Thanks for taking away the suspense

why can't someone just comment without quoting the whole update na, nice story bro. thanks for the update

This has to be the most breathing story I have ever read... Please keep it coming

Nice story

If not that I saw it on FrontPage, I won't have bothered looking for it..interesting story tho, try finish this story make everybody rest.

The best fiction I've seen yet on nairaland. Way to go....u deserve some accolades [img][/img]

Please, where is the update.

I can't wait to continue reading. You are good and you made my day.

This kinda things happens in every day life.

Brain at work.....nice one

Bros wer u dey na? Abeg do b4 pesin go comot 4 ntwrk mbok... thank u

huzhomah:
This has to be the most breathing story I have ever read... Please keep it coming

go and read black Maria by Larry sun, then u will know that the writing is learning but I must confess that I am really enjoying every piece of the story but the updates are damn too short and not frequent

A well written and Excellent story! Madera Stop wasting your talent on nairaland. Now publish your collections of short stories on Amazon, we will buy.

Nice write up. I even fear for this our generation.

engrossing story, i love it. Tnx

I love this story like mad... more updates pls

Great story. You are indeed a great writer. Keep it up, the sky is your starting point.

Wow..... this is breath taking. my body temperature is getting higher......... Wow..... this is breath taking. my body temperature is getting higher.........

Wow! well done bro.

Following...



I feel for Ben thou... How I wish, Abigail who have done this much for Ben, will later be the "Madame" of his house.

My wish shaa ooo

well that depends on who is asking

ikechi1000:


Do you write sci-fi stories?

[color=#770077][/color]omg this kinda lovely and interesting..... waiting patiently for more update.....

THE ENEMY WITHIN – EXPOSED
EPISODE 12


The morality of the world has gone really bad. Mankind has hailed what is bad as good and what is good as been deemed to be lame. That is why we have sex workers fighting for their right to continue fornicating and get paid for it legally. I am one of those who still believe in the sanctity of not just marriage but humanity in general, but my latest ordeal as led me to question my own moral values. I’m beginning to think that those who take marriage as a mere contract that can be terminated anytime the conditions no longer feel right might be right after all. A broken marriage is better than a pile of dead bodies.


As my father in-law revealed to me that the place my wife eloped to was actually France, I couldn’t have been more confused than that ‘wai..wai…wait, did you just say France?’ I asked him. He was a little bit surprised by my question but he answered any way ‘yea, France……’ he wanted to continue his line but I wasn’t done ‘you mean the same France that has Paris as its capital?’ ‘yes!’ he replied ‘but why didn’t anyone tell me this before now, you all knew we travel to Paris every now and then for holidays, but it never occurred to anyone to hint me that I might be walking into an enemy territory?’ my father in-law could no longer hide his surprise at my latest question ‘so are you saying you don’t know that your beloved wife once eloped when she told me she was dating an upcoming musician and I was fiercely against it?’ ‘sir, I’m aware she once eloped with a guy named Nnamdi, I just didn’t know that they eloped to France’ ‘Beeeeeeen! you must be the dumbest husband I know, how can you not know the location of their escapades when you already know the story?!’ he asked me with a stern look that seems to be telling me ‘careful what you say next otherwise your dignity might evaporate with every word you say’ but I replied still ‘sir, she really wasn’t chatty about that incident, she said it was one of the most trying times of her life, so I figured: why bother her about something that brings pain to her when we can just sweep everything under the carpet and act as if it never happened’. My father in-law laughed as hard as he could, his laughter made me think of my statement again and I could see how foolish I was to have loved a woman so blindly.


Don’t get me wrong, there are still MANY women out there who deserve to be treated like queens because of their pure heart, undying love and incomparable self sacrifice they have made for their husbands just not the kind of woman like Andral.


‘Ben Ben, I am the Father of your wife but sometimes I think you loved her too much’ I simply nodded at my father in-law’s comment, but then the question I was dying to ask finally popped up in my head ‘but sir, how did you get to know about the poison, is there really any prove that Andral is actually poisoning me?


As usually, Abigail again was the detective. She had snuck up on my wife in the kitchen at our home; she paid us a late night surprise visit. She actually came to see me and intended to sleep over that night but I wasn’t home yet. As she was slowly sneaking into the kitchen, she noticed my wife sprinkling something into the soup of a meal that was meant for me, oblivious of the fact that someone was watching on, she continually said ‘eat and die you idiot, eat and die...’



more to come shortly

Faspen:
Following bumper to fender

u dey hie again...chai...shigo

Haaaaaaaaa.

making sense, please update

hmmmm....this is so great, d picture of it just come to me easily...plssssssssss Nxt uppdate kia kia

This is truly the enemy within..

I can't wait for more episodes.


Ur good OP.

Am speechless

Chai! Ben don suffer. Living with a woman u claimed to be ur wife who in turn is an enemy, Andral fear God.

please now, update on time. Thats why I like reading only completed stories.

Great story and great writing op. It'll be best if you can get a person to help edit your work before posting in the future, that way you can get a perfect finish. Well done

well-done sir you are a legendary writer