present sir, waiting 4 more updates plz

Dis is nyc,kip it up! Oya come and update nw.

Abeg!! Con finish ur tori ooo. I dey wait ooo.

Oga ade tori make sense die. Abeg i wan c ghost 4 box o

adegwurulez:
i don update o

Mehn, i dey twale for you.. You 3 much

Bulcqlay: Omo dis story dey interesting o, make i grab sit beside my oga at d top clemzy, rock555 nd d9ty

Very interesting..Full of action

nice work, where is the concluding part, it might be waste of my time if that is the end

kingphilip: #Parks my wheelbarrow at the extreme left and cleans sweat#
bring it on boss

come n help me to kari my stuffs to d airport, naija don tire me.....how u go charge

Adegwurulez
You are a talented young man,,,
Keep it up,,do not lose yourself in the euphoria of the excitement (people praising you & all that),,although I notice you are very much open to correction.
More power to your elbow,,I see you going places.

Bros.... I hail oo.....I say I hail ooo, abeg try make am be five update in a day...
Suspence wan kill me
*sobs*

Dear, U too much..... I luv dix inteligent story. Keep it up.

[color=#000099][/color] oohh, OGA ADE pls update nah, i go call operation busrt o cos av been waiting here since a.m

Church don close oooooooo

ehm... i'v seen all your comments and i really appreciate the love. I cant reply all of them because of my current location.
I'm still in church o, when i get back i'll start typing.
Thanks for your understanding

Oga ade, nothing do you. I stil dy follow you like twitter. *grab popcorn with smirnoff* aye dun je ju iya lo

Ade your haters no get option than to like you o! more grease to your elbow! Bt I dey wait for update o!

ADE this your story is very vry A-Deliciious....big ups bro

Ade,what can i say with the twist and turns,omo u are too gbasky! Well,thier case is a ticklish one for the judge sha .Imagine a lawyer with so much pedigree(briggs) been challenged by a colleague(clem) he regards as baby lawyer.

OP are ur parents terrorist?cos right now you're the bomb.

abeg se ghost self dey testify?
<< I'm so following this story to full stop>>

Sitting by the corner








Waiting for the next update

just came back from the church. lemme start typing....


for those of you asking for the concluding part, you will have to wait longer coz the story is about to take a new dimension.

DEDICATED TO TALK2VIC, A READER IN TURKEY

11:00PM, 11Th AUGUST 2013

The Ambulance was travelling at a 'break neck' speed that Dr.Amos who was in the other car was finding it difficult to follow them.
"what's wrong with this driver sef" Dr.Amos said to himself and picked up his phone.
"Adamu, whats wrong with you? Reduce your speed" he spoke to the person on the other end.

"Doctor the patient just sneezed, she is still alive" the driver informed Dr. Amos.
Dr. Amos was shocked. He was personally at the Jacobs house when the patient died.
"Adamu what are you talking about, the patient already gave up"
The next thing Dr. Amos heard from the other end was Jesus! Jesus!! Jesus!!! He raised up his head and saw that the ambulance was just involved in an accident.
The driver of the ambulance was so engrossed in the call he was making with Dr. Amos that he didn't notice he was about entering a 'T-junction'. A toyota Tundra 2013 model was also aproaching the junction with nitro speed. Before Adamu, the driver of the ambulance could do anything, the Tundra hit him so hard from the side. The ambulance swayed away from the road, its tyres were not able to hold fast to the coal tar.
The force of the collision, coupled with the bad road made the ambulance to somersault and in the process, the back door opened and grace's body fell to the ground.

Dr. Amos quickly applied his brake and his car came to a hault. He came out and ran to check the ambulance for survivors.
He saw grace lying on the ground. He picked her up and took her to his car. She was calling out weakly
"Jacobs...Jacobs..Jacobs"

After dropping her in his car, Dr. Amos wanted to go back to the ambulance when he heard an explosion. The ambulance went up in flames. The smoke was so thick one would think it's an evil spirit hovering over the Ambulance.
The tundra also had its fair share of damage and Dr.Amos was in a state of dilemma, whether to check the tundra for survivors or take grace home for medical attention. He opted for the later, he took grace to his house but not before calling his hospital to inform them of the accident.

It was at Dr. Amos home that grace was treated without the knowlege of anybody.
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Somewhere around the neighborhood of the court, there was a 6 story building. It was the building of 'Gmax group of companies'.
On the roof of the building stood a young man, he was wearing a khaki and a black hood. His phone rang and he picked it.
"Agent white, the operation parameter has changed, new target is Grace Jacobs" a voice spoke from the other end.

"Grace Jacobs? I thought she was dead?" agent white asked.

"Thats what they made us believe, but right now she is about to testify.

Agent white brought out his binoculars and viewed the court building.
"i see her" he said.

"make sure she doesn't testify. If she does then our man would go to prison" the voice said.

"Trust me, she is going back to the land of the dead" agent white said. He touched his sniper and smiled
"come on baby, we have work to do" he said.
**************************

Grace walked to the front slowly. Some people were even making way for her, nobody wanted to touch a ghost. She looked at the Judge, unlike others, he wasn't shocked. He had seen more suprises. She looked at her father, she couldn't read his mind. She walked into the witness box and Barrister clement came forward to question her.

Meanwhile, at the roof of 'Gmax group of companies, agent white's phone rang and he picked it up.
"Whats wrong with you, she is almost testifying" a voice shouted.

"I dont have a clear view, someone is in my line of sight" agent white replied.

"I dont care, shoot the im'becile" the voice shouted back and the line went dead.
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"How are you doing?" Barrister clement asked Mrs. Grace.

She held back tears and she spoke
"I'm fine"

"what really happened to you?"

Tuuuuaaaaaaah!!! The sniper was shot.
Everybody scampered to safety.

"someone has just been shot! Call the paramedics" A police officer at the premises shouted

*TBC*

woo Mheen dis ur story is mind blowing.
9ice one bro.....
am waiting for the next update.

"Tuaaahhhhh!!!" Na nigerian police be dat o, dey don land!

This story is getting hotter by the minute bros plz come continue o

Bros I can't wait for the completion of this action movie. Pls when do you plan to conclude as I have exhausted my ¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥. Suggest so that I can estimate properly.

Clumslow17: woo Mheen dis ur story is mind blowing.
9ice one bro.....
am waiting for the next update.

evening tinz

Interesting!. I had to delay my lunch bcus of this story. Cnt wait for the next part. Nice job bro, ride on! mon gbadun eeeeee

chris baba: "Tuaaahhhhh!!!" Na nigerian police be dat o, dey don land!

lol, na u sabi o

kingphilip: This story is getting hotter by the minute bros plz come continue o

that one na sure thing

Keneking: Bros I can't wait for the completion of this action movie. Pls when do you plan to conclude as I have exhausted my ¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥. Suggest so that I can estimate properly.

haha.. renew your data bundle bro