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Please,leave Your Comments And Criticisms: by Moosdapher: 5:26pm On Jun 13, 2009 |
Oh! My beloved country. Oh! My beloved country. Oh! My beloved country. Oh! My Nigeria. Our leaders of today Are but mere actors Playing an orchestrated act They will sing the anthem Yet,they steal with might and heart Love of money Strength of deceit Faith in corruption The labour of our heroes past is in vain They will say the pledge Yet,don't serve with all their strength Not loyal,faithful and honest As they pledge to be Dividing our unity And tarnishing Her Image They swear by their holy books Yet,go against all the doctrines of the books They present all sort of enchanting manifests Say all there is to be said But yet,do nothing Rather,they turn against their nation and people Turn against their oaths and holy books Who are they? I need not to ask As you need not to They are none other but our comical leaders That fill our ears with wax And sings songs of empty promises They put forth a staged act Fight for bills Pass the bills into law Contractors get paid for unexisting contracts Budgets are released But the funds vanish into thin air All but nothing is done The subjects aren't any different By all means,rich they want to become They cheat at will Scammers they are He who has the big pocket Has them to his use No pride, no honour Just acts of shame Oh! My beloved country Oh! My dear Nigeria I weep for you For I love you so For you are in danger You are in turmoil But firm you still stand I pray for you To remain strong and solid I hope for a change But the chances are thin I still pray though With the help of GOD It shall be well |
Re: Please,leave Your Comments And Criticisms: by Chidor6(m): 12:59am On Jun 15, 2009 |
it quit a good portrayal of your inner thoughts, but the incorporation of the "national anthem" just makes me feel uncomfortable with the write up, but good nonetheless. |
Re: Please,leave Your Comments And Criticisms: by Moosdapher: 5:35pm On Jun 17, 2009 |
thank you for candid opinion but my choice of incorperating the national anthem is to potray the negligence and betrayal rendered by our leaders. They go against everything they have sworn to defend, |
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