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Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 4:17pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
jummy604:comments that boosten the brain...Thanx..welcome |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 4:18pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
moseph:Welcome...Thanx for your comment.. Updates will be here soon |
Re: I Need To Know by stuff46(m): 4:25pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
following |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 5:15pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
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Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 5:30pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
stuff46:Welcome baba... |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 6:20pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
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Re: I Need To Know by Fatalveli(m): 7:20pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
Damn! How come I'm just seeing dis #divepen u are da bomb# carry on boss... |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 7:29pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
Fatalveli:Thanx baba....Welcome oooo |
Re: I Need To Know by hassan85(m): 7:32pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
the flows of d work has been great...keep it coming Weldon |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 8:08pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
hassan85:sir Hassan... |
Re: I Need To Know by Writeditor: 8:30pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
I'd say pay closer attention to small details. To illustrate, here's from the first and second paragraphs of Chapter One - Felicia was an exceptional girl. She was known among most of her family members to be a very light sleeper; infact, [1] one of her uncle [2] who is a professor believes she was suffering from insomnia and had pestered her parent [3] to treat her on that.So, [4] Just to please this Uncle [5] of hers,and [6] out of curiosity, her parent had taken her to a certified Hospital but the Doctor [7] said she was not having such sleeping problem. Today, she was still sleeping at 9.am. [8] Nobody would disturb or dares disturb her, she knows, so she slept soundly. [9] 1. “In fact” - two words. 2. “Uncles” - the noun or pronoun that follows “one of” is always pluralised. 3. You sure you didn’t mean “parents”? If you mean one parent it’s batter to use the more specific “father” or “mother”. 4. Insert a space after the full stop – this error is very common around here and I’m not sure why. It makes your writing inelegant. 5. There is no need to capitalise the uncle. 6. Same as (4) above. 7. No need to capitalise hospital and doctor. Capitalisation is generally reserved for proper nouns – that is names of people and places. You may only capitalise anything else to “foreground” it as a technique. 8. “By 9am” or “by 9a.m.” or “by 9AM”. A space after the number is also fine. 9. “She knew nobody would disturb her, so she slept soundly.” Or “She knew nobody would dare disturb her, so she slept soundly.” |
Re: I Need To Know by hassan85(m): 8:38pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
Divepen:I always remain loyal |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 8:41pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
Writeditor:Thanx alot for this... |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 9:15pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
hassan85:Yes baba.. |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 9:19pm On Nov 02, 2014 |
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Re: I Need To Know by kingphilip(m): 7:15am On Nov 03, 2014 |
wow divepen a really Gud work u r doing here please do keep it up |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 7:47am On Nov 03, 2014 |
kingphilip:Thanx boss |
Re: I Need To Know by kingphilip(m): 8:47am On Nov 03, 2014 |
Divepen:Uwc sir |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 10:43am On Nov 03, 2014 |
Divepen: Boss...I was just posting it somehwre else. looking forward to ur new creation |
Re: I Need To Know by lenmafon: 11:27am On Nov 03, 2014 |
why do NL writers acknowledge only their old pals thereby making the newies feel unwanted? ok o! i don comot o since newies are not important. divepen write ur story for ur old pals o *leaves in anger* |
Re: I Need To Know by kingphilip(m): 12:42pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
lenmafon:no vex dear so b so e be o Na just the ones wey their brain fit remember no commot abeg come make we enjoy dis beta story together |
Re: I Need To Know by jummy604: 12:47pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
I hope dy didnt do it sha.hehehe |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 1:01pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
lenmafon:I'm so sorry...This is my second time... And who is a newbie...You? No...you are my padi... |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 1:06pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
jummy604:Lolllll Dey ddntgini |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 1:13pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
kingphilip:Thank you baba... |
Re: I Need To Know by Fatalveli(m): 1:42pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
I must say I'm really enjoying dis work.... Keep it up bro |
Re: I Need To Know by lenmafon: 2:20pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
kingphilip: oga kingphilip na u det follow me abi na me dey follow u about? ok i no vex again o! |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 3:15pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
Fatalveli:Thanx baba.... Thanxx |
Re: I Need To Know by jummy604: 3:29pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
Divepen:that means i didnt read dat part,tot dy didnt o |
Re: I Need To Know by Nobody: 4:00pm On Nov 03, 2014 |
jummy604:Maybe...I did not expressly say it...But you will know as we go on.. Hope you read the update I made now... |
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