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Please Rate My New Poem Titled "Ice Cube Of Fire" by bokunrawo(m): 4:14pm On Dec 11, 2017
Not completed, still working on it tho


AN ICE CUBE OF FIRE❄⛄⚡�

Clothed in modesty
Forged out of mundane humility
Lighted in the illusion of self glorification
Exhumed by vanity
Flawless show of hypocrisy
A ball of Fire enclosed in an ice cube

Danger looming in the atmosphere Foolish humans belief that all is fair
Wolf in sheep's clothing infiltrates mortals
Trust being captured in strong metals
Hidden pains entrenched under a cover of open gains.

How do we discern good from evil?
How do we decipher Truth from Lies?
All lies in the purity of the heart
Just like a warrior that goes through the battle like a conqueror
Just like an old sage that depends solely on his wisdom

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Re: Please Rate My New Poem Titled "Ice Cube Of Fire" by meneski(m): 11:03pm On Dec 11, 2017
7/10
Re: Please Rate My New Poem Titled "Ice Cube Of Fire" by noble4d(m): 10:40pm On Dec 12, 2017
bokunrawo:
Not completed, still working on it tho


AN ICE CUBE OF FIRE❄⛄⚡�

Clothed in modesty
Forged out of mundane humility
Lighted in the illusion of self glorification
Exhumed by vanity
Flawless show of hypocrisy
A ball of Fire enclosed in an ice cube

Danger looming in the atmosphere Foolish humans belief that all is fair
Wolf in sheep's clothing infiltrates mortals
Trust being captured in strong metals
Hidden pains entrenched under a cover of open gains.

How do we discern good from evil?
How do we decipher Truth from Lies?
All lies in the purity of the heart
Just like a warrior that goes through the battle like a conqueror
Just like an old sage that depends solely on his wisdom



This is fabulous bro, try out narrative poem and The Bop in Rudiments of poetry thread. Thumbs up

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