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To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 9:18am On Nov 08, 2015

You're the sun that lights my day,
The moon that lights my darkness.
The fairest maiden I've ever known,
You're the Queen of queens.

Thoughts of you makes my heart glow
Like a sea of calm in winter snow,
You feel me with joy and happiness,
And never give me cause for sadness.

My love for you shines like the Sun in the sky,
Giving light and warmth to my heart,
Ever living within me without being shy,
And causing my heart to glow like fine art.

My love for you burns like fire.
Burning fierce for all eternity,
Which I put on like an attire,
Because it keeps me warm with such audacity.

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Re: To The One I Love. by JigsawKillah(m): 9:15pm On Nov 08, 2015

Mr 1832

Nice one!

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 9:28pm On Nov 08, 2015

JigsawKillah:
Mr 1832

Nice one!

Mr 1832

Thanks all the same.

Re: To The One I Love. by JigsawKillah(m): 9:37pm On Nov 08, 2015

joseph1832:
Mr 1832 Thanks all the same.

You're not Joseph, you're not 1832, then who are you

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 9:46pm On Nov 08, 2015

JigsawKillah:

You're not Joseph, you're not 1832, then who are you :/

I AM NOBODY

Re: To The One I Love. by JigsawKillah(m): 9:51pm On Nov 08, 2015

joseph1832:
I AM NOBODY

that's what you think, Mr 1832

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 10:09pm On Nov 08, 2015

JigsawKillah:

that's what you think, Mr 1832

LOL. I don't think bro, I've evolve. I reason!. grin

Re: To The One I Love. by JigsawKillah(m): 3:46am On Nov 09, 2015

joseph1832:
LOL. I don't think bro, I've evolve. I reason!.

hehe!
Mr 1832. . . You're in dire need of Sex! grin

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 7:48pm On Nov 09, 2015

JigsawKillah:

hehe! Mr 1832. . . You're in dire need of Sex!

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 7:48pm On Nov 09, 2015

JigsawKillah:

hehe! Mr 1832. . . You're in dire need of Sex!

Re: To The One I Love. by Nobody: 5:10pm On Nov 21, 2015

joseph1832:

You're the sun that lights my day,
The moon that lights my darkness.
The fairest maiden I've ever known,
You're the Queen of queens.

Thoughts of you makes my heart glow
Like a sea of calm in winter snow,
You feel me with joy and happiness,
And never give me cause for sadness.

My love for you shines like the Sun in the sky,
Giving light and warmth to my heart,
Ever living within me without being shy,
And causing my heart to glow like fine art.

My love for you burns like fire.
Burning fierce for all eternity,
Which I put on like an attire,
Because it keeps me warm with such audacity.

Guy leave poetry. The 'Waso', 'muri' and ' 'shandi' are all the poetry modern day women are interested in

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 6:19pm On Nov 21, 2015

LaraiBoluwaji:

Guy leave poetry. The 'Waso', 'muri' and ' 'shandi' are all the poetry modern day women are interested in

I'm well aware what the average Nigerian girl wants. I'm not one who look and don't see.

Re: To The One I Love. by Nobody: 6:49pm On Nov 21, 2015

joseph1832:
I'm well aware what the average Nigerian girl wants. I'm not one who look and don't see.

So what do you see when you look at me?

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 6:50pm On Nov 21, 2015

LaraiBoluwaji:

So what do you see when you look at me?

I see nothing. Why? Because I haven't see you.

Re: To The One I Love. by Nobody: 7:00pm On Nov 21, 2015

joseph1832:
I see nothing. Why? Because I haven't see you.

I was expecting this reply and you didn't disappoint. Words are your playthings cheesy

Re: To The One I Love. by llaykorn: 7:00pm On Nov 21, 2015

joseph1832:
I see nothing. Why? Because I haven't see you.

Good evening, sir. grin

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 7:11pm On Nov 21, 2015

llaykorn:

Good evening, sir.

How are you?

LaraiBoluwaji:

I was expecting this reply and you didn't disappoint. Words are your playthings

Yea I know, but that's because I hate to disappoint a lady of inestimable value. grin

Re: To The One I Love. by Nobody: 7:17pm On Nov 21, 2015

joseph1832:
How are you?

Yea I know, but that's because I hate to disappoint a lady of inestimable value.

Your sweet mouth ehn cheesy

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 9:04pm On Nov 21, 2015

LaraiBoluwaji:

Your sweet mouth ehn

Isn't that what you like?

. Care to lemme show you how sweet my mouth is? wink

LOL.

Re: To The One I Love. by Nobody: 9:19pm On Nov 21, 2015

joseph1832:
Isn't that what you like? . Care to lemme show you how sweet my mouth is? LOL.

Double entendre cheesy

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 9:27pm On Nov 21, 2015

LaraiBoluwaji:
Double entendre

"You Know What's Up" girl. wink

Re: To The One I Love. by Nobody: 9:30pm On Nov 21, 2015

joseph1832:
"You Know What's Up" girl.

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 9:49pm On Nov 21, 2015

LaraiBoluwaji:

Magnefico!

Re: To The One I Love. by noble4d(m): 8:05am On Nov 29, 2015

joseph1832:

You're the sun that lights my day,
The moon that lights my darkness.
The fairest maiden I've ever known,
You're the Queen of queens.

Thoughts of you makes my heart glow
Like a sea of calm in winter snow,
You feel me with joy and happiness,
And never give me cause for sadness.

My love for you shines like the Sun in the sky,
Giving light and warmth to my heart,
Ever living within me without being shy,
And causing my heart to glow like fine art.

My love for you burns like fire.
Burning fierce for all eternity,
Which I put on like an attire,
Because it keeps me warm with such audacity.

This is awesome Bro

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Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 8:15am On Nov 29, 2015

noble4d:

This is awesome Bro

Thanks bruv.

Re: To The One I Love. by Adeayo7(m): 8:25am On Dec 27, 2015

NICE! subliminal..

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 9:52am On Dec 28, 2015

Adeayo7:
NICE! subliminal..

Thanks.

Re: To The One I Love. by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 1:52pm On Dec 28, 2015

joseph1832:

You're the sun that lights my day,
The moon that lights my darkness.
The fairest maiden I've ever known,
You're the Queen of queens.

Fairest maiden?

angry

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 1:55pm On Dec 28, 2015

AllNaijaBlogger:

Fairest maiden?

Yes fairest. I've known many maidens, but non is as fair as the one I wrote this poem for. That's why I said "you're the fairest maiden I've ever known". grin

Re: To The One I Love. by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 2:20pm On Dec 28, 2015

joseph1832:
Yes fairest. I've known many maidens, but non is as fair as the one I wrote this poem for. That's why I said "you're the fairest maiden I've ever known".

You do know that is a racist phrase?

"fairest of them all, snow white"

As if fairness is a sign of beauty.

Re: To The One I Love. by joseph1832(m): 2:27pm On Dec 28, 2015

AllNaijaBlogger:

You do know that is a racist phrase?

"fairest of them all, snow white"

As if fairness is a sign of beauty.

LOL. Well I wouldn't know what Walt Disney had in mind when he used it in Snow White, but I sure know I'm not racist when I use it.

Re: To The One I Love. by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 2:34pm On Dec 28, 2015

joseph1832:
LOL. Well I wouldn't know what Walt Disney had in mind when he used it in Snow White, but I sure know I'm not racist when I use it.

Then why use it? Fair maiden? Were you thinking of a light skinned bae?

grin

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