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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 9:17am On Jan 19, 2016
she sat, straight faced, not uttering a word.
expressionless.

the guy stood, back against the door, hand in pocket.

Maggie sat on the flat matrass, thigh apart, hands on the lap.

the silence was visible, it was felt, it was so thick.

each wanted the other to break the silence.

the guy spoke.
he cleared his throat.

leaned backwards.

"hello, my name is kingsoo, Kingsley for full".
he stared at her, held her gaze.

she was so uncomfortable.

kingsoo smiled, he liked the effect he had on her, he knew he looked intimidating. he has to, he thought.

its not easy being the owner of a brothel, he had inherited it from his father. he was proud of what he did for a living.

he was happy his father was incapacitated.
a 'vegetable '.

he was a product of his line of business.
his mother, late mother was a prostitute.


the day before yesterday, Maggie had told him about a friend she called a sister.

who was ready to join the business.

he had reminded her of the usual ritual, a modus operandi, every new recruit had to pass through the initiation before they were allowed to stay at the brothel.

they had to sleep with him.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Chule(m): 10:58am On Jan 19, 2016
finally Kingso was quoted by MisQuote.
Let's roll I d with u
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 11:11am On Jan 19, 2016
been waiting

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by ChizzyMaris(f): 11:22am On Jan 19, 2016
Kontinu smiley
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:34am On Jan 20, 2016
kingsoo, was lost.
lost in thought.


he found it rather embarrassing to convey his message.

was he shy?
no of course he thought.


there was something irresistible about her.
something captivating.

he had been in this line of business for a while.
he had seen countless recruit.

but never for once had he felt like this.
he wasn't familiar with the feeling.

it was a feeling of pity.

he had watched her got introduced to a man, he had seen her unwillingness.

he was sitting close to her, enjoying with his ladies but she caught his attention.

he liked her.
he still does.

**†***********************+*†********************

Maggie felt bad.
she felt ashamed.

it wasn't her fault.

all she ever wanted was to help this poor innocent looking girl.

a sister she never had.

but they wasn't nothing she could do to protect her from this kind of life, this kind of business.

a business where they are to exposed to all manner of people from the society.

mad men,
sick men,
ritualist,
spiritualist,
dirty men.

they all attended to.

she knew her friend,
this isn't where she belonged.


but something scared her, just by remembering the dream she had, cold shill ran down her spine.

she dreamt about her friend.
slaughtering people.

she tried to dismiss it.
but it always flash through her mind.

she knew she rarely dreams.

but if and when she does. its significant.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:36am On Jan 20, 2016
thanks everyone.
Godbless

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Sageez(m): 6:46am On Jan 20, 2016
ride on ma, am following. How calmdove, heemah, dandypearl, donkross1, damyem, mattkent are you guyz here?
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by gudnex22(m): 8:00am On Jan 20, 2016
mizquote:
thanks everyone.
Godbless
BLESS YOU TOO
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by gudnex22(m): 8:01am On Jan 20, 2016
mizquote:
thanks everyone.
Godbless
BLESS YOU TOO
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Barney11: 9:44am On Jan 20, 2016
All I can say is more pls
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Chule(m): 12:22pm On Jan 20, 2016
Barney11:
All I can say is more pls
Oliver twist

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by K9blunt(f): 1:00pm On Jan 20, 2016
Babe I bow for you


You are that good. Keep it up pleaseplease cheesy

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 2:05pm On Jan 20, 2016
Maggie always dreamt about one person.
her mom.

she always saw her mom, taunting her, mocking her.
she had gotten so used to it that she saw it as been normal.

her mother hated her.
when alive and in death.

she was surprised about the dream she had, the one about her friend.

she watched, like one do when watching a horror movie. how your body cringe in fear.

she had slept that night, after attending to two customers.
she was fatigued.
her last customer almost rode her to death, his organ was big, the biggest she had seen. even though he paid her more than the previous one, she regretted ever consenting.

no wonder her colleague didn't try to get his attention.

she had terrible bruises afterwards.
she had laid down immediately he left, pulled her underwear and patted her legs, like a woman in labour.


then she strolled into dreamland.
where she saw someone bent over, she noticed the surroundings was dried and deserted.


she stood and observed the creature that was bent over something like a body.

a human body.

fear griped her.

the creature head was bent, it looked up.

it was her friend face in her mother's body.

it took the knife and buried it in its victim body.

she screamed.
and screamed.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by demmy66: 9:28am On Jan 21, 2016
heemah..heemah..bia ne bah...come and ready this storu..read few pages and its interesting. ..
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:52pm On Jan 21, 2016
she noticed the changed in countenance in her friend.

she wondered why everyone was quiet, she knew they all had something to say but they were scared of uttering it.

she was scared.
her palms watered.

she was acquainted to badluck.
she was bad luck.

all her life she had experienced rejection.
rejection from birth.

the way they looked, they way they stood. the aura the emitted all meant something.

