stuff46:
Please review your chapter, it contradict what cyber wrote on his chapter. I have read and read, i could'nt assimilate what you wrote to correspond with the dude wrote.

likewise me too.i dnt jst undastand

Cybershow:
likewise me too.i dnt jst undastand

And it was all your fault! Kusibe77, its not urs!

thronekid:

And it was all your fault! Kusibe77, its not urs!

Hmmm king in what way o

Cybershow:
Hmmm king in what way o

Your storyline never left any room for the succeeding writers

thronekid:

Your storyline never left any room for the succeeding writers

in what way o..
cc. stuff46

OK, you guys have started. Sometimes the hardest part about starting a story is the beginning. Congratulations on passing this hurdle!

As far as I can see there are two stories, the first chapter dealing with Seun, the fashion designer, and his wife Rose. and the second chapter consisting of Daniel, Seun's son, and his wife who also happens to be named rose. Daniel has a mistress, Preiye(prieyes tend to be stubborn ladies oh, at least the ones I've met, lol) and a live-in inlaw called Eze. A child, Moses, is somewhere in the background. obviously the marriage is having problems already.

Good start, just work on your diction, spelling, and tenses.
The story is ripe, can go in any direction! do you guys want to do a thriller? romance? is someone going to run mad? is Daniel's wife actually being unfaithful or was she meeting with someone who will give her or her husband a job and better their lot in life? is this story a comparison of the experiences of father and son? their similarities, differences? is one a wife-beater while the other isn't?

So much untapped potential! You guys should fire on!

Two storyline; Royver yes, but they differ. Cyber said daniel was a young boy, kusi said he was married. I just want one of them to rename the character then i pick up from there.

stuff46:
Two storyline; Royver yes, but they differ. Cyber said daniel was a young boy, kusi said he was married. I just want one of them to rename the character then i pick up from there.

bt you know how i organised the story., is kusibe77 that is not complying i need to explain sumthing to him so he could understand the story line

Kusibe77 please and please am begging let met on facebook or 2go please my 2go name z ayshow135..please let me there please please

stuff46:
Two storyline; Royver yes, but they differ. Cyber said daniel was a young boy, kusi said he was married. I just want one of them to rename the character then i pick up from there.

But that doesn't stop anything na. It could be two different timelines....father and son. The first chapter happened 30yrs ago nd the second chapter happens in recent times. So you are now comparing the lives of both men-father and son.


Unless you already had something else planned out...

Royver:

But that doesn't stop anything na. It could be two different timelines....father and son. The first chapter happened 30yrs ago nd the second chapter happens in recent times. So you are now comparing the lives of both men-father and son.


Unless you already had something else planned out...

we have something else plans out ooo..
Susrite,stuff46, evangelio. Am i lieing

Tattesco
pres01
bluestarry
You didn't show up in this collaboration of stuff.. Please and please and please just show up... We need you to comply.. Please.

Cc: stuff46, evangelio, susrite

Nothinq has been planned or would be planned out

Royver:

But that doesn't stop anything na. It could be two different timelines....father and son. The first chapter happened 30yrs ago nd the second chapter happens in recent times. So you are now comparing the lives of both men-father and son.


Unless you already had something else planned out...

stuff46:
Nothinq has been planned or would be planned out

hmmm my boss bt i talk abt sumtin in d fb group... Aren't you there

My boss stuff46 am done with it

Cybershow:
My boss stuff46 am done with it

broda i sent u a fb msg.
Kindly reply

i was confused by the storyline too. I toook seun as daniel. Maybe cyber not explain something clearly. He said seun give birth to daniel. Meaning seun is already married and later he said he got married to rose. he did not say anything about daniel anymore.

We will discuss and come up with something.
Cyber and I

Cc. Stuff46
Is like this brother don dey vex. Abeg no vex

Cybershow:
we have something else plans out ooo..
Susrite,stuff46, evangelio. Am i lieing

we have something in our sleeves

Kusibe77:
broda i sent u a fb msg.
Kindly reply

Yea i have seen that... gonna add you in the group

susrite:
we have something in our sleeves

Abi o

Chisos..(in a calabar man's voice)
i love ma group abeg..

Chinweblinkz:
Chisos..(in a calabar man's voice)
i love ma group abeg..

Hmmm..... my group is still the greatest.. that the fact...

Stuff46,susrite,evangelio,tattesco,pres01 where are thou?..... please show up... i can't move this train alone

Cybershow:
Stuff46,susrite,evangelio,tattesco,pres01 where are thou?..... please show up... i can't move this train alone

Here sir.

Cybershow:
Hmmm..... my group is still the greatest.. that the fact...

Laughed till my stomach ached.... I cant fit believe this! Stuff46, what your take on this [No sentiments!]?

thronekid:

Laughed till my stomach ached.... I cant fit believe this! Stuff46, what your take on this [No sentiments!]?

z better the stomach burst.. Thronekid you go fall

Evangelio:


Here sir.

alright happy to hear from you again...

Cybershow:
alright happy to hear from you again...

i went over to Larrysun and Dyounstar's collabo thread and i saw the stuff they were putting up, even our very own stuff46 and Thronekid, it gave me some hope that we can do it too, a step at a time, though something rocked our ship, lets move forward as a team and finish the assignment.

Evangelio:



i went over to Larrysun and Dyounstar's collabo thread and i saw the stuff they were putting up, even our very own stuff46 and Thronekid, it gave me some hope that we can do it too, a step at a time, though something rocked our ship, lets move forward as a team and finish the assignment.

We, Group 2 go must win, u see what we're putting up'

thronekid:

We, Group 2 go must win, u see what we're putting up'

you guys are doing really well, kudos. Bt we will win...........

Cybershow:
Stuff46,susrite,evangelio,tattesco,pres01 where are thou?..... please show up... i can't move this train alone

present sire