what a great story!!!wow I love it. tifanny u r too good, really expecting More of it.

Please edit d part victor died just make it like nigeria movie. Maureen was dreaming.

Removed

Thz Tiffanyj for d update. But what can I do to cure my thirst for more? Today is Friday na, pls give us some more

Tiffany dis story should teach irresponsible guys a little bit of lesson. D tables can turn at anytime and u end up being the one begging just like Jake.

the update is too small pls more

Good for Jake#i hate irresponsible guys

wow nice work am hungry for more abeg ;Dwow nice work am hungry for more abeg

I can bet Jake is not going back to Lagos again .....

I just lost my appetite. So Victor actually died?

i'm in tears tiffanyj, poor child, Jake is such an ass****

Tiffany u re xtil d bext in luv stories.tualey 4 u. my point of view is dat both jake nd maureen wud be a couple.

He he Tiffanyj u good at making ladies feel their selves. see how all of dem are casting bile at Jake. lol. you know you have a way of making us hate characters and later u come to make us like dem. from Henry to Linda, to Mitch, to Maureen, and to Jake nou! very soon you will start painting him white and how caring he is. Weldon Keep d updates coming

Nice one anty Tiffany the update is good as it always Is....... #Calling for more update #

Did i just cry?

Infact am speechless

Nice write up Aunty TiffanyJ tho the sudden death of Victor pain us to the bone marrow but we are learning to move on because life is full of up and down, so pls keep it coming i cant wait to see how Maureen is goona deal with that jerk called jake... Love your work so much, God bless you

I was very upset over victor dying, but your incredible story writing and scene setting and discriptions have made me forget and accept it.



Please more.

Thank God for d one posted

toykathy:
Thz Tiffanyj for d update. But what can I do to cure my thirst for more? Today is Friday na, pls give us some more

she want some oliver oliver oliver twist
i need some too

I just love Anthony, the man wan use style resemble
especially the .... pocket your explanations boy.
as for Oga jake, i no even get wetin to tell you self, buh i dey your back bruv we gat something.
go after your wooman

They will so punish Jake that he will beg to die, mtcheww! Nonsense pelu ingredient e ....


I still don't like that Victor died though

If i were the author ,i will not let Maureen accept Jake...

If i were the author,i will not give Jake the chance to know Vicky...

If i were the author,i will bring a new character (a male) for Maureen

if i were the author,i will let Jake wallow in regret and eventually die in pain...

If i were the author,i will make these dudes stop thinking they can treat a lady like trash,reject her and their baby,surface after years ,and get a forgiveness,a reconciliation and happy ever after...

But...

Since i am not the author,it ll be to my best interest if I'd held my trouble , and let the boss Tiffy play out her plot...

Tnx for the update
Kip'em comin

lil Vicky father is back.

Nobody seems to consider Jake's situation. Though 4 years is a long time to come back to reality, he has the right to be angry. Put yourself or your brother in his situation. You had fun with an assumed call girl, she came back to tell you she's pregnant, then went ahead to report you to your family. What would you have done if you were in his situation?

missuniverse:
If i were the author ,i will not let Maureen accept Jake...

If i were the author,i will not give Jake the chance to know Vicky...

If i were the author,i will bring a new character (a male) for Maureen

if i were the author,i will let Jake wallow in regret and eventually die in pain...

If i were the author,i will make these dudes stop thinking they can treat a lady like trash,reject her and their baby,surface after years ,and get a forgiveness,a reconciliation and happy ever after...

But...

Since i am not the author,it ll be to my best interest if I'd held my trouble , and let the boss Tiffy play out her plot...

Tnx for the update
Kip'em comin

bhet madam you harsh small ooh.. kuku kill jake na abi wetin remain?

Even though what Jake did was totally uncalled for, but I still think there is something he is keepimg away from his family. One can not just judge him, there may be be more than meets the eye. Tiffany please come and serve us breakfast, we are hungry already

fam24:
Nobody seems to consider Jake's situation. Though 4 years is a long time to come back to reality, he has the right to be angry. Put yourself or your brother in his situation. (1)You had fun with an assumed call girl,
(2)she came back to tell you she's pregnant,
(3) then went ahead to report you to your family.
(4)What would you have done if you were in his situation?

(1) she tried telling him she was not not a call girl and that her actions were based on foolishness ,but he ignored her.
(2) he also ignored her
(3)before then she concealed his identity to her detriment,goin to Mr Anthony came as an after thought;after which a paternity test was carried at her risk and the result buttressed her claims
(4) i would ve cared or pretend like i do.
Deris nothing wrong in being vague ,deris nth wrong in being sphinxlike.
He categorically stated that he didn't want her and her babies.

He suspected that she wasn't a call girl afterall,but he allowed lust gain ascendancy over his attentiveness

[quote author=Jjrhymez post=44956073]

she want some oliver oliver oliver twist i need some too When are u coming baq

DONOCHAS:
Maureen is dreaming

yes, I concur.
Tiffany J, this can't happen now

oghenekome51:
Tiffany i dont blv it! Victor died! I av wept my eyes sore! So sad i pity maureen despite all her effort to raise d kids! I hope Jake comes to his senses!
Tiffany ure good!

you wept your eyes sore?

sufri lie

[quote author=toykathy post=44965718][/quote]





very soon as soon as i can
can you buzz my mailbox?
PLEASE