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"Waiting For Tomorrow" A Poem By A Nairalander / Waiting / I'm Waiting (2) (3) (4)
Waiting . . . by Nobody: 1:23am On May 10, 2009 |
Show me what you've got, Sauron. |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 1:30am On May 10, 2009 |
stillwater: Piece of cake. . . . . BEAUTIFUL WOMAN Hey girl. . . . love it when you say "Hey J" Your smiles brighten up my whole day. I had a dream i sculpted us making love. I shaped it to remake the way i've been seeing us. I've liked you for a while now, i felt it's time. To tell you my feelings are true. I'm letting you know i'm really feeling you. Your beautiful full lips, your soft hair. The long lashes on your big brown eye's, i can't help but stare. I love the friendship we have, So please don't let this affect that. If you don't feel the same way, that's ok I can respect that. Dancing with you is like dancing with a star. Dance you, romance you. I'd like to really get to know who you are. Your like's, your dislikes. Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like. I'd like to be the shelter that protect's you in storms. I'd like to be the blanket that keeps you warm. At night, while your sleeping and dreaming. I'd like to be the knight that a princess like you can believe in. ------------------------------------------------------ Love is blind, if so i consider my vision cloaked, Astray in a pendulum of sentiment Radiant, evoked with a passion that God envies Fervor my feelings to you, for i have perceived a bountiful future 12 months complete, we have become one and the same Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed The day we announced our fidelity, time froze You are mine, a sign from the divine With time, we will devise a future together Feathered touch, us fettered, Forever my divine wish be true Tethered for eternity just me. . . . . and you. |
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 1:34am On May 10, 2009 |
~Sauron~: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Thats beautiful Sauron has a soft heart afterall But what is the name of the poem? |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 1:41am On May 10, 2009 |
tope5000: There's actually milk and honey right under my venom-sac.
Beautiful Woman. |
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 1:45am On May 10, 2009 |
~Sauron~: lol. . . .well it wud be nice to see the milk n honey side of u more on NL
Nice . . . . u shud try and write poems more often darl my fave parts are: Your smiles brighten up my whole day. Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like. Love is blind, if so I consider my vision cloaked, |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:06am On May 10, 2009 |
tope5000: I cannot guarantee that.
Rap lyrics are better. |
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 2:18am On May 10, 2009 |
You can as well shoot an arrow to [i]her [/i]heart and get it over with . . . Lovely! |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:20am On May 10, 2009 |
stillwater: It's for ma lecturer, one gorgeous woman. |
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 2:27am On May 10, 2009 |
~Sauron~: Is there more from where that came from? |
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 2:29am On May 10, 2009 |
~Sauron~: lol. . . . . . very typical of the jackal
Well make it a rap love lyrics then if that makes sense . . . . not necessarily poems |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:42am On May 10, 2009 |
stillwater: I think so. . . . . . tope5000: Hehehehe
I'll try. . . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 2 LOVE BIRDS. . . . Your eyes shine through the night, they look so brilliant Stare up into the stars, witness a sight of millions We lay sprawled on a blanket, on wet grass but we got each other Its mid-January so its cold but we got these covers We just came from a candle lit dinner so i know you're feelin right And by the smile on your face, the blazing stars pierced and killed the night I leaned in for a kiss, you looked at me and smiled Your lips on my lips, i'm addicted, i'm high Your smell, intoxicating, your touch, incredible We're both actors in this lover's story, I'll direct the mood You rolled over on top of me, you laughed and pinched me You whispered dirty thoughts, they started sounding tempting Do this and you'll do that, oh no, sounds too good My heart raced the daytona 500, i tried to resist but who could? Your lips met my neck, i bit my lip with pleasure You went down and i went down, we did some things together It wasn't nasty, this was love set in motion Poetry that was moving, our feelings were ferocious You finished and i finished, the timing just worked You looked in my eyes, you were murmuring your words You were perfect in that moment, i just wanted to keep it So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret |
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 2:47am On May 10, 2009 |
~Sauron~: Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sauron is getting me HOT tonite stephen had berra move over |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 2:53am On May 10, 2009 |
tope5000: So you have been crinking StephenP all along?? Hmmmmmmmmmm. . . . . . . U are in trouble. |
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 2:56am On May 10, 2009 |
~Sauron~: Oh no babe U know i have been faithful to u . . . . it was my nu yr resolutions Oya lets go practice some of the things u said in ur poem again |
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 3:00am On May 10, 2009 |
OMG!!! Sauron! I've been hoping to see this side of you and you came through. I can't even pick my fav, they are both beautiful. tope5000: lol both of them are good. |
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 3:01am On May 10, 2009 |
St☆rStruck: Lmao@gif Yep they are both good |
Re: Waiting . . . by StephenP(m): 7:38pm On May 10, 2009 |
I don't believe this! Is this really Sauron? What have Stillwater, Tope and St☆rStruck done to you? It sounds so real; like it's not some BS but you actually have these feelings for someone. Good job man. |
Re: Waiting . . . by tope5000: 9:22pm On May 10, 2009 |
StephenP: He has always had it in him . . .he just needed a lil push |
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 1:33am On May 11, 2009 |
So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret Humming Alicia Keys "Diary" I won't tell your secrets Your secrets are safe with me I will keep your secrets Just think of me as the pages in your diary |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 1:44am On May 11, 2009 |
StephenP: Sauron reloaded!!!
Bes' believe it. . . . . |
Re: Waiting . . . by bluespice(f): 9:55am On May 12, 2009 |
oh lord sauron! im pleasantly surprised u papi be giving darling stephen a run for his money? naw position yes position on a more serious note im loving these pieces lucky is the object of these many affections u so sweetly profess |
Re: Waiting . . . by Ibime(m): 4:27pm On May 12, 2009 |
Negro please! Your raps contain much more poetry and a wider breadth of language than what you wrote up there. |
Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 10:38pm On May 15, 2009 |
Ibime: That is because we are now allowed to swear and romance has a smaller scope in the grand scheme of things. Anyways. . . . .I will improve. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- ELEMENTS OF DESIRE ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession The windows are steamed, concealing our desire Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying Blush with anticipation, from the rush of copulation The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers. To be continued. . . . |
Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 10:50pm On May 15, 2009 |
My long dead hormones are suddenly alive. |
Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:07pm On May 15, 2009 |
~Sauron~: WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sauron just got me HOT N WET . . . . . . . . |
Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:09pm On May 15, 2009 |
TOPE2000!: |
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:10pm On May 15, 2009 |
~Sauron~: YES!!!! You've given all I needed today! ~Sauron~: Alright now |
Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:36pm On May 15, 2009 |
St☆rStruck: You do know it was sauron that wrote that poem not stephenP |
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:38pm On May 15, 2009 |
TOPE2000!: You and Sauron broke up remember? |
Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:38pm On May 15, 2009 |
Tope2000 and Starstruck Both of you are morons! Sauron only copied and pasted the poem, he didnt write it! |
Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:40pm On May 15, 2009 |
MrCrackles: I know how Sauron writes and that is definitely his work. |
Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:40pm On May 15, 2009 |
St☆rStruck: we r back together. . . .eat that MrCrackles: I have verified it. . . . . .the poem is sauron's original dont hate |
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