ifyonoj: oh my godddd. i am speechless. i had to drop my pad. n cried. no sobbed seriously. audrey. u lived dis story. i felt like i was der. thk you so much. I LOVE U. hmn

Eiya. Sorry. Hpe ur tears didn't spoil ur pad sha. Uw dear. Luv u 2

vance12: Poor oleng finaly found her true luv, dave is bad for keeping dis secret but am sori 4 his death, may his rest in gentle peace. Audrey timms u re d best kip it up, waiting 4 another story....... I luv dis story, i feel lyk reading it again.

Hmm....amen. Tanx dear

Mj45: Dave's death was inevitable in d story from d moment he married Oleng cos of course d Dave-Oleng story has to end 4 Eric-Oleng story continue. So sad but Dave put himself in d tracks of d Chinese CONCORD-TRAIN. It's only to be expected. I pray 4 all those who lost THEIR OWN real life partners as a result of someone's wickedness, greed, manipulations or selfishness that by divine intervention they shall all recover them in Jesus name, Amen.

See as Audrey don make me become pastor.
Audreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyy.

Lmao! Ride on pastor! Amen o!

Costlybabe: a song 4 d late Dave sokari,
wen u say u were going i cried
wen u left me alone,i wish i cld hold u tight once again in my arms.
Audrey y did u make me soak my pilow wit tears,do u mind teling us y u cried?dis story is so real,
audrey i need point some tinz out,u started ur story so wel but then u started usin so much dialougue,i tink u shld cut down on this and be a litle bit narrative and discriptive wen u want to publish,i hope u get me
congrats ,u deserve it.u are simply 2 gud

Lovely write up. I cried bcs 4 an instant, I became Dave. Hpe u dried ur pillow outsyd sha.

Tanx so much 4 ur input dear. I totally get u and agree with u. I tank God I posted dis story here cos it opened my eyes 2 a lot of flaws in my writing technique. I hd 2 stop d two stories I'm working on presently wen I realized I ws making d same mistake wit dem.

I hv alredy discovad wre d prblm began. Lyk I told anoda reader who pointed dis out also, its frm hw I read novels. D narrative and descrptive parts bore me 2 hell (yep, am sum1 dt is easily bored. Bored wit dis present story already). So after dis story, I intend changing my manner of reading novels and also 2 read frm other writers here (I've alredy started with flakkydagirl and prettyspicey)

Its too late 2 do anytin abt it nw cos I dnt hv d tym nor energy 4 dt now. Bt by d tym dis story is published, its gonna b different, evn in oda areas.

Tanx dear

JeffreyJamez:



Hahaha I swear I make sales die....I Don run out of stock sef........

Dave come back and die again o,make I buy Jeep lol
*counting money *

only jeep?

Mj45: Madam Audrey pls update oh, we don mourn Dave finish. And he exited peacefully.

Update na till later. We r stil in mourning. Flag flying @ half mast

shaks97: au revoir dave I don't care if other people say they will miss uu me I won't miss uu for shiiiii uu were too fake all along

Beeeffff!

Cheriepet: Audrey u made me shed tears for Dave afta d wrongs he did to Oleng.... buh Audrey his death was a painful one inspite of his effort to forgiveness n be forgiven... RIP Dave

Sorry. Hmm...indid it was. Amen

charijee: Very emotional. ......poor Dave. ......I'm happy for the peace you found
Rest in perfect peace. ....

Hmmm....me 2. Amen

PrettySpicey: Weep not child for when the arrow of God strikes, people are no longer at ease and things fall apart... LOL... Well done, Audrey Timms

I luv dis. Tanx dear. Tanx also 4 gracing dis thread. I'm grateful

toykathy: Audrey mia, why re u so good? All d hatred i felt for dave now gone and all i cud do ws just weep cuz of his pains. BTW is dis a true life story? Weldone sis, i wish i can see u right now and envelop u in warm embrace for a job weldone. All d same, million e hugs for u sweetie. Less i forget, happy resumption.

Sorry. Nah, its fiction. Tanx dear.

bibie01: Dave, my poor Dave I forgive you wholeheartedly
I couldn't control my tears, I kept on thinking abt d whole scenario like it was real, like I was there. It felt so real n I cried real hard cos I loved Dave.
But am happy he was able to right his wrongs b4 dying, n he found peace at last. Even as am typing ds am crying..

