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|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Olori1992: 7:37pm On Sep 12|
cbella it becus of u I had to open an alc with nairaland,I would say u are really d best,I doff my hat 4 u. And I will like to second someone comment (leesah),I will love it if u follow ur already made plans towards d story,I pray God help u.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Pearl05(f): 10:24pm On Sep 12|
Cbella how you dey? Anything for us?
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 10:25pm On Sep 12|
Awww... Thanks! I really appreciate you reading
Emmmm about that, I think she just voiced her opinion and I also did same.
I still stick to the fact that am anti-bad ending... I like happy endings.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 10:27pm On Sep 12|
My thing has started but am good this evening. Might update late.....
No laptop so........
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Nickibeauty(f): 10:37pm On Sep 12|
cbella how are you doing dear any show? we they wait o
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 10:40pm On Sep 12|
Miss/Mrs! Don't mind me, I just enjoy acknowledging my readers comments.
As I said the ending has been written even before the synopsis was developed . If I would change anything just another character.
I derive my happiness from acknowledging my readers suggestions, comments and try to work around it but that doesn't change my ideas and plans.
My dear, don't worry! I have parceled the ending for just you alone.
Solely dedicated to you
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 10:42pm On Sep 12|
I have a lot of show... Will update a snippet late
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 10:44pm On Sep 12|
Knowing you hate nectar now... This won't happen waiii!! Herh Pearl you wan take someone's husband byforce...
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Leesah(f): 12:01am On Sep 13|
cbella:lolzzzzz thanks dear
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 1:20am On Sep 13|
Stacy, I hope you haven't left my company attending to personal issues. Kate asked immediately Stacy picked up her call. Mrs Glover, I'm at work at this very moment. She was about to continue stammering when Kate interrupted.
Stacy that's fine, you don't need to defend yourself that much. i was just pulling your legs. Meet me at your Dad's place, I hope you still have Andy's address and I know you are smart Stacy, to do all these without keeping something to collaborate your allegations.
Yes I have, Stacy instantly said before Kate could even land. But i would be implicating myself too Miss. She said sadly.
Don't you think you should pay for your wrong doings as well. Kate retorted back. Anyways get it and come over to your Dad's end.
Hand over today's work load to the sales department.
Okay Miss, she replied with a weak tone. And you can call me Kate. Kate hanged up, after she realized both Matt's and nectar's gaze were widely on her.
What are you two staring at. She asked looking through the contacts on her phone.
Kate do you really have to drive all the way to your moms in this condition. Matt's said and nectar looked unconcerned.
And nectar why are you silence on this issue. Huh! He exclaimed. Really, were you even listening to your wife? i just said your wife doesnt look good, and you reply Huh! Matt's said concerned
Matilda, Kate can make her own decisions now, besides she's just going three blocks away from here and Stacy can equally drive, he defended his silence earlier.
Your attitudes for the past three days have been weird. Is there something going on that I'm not aware of, Matt's asked waiting for a response.
Madam know it all, we are fine. Kate are we not fine. Nectar asked sarcastically .
Kate just stared at him and shook his head. She caught him last night ransacking through her medications. He made an excuse of needing ibuprofen for his head when he knows that isn't part of her medications. What was he trying to find. Has Sly told him anything. Kate kept thinking until Matt's interrupted.
Since none of you want to fill me in, I'm done with that contract you asked me to get for Stacy. And you should know whatever mess she is in with the evidence she's got, not even this contract can save her from jail time.
The laws in this country doesn't work that way. Matt's said and tapped her on the back. Matt's you think I don't know that, I'm helpless now, she has been in my life from day one and I hardly noticed.
If I had pursued this from the beginning I could have saved her. Kate lamented. This tears won't help you, I promise to work on something, maybe get her out early. Matt's said consoling her friend.
On what basis Matilda. The girl nearly killed me, why not allow nature runs its course. Nectar shot back.
As if you haven't killed anyone yourself, Kate shot back regretting she even opened her mouth.
Just then the bell rang. Matt's just stared at the two couples and walked away.
Stacy did you fly? And I asked you to meet me at your Dad's, what are you doing here in my house. Kate asked Stacy when she was ushered in.
No Miss, I was already on my way with the contract we talked about when you called, so I just decided to come here instead. She revealed.
Why is that? You cant take simple instructions anymore? Kate asked with a high tone. I'm sorry Miss, i just thought to drop this so we could go together. Stacy said feeling so embarrased.
Stacy, am not sure I need that anymore and where is the evidence we spoke about. Kate asked trying so hard not to sound rude to her sister. Stacy brought out the envelope from her bag.
