Tunechi1:
. meaning thr is anoda story coming up, aarrrrgghhhh can't wait for it. Nice one dude thanks for the enlightment i never knew thr was anytin lyk leviathans and talivans am just gonna check it out so when is d next one coming up?

dude u are fucking rong dere... Dis is a story nothing like talivan or levathian or whatsoever in d creation... Except our guy read it from 7 book og moses sha

Chai ... Smallville10 u re killing ah swear with my left and right buttocks ... U did great ... We're expecting MARY RELOADED

vickkydgreat:




dude u are fucking rong dere... Dis is a story nothing like talivan or levathian or whatsoever in d creation... Except our guy read it from 7 book OF moses sha

bro there are leviathans it's in the bible God banished them they are the beast of the sea check psalm 74, psalm 104 and isaiah 27:1. And about the talivans i've searched it nadah like it maybe our guy see anoda vision for dat

Nice ending. Waiting for the next season

I love ds api ending
wow

Wow what a great piece you have here

Kudos smallville. More grease to your elbow

bamirotola:
The lord is ur muscle bro... i'm feeling u.... can't wait to see this in the cinema.... the sky is ur starting point... but u av to hustle ur way to d sky tho... dnt limit urself to nairaland...sell your talent... waiting for more...and plz alwz tag me in any of ur oda posts...

yes boss

waow,this is great,I love ur story 2 d last,bring it on bro

9ce story bring it on

Abandoned story (hiss)

He finished it o... There is another thread for this story

oluwaemmanuel:
He finished it o... There is another thread for this story

where is the thread biko

What is this??

Smallville10:
In minutes Bazel and Lucifer were on earth, they descended into the earth like flaming shooting stars towards Gobi desert. Bazel Landed like a crashing asteroid and dust filled the air; Lucifer reduced his speed and landed on the soil in a calmly.

“Do you have to do that every time” Lucifer asked him as he used his hands to clear the dust in the air

“What the hell happened there?” Bazel asked

“Where”

“Mars” he yelled

“I don’t know” Lucifer said

“You don’t know? How did they find us?” Bazel asked

“They work with heaven, have you forgotten? Didn’t you see Ariel? He must have brought the information to them” Lucifer said

“I see, so Metatron thinks he can stop me. I will deal with him; I will take away all his friends and then spill his blood at the feet of God”

“Waw, nice speech, so what’s the plan?”

“We reinforce, get me somebody strong and we will strike them unaware”

“Ok if that’s what you want” Damien said and Bazel shot himself into the sky like a canon bomb and the force and speed created a sand ring on the soil.

Lucifer was still standing there looking into the sky and the sun; he then bent down and packed hot soil in his hand

“Half a million years” he said to himself quietly

“As-salaam-alaykum” a voice said loudly behind him, so he stood up and turned to see an Arab man with three camels travelling

“Alaykum-salaam, sadiqui” Lucifer said smiling and waving at him, the man was just staring at him because he was dressed differently and he doesn’t see such around here

“Ayn-l-Hadha” Lucifer said trying to be nice

(Where is this?)

“Hadha-l-Gobi” the man said

(This is Gobi)

“Gobi, Lateef” Lucifer said

(Gobi? Nice)

“Kaifa haloka” Lucifer asked

(How are you)

“Aadee” he replied

(I’m okay)

“Ok, Aasif Yajebu au athhaba al aan, Sadiqui. Motashare fon bema’ refatek, atmma lk ywma tuba” Lucifer said and brought out his wings and dashed into the sky; the man was shocked beyond speech as he looked into the sky

(Ok, sorry I have to go now my friend, it’s nice to meet you, have a nice day)…

I don't know you but I feel we can work together. The world needs to wake up to know what's coming in next few year or two

hehehe.

johnydon22, you need to read this.

sonoflucifer, come and see your dad in action.

Teempakguy:
hehehe.

johnydon22, you need to read this.

sonoflucifer, come and see your dad in action.

