Ade u were d1 dat promised nt 2 starve us, still yet u cnt kip ur promise nawa 4u oh!!

Am tired of refreshing

Ade, wats up nw? Y didnt u update nw cos u promise but u didnt fulfil ur promise

Adegokedamisky:
Ade u were d1 dat promised nt 2 starve us, still yet u cnt kip ur promise nawa 4u oh!!

Madam . . Shes A Serving Corper . . Loads Of Stuffs Might Be Holdin Her Down . . Rangin From Light Issues To Netwrk Failure Etc . . Instead Of Yu To Castigate , Try Nd Use Dat Energy To Appreciate Nd Encourage Her . .

Tanku

orijintv:


Madam . . Shes A Serving Corper . . Loads Of Stuffs Might Be Holdin Her Down . . Rangin From Light Issues To Netwrk Failure Etc . . Instead Of Yu To Castigate , Try Nd Use Dat Energy To Appreciate Nd Encourage Her . .

Tanku

nobody is castigating her .... read d comments we all have ben encouraging her .... at least she should let us know there would be a delay that's all instead remaining silent ...... we wont be talking if we know she isn't good ....

lol. y are yuh guys talking about promise and fail like it's new to yuh.

ADE, enitym yuh ready, we dey here dey wain

Adeola at least say something to guys even if the update is not ready at least make it look like we are talking to someone. Not the silent treatment

Adeola at least say something to guys even if the update is not ready at least make it look like we are talking to someone. Not the silent treatment[color=#000099][/color]

Hopefully, ade23ola will drop updates 2day. Maybe she's been busy all week long. Let's give a little time. Remember 2day and tomorrow are still part of dat nxt week.
Be calm, be patient....an update will surely come shortly

Oche211:
Hopefully, ade23ola will drop updates 2day. Maybe she's been busy all week long. Let's give a little time. Remember 2day and tomorrow are still part of dat nxt week.
Be calm, be patient....an update will surely come shortly

Hmmmm

u pple r strong sha.

Abeg if adeola post, plss endeavor to mention me :DAbeg if adeola post, plss endeavor to mention me

Sheyb una dey wait for update?una go old for there....d babe don abandon dis story Jare...

Hey guys, am so so sori, am currently not with my system cos am not in my my ppa.. Had to travel on monday to attend to some issues in my state, pls bear wit me for d mean time. As soon as I com back, wil update

ade23ola:
Hey guys, am so so sori, am currently not with my system cos am not in my my ppa.. Had to travel on monday to attend to some issues in my state, pls bear wit me for d mean time. As soon as I com back, wil update

Good to hear from you. I think the best thing to do to avoid dissapointing many is to give us a specific tym. so we won't just come here and b reloading unnecessarily. Be specific pls.

ade23ola if we offend you abeg forgive us, help us update small na abeg

o ga o, so ur own weekend never reach abi ade23ola. infact m outta patient

Hello ade23ola ...u av a great story here av been following for a while...buh remember consistency is key...u avnt posted for a whole week thats not good enough and even wen u post its short...love ur story...pls keep the good work...kudos...

Fine, the op promised and failed but it does not give some of us the right to be rude. She's posting for free, so let's be patient and wait for her to get back. If we can't wait, we can unfollow the story.

a4aha4ahagagagagag dont worry adeolaa we me just waitin make you brini sontin eatable for me wen your comin bak / cos i dont vex tired nw watin for somtin wen ur bak a4aha4ahagagagagag dont worry adeolaa we me just waitin make you brini sontin eatable for me wen your comin bak / cos i dont vex tired nw watin for somtin wen ur bak a4aha4ahagagagagag dont worry adeolaa we me just waitin make you brini sontin eatable for me wen your comin bak / cos i dont vex tired nw watin for somtin wen ur bak

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Adeola, good morning. Abeg come continue with my love story with your twins.

really captivating,ade am sha sipping big cola waiting patiently

adeola olorukomi.u v done a very good job.pls more

Adeola I guess you attended chapel secondary school Ilorin... just guessing though.. anyway nice one

Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Service) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? As for me, I don't really care cause my "imagination filled brain" always gives me a clue of what the ending will be like but I think its pretty unprofessional to bring out an unfinished work unless its a review to get buyers interested in buying the finished work. Although Op you don't strike me as a professional writer cause your use of terms are bad and you have difficulty in making your readers relate with the story, the use of expression is zero and your manner of description is totally poor, I'm not trying to bad mouth you but if you have plans of being a writer, you have a long way to go. It is pretty embarrassing that you are a graduate and please stop using "I studied Physics" as an excuse cause I studied Physics too and my use of English might not be perfect but it will take someone who is into English language to dictate my error. A word of advice "stop using shorthand to write" , it is one of the reasons Nigerian youths are bad with their use of English, take your time to type out the full word cause shorthand will only affect you on the long run. I know I have written a really long epistle but I do hope you will take this as constructive criticism, please don't get defensive dear cause I didn't type all these in a bid to offend you. Cheers!

[/color][quote author=smileysmiley post=44133327]Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Secret) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? Perfect analysis! I guess by the time the writer updates the story must have become staled. It doesn't make sense at all. [color=#000099][quote author=smileysmiley post=44133327]Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Secret) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? Perfect analysis! I guess by the time the writer updates the story must have become staled. It doesn't make sense at all. [quote author=smileysmiley post=44133327]Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Secret) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? Perfect analysis! I guess by the time the writer updates the story must have become staled. It doesn't make sense at all.

@smileysmiley.
There is a kinder way of critiquing a person's work. Your lengthy post was clearly intended to shame the author. Good luck with your writing.

chicmoniq:
@smileysmiley.
There is a kinder way of critiquing a person's work. Your lengthy post was clearly intended to shame the author. Good luck with your writing.

Anything that rocks your boat sweetheart. All I did was to point out some facts. I won't try to argue with you but I repeat "My epistle was not made to disregard anybody". At the beginning of the post, the author clearly said that she was open to every type of comment so if she finds mine offensive, I can only tender my apology. Cheers!

OP :I must commend ur story, it is the best I have read for now

happy birthday adeola

smileysmiley:
Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Service) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? As for me, I don't really care cause my "imagination filled brain" always gives me a clue of what the ending will be like but I think its pretty unprofessional to bring out an unfinished work unless its a review to get buyers interested in buying the finished work. Although Op you don't strike me as a professional writer cause your use of terms are bad and you have difficulty in making your readers relate with the story, the use of expression is zero and your manner of description is totally poor, I'm not trying to bad mouth you but if you have plans of being a writer, you have a long way to go. It is pretty embarrassing that you are a graduate and please stop using "I studied Physics" as an excuse cause I studied Physics too and my use of English might not be perfect but it will take someone who is into English language to dictate my error. A word of advice "stop using shorthand to write" , it is one of the reasons Nigerian youths are bad with their use of English, take your time to type out the full word cause shorthand will only affect you on the long run. I know I have written a really long epistle but I do hope you will take this as constructive criticism, please don't get defensive dear cause I didn't type all these in a bid to offend you. Cheers!

I totally agree with you,Typical of a Nairaland storyteller,i've read up to 10stories by different writers on this platform and none i repeat none of them finish the story,i don't know why but i see no reason why you start a story and not finish it,like what are you trying to prove? Reasons i don't comment on any of those stories until i note that the writer finish writing it.


And to the writer,you have got a lovely,interesting and captivating story here,more ink to your to your pen,more wisdom to you from baba God,a high-paying and peaceful job at the end of your service. Just one favour,try to write the story to the end.