Matt's take that and see how best we can work around it.
And you, she said pointing to Stacy, wait for me in your car. You are driving. Kate said and walked upstairs.
Nectar, what's going on between you two, I'm fed up with your fights already. I need to move out soon so whatever it is get it sorted before I get out. Matt's said glancing through the documents in her hand while waiting for a response then Kate interrupted.
Find anything good in that envelope yet which can solve our case?. Kate asked Matts who was still holding the evidence Stacy brought along with her. She stared at nectar rolling her eyes finally.
Yeah, I think she called and sent you several messages during the car accident. You remember I brought your phone with a private number ID. Matt's revealed.
That was Stacy? Both nectar and Kate blurted out and looked to each other's direction confused.
Yeah, Matt's responded looking at them weirdly. And it's good. Will work around it.
Okay I will hit you up when I'm back then, Kate said and walked out of the door while nectar walked back to his room.
I'm glad you are back home Catherine, don't leave me again. I can't promise not to snap at you any time soon and I can't certainly say I'm in love with you now but am sure of the fact that you love me in your own way despite my horrible attitude towards you all these years. Wilson said caressing her hair.
Catherine who had her head rested on his broad chest couldn't stop grinning. Wilson I don't need you to love me now, let time work it out. I just need one favor and I'm okay.
Catherine, anything for you, i have been so focused on my hatred for what Claudia involved me in that I refused to see what an angel I have in here every night sleeping opposite me.
How lonely she have been all these years while I try to satisfy myself out but failed and then come in here with that anger to get satisfaction through forceful sex. Who does that! He said rather calmly while Catherine shed tears.
He had no idea she was teary until he felt his chest wet. Hey don't cry, I'm sorry, he said beautifully. Wilson, am not crying because of the hurts you've caused me.
Okay, that's a relief! The guilt is enough to grant me a peaceful passage, at least I know somehow you'll manage the pain with me in my last moments.
Wilson will you stop it already, Catherine said raising her head off his shoulders, you are not dying. We will get a donor, your name is still on the list. She said trying to be strong.
No Catherine, you don't understand. I took my name off last year when the doctor said i needed two now. You did what? Catherine blurted out.
There's no point holding on to the impossible, who would want to give out two of their kidneys without loosing their lives besides Doctor Juanz wasn't sure I would even survive it in the end.
Wilson said trying not to make her cry.
So you just want to die. Who should take care of your children then. She asked emotionally. You will Catherine, besides Kate is already grown into a woman. She has her own family. He responded weakly.
You think that daughter of yours is anywhere near mature. Wilson you have another one, allow me help you make it up to your children.
Catherine said staring in his eyes.
Stacy,' I'm sure i have hope of gaining her trust, but that Kate of yours, I don't know Catherine, she keeps embarrassing me all the time and you know what I deserve it. Wilson said focusing on the shadow at the door.
Mom, so you keep gracing the bed of the one man that has hurt you so much. Kate said and startled both her mom and dad who quickly located their attires on the floor as if they were caught cheating on their partners.
Kate, what's wrong with your manners today. You always knock, so what happened to today.
Mom, I'm..... She was about to say when Catherine yelled. Don't mom me and get out before I loose it. Catherine yelled.
It's okay Catherine, take it easy on her. Wilson rather said to surprise Kate.
Father of the year, Kate murmured to herself and walked out sadly without looking back and met Stacy still standing in the hall, the same position she was before Kate runned up to call her mom.
Are you still standing, get yourself settled. Kate was talking to Stacy when she heard footsteps behind her. Kate, sorry about your mom up there, she heard her Dad say behind her.
She just paused for a while, tried to talk back but remembered where she was standing, on the same stairs her Dad slapped her from behind some few years back for running her mouth. She certainly don't want a repeat of that slap so she frowned and walked briskly to Stacy.
To be continued
I tried to get a full episode but....... i realized i was sleep typing and it wouldnt help me. So sorry it was late too
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by 36pripa: 2:53am On Sep 13|
Leesah:Hello , I would never wanna dictate to her what to do with her story.
Just that I felt we had seen much of those kind of endings and I would love to see her do something different. Eg. how do you see the ending of Chimamanda Adichie's 'half of a yellow sun'? The anti-climax at the ending leaves the reader craving for more. No hard feelings though.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by 36pripa: 2:56am On Sep 13|
Pearl05:What you just said is what am talking about , anything unpredictable would be fine even Nectar dying on the night of the babies delivery.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by 36pripa: 2:56am On Sep 13|
Pearl05:What you just said is what am talking about , anything unpredictable would be fine even Nectar dying on the night of the babies delivery.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 8:05am On Sep 13|
I understand you perfectly, but not every story should end the same now.......
