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Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 10:03am On Jan 25, 2016 |
Hi guys, this is my first time publishing here. I started writing stories since I was 17 but never published any. I have them all stashed somewhere in my cupboard but decided to publish this one. So, I would love your comments, praise and criticism. Copyright ©2016 No part of this story may be reproduced by any means without the prior permission by the author. Anyone who wishes to repost this story to any other online forum, Facebook group, blog or any other website should endeavor to acknowledge the author's identity and kindly notify the author by sending him a mail. Title: Boodshot Cast Babine Alex 5 Likes 2 Shares
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Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 10:07am On Jan 25, 2016 |
Story taken down by author 13 Likes 5 Shares |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 11:21am On Jan 25, 2016 |
Guys, I need comments please. Kay29000 Karchisbarbie LordReed Adesiji77 Cetona |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by DaVinci24(m): 11:25am On Jan 25, 2016 |
Godmother: Ok |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 11:28am On Jan 25, 2016 |
Story taken down by author 7 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Divepen1(m): 1:43pm On Jan 25, 2016 |
Godmother... I love this.
I love u 2 Likes |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by LordReed(m): 4:27pm On Jan 25, 2016 |
Hot damn! Feels like this shouldn't be a romance story but an action thriller. Nice flow, a few spelling mistakes though. 3 Likes |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 5:22pm On Jan 25, 2016 |
LordReed: Thanks, was beginning to think no one read it. The romance part will come in later. I'll proof read and correct the mistakes. Divepen1: Thanks Divepen1 1 Like |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Luckysbab: 7:25am On Jan 26, 2016 |
More power to your elbow. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Nobody: 8:00am On Jan 27, 2016 |
wow...continue 1 Like |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Ayobee(f): 1:02pm On Jan 27, 2016 |
please continue... please continue... 1 Like |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by kay29000(m): 9:25pm On Jan 29, 2016 |
Hey, Godmother, I am just reading this. I was offline for a while. Nice! Great writing technique...great prose (a skill I personally kinda lack ). And You have a great vocabulary. Even though you don't overuse it, and you use the right word at the right time. I also like the way I can actually see (in my mind's eye) the visuals of your story. Your words come to life. You are pretty good writer and should write more. Let your light shine...publish this on Amazon if you haven't already done so. And publish another, and another, and another. By the way... complete the story. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 9:47pm On Jan 29, 2016 |
kay29000: Wow, thanks. Yes, I'll finish it. I have it typed on my lappy but my hubby goes to d office with d internet connection so I can't update. But will update tomorrow. 1 Like |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by kay29000(m): 9:49pm On Jan 29, 2016 |
Godmother: Okay. I wish you all the best. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Atom57(m): 9:57pm On Jan 29, 2016 |
Nice work.... Read and follow this interesting story https://www.nairaland.com/2887605/journey-supernatural-aliens |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 2:33pm On Jan 30, 2016 |
Story taken down by author 7 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Chizzyblinks(f): 4:35pm On Jan 30, 2016 |
Godmother pls complete this story,it's so captivating,i can't wait for the remaining 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 4:44pm On Jan 30, 2016 |
Chizzyblinks: Thanks Chizzyblinks, I'll put the next update tomorrow morning. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by D9ty7(m): 5:13pm On Jan 30, 2016 |
On this Nairaland? Waoh! Godmother, I don't know what to call this, but you are doing a great job with this thriller of yours. #Following and waiting for the next update. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Divepen1(m): 6:53pm On Jan 30, 2016 |
Killer- Killer... |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Missmossy(f): 7:16pm On Jan 30, 2016 |
So so enthralling Kudos Godmother. 1 Like |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Dklef(m): 11:25pm On Jan 30, 2016 |
Godmother you must complete what you've just started, will you? |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 2:29am On Jan 31, 2016 |
Dklef: Definitely. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 2:32am On Jan 31, 2016 |
Story taken down by author 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Sexiestcrown(m): 6:29am On Jan 31, 2016 |
NORMALLY I DNT COMMENT ON NAIRALAND, BUT AFTER READING THIS EPIC PIECE, I JUST COULDN'T RESIST. NICE ONE. WAITING IMPATIENTLY FOR THE UPDATE. *SCADUSH* 1 Like |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by D9ty7(m): 12:13pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Mynd44, Lalasticlala; this piece is worth gracing the Nairaland homepage. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Cetona(f): 12:41pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Nice one Godmother. Following |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Godmother(f): 1:32pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Cetona: Thanks, babes. @ All The romance part is about to start. Thanks for following and dropping your comments |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Hybrid01: 6:08pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Addictive! Just the name brought me here and I am not disappointed one bit. Keep it up and I hope you don't dump the story half-way like others do. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Divepen1(m): 6:18pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Yeh...
But I'm guessing the next line of action. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by Chizzyblinks(f): 7:01pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Godmother:alright dear,i'll be waiting. |
Re: Bloodshot -a Short Romance Story by ammy4id: 7:08pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Following you like back to back 1 Like |
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