Topic: Strength of the African Mother

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- 8 bars/16 Lines...(It shouldn't be less)

- Deadline is Wednesday Dec 31st. 6pm 2014

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Checkity checks. . . .mehn this topic ehn?:-/. . . .

Typing

A great africAn w0man?,my m0ther is 0ne/she's str0ng and beautiful,,her shinning skin could cos another eclipse of the sun!!/with her eyes luking gud,,its what everyman will want/she gat all it takes to c0mpete.sorry did i said compete? Well, the 0nly c0mpetiti0n she gat is when she's staring at the mirror!!/
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Enough of the hyping/lets go to her behaviour nd where her strength is lying./she's strong and always happy/she do different works at thesame time,i call her my machine/she c00ks nd put f00d 0n the table,mehn she must be a Daddy/
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Y0!,my happines is her strenght!/she w0rks hard without thinking to relent/when niggers tryna strike me,she turn footballerz too and defend/thats why i cAll her the real player. .u get?/wheneva i nid her? I'll hear her steps in secs. .
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An african m0ther is the best/she g0 d0 anytyn to see say u n0 vex/na 4 9ja u go see w0man they tap palmwine/but if na 0yibo w0man? She go tell y0u say i'0n av that time/mehn fvck that craps/
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The african child fears and respect hs mum/but in tha u.s? U'l see a child threatning hz mum to shoot her with a gun/but 4 9ja? Where u wan try that 0ne f0r?/unless the child is stupid and dumb
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An african woman is g00d in terms 0f advice/mehn let me tell u a st0ry i heard/a dauqhter l0st her kind dad/i saw r0cks c0ming awt fr0m her eyes/mehn she cried hard!!
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But the mum t0ld her, she'll always make her happy/and nw the gurl f0rg0t ab0u the death 0f daddy/c0s anytyn she wants? She gat it/mum was evrywhere advicing her 0n how ab0ut life with diffrent adages/she underst00d evrytyn ab0u life in her tenda age/
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Mum wil always wake her to av0id her attending skull late/nd always enc0urage her 2 get gud grades./nd later the gurl grew up singing as a talent/she rubd minds with damn vets/nd mum adviced her 2 start rec0rding tracks. .nd she did/and nw her track is hitting/even her fl0ws ar nt always early on time,they're the latest!!. .mehn mum just made her life befitting/GOD bless the african M0ther. . .

Kr0ne come and close this thread if limerick wont post

Thread closed! RapAcme wins and qualifies for the semi finals

kr0ne:
Thread closed! RapAcme wins and qualifies for the finals

finals or semi-finals?

ELYMAXiimus:

finals or semi-finals?

Corrected, thanks