Another super story.

@op: what you need are reviewers to critique your story. Why not take it to the Literature Section? You might be lucky enough to grab a few followers.

Anyway, word of "advice":

~ Incorporate paragraphing. Reading blocks of text is off-putting.

~ Watch your tenses - you mix them up frequently

~ And finally, quit the text-to-speech / abbreviations. It makes you come across as a very lazy writer.

kreamidiva: Ok...

Please someone should explain in clear terms what the problem here is.

How is op being cheated? So your new wife is sleeping with Dr. Lookman? Haba! She no try o.

So Dr lookman gave your wife belle? Wicked man!

She even set up candles and roses to announce her infidelity to you? What impunity!

I'm vexed. Really vexed!

Now this is a perfect example of SARCASM

5minsmadness:
Now this is a perfect example of SARCASM

Bros, morning o. Na wetin i understand from the script be that o. What did u understand biko?

kreamidiva:

Bros, morning o. Na wetin i understand from the script be that o. What did u understand biko?

The only thing I got was konji na BASTARD

Eiyah, stories that touch the intestines.

5minsmadness:
The only thing I got was konji na BASTARD

Now this is a perfect example of SARCASM.

Op, You have a big problem on your hands and its called self service and pornography. You will never be satisfied with any wife except a whorish woman. Decent women do not do the things you see in Indecency films. And as long as you are seeking such a woman, you are not ready to raise a family. Such women never stay with one man and can never build proper families.

So you need to be delivered from those two evil spirits and fast. You married for lust and not love. Let me tell you, Love is not sex and sex is not Love. Love is God and right now, you dont have Him. And at this stage, without Him, you can never learn to love your wife.

You cheated yourself and even your wife.

My advise, Repent from your sins and turn to God or else...sorry.

For your info I got married at 25, nine months after NYSC and that was 14 years ago.. Guess what, we are still going strong because we built our marital hopes in Christ alone.

Sorry if I sound harsh but you need a reality check right now.

Btw God is good ooo..twins on first attempt. ..I waited 6 years.

Read the Bible story of Amnon and Tamar, King Davids children. If you end up behaving like Amnon did, hating Tamar and driving her out immediately after sleeping with her, then you may die like Amnon died. A word is enough for the wise.

If this is true;

kreamidiva: Ok...

Please someone should explain in clear terms what the problem here is.

How is op being cheated? So your new wife is sleeping with Dr. Lookman? Haba! She no try o.

So Dr lookman gave your wife belle? Wicked man!

She even set up candles and roses to announce her infidelity to you? What impunity!

I'm vexed. Really vexed!

so na wetin happen be that?
Kreamidiva ooooooo

aisha2: The funny part for me is hoe he Is calculating everything:
Ring: N 80,000
Engagement party: N 145, 000 as if he is comparing the prices to the number of video games or por-n he could have bought for that amount and derived more satisfaction.

He married only for the se-x amd after all the anticipation it wasn't what.he imagined it to be hence he feels like he should have used his money better. Chai. Marriage haff suffer.

Nairaland is the place to be when you bored and need to get drunk!

Emessy: Hello Family section , I am posting my story here because I feel this section has the best of matured minds and I hope I will get the best advice here, so first of all I would like to beg all readers to bear with me as my story may be a little bit lengthy and may also contain a few high content languages, Thank you
I am 24 year old Graduate working for my fathers company as an IT manager , I graduated from school in 2012 and started work immediately ,than around July last year I met this beautiful, flawless woman,(at least i thought because I was still a virgin and all i dream t of then was having s*x,) we courted for seven months with no s*x(stuck with self service) I was so in love with her, I hardly spend six hours without hearing her voice , at work and home all i thought of was her , February this year I decided to make it official, I broke into my personal savings , went to a jewelry shop and bought an engagement ring of N80,000 , I threw a very big birthday party for her with friends and family of over N165,000 and I asked her to marry me,(Though i was in love but the thing pained me very well) But i thought to myself "SHE IS THE LOVE OF MY LIFE" so she is worth it, A few weeks later her father invited me and he asked to me to send my elders ,My elders went and everything was arranged our wedding was set and again I had to pay for everything (the wedding ceremoniessss , the dowry , .....)It was really painful and I had a hard time recovering *financially* , Well on our wedding night It was nothing as I expected , I engaged my wife in fore play(and believe me that is the only sweet part about marriage) the s*x was nothing like the Indecency's i have watched, self service is far more sweeter and to make it worst she just layed down there enjoying it , after about 15 minutes i erupted ,I stared at my wife as she slept , a sudden feeling of hatred ran into my mind , I felt like calling her father the next day and ask for a refund.as time went by the hatred kept on growing ,though i tried hard not to show her and i always tried my best to pleasure her and make her happy , But I was dying in the inside , I just wish I could escape this torture and go back to playing video games and hanging out with my guys 24/7 , Last week I ran into a friend of mine and he advised me to approach my wife with "different styles" we watched some reality clips(was strange though) but it made me feel good ,I was happy , I quickly ran home to try it on wifey , when i got home, everything was different, there were candles ,nice fragrance , slow music, plenty food and so many romantic stuffs everywhere , In my mind I was like "so this woman can read mind ehn" I went into the bedroom , she was wearing a very beautiful dress staring at the window , I was really excited ,I reached out my hand to unbuckle my belt , then she turned to me and smiled "OMG so my wife beautiful like this" she walked towards me ,grabbed my shoulder , her lickicious lips reached to my ear , Hoping for the greatest kiss of my life , I grabbed her behind , THEN SHE WHISPERED TO MY EAR "BABY na AM JUST COMING FROM Dr Lukman's PLACE, HE SAID MY PREGNANCY RESULTS ARE POSITIVE, We are going to have a set of twins.

Op, is your wife's name Tinuade? It appears this lady that just complained about her husband and described exactly similar marital circumstances to Tribune newspaper fits the description of your wife.

https://www.nairaland.com/1920713/why-husband-watch-pronographic-films#26630235

Godmystrength: so na wetin happen be that?
Kreamidiva ooooooo

Nne na how i understand am be that. All these scriptwriters sef...

Summary please..

IseOluwa777: Op, You have a big problem on your hands and its called self service and pornography. You will never be satisfied with any wife except a whorish woman. Decent women do not do the things you see in Indecency films. And as long as you are seeking such a woman, you are not ready to raise a family. Such women never stay with one man and can never build proper families.

So you need to be delivered from those two evil spirits and fast. You married for lust and not love. Let me tell you, Love is not sex and sex is not Love. Love is God and right now, you dont have Him. And at this stage, without Him, you can never learn to love your wife.

You cheated yourself and even your wife.

My advise, Repent from your sins and turn to God or else...sorry.

For your info I got married at 25, nine months after NYSC and that was 14 years ago.. Guess what, we are still going strong because we built our marital hopes in Christ alone.

Sorry if I sound harsh but you need a reality check right now.

Btw God is good ooo..twins on first attempt. ..I waited 6 years.

Read the Bible story of Amnon and Tamar, King Davids children. If you end up behaving like Amnon did, hating Tamar and driving her out immediately after sleeping with her, then you may die like Amnon died. A word is enough for the wise.

the guy i muslim na

Is there a problem here? Wife not good in bed, hubby gets home, wife lights candles, makes meal, looks sexy, pregnant with twins, and I assume they have sex. Please, what then is the problem? Or you didnt have enough mb to copy and paste the part two from LIB?