Thanks for the mention of that great story
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 9:17am On Sep 13|
I will update later in the afternoon, probably the final or pre final! I just don't know yet.
Pearl05 and Purples25, I miss you guys......hope you are well purples25
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by princ007(f): 10:39am On Sep 13|
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by bossy512(f): 11:42am On Sep 13|
Welldone, good update
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by bimberry1307(f): 12:37pm On Sep 13|
well done cbella. update soon.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Pearl05(f): 1:22pm On Sep 13|
Thanks dear, am just too strong at the moment . Can't wait for the update. You really did a great work.
Gloryejims, greetings from my end.
Purples25, no recent update for more than a week. I hope you are doing good.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Leesah(f): 1:36pm On Sep 13|
36pripa:it's ok I understand u but let's just allow her end it d way she deems fit. if all readers want it to end there way, m sure there'll be no ending.. Thanks for d understanding.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by itsandi(m): 1:38pm On Sep 13|
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|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 2:05pm On Sep 13|
You also noticed huh, hope she's fine tho!
Glad you are good. Will update a snippet soon
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 2:08pm On Sep 13|
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 3:04pm On Sep 13|
Wilson sat opposite both daughters and kept staring, while Stacy fidgeted with her hands, Kate was just looking into her father's eyes.
Why is he staring so innocently. Kate said and hissed. Kate are you okay, Wilson finally had to ask.
What do you care Dad! Kate retorted back. Because you look the same way Claudia did breathing her last air. Wilson said worriedly.
Well, good thing I'm not Claudia and besides what do you expect when you marry me off like some cheap thing. I think about it sometimes I still don't get it Dad!
You hate yourself for trying to rape me, that should even be the more reason why you should pamper me, not marry me off to a man who couldn't even keep his matrimonial home devoid of..... Kate was about to continue when Wilson nearly yelled.
What are you saying, Did nectar hurt you. He said in a rather high pitched tone which startled Stacy and her eyes wide open.
I knew it, that calm Dad trying to defend me earlier from my mom was just a face you were putting on. Finally you have given yourself up, now this is the Dad I know.
Stacy this is the Dad you would be ending up with, don't let him marry you off. I wouldn't be here to save you so you better set the records straight with him before he ruins your life like he did to mine.
Kate said while Wilson just searched her eyes for answers he could not keep forming in his head.
What is taking Mom so long to get down. Kate hissed and adjusted herself widely on the couch occupying the whole couch.
Gosh I miss the comfort of this couch. She said and sprung up.
So this girl is still running her mouth out here too. Catherine said coming down the stairs and Kate who got startled earlier opened her mouth but words failed her.
Kate you got to stop this attitude, where did I go wrong with you. I did everything right alone. Catherine said. Maybe because you raised me up alone, she said rolling her eyes towards her Dad.
I'm talking and she still got the guts to talk back. Catherine frowned and walked closer now. Stacy, feel at home and you what do I owe this visit. She said sitting beside Kate.
Why is Jane and Andy not behind bars. I hope Dad you are not planning on pushing this under the bus because your mom is involved. Kate couldn't help but ask.
No one is trying to defend Jane here, but if we do that innocent Stacy would be found guilty as well. Catherine just had to speak up for her husband.
Mom, why is he not talking himself. He should answer me. Kate asked staring at him for an answer.
I know your resentment towards my mom but kindly be patience, my lawyer is working on Stacy's issue then we can proceed. He said stammering.
You mean that betrayer of a lawyer, he is the reason why I'm in this mess. And I understand from mom, Jane is not even your biological mother so why not give her up already Dad.
Trust me I have your beloved daughter here covered. She said smiling to Stacy who was almost near tears.
Kate what are you talking about, Catherine who was silence after Kate kept ranting about Jane finally asked. Something is wrong with her daughter she thought.
Mom I have a contact here, you guys can have a look at it, if you agree then we can proceed with the arrest of Jane and Andy, whiles Matt's works on something else.
Let me see that, Catherine quickly grabbed the envelope from her daughter and went to sit beside Wilson. Take your time and read, Stacy and I would go grab something from the kitchen.
Kate stood up holding the couch down and Stacy supporting while Wilson murmured take it easy and quickly focused on the envelope.
Kate get in here now! Catherine yelled out to Kate who just deeped her hand in her mom's stew, chewing on the last meat, while Stacy looked on smiling.
Kate quickly swallowed the chunk of meat and wiped her mouth childishly while walking away.
Miss, you haven't washed your hand and you could get choked up without water. Stacy said and Kate paused in her steps.