'Rejection'.

she was ready to beg.
ready to do anything to be part of this place. even though she knew it wasn't a right place but at least she had a roof over her head.


she looked at Maggie, her eyes pleading.

Maggie looked away.

the tension in the room was stiff.

if she was rejected here, she had one thing in mind.
one singular motive, whispered to her by the evil in her.
in a throaty small voice.

the voice urged her to go.
leave the place.

and end it all.

she had done it before.
she can do it again.


then someone spoke.
it was kingsoo.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Osman1996(m): 7:13pm On Jan 21, 2016
Bring it on oh we ready!!!!

#following bumper to bumper
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Chule(m): 11:04pm On Jan 21, 2016
the King must say something.
oh what a sweet name.
God bless my parents fo such a King in a silly way

MisQuote, remind me what I said it's been long enough to remember
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 5:46am On Jan 22, 2016
he spoke rather too fast.

she couldn't grasp what he was saying. then it dawn on her.

she understood what he meant for she heard him clearly.
she tried to convince herself that he was joking but the look he had spelt seriousness.

she turned over to her friend.
Maggie didn't know what to say, how to say what to say at that point in time.

she thought she was in trouble, now she's in a deeper mess. he just told her he wanted to have sexual knowledge of her.


that it was part of the process all girls passed through. she looked at him.

he looked calm.

she did a rough estimate of how many girls were in the building, they were well over fifty.


so he had slept with them all, even her friend Maggie she thought.

he asked her to meet him at the reception and left. she was dumbfounded.

her friend made to reach to her but changed her mind, she was tired. tired of everything, even life itself.


she stood up and went to the reception. she met kingsoo, he offered her a drink.


little did both of them know, two eyes peering at them, angry.

she was followed.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by endtimeshit(m): 1:08pm On Jan 22, 2016
Every post was a hit back to back..from when dat bros gave you five hundred naira, down to when you held that insecticide, to when that idiyit was crushed by a trailer. And den dey say you're not creative. Mizqoute take over! Iyalaya to all you critiques

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by endtimeshit(m): 1:11pm On Jan 22, 2016
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 3:31pm On Jan 22, 2016
cool story

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Nobody: 7:54pm On Jan 22, 2016
Nice Nice. who's this lady!
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 5:54am On Jan 23, 2016
kingsoo didn't know why he was playing the gentleman. the lady was a prostitute, albeit still new in it.

she had innocence written all over her. she wasn't comfortable.

he knew he couldn't have her as his personal girl for he had one already.

he wanted to know her more.
so he asked her to tell him about herself.

she was fidgeting. she didn't understand why the rule was created.
why will he demand to sleep with any girl knew.

was it to test her viability?
to acknowledge her sexual prowess?

she looked at him, looked away.
she saw how icy his eyes turned.

she knew he was born good but evil had overtaken the good him. he had no conscience.

she knew he was deceptive.
he smiled more.


she had known more evil people than good people.
she could identify then by looking into their eye ball. it was always cold and they blink less.


kingsoo brought out a cigarette, lighted it and began puffing it.
he didn't like this game of silence but he liked the innocence.

he had things to do.

he stood up, she did same.

kingsoo had a special room.


she went with him. she was surprised on how the room was kept. it looked neat and smelt nice.

he smiled and pulled of his short, sat on his chair, legs apart.

she began to pull off her cloth. he stopped her.

"not so fast baby, come and play with junior first". he said pointing towards his groin area.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Barney11: 7:58am On Jan 23, 2016
More plssssss
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mofy1(f): 9:45am On Jan 23, 2016
Barney11:
More plssssss
As u hear come play with junior ur own junior stand..........begging for more.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Barney11: 12:57pm On Jan 23, 2016
I no be team Vaseline oh.i be f.i am a saint female.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by slimkhan(m): 8:17pm On Jan 23, 2016
another sick post
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Barney11: 10:18pm On Jan 23, 2016
Sorry if I irritate u with ma comment,just trying to tell the poster who mentioned that am not a male Buh female,I only like the misquote story and want her to upload more.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Nobody: 10:50pm On Jan 23, 2016
Barney11:
I no be team Vaseline oh.i be f.i am a saint female.

kikikikiki. Lmao
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 11:29pm On Jan 23, 2016
nice one misquote

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:44am On Jan 24, 2016
tanx everyone
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 7:02am On Jan 24, 2016
she didn't know what he meant.

he urged her to come closer.
to come nearer.

she moved her feet towards his direction. kingsoo was stroking his organ, he was stroking in a rhythm.

he motioned her to come. she stood before him lost on what to do.

she watched it as it came to life slowly.
"come over here baby, bend over" he muttered.

"feel it, it needs you, touch it baby,"

she came over, obviously irritated and touched it, a bit harder.

"yeah, ya baby, hold it baby, hold that thing..., squeeze it...,

his eyes rolled over and he came, all over her palm.
it smelt awful.

she nearly puked.
his organ mellowed, it became flaccid.

she stood up, picked a tissue and cleaned the mess on her hand.

she was glad it had ended. she made to leave .

he called.

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