: 1:28pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
write2obi:You don't have to quote the whole story. |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 1:28pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
Agent white walked into the building dejectedly. He dropped the bag containing his sniper on the table and located a chair to sit without caring about the four men who were staring at him. "Tunde what went wrong?" Paul asked. Tunde was white's real name. They only use their various pseudos when going for operations. "It was just some technical glitches" white replied. "Hope you weren't followed" one of the men who had been silent asked. "Can they follow shadow? I made sure they lost track of me" white replied. "Good. We just received intel that Grace has been admitted in Blue-cross Hospital" Paul informed him. "Alright then, i will have to finish what i started" white said. "Nah mehn, i'll just have to visit an old friend" Paul said and smiled. ****************************** A Hilux van drove into the NATU building and went straight to the parking lot and parked. The driver first came out then four other men came out. One had handcuffs on his hand and from the look in his eyes, you can tell he was in a sorry state. Two men led him into the building while the remaining men stood outside gisting. Immediately sani saw the men he went towards them. "Good job agents." he said "Take him to the holding room. I will be there in 15minutes." The two men led him to the left wing of the building and followed a single lane route which led to the holding room. "Jimmy i want you to pull his records for me" sani said to jimmy. "Am on it" he replied. **************************** Instead of the normal police station where Jacobs was previously kept, he was transported to the kiri kiri maximum prison located in ojo, Lagos. According to the policemen, it was for his own safety as the kiri kiri prison is more secured than the police cell. Jacobs had protested and wanted to call his lawyer but he remembered that his lawyer had been shot so he resigned to fate. The prisoners he saw there were not smiling. They all hard this 'dangerous aura' radiating from their body. He stood there looking like a kid who was entering his class for the first time. "Come, na ajebor you come form for prison? Shey our face look like television?" someone asked him. He didn't know how to reply him so he just stood there and continued staring at them like a scarecrow. "You be kuruma abi? Oya skido go draw that guy come here" he ordered. A huge guy stood up and started advancing towards him. He nearly fainted only looking at the guy's biceps. The guy just came and hung his hand across Jacobs neck. "Make una leave this one, him never dey used to here naim make" the guy spoke. "Attah wetin be your own na? Na the third prisoner wey you don save today be this o, make e do you o" the guy barked. Attah didn't reply him, he just drew Jacobs to one corner and they started chatting. ***************************** Sani walked into the holding room with a file in his hand. He came with one other man. He started reading from his file "Philip mba, arrested for armedrobbery, grandtheft auto. Convicted once and is just coming out of prison. Tell me, do they have sniper classes in the prison?" "I dont know what you are talking about" philip replied. "You see this man here, he is a former police officer. He is trained to inflict pain without remorse" The man dropped his bag, opened it and brought out it's content. Inside the bag was one pressing iron, one 'talk true' and an electric wire. Sani brought out a picture and showed him. The man in the picture wore a black hood and a khaki, he was bending his head so his face wasn't visible. "Thats not me, i dont bend my head when walking" he replied. By this time, the other man had already plugged the pressing iron to an electric source, philip swallowed saliva when he saw it. "But you were wearing this same cloth in the same area at the same time we were looking for this man" sani explained. I dont think it was a coincidence. Philip started getting the connection. "i can explain" he shouted "start talking" sani said. "I was in that mall when a young girl was passing without looking up. She was holding a liquid. Before i could stop her, she hit me and the liquid poured on my cloth. A youngman who was watching the whole event bought this clothe for me. I even saw when he bought it. I had to wear the new cloth because i was getting late for an event." philip explained The two men weren't satisfied with the explanation. The other man raised philip's shirt and use the hot iron to press his skin. Philip shouted, his screaming filled the whole room. ******************************* Doctor the patient in ward 18 just woke up and is requesting to see you" a nurse informed Dr. Amos. "I will be there soon" Dr. Amos replied. Meanwhile, in ward 18, Grace had just woke up from sleep and the first person she saw was paul. "Hello sweetheart" he said. She wanted to scream but he quickly covered her mouth with his hand. "shhhhhhh!!!! am not here to kill you" he said. "Am just gonna give you this injection and you will go into a long sleep. When you wake up, you might be lucky to remember your name" Dr. Amos was walking fast, he was about reaching ward 18 when nurse Amaka called him. "Dr, you are supposed to be in the theater" she said. "yes, i'll be there shortly, Dr. Mark is already there" he said and wanted to go when the nurse held his arm. "what is it Amaka?" he asked. "Its just that Dr. Mark is relatively new to suggery, i think you should be there" she said. "Dont worry Amaka, i will be there as soon as i finish from this ward" he replied and still wanted to go but Amaka still held his arm. "Remember our date?" she asked, smiling mischiviously "i do, Dr" Amos replied. "can i go now?" Amaka was still thinking when he turned and started going. Amaka ran after him but she was too late, he opened the door to ward 18 and entered. *TBC* 1 Like |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Olarewajub: 1:30pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
adegwurulez: i'll just have to retype. if you dont see an updage in the next ten minutes then know i'v been banned againWhy on earth will they ban or are you violating any of the laid down rules? |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 1:31pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
^^^ because i posted the above Olarewajub: |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by gucciangel(m): 1:48pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
Ade! Ade!! Ade!!! How many times I call your name? if you no come commot dis suspense den update Eeeh! |
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by lbotus(f): 4:23pm On Dec 09, 2013 |
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