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The Spider; The Butterfly, The Struggle For Survival And The Beauty Of Creation / Trailer For The Book BOTTLED BUTTERFLY .written By John Oguntuase- 2nd Touch / Trailer,bottled BUTTERFLY By John Oguntuase ,forward:mike Bamiloye. 2nd Touch (2) (3) (4)
| Butterfly by Nobody: 9:54pm On Oct 05, 2014 |
BUTTERFLY Come to me o beauty touch my skin and me smile happily, flap your wings and let me feel its breeze, shake your antenna and let me know it's real. : Will you stay with me because you make me dive to check my soul within, you remind me of who I am that the creator is here within. : Who can explain your beauty? Who can understand how you catch our attention? Who can enjoy the sweetness of nectars. just like you do with wonders : I love to learn of you, to know I have a bright future like you did when you were a caterpillar you still held on to life. : I have learn through you that life is wavy but who ever wish to be happy will be forever be happy. Akintayo Akinjide (Divepen). Written for 11month old Scarlett Johnston, who is seriously ill. 1 Like |
| Re: Butterfly by texanomaly(f): 12:34am On Oct 06, 2014 |
Very sweet.  |
| Re: Butterfly by OMA4U(m): 6:43am On Oct 06, 2014 |
I love this poem. Nice one, divepen. |
| Re: Butterfly by Nobody: 8:04am On Oct 06, 2014 |
OMA4U:Thanx boss and @ Texanomaly... |
| Re: Butterfly by papindinho(m): 8:18am On Oct 06, 2014 |
Divepen lets his pen dive dexterously...... A creative one bro. |
| Re: Butterfly by noble4d(m): 9:05am On Oct 06, 2014 |
Wonderful bro, but take note of punctuations and endeavor to start every word of each stanza with block letter except if for enjambment. You should have maintain quatrain to make the poem flow like a river. In the second stanza, i think the first three lines suppose to be an enjambment and rhetorical question or a question. I love the language you use, so simple for a lay reader to understand. I salute you for your dexterity. |
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