Even NL will miss David sokari on ds trend. may his soul RIp.

Audrey , tnx for d update. More wisdom & greater height.

gosh have bin a slient reader but I cant kip it in anymore..... youre awesome Audrey.. the story is awesom... everytyn awesome.... me likey ;

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Lol the amount of tears wey them go shed because of this update ehn....e fit baff pikin

abeg give me five handky i don cry tire.

JeffreyJamez: *Starts selling handky *

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Lol the amount of tears wey them go shed because of this update ehn....e fit baff pikin

pls i nid two. crying!!!

Mays dave soul rest in peace. Audrey well done.

sniffs!!!!

This is so touching. May the fear of God be a watch over what we do in life.

Madam Audrey Timms, may God's fountains of knowledge continue flows in your life.

Waoh eventually I felt for him,the episode was emotional my eyes was filled wif water,ur description was beautiful,like I was there,u got me hon....love is weird.

FIrst and formost,
This is
the first time am commenting on this Piece of Class.

And I must admit:

SOME PERSONS KNOW WHERE THEY BELONG.
Mrs Audrey,You belong to this Litreture Section.
If it were that we are in an Auditorioum,I'd Have beckoned you to
come and Stand on the Platform,for the World to acknowledge you.

but..

since it's an e-World,All I can say is Well done!

As for the Story Mrs Timms,Anywhere or Anyhow you still ask Me,I'd put
it to you that this story is a TRUE LIFE STORY,IF NOT YOUR OWN(which I
find it Hard to believe) or ATLEAST SOMEONE YOU'RE RELATED TO!!

N/B:I didnt say someone you know o,I said Someone you're related to!

but..

If its an Imagination,Mrs Audrey Timms,YOU'RE A TOP-NOTCHED WRITER!!

on a last note,is much of questions;
Where do you Stay?
&
Whats your Main Occupation?

~Chocoberry~

The hatred I feel for Dave is all gone... what a sad end for him!
...Seems there are generational curses in Dave's and Oleng's families which will never linger on in d latter's family as it will be broken when she finally marries the love of her life.
Audrey, why the tears now? I hope it's not what am thinking... hope ds ain't a non-fiction?
All in all, KUDOS TO OUR ARTICULATE AUDREYTIMMS!!!

Wow!!!....you are really good.the writting is so real and emotional.more ink to your pen and RIP to dave sokari,felt sorry for him though

RIP to Dave ..even though he made some wrong decisions,I stil feel for him....madam AT left me awed with his sad departure

........ and the man die.

Wow,am finding dis story interesting day by day but felt bad dave died in the end.Lovely story dear,great work

I can't believe dat i almost shed a tear when i was reading this episode....Dave last words were so touchin......made me remember when i lost my Dad in d year 2011.

Essyydiamond: Hepzibahbeula welcome on board the super-lioness' crew. It isn't easy. Lol

Tank u switie,it isnt easy at all!

oh my godddd. i am speechless. i had to drop my pad. n cried. no sobbed seriously. audrey. u lived dis story. i felt like i was der. thk you so much. I LOVE U. hmn

Poor oleng finaly found her true luv, dave is bad for keeping dis secret but am sori 4 his death, may his rest in gentle peace. Audrey timms u re d best kip it up, waiting 4 another story....... I luv dis story, i feel lyk reading it again.

3Dimension: my love u said it and it was more than so.

How are u mi sweetheart.

I am good mi darling

Dave's death was inevitable in d story from d moment he married Oleng cos of course d Dave-Oleng story has to end 4 the Eric-Oleng story to continue. So sad but Dave put himself in d tracks of d Chinese CONCORD-TRAIN. It's only to be expected. I pray 4 all those who lost THEIR OWN real life partners as a result of someone's wickedness, greed, manipulations or selfishness that by divine intervention they shall all recover them in Jesus name, Amen.

See as Audrey don make me become pastor.
Audreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyy.

a song 4 d late Dave sokari,
wen u say u were going i cried
wen u left me alone,i wish i cld hold u tight once again in my arms.
Audrey y did u make me soak my pilow wit tears,do u mind teling us y u cried?dis story is so real,
audrey i need point some tinz out,u started ur story so wel but then u started usin so much dialougue,i tink u shld cut down on this and be a litle bit narrative and discriptive wen u want to publish,i hope u get me
congrats ,u deserve it.u are simply 2 gud

Madam Audrey pls update oh, we don mourn Dave finish. And he exited peacefully.

au revoir dave I don't care if other people say they will miss uu me I won't miss uu for shiiiii uu were too fake all along

Audrey u made me shed tears for Dave afta d wrongs he did to Oleng.... buh Audrey his death was a painful one inspite of his effort to forgiveness n be forgiven... RIP Dave

Very emotional. ......poor Dave. ......I'm happy for the peace you found
Rest in perfect peace. ....

Weep not child for when the arrow of God strikes, people are no longer at ease and things fall apart... LOL... Well done, Audrey Timms

Audrey mia, why re u so good? All d hatred i felt for dave now gone and all i cud do ws just weep cuz of his pains. BTW is dis a true life story? Weldone sis, i wish i can see u right now and envelop u in warm embrace for a job weldone. All d same, million e hugs for u sweetie. Less i forget, happy resumption.

Dave, my poor Dave I forgive you wholeheartedly
I couldn't control my tears, I kept on thinking abt d whole scenario like it was real, like I was there. It felt so real n I cried real hard cos I loved Dave.
But am happy he was able to right his wrongs b4 dying, n he found peace at last. Even as am typing ds am crying..

Audrey you are so good, ds episode is so real n emotional. Nobody does it better, you are d best! Thank you.

#amidst tears# Dave am really sorry 4 those very awful things I said to u. I swear I didn't know Audrey was going to let u die soooooo soon. U will always be remembered by me 2 not just Eric and Oleng. Rest on now my hero,4 once u overcame jealousy and did the right thing. Audrey o Audrey! Why did u take that life that way,what if he had no chance 2 make a last wish.#crying profusely# Dave,I will miss u.

JeffreyJamez: *Starts selling handky *

buy 2 get one free!!!!!!

Lol the amount of tears wey them go shed because of this update ehn....e fit baff pikin

E be like Say u be omo ibo *money things* lol

Sad much

Sad & touching. RIP Dave

RIP Dave


Back to the matter at hand. Please let's go and vote for her as regular updater of the month. Yesterday alone, we got four updates- one in the morning, one in the afternoon and two last night. And all the updates were long. Who else here does that? Please tell me. Its the same link but I'll post it here anyway. Thanks.

https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every

A min silent for Mr. Dave


At last a final rest for a troubled life.