Hahahaha nice one brother... Hop on to the "Songs of the world" check my profile and lay some hate..

Nice one

Deeman1:


I don't know you but I feel we can work together. The world needs to wake up to know what's coming in next few year or two

True talk sir... Are u a writer or an entertainer

Smallville10:

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Chai SmallVille10 this your story is captivating. I was bored and decided to come to Nairaland to search for a story to Read, I decided to read blood and thunder even though I have read it before, I said let me check some of ur post to see if u have written any other story and I came across this one, the title caught my attention, I started reading I was so glad when I saw it was a 3 page story.
As I was reading it I was finding it difficult to understand it, the story was too complex I finished reading it and didn't grasp anything I said well maybe I need to read it again, then I saw links to the other story, Mary I started reading the first part finished it enter the second part, it was then I later understood that u actually divided the story into four parts, and I was unlucky to read the Part 4 first, so I just finished reading everything today.
Mehn small ville I am deeply impressed with your power of thinking.

When I started reading I was like what kinda crazy story is this that deals with supernatural beings ah weti dis guy dey try to talk. Some people would have stopped reading this story but I persisted I wanted to get to the end of it.
And believe me it was worthwhile, who no get strong mind no go fit read this story oh, cos of some of the characters mentioned in here.

Buy Small ville I have an issues with the settings, the plot outline doesn't match the settings at all to me, I would have preferred if the settings was the U.S or maybe UK

This story is a blockbuster, I would be so glad to see it transform into a film, and with your description no Nigeria Producer can handle it.


Na those nollywood effects them wan take act am, abeg find way to contact Universal Movies or any big movie studio in the US make dem start work, and re edit the work and change the settings to somewhere other than. Nigeria.


Small ville u are good

All glory be unto God

Rick9:
All glory be unto God

thank u very much sir. I get what u say with the plot. I know Nigeria doesnt really seem fit but the whole idea didnt fall on any particular place. I chose Nigeria because we are in nigeria... Also i specifically chose the female characters as Nigerian because it draws attention to Nigerians.
I have plans of making this story a movie and i wont give up on that... Movie directing is a part of chosen and i hope to give a better name to the nigerian movie industry with my ideas

Smallville10:
thank u very much sir. I get what u say with the plot. I know Nigeria doesnt really seem fit but the whole idea didnt fall on any particular place. I chose Nigeria because we are in nigeria... Also i specifically chose the female characters as Nigerian because it draws attention to Nigerians.
I have plans of making this story a movie and i wont give up on that... Movie directing is a part of chosen and i hope to give a better name to the nigerian movie industry with my ideas

Your ideas are out of this world.

Answer this Question

Are you a Philosopher


If this your story was to be transformed into a movie do You think Nigeria movie industry can produce it.

Rick9:


Your ideas are out of this world.

Answer this Question

Are you a Philosopher


If this your story was to be transformed into a movie do You think Nigeria movie industry can produce it.

hahaha. I wouldnt really want to call myself a philospher... Although i am a paranormal investigator.
Presently the nigerian movie industry will find it hard to visualize my stories.they cant make good production of any of my stories... I have over 21 stories i am preparing and by God grace i will direct majority ofthem

Master piece

Nice Story Bro but please let me know when the Talivan edition comes out

Smallville10:
thumbs up...smallville

Bro you killed the story...
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I started last night thank God am done...
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Can I share the story I won't change anything...on facebook I mean...
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Cheeers

KvnqPrezo:
Bro you killed the story... . I started last night thank God am done... . Can I share the story I won't change anything...on facebook I mean... . Cheeers

carry on boss. Thanks for readin

Smallville10:
carry on boss. Thanks for readin

Naaa yhu be boss naaa

Gabriel6:
Abandoned story (hiss)

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https://www.nairaland.com/2926758/mary-3-dragon-queen MARY Apocalypse 3 - Dragon Queen

https://www.nairaland.com/2912047/mary-ii-supernatural-story-best MARY Apocalypse 2 - The Best There Is.

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