Audrey you are so good, ds episode is so real n emotional. Nobody does it better, you are d best! Thank you.

Eiya, sorry. Wey dt guy wey dey sell hankie? Bring one here. Tanx dear

JeffreyJamez:

yes o....#teamdavehaters

everybody dey shed crocodile tears Co's he's dead, when he was alive they hated his guts o...now he's dead they're pitying him.......I say boo-to-the-fücking-hoo!!!!

JeffreyJamez!!

Essyydiamond: #amidst tears# Dave am really sorry 4 those very awful things I said to u. I swear I didn't know Audrey was going to let u die soooooo soon. U will always be remembered by me 2 not just Eric and Oleng. Rest on now my hero,4 once u overcame jealousy and did the right thing. Audrey o Audrey! Why did u take that life that way,what if he had no chance 2 make a last wish.#crying profusely# Dave,I will miss u.

Lol! Sorry o! He made it na

Essyydiamond:
E be like Say u be omo ibo *money things* lol

Lol!

gal10: Sad much

Sorry

omotalkie: Sad & touching. RIP Dave

Hmmm....amen

thepatroit: RIP Dave


Back to the matter at hand. Please let's go and vote for her as regular updater of the month. Yesterday alone, we got four updates- one in the morning, one in the afternoon and two last night. And all the updates were long. Who else here does that? Please tell me. Its the same link but I'll post it here anyway. Thanks.

https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every

Amen. Dis PR sef. Make we bury dave first na. Btw, tanx

3Dimension: A min silent for Mr. Dave


At last a final rest for a troubled life.

Hmmm.....

Queenxstar: Jeffrey, I'm trying so hard not to laugh, we're mourning Dave.

Abi? Lol! Jeffrey sabi beef

Queenxstar: Ma'am, I learnt a lot, thanks for sharing.

Uw dear. Tanx 4 gracing dis thread wit ur presence. I'm grateful

olarafiat: emm aunti what of aunt vien's secreeet d 1 oleng mama take yarn dat year

E dey com

codedbaby: Audrey I can't help the tears. it keeps flowing. RIP to Dave. he made an impact on Oleng. I think without him Oleng and Eric will never come in contact again.
To u Audrey I pray that from whence this came forth, the stream will never dry up. Expecting more from u.

Hmm....touching words! Amen! More coming up later

Essyydiamond:
Yes o,she deserves it and more. Audrey is really a star and am loving her handiwork everyday.

Tanx dear

bookhy: U r d best!!! Datz all i can say

Tanx dear

stormybucci: **runs as fast my leg can carry me b4 i get my handsome face bruised** dere's God ooo, so because of wat i said dats y u wanna call dat bouncer u call a bf 4 me abi??

Lol! Bf? U better run some more

ebysandra: at this point i have to say WELLDONE.Your work is so real made me cry,more gease

Sorry. Tanx dear

stormybucci: yesss at last dave don evaporate. Dat dave na ba$tard, all he did from d beginning were evil till he died, may is soul rumble in hell mtcheew... Back 2 u audrey, **No comment** wetin i wan talk wae pple neva talk finish?? yesss!!! audrey don't forget d money

YOURS FAITHFULLY
STORMYBUCCI

Even at death u still dey beef. Na wa o! 4get dt money o! I've donated it 2 charity

goldwaters:
Lol! Ahn ahn Audrey, u wan spoil mkt for me so.
Don't worry I'll give u a cut from d profit.*wink*

Nw u r talking! *smiling to the bank*

goldwaters:
Lol. I've never been 1 to stay away from a good read and this piece is wonderful.
( whispering in audrey's ears, "Coming from one who started reading m&b before I was 8" its not flattery".)

*whispering back 'I did the same tin* tanx dear

JeffreyJamez:



Hahaha I swear I make sales die....I Don run out of stock sef........

Dave come back and die again o,make I buy Jeep lol
*counting money *

Lol!

AudreyTimms:
Lol! Bf? U better run some more

xo na husband?? **opens mouth wide till fly enters** mummy audrey no vex ooo, it was a slip of d hand