Interesting conclusion. Kudos.

ugojamali:
Interesting conclusion. Kudos.

Glad you enjoyed it. Please visit my blog for more.

krimes:


Glad you enjoyed it. Please visit my blog for more.

wow!!!!!!
Now dis is the kinda story I like to read about. A story that applies to real life situation. A.story dat every one could possibly relate to. Not all this fantasy stories that only talk of sex, more sex and even more sex.

I like dis story because every young boy had a serious crush on one girl or the other while growing up. However, many are lucky not to become obsessed with desire so much as to drive them to crime.

Very good job man. Keep it up

obstead200:
wow!!!!!!
Now dis is the kinda story I like to read about. A story that applies to real life situation. A.story dat every one could possibly relate to. Not all this fantasy stories that only talk of sex, more sex and even more sex.

I like dis story because every young boy had a serious crush on one girl or the other while growing up. However, many are lucky not to become obsessed with desire so much as to drive them to crime.

Very good job man. Keep it up

Thank you very much. Reviews like yours encourage me to write more. I appreciate your taking time to read and I'll entertain you with more stories.

krimes:


Thank you very much. Reviews like yours encourage me to write more. I appreciate your taking time to read and I'll entertain you with more stories.

looking forward to it. U are in the same class of writers that I place Ishilove (author of "iyawo nylon bag" ) .How I wish Ishilove finished that story. It was the bomb.
I also will like to meet Ishilove face to face one day. Cos for that singular story of hers, she is a super woman to me.

Do another story probable as entertaining as this one and as long as "iyawo nylon bag". I tell u, u will go places.

obstead200:
looking forward to it. U are in the same class of writers that I place Ishilove (author of "iyawo nylon bag" ) .How I wish Ishilove finished that story. It was the bomb.
I also will like to meet Ishilove face to face one day. Cos for that singular story of hers, she is a super woman to me.

Do another story probable as entertaining as this one and as long as "iyawo nylon bag". I tell u, u will go places.

Thanks for the warm praise. I just got inspired reading it. Have you read my second piece?
https://www.nairaland.com/2757635/how-he-killed-best-friend

I will strive to get better. Writing is my passion. Thanks bro.

UPDATE: OPENING DATE: 1ST DECEMBER 2015.
DEADLINE: 5th FEBRUARY 2016
ABOUT NAWOT:
The Nelson Adeyeye Writers Of Today(NAWOT) is an online competition that is organized by Sandra Adeyeye C.E.O of Eminent Creators in honor of her late father Mr. Nelson Adeyeye as a way to encourage the writing and reading culture of the Nigerian youth.
This competition promises to be an exciting and uplifting showcase of well-laid out Prose that promotes creativity at it's peak.
AWARDS:
There shall be a selection of the best twenty stories by our judges. These shall make up our anthology other prizes to be won include but are not restricted to:
Best writer Romance Category - 15,000
Best writer Science Fiction and Fantasy Category - 15,000
Best writer Mystery and Horror Category - 15,000
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This story is just the bomb. wow.

David lacks wisdom, infact its village mentality n foolishness led him to his doom.
If he were wise, when he saw dat d gal, was out to eat his money he could have just let her be, and find another gal.
If worst comes to worst, let him go and Bleep olosho, see how he was waisting his hard earned money cos of one loose pussy

@Op this is a very interesting and educative story. Pls keep it up. I will advice that every man both young and old should read this story. lt will go a long way to instil some wisdom......