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Waiting . . . by Nobody: 1:23am On May 10, 2009
Show me what you've got, Sauron.
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 1:30am On May 10, 2009
stillwater:

Show me what you've got, Sauron.

Piece of cake. . . . . tongue

BEAUTIFUL WOMAN

Hey girl. . . . love it when you say "Hey J"
Your smiles brighten up my whole day.
I had a dream i sculpted us making love.
I shaped it to remake the way i've been seeing us.
I've liked you for a while now, i felt it's time.
To tell you my feelings are true.
I'm letting you know i'm really feeling you.
Your beautiful full lips, your soft hair.
The long lashes on your big brown eye's, i can't help but stare.
I love the friendship we have,
So please don't let this affect that.
If you don't feel the same way, that's ok
I can respect that.
Dancing with you is like dancing with a star.
Dance you, romance you.
I'd like to really get to know who you are.
Your like's, your dislikes.
Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like.
I'd like to be the shelter that protect's you in storms.
I'd like to be the blanket that keeps you warm.
At night, while your sleeping and dreaming.
I'd like to be the knight that a princess like you can believe in.
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Love is blind, if so i consider my vision cloaked,
Astray in a pendulum of sentiment
Radiant, evoked with a passion that God envies
Fervor my feelings to you, for i have perceived a bountiful future
12 months complete, we have become one and the same
Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman
Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed
The day we announced our fidelity, time froze
You are mine, a sign from the divine
With time, we will devise a future together
Feathered touch, us fettered,
Forever my divine wish be true
Tethered for eternity just me. . . . .
and you.
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 1:34am On May 10, 2009
~Sauron~:

Piece of cake. . . . . tongue


Hey girl. . . . love it when you say "Hey J"
Your smiles brighten up my whole day.
I had a dream I sculpted us making love.
I shaped it to remake the way i've been seeing us.
I've liked you for a while now, I felt it's time.
To tell you my feelings are true.
I'm letting you know i'm really feeling you.
Your beautiful full lips, your soft hair.
The long lashes on your big brown eye's, i can't help but stare.
I love the friendship we have,
So please don't let this affect that.
If you don't feel the same way, that's ok
I can respect that.
Dancing with you is like dancing with a star.
Dance you, romance you.
I'd like to really get to know who you are.
Your like's, your dislikes.
Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like.
I'd like to be the shelter that protect's you in storms.
I'd like to be the blanket that keeps you warm.
At night, while your sleeping and dreaming.
I'd like to be the knight that a princess like you can believe in.
------------------------------------------------------
Love is blind, if so I consider my vision cloaked,
Astray in a pendulum of sentiment
Radiant, evoked with a passion that God Envies
Fervor my feelings to you, for I have perceived a bountiful future
12 months complete, we have become one and the same
Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman
Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed
The day we announced our fidelity, time froze
You are mine, a sign from the divine
With time, we will devise a future together
Feathered touch, us fettered,
Forever my divine wish be true
Tethered for eternity just me. . . . .
and you.


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kiss kiss kiss kiss Thats beautiful wink
Sauron has a soft heart afterall cheesy
But what is the name of the poem?
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 1:41am On May 10, 2009
tope5000:

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kiss kiss kiss kiss Thats beautiful wink
Sauron has a soft heart afterall cheesy

There's actually milk and honey right under my venom-sac. grin grin grin


But what is the name of the poem?

Beautiful Woman.
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 1:45am On May 10, 2009
~Sauron~:

There's actually milk and honey right under my venom-sac. grin grin grin

lol. . . .well it wud be nice to see the milk n honey side of u more on NL cheesy


Beautiful Woman.

Nice . . . . u shud try and write poems more often darl wink

my fave parts are:
Your smiles brighten up my whole day.
I had a dream I sculpted us making love.
I shaped it to remake the way i've been seeing us.
Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like.
I'd like to be the shelter that protect's you in storms.
I'd like to be the blanket that keeps you warm.
At night, while your sleeping and dreaming.
I'd like to be the knight that a princess like you can believe in.
Love is blind, if so I consider my vision cloaked,
Astray in a pendulum of sentiment
Radiant, evoked with a passion that God Envies
Fervor my feelings to you, for I have perceived a bountiful future
12 months complete, we have become one and the same
Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman
Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed
The day we announced our fidelity, time froze
You are mine, a sign from the divine
With time, we will devise a future together
Feathered touch, us fettered,
Forever my divine wish be true
Tethered for eternity just me. . . . .
and you.

Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:06am On May 10, 2009
tope5000:

lol. . . .well it wud be nice to see the milk n honey side of u more on NL cheesy

I cannot guarantee that.


Nice . . . . u shud try and write poems more often darl wink

Rap lyrics are better. wink
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 2:18am On May 10, 2009
You can as well shoot an arrow to [i]her [/i]heart and get it over with . . . Lovely!
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:20am On May 10, 2009
stillwater:

You can as well shoot an arrow to [i]her [/i]heart and get it over with . . . Lovely!

It's for ma lecturer, one gorgeous woman. kiss kiss kiss
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 2:27am On May 10, 2009
~Sauron~:

It's for ma lecturer, one gorgeous woman. kiss kiss kiss

Is there more from where that came from?
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 2:29am On May 10, 2009
~Sauron~:

I cannot guarantee that.

lol. .  . . . . very typical of the jackal tongue


Rap lyrics are better. wink

Well make it a rap love lyrics then if that makes sense undecided. . . . not necessarily poems
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:42am On May 10, 2009
stillwater:

Is there more from where that came from?

I think so. . . . . .

tope5000:

lol. .  . . . . very typical of the jackal tongue

Hehehehe


Well make it a rap love lyrics then if that makes sense undecided. . . . not necessarily poems

I'll try. . . .

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2 LOVE BIRDS. . . .

Your eyes shine through the night, they look so brilliant
Stare up into the stars, witness a sight of millions

We lay sprawled on a blanket, on wet grass but we got each other
Its mid-January so its cold but we got these covers

We just came from a candle lit dinner so i know you're feelin right
And by the smile on your face, the blazing stars pierced and killed the night

I leaned in for a kiss, you looked at me and smiled
Your lips on my lips, i'm addicted, i'm high

Your smell, intoxicating, your touch, incredible
We're both actors in this lover's story, I'll direct the mood

You rolled over on top of me, you laughed and pinched me
You whispered dirty thoughts, they started sounding tempting

Do this and you'll do that, oh no, sounds too good
My heart raced the daytona 500, i tried to resist but who could?

Your lips met my neck, i bit my lip with pleasure
You went down and i went down, we did some things together

It wasn't nasty, this was love set in motion
Poetry that was moving, our feelings were ferocious

You finished and i finished, the timing just worked
You looked in my eyes, you were murmuring your words

You were perfect in that moment, i just wanted to keep it
So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 2:47am On May 10, 2009
~Sauron~:

I think so. . . . . .

Hehehehe

I'll try. . . .

------------------------------------------------------------------------------
2 LOVE BIRDS. . . .

Your eyes shine through the night, they look so brilliant
Stare up into the stars, witness a sight of millions

We lay sprawled on a blanket, on wet grass but we got each other
Its mid-January so its cold but we got these covers

We just came from a candle lit dinner so i know you're feelin right
And by the smile on your face, the blazing stars pierced and killed the night

I leaned in for a kiss, you looked at me and smiled
Your lips on my lips, i'm addicted, i'm high

Your smell, intoxicating, your touch, incredible
We're both actors in this lover's story, I'll direct the mood

You rolled over on top of me, you laughed and pinched me
You whispered dirty thoughts, they started sounding tempting

Do this and you'll do that, oh no, sounds too good
My heart raced the daytona 500, i tried to resist but who could?

Your lips met my neck, i bit my lip with pleasure
You went down and i went down, we did some things together

It wasn't nasty, this was love set in motion
Poetry that was moving, our feelings were ferocious

You finished and i finished, the timing just worked
You looked in my eyes, you were murmuring your words

You were perfect in that moment, i just wanted to keep it
So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron is getting me HOT tonite kiss kiss kiss
stephen had berra move over cheesy
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:53am On May 10, 2009
tope5000:

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron is getting me HOT tonite kiss kiss kiss
stephen had berra move over cheesy

So you have been crinking StephenP all along??
Hmmmmmmmmmm. . . . . . .
U are in trouble.
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 2:56am On May 10, 2009
~Sauron~:

So you have been crinking StephenP all along??
Hmmmmmmmmmm. . . . . . .
U are in trouble.

Oh no babe
U know i have been faithful to u . . . . it was my nu yr resolutions tongue
Oya lets go practice some of the things u said in ur poem again grin cheesy kiss
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 3:00am On May 10, 2009
OMG!!! Sauron!



