hey guys check my new poem and tell me what you think I hope it pick a normination
just like my previous poem my poetic story

Poem by: ajerry
Title: love me forever

At the end,she was more of a fire than flame.
Casting hope to my dark soul,
Just as the first time she had come.
My life was near a bin,
Until she made me see love not foul.

She sowed her endless,Love to me.
Stared at me,and offered me her gorgeous lips.
I agreed when she wishpered to me, the twenty-basics of her love tips.
She held me by the hand,as we walked by the road side.
Looking so polished and refined,I was amazed by her radiant colour,that could spice up a life.
But then again,she was Disturbed by her compassionate announcement.
Love me all alone she said,as I shuddered at her very word.

Apparently,in my heart she is a queen.
That is endowed with a tall and fairly beauty.
Explicit is her skin,that could pass for a beauty pageant.
Your happiness encroached me, it's a raving joy that surrounds my heart.

She retrained and pulled me to herself
With an admonishing look,that assured us to ourselves.
For her life is an unfinished poetry
Waiting for me to make a Perfect entry.

She flinches,I held her in the air
Literally, moving in a rotary steed.
She was a dancing ballet turning like a prisoner freed.

Literary,she is a couch potato that reads my mind.
And not ready to throw in the towel for anyone else.
She keeps her eyes on me and always dressed to kill.
Which resist any form of prey.

She stared at me for a while,
Singing calling while.

Then,she grabbed me by the balls
And gazed through my eyeballs
Love me all alone, she exclaimed!.
As we return to our place of rest.

In the end,she was more trouble than calm.
Scratching her fingers against my palm
As she shredded to my direction.

She kissed me politely and makes my body come alive,in a way that nobody else can.
She spice my body and keep the temperature flying.
But then again,she was Disturbed by her compassionate announcement
and asked,is your love for me reaffirmed.?

She tap and close her eyes for a moment and
rest her breast against my chest
Kicking her foot against the ground
Waiting for me to say a word.

I smiled,I stood for a moment,I walked round her,
Grinding my teeth before her.

I will love you forever.
I reacclaimed.
To take time to share.
To make memories,to be fair.

And "I assured you"
You are my sweetest wine
So beautiful and Divine
Your humility are incomparable
Your love cover me
It's spiritual,you're connected to my spirit
It follows me everywhere I go.
And I listen,when you sing my poems.it's so melodious, its music itself.
You occupies my mind.
You always blew kisses from the wind.
You are my favorite lover
My perfect bride.
The Queen among queens
So I assured you once more!.
"A-JERRY" will love you forever.


Please kindly download the PDF file below to read the complete poem and my contact are on the PDF file....feel free to reach me on your weddings

But then, it isn't really about FP
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please help me out.

BadRadio:

lol

How sweet. I really love poetry especially those that center around a woman grabbing the guy's balls.
Your work might not get the appreciation that it deserves here. To romancelanders, arguing about irrelevant stuffs is more important.
What other efforts have you made to get your poems out there?

yeah

Blu03:

How sweet. I really love poetry especially those that center around a woman grabbing the guy's balls.
Your work might not get the appreciation that it deserves here. To romancelanders, arguing about irrelevant stuffs is more important.
What other efforts have you made to get your poems out there?

thanks for your positive comments.i put them on books and also on Amazon