Aargh, she feigned and walked down to wash her hands. Here, Stacy handed her a glass of water while smiling. Stacy you are a genius, she gulped down a little and rushed out while Stacy followed shaking her head.
Mom why were you yelling! She asked when she got there. You need to explain this, Catherine asked raising the document to her direction.
Mom don't be mad. I spoke with Matts, that's the only way out of this for Stacy for now until she figures the rest out. Kate clarified.
So you mean to tell me, you pleading guilty for Stacy's crime in your condition will help ease the pain I'm already going through. Catherine blurted out and Stacy shouted.
'WHAT'! Miss, you can't do that. I should pay for my crimes. I believe when I plead guilty I would be given a few years. Stacy said sadly.
Really, you think life behind bars is easy and you stand there running your mouth. Kate said furiously.
Mom, I would just get house arrest because of my condition, that's why I did the transfer of ownership in her name, though I still got half shares. Kate said trying to make sense while her Dad looked on confused.
Kate you can't do that, no offense to you Stacy. I liked you the first day Kate introduced you as her P. A but I just can't watch my only joy sacrifice herself. There must be another way. She complained.
Mom there isn't for now, Probably Matt's would come up with something and we don't even need to make use of this contract.
And Wilson why are you silence on this matter. I hope you are not supporting this idea. Catherine yelled out to him.
I'm not sure Kate wants me involving myself in her issues. Wilson said to defend his silence.
Wilson, this is not a matter of Kate's decision, if she didn't need help, she wouldn't come here in the first place. I know my daughter very well. She needs help.
Wilson sighed heavily and adjusted himself with his head on the couch.
Kate can I be honest with you both. I mean you and your mom. He asked and Kate nodded her head. She feared whatever might come out of her mouth would just make her mom angry.
Before I say anything, is there a different reason why you would want to go that extent for some one who has wronged you in so many ways. Because I don't get why you would just give up on yourself. Wilson asked.
Dad incase you haven't noticed, am not heartless or selfish like you. If you hadn't gone sleeping around with everything, am sure I wouldn't have to do this.
Young lady, watch your mouth! He cautioned and looked at Stacy who wasn't able to raise up her head all this while.
Dad, what I'm saying is even if I had different reasons, I still want to be of help. Kate said and her mom flared up.
That's enough you two. Do whatever you want to and tell Matts to see me when you get home. Catherine said and relaxed on the couch.
Stacy have a seat, you look scared. Catherine said to release the tension. They kept discussing for a while and Kate asked to leave.
Behave yourself, will let you know when we are ready to make the arrest. Catherine said and hugged her daughter tightly and didn't want to let go.
Mom, I could give birth now if you don't let me go, and I ate the last meat in the stew. Thought you should know. Kate said and Catherine released her instantly.
That's your dad's lunch young lady. Catherine said and they both laughed.
Pearl, you keep calling me and I don't get it. Nectar said once she opened the door to pearl's apartment that afternoon.
Saint forgive me but I don't feel well. Looks like something is wrong with this pregnancy. I can't keep anything down lately and you have completely ignored my needs. Pearl cried out to nectar.
Pearl, even my wife doesn't give me this much problems. It was her first time as well but she handles herself pretty well. Now what is the problem, you can't handle. Nectar said and walked closer checking her out.
I cant keep anything down, and I find it difficult sleeping at night. When will you spend the night with me again. I also deserve that care you give to your wife every night. Pearl said frowning with pain.
You are not serious Pearl. Now pin your buttocks somewhere and let me check you out. Nectar said and she obeyed like a baby.
Did you contact Sly as I asked you to. He asked Pearl who was looking at him seductively.
I don't want thesame doctor as your wife. I want you attending to me yourself. I like your gentle touch. Pearl said licking her lips.
That won't happen Pearl, I understand you are doing me a favour by not telling my wife about this baby but I need you to be healthy as well.
Not that I really care that much but I'm having a child with you, that alone means something to me.
Then let me be yours Saint, for just this once. You runned out of here the last time as if you've never seen an unclad woman before but this is thesame body you run to when you had issues.
Pearl said stripping Unclad. Gosh pearl! Put that on, nectar said turning around. Why can't you look at me, am I not attractive anymore? She asked.
I didn't say that Pearl, my point is I can't love you anymore, you knew this and you even helped get the woman I love now. So why don't you do me a favor and clothe yourself.
Pearl, with tears in her eyes walked closer and hugged him behind.
Please make love to me this once, Saint and I would be out of your life. Just this once, I would disappear with this baby. I could get rid of it like I did for you when Keisha was here. Pearl said grabbing nectar's attention.