I've been hoping to see this side of you and you came through. I can't even pick my fav, they are both beautiful.

tope5000:

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron is getting me HOT tonite kiss kiss kiss
stephen had berra move over cheesy

lol both of them are good.
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 3:01am On May 10, 2009
St☆rStruck:

OMG!!! Sauron!



I've been hoping to see this side of you and you came through. I can't even pick my fav, they are both beautiful.

lol both of them are good.

Lmao@gif
Yep they are both good wink
Re: Waiting . . . by StephenP(m): 7:38pm On May 10, 2009
I don't believe this! Is this really Sauron?

What have Stillwater, Tope and St☆rStruck done to you? grin

It sounds so real; like it's not some BS but you actually have these feelings for someone.

Good job man.
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 9:22pm On May 10, 2009
StephenP:

I don't believe this! Is this really Sauron?

What have Stillwater, Tope and St☆rStruck done to you? grin

It sounds so real; like it's not some BS but you actually have these feelings for someone.

Good job man.

He has always had it in him . . .he just needed a lil push cheesy
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 1:33am On May 11, 2009
So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret

Humming Alicia Keys "Diary" cheesy

I won't tell your secrets
Your secrets are safe with me
I will keep your secrets
Just think of me as the pages in your diary
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 1:44am On May 11, 2009
StephenP:

I don't believe this! Is this really Sauron?

Sauron reloaded!!!


What have Stillwater, Tope and St☆rStruck done to you? grin
It sounds so real; like it's not some BS but you actually have these feelings for someone.
Good job man.

Bes' believe it. . . . . wink
Re: Waiting . . . by bluespice(f): 9:55am On May 12, 2009
oh lord sauron!

im pleasantly surprised
u papi be giving darling stephen a run for his money?
naw position
yes position


on a more serious note im loving these pieces
lucky is the object of these many affections u so sweetly profess smiley
Re: Waiting . . . by Ibime(m): 4:27pm On May 12, 2009
Negro please!  grin

Your raps contain much more poetry and a wider breadth of language than what you wrote up there.  tongue
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 10:38pm On May 15, 2009
Ibime:

Negro please!  grin
Your raps contain much more poetry and a wider breadth of language than what you wrote up there.  tongue

That is because we are now allowed to swear and romance has a smaller scope in the grand scheme of things.
Anyways. . . . .I will improve.


-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
ELEMENTS OF DESIRE
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of Reproduction
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers.

To be continued. . . .
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 10:50pm On May 15, 2009
My long dead hormones are suddenly alive. lipsrsealed lipsrsealed lipsrsealed lipsrsealed
Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:07pm On May 15, 2009
~Sauron~:

That is because we are now allowed to swear and romance has a smaller scope in the grand scheme of things.
Anyways. . . . .I will improve.


-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
ELEMENTS OF DESIRE
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of Reproduction
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers.

To be continued. . . .

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron just got me HOT N WET . . . . . . . . kiss kiss kiss cheesy
Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:09pm On May 15, 2009
TOPE2000!:

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron just got me HOT N WET . . . . . . . . kiss kiss kiss cheesy


shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:10pm On May 15, 2009
~Sauron~:

That is because we are now allowed to swear and romance has a smaller scope in the grand scheme of things.
Anyways. . . . .I will improve.


-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
ELEMENTS OF DESIRE
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of Reproduction
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers.


YES!!!! You've given all I needed today!




~Sauron~:

To be continued. . . .

Alright now

Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:36pm On May 15, 2009
St☆rStruck:

YES!!!! You've given all I needed today!

You do know it was sauron that wrote that poem not stephenP angry angry tongue
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:38pm On May 15, 2009
TOPE2000!:

You do know it was sauron that wrote that poem not stephenP angry angry tongue

You and Sauron broke up remember?
Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:38pm On May 15, 2009
Tope2000 and Starstruck

Both of you are morons! cheesy tongue

Sauron only copied and pasted the poem, he didnt write it! grin
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:40pm On May 15, 2009
MrCrackles:

Tope2000 and Starstruck

Both of you are morons! cheesy tongue

Sauron only copied and pasted the poem, he didnt write it! grin




I know how Sauron writes and that is definitely his work.
Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:40pm On May 15, 2009
St☆rStruck:

You and Sauron broke up remember?

we r back together. . . .eat that tongue

MrCrackles:

Tope2000 and Starstruck

Both of you are morons! cheesy tongue

Sauron only copied and pasted the poem, he didnt write it! grin


I have verified it. . . . . .the poem is sauron's original wink
dont hate tongue cheesy

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