What did you say, when were you pregnant for me? I'm asking you a question and you better answer me before I loose it.
Nectar asked now turning around to face her, with the anger in his eyes he has overlooked the fact that he couldn't control himself earlier.
When Keisha was three months into her pregnancy. She replied honestly.And you didn't tell me because?
If I had would you have left your wife for me, No Saint! I did the best I thought of at that time. I don't want to ever be a single mother.
She cried out while smooching his groin.
You better take your hands off me. Nectar yelled. What you did is unforgivable, you decided for me what I should do with my own blood.
Pearl you took something from me and I don't think I want to continue seeing you. Just let me know when you give birth.
He said and pushed her hands which were giving him all the pleasures at that moment, if not for the revelation earlier he may not be able to handle her seduction.
He thought for a while, looked back at the crying Pearl and rushed out.
Jane, that plan won't work! Are you sure that Pearl is even pregnant. Andy asked Jane who came home earlier after meeting out with pearl.
I don't think she would lie to me, besides she gave me evidence of their first night together.
Wilson mentioned some blackmail of these pictures but I had no idea she was the one. I thought I was the only one who had it out for Kate. Jane narrated while Andy's mind was far away on the pictures.
Damn, I miss this body! Looks more attractive now, those days were fun. This body has endured a lot of spankings, he said and licked his lips.
Trust me your grand daughter had it all. Andy was saying and Jane just shut him up. Give me those pictures, she grabbed them and walked out on him.
Kate entered their room yawning while nectar was already in relaxing on the couch. How did it go Kate? He asked and Kate couldn't hide her surprised face.
I thought you were not talking to me for days now. What changed nectar. Or you want something, nectar finally rolled his eyes to meet her gaze.
oh that's it then! What do you want this time around. She asked.
Kate do we have to be strangers because you are too stubborn to listen to your heart. I know you just don't want to admit the fact that you want me.
That's fine, Kate but don't blame me when I get my needs elsewhere. Nectar said and relaxed back on the couch backing her.
As if she wasn't bothered at all, she just stared though with regrets and just shrugged. I have more issues on my head, not this lovers quarrel, you want sex just say it and stop making my life difficult.
She murmured to herself and begin to ransack her side box for her medical bag.
Nectar I know it's you? Where's my medicine bag. She asked while walking towards him on the couch. I took it, do you have a problem with that? Nectar asked.
Yes I do! I'm the pregnant one here and should be in charge of my own medicine. You don't get to decide for me because you are a doctor. She asked now facing nectar sitting comfortably on the couch.
I'm still your husband, the last time I checked. What's wrong if I need to check on your health. He asked.
I don't know what you hope to find in there but may I have it now since it looks like you are done. She asked politely.
I gave it to Matt's, ask her for it. He said giving up.Kate hissed and tried walking away when he held her back.
Kate struggled for a bit but his warm arms around her gave her some sort of comfort. She didn't want to admit she was on her way to giving out herself for the last time in her marriage. She thought for a while.
Nectar I'm tired please. I know that Kate, but I promise to be gentle. Just turn around. He said softly in her ears.
Kate was in his arms indecisive for a while and thought what could she loose when she's not even sure she would be here the next minute.
To be continued
Just manage! Had to fall on my phone which obviously would make the work unorganized, but will modify later
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by DemiKOL(f): 3:14pm On Sep 13|
This story is whao! I can't believe i have been glued to this since yesterday...... Nice story you have here. More grace to your elbow.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by bossy512(f): 3:21pm On Sep 13|
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 3:23pm On Sep 13|
LOl... i appreciate you coming around. Thanks
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Pearl05(f): 4:09pm On Sep 13|
This is far from ending .
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 5:56pm On Sep 13|
Lolzxzx, you will be here and i end this story without you even knowing
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by princ007(f): 7:17pm On Sep 13|
Update! Update! Update!
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by DemiKOL(f): 7:49pm On Sep 13|
cbella:you are welcome.
|Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Pearl05(f): 8:11pm On Sep 13|
Kate sorry dear but you don't have a husband. Can you imagine nectar telling the wife that she shouldn't blame him if he get his needs satisfied outside? Someone that should have sober reflection on his wayward life. That took advantage of a woman when she is under the influence of alcohol. Nectar should go to pearl because, they deserve each other.
Kate met Mandy and when she couldn't control her desires, she ran to her husband despite the fact that they weren't in good types but nectar finds any little chance to run to another woman.
Later someone will say that women are the weaker sex. God bless all the super women.
Cbella, nectar doesn't deserve Kate. Get her another man that will surely love her for whom she is. Maybe among her other male friends. But not Drake.
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